專題23書面表達(dá)-3年高考2年模擬1年原創(chuàng)備戰(zhàn)2017高考精品系列之英語（解析版）Word版含解析

1、ks5u3年高考2年模擬1年原創(chuàng)精品系列專題23書面表達(dá)【2017年高考命題預(yù)測】預(yù)測一話題與考生的生活實(shí)際、社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)內(nèi)容密切相關(guān)。書面表達(dá)提供的寫作情景比較真實(shí)，寫作的話題與考生的校園生活、成長經(jīng)歷、社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)及科技動(dòng)態(tài)等內(nèi)容密切相關(guān)，關(guān)注考生的情感、態(tài)度和價(jià)值觀，能夠充分考查考生的獨(dú)立思考能力和創(chuàng)新精神。預(yù)測二書面表達(dá)的詞數(shù)仍將保持100詞左右。雖然部分地區(qū)的高考試卷要求考生寫一篇120詞左右的英語作文，考生要在文章的結(jié)構(gòu)、段落的銜接和過渡等方面花費(fèi)更多的心思和筆墨。預(yù)測三 寫作的開放度可能加大。高考英語書面表達(dá)寫作要求也呈現(xiàn)了開放的趨勢，這使考生的寫作內(nèi)容受到的限制減少，并為考生提供了一個(gè)

2、更加自由和開放的寫作空間?！緆s5u考點(diǎn)定位】2017考綱解讀和近幾年考點(diǎn)分布英語考試大綱對學(xué)生的書面表達(dá)能力作了明確的規(guī)定：“要求考生根據(jù)所給情景用英語寫一篇100個(gè)單詞左右的短文。情景包括目的、對象、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容等；提供情景的形式有圖畫、圖表、提綱等。”高中英語課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)也對寫作作了必須要達(dá)到的要求：1.能通過文字及圖表提供的信息進(jìn)行簡單描述；2.能寫出常見體裁的應(yīng)用文，如信函和一般通知等；3.能描述人物或事件并進(jìn)行簡單的評(píng)論；4.能填寫有關(guān)個(gè)人情況的表格，如申請表等；5.能以小組形式根據(jù)課文改編短劇。書面表達(dá)是考查考生用英語表達(dá)自己思想的能力，即運(yùn)用所學(xué)的英語知識(shí)及合乎英語習(xí)慣的表達(dá)方

3、式來傳遞信息，進(jìn)行思想交流的能力。這將要求考生根據(jù)所給的情景和要求，在限定時(shí)間內(nèi)(一般30分鐘)寫出100個(gè)詞左右的書面材料。因此考生要做到：審題正確、要點(diǎn)全面，能夠運(yùn)用所學(xué)的語法結(jié)構(gòu)、詞匯知識(shí)，使上下文連貫，同時(shí)語言要準(zhǔn)確、得當(dāng)，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范。所以，具有良好的書面表達(dá)能力是非常必要的，它也進(jìn)一步突出了對考生創(chuàng)新能力的考查。一、命題多樣化雖然每年的書面表達(dá)都屬于提高性寫作，但越來越重視創(chuàng)造情景，命題由單純的漢語提為主、其他提示（如：圖表）為輔?？忌仨毷紫壤斫鈱懽魈崾?，然后才能組句成文。二、書面表達(dá)的體栽呈現(xiàn)多樣化，為應(yīng)用文(書信、通知、便條等)、記敘文圖表作文、 日記等)和說明文(人物

4、介紹、活動(dòng)介紹)三、試題突出了交際性、實(shí)用性書面表達(dá)的內(nèi)容主要取材于校園、家庭生活和一般外事活動(dòng)，符合高中學(xué)生的年齡特點(diǎn)和生活背景，基本都是考生己經(jīng)熟悉的或?qū)碛锌赡芙?jīng)歷的事情，情景真實(shí)可信。 所提出的要求符合考生的實(shí)際英語水平，具有可寫性，能夠充分展示學(xué)生的書面表達(dá)能力。四、改革力度逐年増大高考英語書面表達(dá)(全國卷I、II的命題方式和題型相公対急定，與單獨(dú)命制的試題相比， 全國卷改革的力度較小，命題思想相對穩(wěn)定。而單獨(dú)命制的試題則敢于創(chuàng)新，勇于求變。五、內(nèi)容更突出時(shí)代特色近幾年的話題十分貼近現(xiàn)代生活，因此內(nèi)容貼近考生的學(xué)習(xí)和生活將成為今后命題 的方向?！究键c(diǎn)pk】 名師考點(diǎn)透析早在2004年

