2019年高考英語真題分類匯編：專題10-書面表達(dá)(解析版)-(2).doc

2016年高考試題分項(xiàng)解析之專題10書面表達(dá)1.【2016全國新課標(biāo)I】書面表達(dá)（滿分25分） 假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職，已寫好申請(qǐng)書和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷（resume）。給外教Mr Jenkins 寫信，請(qǐng)她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）注意： 1. 詞數(shù)100左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，已使行文連貫?！敬鸢浮緿ear Ms Jenkins,I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I havealready finished my application and resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I dont know if there are something to pay attention to. So, Im writing you the letter, hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can do me the favor.Looking forward to your reply. And Id be really thankful.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【名師點(diǎn)睛】 本文是一篇較為優(yōu)秀的范文。格式正確，要點(diǎn)全面，語言通順流暢，很好地完成了寫作任務(wù)。在本文中開頭提出寫信的目的，然后具體講述自己的困難，再提出請(qǐng)求，最后表達(dá)自己的感激之情。所以在內(nèi)容上邏輯性較強(qiáng)。此外，作者還使用了不定式短語In order to get some practical experience,、現(xiàn)在分詞短語hoping you can give me some help、賓語從句if there are something to pay attention to等。經(jīng)典句式this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume也是文章的亮點(diǎn)所在。2.【2016全國新課標(biāo)II】書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）假定你是李華，你校攝影俱樂部（photography club）將舉辦國際中學(xué)攝影展。請(qǐng)給你的英國朋友Peter寫封信。請(qǐng)他提供作品。信的內(nèi)容包括： 1主題：環(huán)境保護(hù)； 2展覽時(shí)間； 3投稿郵箱：.注意： 1詞數(shù)100左右； 2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！敬鸢浮緿ear Peter,Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know youtake good pictures and youve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that themethe last time you visitedour school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, youcan send your photos to .Hope to hear from you soon.Yours Lihua【名師點(diǎn)睛】本篇范文很好地完成了要求的所有任務(wù)，要點(diǎn)擴(kuò)充合情合理，符合生活實(shí)際。建議對(duì)方參加本次展覽的理由符合邏輯：對(duì)方恰好有這一主題的作品。全文句式多樣化，并沒有一直使用陳述句，穿插使用祈使句，符合邀請(qǐng)函的特點(diǎn)。文章中使用了較多的復(fù)合句，如定語從句Any students who is interested in welcome to participate.時(shí)間狀語從句. themethe last time you visitedour school.條件狀語從句If you want to join.；等。全文沒有中國式英語句式，體現(xiàn)出很高的駕馭英語的能力?？键c(diǎn)：考查半開放作文3.【2016全國新課標(biāo)III】書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）假定你是李華，與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好一起去書店，因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示歉意；2.說明原因；3.另約時(shí)間。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！敬鸢浮緿ear Bob, Im sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that well have more time to read and select books. If its convenient for you, lets meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.Yours,Li Hua考點(diǎn)：書信類作文【名師點(diǎn)睛】題目是常規(guī)的書信作文，要求寫一封道歉信，是應(yīng)用文的一種。寫作的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，表達(dá)歉意的同時(shí)，還要與對(duì)方另約時(shí)間。因此，不僅僅是一封道歉信。寫作時(shí)注意涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，還要兼顧上下文的連貫性。4.【2016北京】書面表達(dá)（共兩節(jié)，35 分）第一節(jié)（15分）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國朋友Jim 在給你的郵件中提到他對(duì)中國歷史很感興趣，并請(qǐng)你介紹一位你喜歡的中國歷史人物。請(qǐng)你給Jim回信，內(nèi)容包括：1. 該人物是誰；2. 該人物的主要貢獻(xiàn)；3. 該人物對(duì)你的影響。注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于50；2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jim, _ _Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim, Its great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.As for my favourite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Mps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college to be a bridge between China and the world. Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know. Cheers!Yours,Li Hua 考點(diǎn)：應(yīng)用文寫作【名師點(diǎn)睛】題材偏向于信息介紹類的開放式寫作，對(duì)于應(yīng)用文格式的要求并不高，但對(duì)于語言組織和詞匯積累的要求極高。本次應(yīng)用文并沒有限定考生必須寫某一位歷史人物，但是談及人物的貢獻(xiàn)和對(duì)自己的影響時(shí)，考生有可能會(huì)遇到大量的詞匯障礙，故難度較去年明顯提升。第二節(jié)（ 20 分）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華。你班同學(xué)參加了學(xué)校的“地球日”系列活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)按照以下四幅圖的先后順序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”為題，給校刊“英語角”寫一篇英文稿件，介紹活動(dòng)的全過程。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。提示詞：地球日Earth Day【答案】Actions for a Greener Earth A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth. Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials. We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes, pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles and turned those into dolls, handbags, tissue boxes and small vases. That weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there. All were very happy with those unexpected gifts, especially little kids and elderly people. We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school. We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.