高中英語Unit5RhythmSectionⅦWriting__如何寫音樂會(huì)評(píng)論學(xué)案北師大版.docx

Section Writing如何寫音樂會(huì)評(píng)論寫作技法指導(dǎo)每當(dāng)我們讀完一本書、看完一場(chǎng)電影或聽完一場(chǎng)音樂會(huì)，我們或多或少都會(huì)有一些感想，如果我們把這些感想寫出來那就成了評(píng)論。音樂會(huì)評(píng)論可以分成三部分來寫：1音樂會(huì)的開始介紹舉辦音樂會(huì)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、演出的歌手/樂團(tuán)、音樂會(huì)的開場(chǎng)狀況、觀眾的情況等。2音樂會(huì)的過程描述音樂會(huì)中節(jié)目的具體內(nèi)容、表演的場(chǎng)景、自己的反應(yīng)以及其他觀眾的反應(yīng)等。3音樂會(huì)的結(jié)束描述音樂會(huì)結(jié)束時(shí)的情景，如歌手為歌迷簽名、合影留念。1On the evening of last Sunday，I watched the concert given by Wang Leehom.上星期天晚上，我看了王力宏舉辦的音樂會(huì)。2During the 3hour concert，he sang a lot of songs.三個(gè)小時(shí)的音樂會(huì)期間，他唱了很多歌曲。3It shows that he/she has a great talent for music.他/她表現(xiàn)出很強(qiáng)的音樂天賦。4The audience enjoyed his/her performance very much.觀眾非常喜歡他/她的表演。5Everyone felt excited at the performance.大家對(duì)表演感到很興奮。6The atmosphere during the concert was extremely exciting.音樂會(huì)期間的氛圍令人相當(dāng)振奮。7His performance is very popular with the audience.他的演出很受觀眾的歡迎。8I hope I will watch his performance again in the future.我希望在不久的將來能再看到他的表演。滿分佳作構(gòu)建請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一篇音樂會(huì)評(píng)論：1去年，中國著名歌手周杰倫在上海舉辦了演唱會(huì)。我很幸運(yùn)買到了一張票。他的歌曲很受年輕人的歡迎。2雖然天氣很熱，觀眾還是很開心。3周杰倫是中國最知名歌手之一，出了很多唱片。他在全國各地巡回演唱過。我們經(jīng)常在電視上和收音機(jī)上聽到他的歌。4他此次唱了七里香青花瓷等歌曲。我被他的歌曲深深打動(dòng)了，盼望能再次聽到他演唱。參考詞匯：周杰倫Jay Chou；青花瓷 Green Flower Porcelain；七里香 Seven Feets Soundly注意：1詞數(shù)100個(gè)左右；2不要逐句翻譯。體裁評(píng)論時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)為主主題周杰倫的音樂會(huì)人稱以第三人稱為主結(jié)構(gòu)第一段：介紹音樂會(huì)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和演出的歌手第二段：介紹音樂會(huì)的表演場(chǎng)景第三段：表達(dá)自己的感想.對(duì)接單元詞匯1performance n演出2such as 例如3look forward to 盼望4be popular among 受歡迎5have a very good time 過得很快樂6be deeply impressed by 被深深打動(dòng).巧用單元句式、語法(一) 完成句子1去年，周杰倫在上海舉辦了演唱會(huì)。Jay Chou gave his singing performance in Shanghai last year.2他的歌曲很受年輕人歡迎。His songs are very popular among young people.3周杰倫是中國最知名歌手之一。Jay Chou is one of the most famous Chinese singers4周杰倫已經(jīng)出了很多唱片。Jay Chou has made many records5他在全國各地巡回演唱過。He has given performances throughout China6我們經(jīng)常在電視上和收音機(jī)上聽到他的歌。We often hear his songs broadcast both on TV and on the radio.7周杰倫唱了青花瓷七里香等許多著名歌曲。He sang many wellknown songs such as Green Flower Porcelain and Seven Feets Soundly.8這些歌優(yōu)美自然。These songs were beautiful and natural(二) 句式升級(jí)9把句1和句2合并成定語從句的復(fù)合句Jay Chou，whose songs are very popular among young people，gave his singing performance in Shanghai last year.10把句3和句4合并成一個(gè)含同位語的簡(jiǎn)單句Jay Chou，one of the most famous Chinese singers，has made many records.11用not only.but also.合并句5和句6Not only has he given performances throughout China but also we often hear his songs broadcast both on TV and on the radio.12把句7和句8合并成含定語從句的復(fù)合句He sang many wellknown songs such as Green Flower Porcelain and Seven Feets Soundly, all of which were beautiful and natural. 【參考范文】Jay Chou，whose songs are very popular among young people，gave his singing performance in Shanghai last year.I was lucky enough to get a ticket.It was very hot in the summer time，but we had a very good time.Jay Chou，one of the most famous Chinese singers，has made many records.Not only has he given performances throughout China but also we often hear his songs broadcast both on TV and on the radio.He sang many wellknown songs such as Green Flower Porcelain and