高中英語解析08江蘇高考書面表達(dá)課件.ppt

writing,Writing 假如你叫Jack,參加學(xué)校開展的“有困難向誰求助”（Whom do you turn to when in trouble?）的調(diào)查活動(dòng)，調(diào)查結(jié)果如下表。請用英語給校報(bào)編輯寫一封反映調(diào)查結(jié)果。,注意: 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全面,并表達(dá)出你的觀點(diǎn)及理由; 為了使文章連貫,可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容; 詞數(shù)150左右; 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。,江蘇卷高考評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 評分原則 1.評分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。 2.詞數(shù)過少或過多的，從總分中減去2分。 3.評分時(shí)應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為:內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。 4.拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面。評分時(shí)應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。 5.如書寫較差以至于影響交際，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。,內(nèi)容+詞匯、語法結(jié)構(gòu)（時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、句型）、連接手段,Appreciation composition I,Recently, who do you turn to when in trouble has become the focus of the society., According to the research, we can see that, The reason why they do this is that , On the contrary, 12% turn to nobody. On the one hand, they arent willing to communicate with others; on the other hand, it is hard for them to talk with others., But for me, I would rather turn to parents, because,Appreciation composition II, My own point of view is that, Also ,Appreciation composition III, Other 30 percent choose their parents and teachers because they consider them patient, experienced, trustworthy and full of love. However, statistics show that the left 12 percent find it hard to communicate with others, so they are usually alone when in need of help.,Appreciation composition III, As far as I know, the first people to turn to when we are in trouble are our parents., From the time we were born , they stayed for the most time in our lives with us, which made them the very persons who know us most.,Appreciation composition III,They understand our joys and sorrows , offering us the warmest hug and love wherever we go and whatever we do., I wont deny the help from our classmates and friends., In a word,一.定基調(diào),體裁,人稱,時(shí)態(tài),二.找要點(diǎn),三.寫短語,四.寫句子,五.寫文章,寫 作 步 驟,Writing 2008 江蘇 實(shí)現(xiàn)有效的溝通，建立良好的人際關(guān)系，不僅要善于言表，更要學(xué)會(huì)傾聽。請你根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息，寫一篇題為 “Being a Good Listener”的英語演講稿。,注意: 對所給要點(diǎn),逐一陳述,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,不要簡單翻譯。 詞數(shù)150左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 演講稿中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及本人姓名。, ,show respect， respect， look up to， treatwith respect ,promote understanding， understandbetter， have a better understanding of， make oneself understood by others , Listen toattentively， listen with attention /patience，lend an ear to， give an ear to , form/develop /build up a good interpersonal relationship, improve the relationship with, understand children, know sb. well, narrow /smooth away the generation gap /misunderstanding, share their joys and sorrows, meet their needs/ demands/requirements , place themselves in a good relationship with ,meet the needs put forward by students. ,strengthen /develop/form/deepen the friendship with, make more friends, make progress hand in hand, help and learn from each other., keep eye contact with , dont interrupt, keep quiet while listening, listen attentively and patiently, focus ones attention on,make a proper response to, respond to appropriately such as : nodding, a knowing smile, sighing raising questions and giving your suggestions at proper time,.,家長傾聽孩子,Parents listen more to children., Experts suggest that parents (should) listen more to children.(賓從）, It is suggested that parents (should) listen more to children.（主從）, Experts suggestion is that parents (should) listen more to children.（表從), There is an experts suggestion that parents (should) listen more to children.(同位語從句）,Teachers listen more to students. They can have a better understanding of students. They can meet students needs.,If they want to have a better understanding of students and meet their needs ,it is a better way for teachers to listen more to students.(條件、it),To know students better and meet their needs, teachers should listen more to students.(目的狀語）,Listening more to students can enable teachers to understand students better, sharing their joys and sorrows, thus meeting their needs. (V-ing 作主語、結(jié)果狀語）,Teachers listen more to students. They can have a better understanding of students. They can meet students needs.,To teachers listening is an effective way to have a better understanding of students ,and to students listening offers a chance to make their needs expressed and satisfied.（介詞短語）,Listen more to students ,and teachers will know students better, which helps meet their needs.(祈使句 、定語從句）,The more teachers listen to students, the better they understand students and then meet their needs.,Writing 2008 江蘇 實(shí)現(xiàn)有效的溝通，建立良好的人際關(guān)系，不僅要善于言表，更要學(xué)會(huì)傾聽。請你根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息，寫一篇題為 “Being a Good Listener”的英語演講稿。,注意: 對所給要點(diǎn),逐一陳述,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,不要簡單翻譯。 詞數(shù)150左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 演講稿中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及本人姓名。, ,用于文章的開頭 1. Many people often ask such question:“？” 2. There is no doubt that,用于句首提出論題或現(xiàn)象的句型 1 Recently , has become the focus of the society . 2 Nowadays there is a growing concern for 3 Nowadays it is common to hear /see ,用于陳述個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)/想法的常用句型 1 As for my own idea about ,I believe 2 What I want to stress is that 3 My own point of view is that ,用于結(jié)尾的常用句型 1 Therefore , it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that 2 Taking into account all these factors , it is obvious/clear that 3 In a word/in conclusion/to sum up,Possible version: Good afternoon, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener. Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship. Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed. What I want to stress is that each of us should listen more to others. Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk; show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile; be open-minded to different opinions even though you dont like them. In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other. Thank you for your listening！,Possible version: Good afternoon, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener. Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship. Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap