高考英語(yǔ)作文訓(xùn)練講解

作文訓(xùn)練評(píng)判作文的標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 第一檔：一塌糊涂（messy）； 第二檔：糊里糊涂（cloudy）； 第三檔：馬馬虎虎（common）； 第四檔：清清楚楚（clear）； 第五檔：漂漂亮亮（cool）。 20分以上作文 踩點(diǎn)扣分 18分以下作文 踩點(diǎn)給分 好作文的標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 書寫清晰明了，無(wú)填涂 結(jié)構(gòu)合情合理 審題明確 中心突出 行文語(yǔ)言流暢準(zhǔn)確 不是單純拼湊 閱卷老師一目了然 句式豐富 使用較多的高中階段學(xué)過(guò)的單詞詞組 內(nèi)容積極樂(lè)觀 情感飽滿 體現(xiàn)個(gè)人良好的價(jià)值觀人生觀 作文書寫 態(tài)度決定高度 attitude determines altitude 傳達(dá)兩種思想 ： 我很認(rèn)真，我要拿高分 五要： 干凈，整潔，壓線，分三段，g h f y I s 字母重點(diǎn)注意 恰當(dāng)?shù)拇笮】梢哉诔?五不要：添涂，傘型，一逗到底，上蹦下躥，隨意，瘦小擠在一起，碩大無(wú)比 注意：字母要善于辨認(rèn)，字母之間有間隔 單詞之間不能隔太開 忽大忽小 大概一行十一到十三字 開頭結(jié)尾一個(gè)單詞拼寫也不能錯(cuò) 開頭結(jié)尾三到四行不能有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤作文結(jié)構(gòu) 開頭 總 對(duì)提示語(yǔ)或圖片進(jìn)行解釋 闡明觀點(diǎn)開門見山。一針見血34行 中間 分 提出問(wèn)題 解決問(wèn)題辦法 結(jié)果 情緒飽滿 1012行 結(jié)尾 總 總結(jié)觀點(diǎn) 收獲 前后呼應(yīng) 感情升華 34 行 好單詞老師偏愛“學(xué)得晚”的單詞，因?yàn)槭褂脤W(xué)得比較晚的單詞，可以體現(xiàn)一個(gè)人“學(xué)以致用”的意識(shí)。 (1)Adj.困難的黯然低分詞：difficult閃光高分詞： tough 艱難的 challenging有挑戰(zhàn)性的(2)Adj.重要的黯然低分詞：important閃光高分詞：vital至關(guān)重要的;essential必不可少的;significant有重要意義的;(3)Adj.美麗的黯然低分詞：beautiful閃光高分：appealing動(dòng)人的; attractive吸引人的; charming迷人的;fascinating迷人的(4)adj.不開心的黯然低分詞：sad閃光高分詞：discouraged氣餒的; depressed沮喪的; downhearted垂頭喪氣的; low-spirited意志消沉的; break down在閱卷老師看來(lái)，活用短語(yǔ)是一個(gè)考生能力的體現(xiàn)。因此，我們可以掌握一些將某些常見單詞轉(zhuǎn)化為短語(yǔ)的用法，如：(5) v.參加黯然低分詞：join閃光高分詞：take part in、participate in (6) v.使用黯然低分詞：use閃光高分詞：make good use of、 make the best of (7) v.拜訪黯然低分詞：visit閃光高分詞：pay a visit to(8)最常見的換詞手段：形容詞=of+同根名詞 黯然低分詞：Important閃光高分詞：be of importance (9) v 幫忙 黯然低分詞：help 閃光高分詞：come to ones assistance (10) adv 黯然低分詞：finally 閃光高分詞： at length 好詞匯詞組造句 temporary setback 不要被暫時(shí)的困難所沮喪Dont be cast down by temporary setbacks. Make great progress 你越努力 你取得的進(jìn)步越大The harder you work, the more progress you will make. Be bound to do/ be doomed to do/ be condemned to do 除非我們不遺余力 我們注定是一個(gè)失敗Unless we spare no effort, we are doomed to be a failure . Obstacle 任何你遇到的困難將會(huì)讓你更加堅(jiān)強(qiáng)Whatever obstacles you meet with will make you stronger.英語(yǔ)寫作中的句式選擇,結(jié)合平時(shí)練習(xí)和所學(xué)短語(yǔ)及語(yǔ)法運(yùn)用，總結(jié)如下 ：一 改變時(shí)態(tài) 例:The bell is ringing now. 一般 There goes the bell. 特殊 事例全部用過(guò)去式 二 改變語(yǔ)態(tài) 例: People suggest that the conference be put off. (一般 )It is suggested that the conference be put off. (特殊)被動(dòng)勝過(guò)主動(dòng)，講述理由時(shí)更加客觀可信I believe we will win (一般)I am firmly convinced that our efforts will pay off. (特殊)三 改變結(jié)構(gòu) 不定式例: she work hard to realize her dream. （一般） In order to realize her dream, she worked hard. （特殊）四 使用過(guò)去分詞 Because she devoted all her life to studying, she succeeded. （一般）Devoted to studying, she finally made it. （特殊） I was inspired by her words and made up my mind to hold on .（一般）Inspired by her words, I made up my mind to hold on. （特殊） I failed the exams many times and almost gave up. （一般）Having failed the exams in a row, I almost gave up. （特殊）五 形容詞作狀語(yǔ) I realized the importance of holding on and decided not to give up Aware of the importance of holding on, I determined not to give up Finally, I arrived at the destination At length, I arrived at the destination, safe and sound / tired but satisfied 六 使用 v- ing 1. When he arrived，he gave me an e- mail(一般) On arriving/ when arriving, he gave me an e-mail. (特殊 )2. 進(jìn)入到重點(diǎn)大學(xué)是我一直想要的Being admitted to a key university is what I am longing for3. 每次看到這樣的話語(yǔ)，我都忍不住想起小時(shí)候Every time I saw those words, I couldnt help recalling my memory when I was young .七 使用名詞性從句1. It disappointed everybody that he didnt turn up.一般 The fact that he didnt turn updisappointed everybody. 特殊 2. he is surprised that the little girl knowsso many things.