考點(diǎn)：情景作文【名師點(diǎn)睛】話題比較常規(guī)，整體難度適中。“地球日”系列活動(dòng)屬于保護(hù)環(huán)境的體裁內(nèi)容，考生并不陌生。內(nèi)容主要包括：公告欄了解活動(dòng)、分工制作、變廢為寶的宣傳活動(dòng)、主題講座等。一定要按照四幅圖的順序來寫，不可打亂順序；注意行文的連貫性，多使用一些連接詞。5.【2016天津】書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的學(xué)生會(huì)主席李津。一批來自英國的高中生與你校學(xué)生開展了為期兩周的交流活動(dòng)?，F(xiàn)在，他們即將回國，你將在歡送會(huì)上致辭。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿。（1） 回顧雙方的交流活動(dòng)（如學(xué)習(xí)、生活、體育、文藝等方面）；（2） 談?wù)勈斋@或感情；（3） 表達(dá)祝愿語期望。注意：（1） 詞數(shù)不少于100；（2） 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，是內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；（3） 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear friends,How time flies!Thank you.【答案】略【考點(diǎn)定位】考查提綱作文【名師點(diǎn)睛】這篇作文屬于典型的提綱類作文。根據(jù)要求確定要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行發(fā)揮。關(guān)鍵在于詞匯和句式的選用，盡量使用簡(jiǎn)潔的語言。6.【2016上?！縂uided Writing Directions: Write an English composition in 120150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假設(shè)你是中華中學(xué)學(xué)生姚平，最近參加了一項(xiàng)研究性學(xué)習(xí)調(diào)研，課題為“父母是否以子女為榮”。通過調(diào)研你校學(xué)生及其父母，結(jié)果發(fā)現(xiàn)雙方對(duì)此問題的看法有差異（數(shù)據(jù)如圖所示）。根據(jù)圖表寫一份報(bào)告，在報(bào)告中，你必須：1.描述調(diào)研數(shù)據(jù)；2.分析可能導(dǎo)致這一結(jié)果的原因。【答案】（略）考點(diǎn)：考查圖表作文7.【2016四川】書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)正舉辦“The Season I Like Best”的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)用英文寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1. 你最喜歡的季節(jié)；2. 你喜歡該季節(jié)的兩條理由（如：氣候、景色、活動(dòng)、感受）。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 題目已為你寫好；3. 行文連貫，語篇完整；4. 文中不得透露個(gè)人真實(shí)信息。8.【2016浙江】書面表達(dá)（滿分30分）“Planning is good ,but doing is better”是一句英國名言。請(qǐng)以此為題目用英語寫一篇100-120詞的短文。要求如下： 1.簡(jiǎn)述你對(duì)這句名言的理解； 2.用一個(gè)具體事例加以說明； 3.給出恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾。注意：1.文章的標(biāo)題已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）： 2.文中不得以任何形式透露地區(qū)、學(xué)校、老師或同學(xué)姓名等真實(shí)信息，否則按作弊行為認(rèn)定。Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better【答案】One possible student versionPlanning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do. However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out. My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point. A month before the event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps. After that, I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills. I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner. I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.【名師點(diǎn)睛】本篇范文短小精悍，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，語言簡(jiǎn)練，時(shí)態(tài)人稱準(zhǔn)確，很好的完成了寫作任務(wù)。在文章開頭作者緊扣題目，提出自己對(duì)plan的理解，同時(shí)引出下文，然后用自己的親身經(jīng)歷表明要將計(jì)劃付諸實(shí)施這點(diǎn)非常重要。在文中作者用到了短語in detail , bear no fruit ,carry out, set out to等短語，避免了文章句式的單一。此外，還用到了賓語從句how we do , It came from good planning and better doing combined.等，這些都給樸素的語言帶來了亮點(diǎn)。考點(diǎn)：考查開放式作文9.【2016江蘇】書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）81.請(qǐng)閱讀下面短文，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。In recent years, internet voting has become increasingly popular in China. People not only cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “ Cutest Baby”.Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the “ Best Police Officer 冶 competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “ Future Singer冶 competition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.【寫作內(nèi)容】1.用約30個(gè)單詞寫出上文概要；2.用約120個(gè)單詞闡述你對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票的看法，并用2 3個(gè)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法?！緦懽饕蟆?.寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.不必寫標(biāo)題?！驹u(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】?jī)?nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。【答案】On-line voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in it. It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not. In my opinion, on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed, since it is no more than a way to participate in public life. It makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates go around to seek supports. In addition, the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space. Furthermore, voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible. To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting, but because they are divided between emotion and fairness. Things will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards on- line voting. (150 words)Possible version two:Internet voting is quite popular nowadays. Many people are somewhat puzzled at the negative side of the voting, although some are quite happy with it, and active in doing it. In my opinion, internet voting has begun to show its negative im