一般What surprises him is that the little girlknows so many things. 特殊3. 他做了他所能做的事幫我擺脫困境 He did what he could to get me out of trouble.4. 從那以后，我不停反思我所做的事情From then on, I never stopped reflecting on what I had done. 八 使用定語(yǔ)從句1. The girl is spoken highly of. Hercomposition was well written. 一般 The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of. 特殊 2. Honesty, to which teachers attach great importance, plays a significant part in our daily life. 3 There was a time when 4 Thanks to sb, without whom I couldnt have got through the hard times 九 使用狀語(yǔ)從句 1. I wont believe what he says. 一般 No matter what he says, I wont believe. 特殊 十 時(shí)間狀語(yǔ) 四個(gè)when / 一就Be about to do when it occurred to me that原因狀語(yǔ) thanks to / due to / owing to 讓步狀語(yǔ) no matter + wh-/ although/ as/ even if 條件狀語(yǔ) as long as / unless / only if 結(jié)果、伴隨狀語(yǔ) thus doing / only to do 目的狀語(yǔ) in order to / in an attempt to do十一 使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣 1. The ship didnt sink with all on board because there were the efforts of the captain. (一般 )But for the efforts of the captain ,the ship would have sunk with all on board.特殊 But for the fact that / had it not been for the fact that 2. It is high time that sb. should do 十二 使用倒裝句型,強(qiáng)調(diào)句型 (8個(gè)NO)1. Though Im weak Ill make the effort.一般 Weak as I am, Ill make the effort. .特殊 2. He finds English is difficult to learn. 一般So difficult does he find it to learn English. 特殊3. I have never had such an unforgettable experience in my life. 一般Never have I had a more unforgettable experience in my life. 特殊4. His hard work makes a difference. 一般It is his hard work that makes a difference. 特殊十三 插入語(yǔ) To Ones +n (delight, disappointment, surprise, relief) To make matters worse / whats worse Whats more, / in addition In the long run / term From now(then) on / since then Meanwhile, therefore, whereas() As a consequence / at length In a word / in a nutshell/ to sum up fortunately / from where I stand As a matter of fact / believe it or not To put it in another way / in other words例文 結(jié)合校園事例 寫英語(yǔ)作文 Many hands make light work. Cooperation is so important that we can never emphasize the importance of it too much. 無(wú)須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)； 除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限； 文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱； 詞數(shù)不少于120左右。Union is strength. Whenever youre faced with difficulties or in a dilemma, cooperation plays a significant part in getting you out of trouble. There was a time when I was so proud that I overlooked my peers, refusing to work together with them. Therefore, there was no doubt that I was left alone, suffering from loneliness and failure. Fortunately, a teacher impressed on me the value of cooperation. From then on, I learned to help each other and turn to my friends for help whenever I had difficulty in finishing a task on my own. Surely cooperation made a difference. Now I am getting along well with my friends. Meanwhile, I become more confident. My experience has taught me that only if we attach great importance to cooperation can we go beyond ourselves. As the saying goes, “United, we stand; Divided, we fall.”常用習(xí)語(yǔ)1. Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。2. God helps those who help themselves. 天助自助者。3. Easier said than done. 說(shuō)起來(lái)容易做起來(lái)難。4. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。5. One false step will make a great difference. 失之毫厘，謬之千里。6. Slow and steady wins the race. 穩(wěn)扎穩(wěn)打無(wú)往而不勝。7. A fall into the pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一塹，長(zhǎng)一智。8. Experience is the mother of wisdom. 實(shí)踐出真知。9. All work and no play makes jack a dull boy. 只工作不玩耍，聰明孩子也