5、公布的高中英語新課標(biāo)中就已明確指出“培養(yǎng)初步寫作的能力是英語教學(xué)的目的之一”。 而高考英語書面表達(dá)高考資源網(wǎng)命題目的就是要測試學(xué)生運(yùn)用所學(xué)的英語知識(shí)和掌握的技能來表達(dá)思想和進(jìn)行交流的能力?？梢哉f這種題型最能檢驗(yàn)出學(xué)生綜合運(yùn)用英語語言能力的高低。高考英語書面表達(dá)具體主要考查學(xué)生以下幾種能力：1.觀察分析，獲取，加工和輸出信息的能力。2.體現(xiàn)語法規(guī)則，并且正確熟練運(yùn)用語法的能力。3.語言交際表達(dá)得體，突出正確語用的能力。4.關(guān)注社會(huì)現(xiàn)實(shí)，錘煉思維表達(dá)能力。備考策略：1.學(xué)習(xí)生活中多參加一些集體和公益活動(dòng)，重視交流，在交流中有目的的運(yùn)用語言，以達(dá)到學(xué)習(xí)和學(xué)以致用的目的。同時(shí)注意歸納整理得體用語，以擴(kuò)

6、充知識(shí)面。注重積累時(shí)尚語言，增強(qiáng)時(shí)尚語言表達(dá)意識(shí)。2. 平時(shí)就要注重體裁，話題等方面的積累準(zhǔn)備。并且尋找適當(dāng)材料進(jìn)行作文專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練，并定期進(jìn)行歸納整理和分類鞏固，循序漸進(jìn)掌握作文寫作技巧。實(shí)際寫作時(shí)要認(rèn)真分析材料所提供的背景，落實(shí)已知信息與所求信息。注重靈活應(yīng)對開放式寫法。3. 學(xué)好語法知識(shí)，注重操練運(yùn)用。平時(shí)可以多做一些句型轉(zhuǎn)換、單句翻譯、用詞、短語或句型造句、文章縮寫、改寫等練習(xí)。4. 回歸高中英語課本，切實(shí)找到并且分析高考英語書面表達(dá)在課本中的典型體現(xiàn)。學(xué)生一定要牢固掌握和靈活運(yùn)用文化、地理、環(huán)境、健康、社會(huì)等話題的內(nèi)容。同時(shí)課本中精選的文章不僅語言規(guī)范準(zhǔn)確，而且內(nèi)容豐富，能夠讓學(xué)生體會(huì)到

7、學(xué)習(xí)和運(yùn)用英語的快樂?！救旮呖肌?14、15、16高考試題及其解析2016年高考試題1. 【2016全國新課標(biāo)I】書面表達(dá)（滿分25分） 假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職，已寫好申請書和個(gè)人簡歷（resume）。給外教Mr Jenkins 寫信，請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）注意： 1. 詞數(shù)100左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，已使行文連貫?！敬鸢浮緿ear Ms Jenkins,I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation a

8、nd I also want you to do me a favor.In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my application and resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I dont know

9、 if there are something to pay attention to. So, Im writing you the letter, hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can do me the favor.Looking forward to your reply. And Id be really thankful.Yours,Li Hua【名師點(diǎn)睛】 本文是一篇較為優(yōu)秀的范文。格式正確，要點(diǎn)全面，語言通順流暢，很好地完成了寫作任務(wù)。在本文中開頭提出寫信的目的，然后具體講述自己

10、的困難，再提出請求，最后表達(dá)自己的感激之情。所以在內(nèi)容上邏輯性較強(qiáng)。此外，作者還使用了不定式短語In order to get some practical experience,、現(xiàn)在分詞短語hoping you can give me some help、賓語從句if there are something to pay attention to等。經(jīng)典句式this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume也是文章的亮點(diǎn)所在。2.【2016全國新課標(biāo)II】書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）

11、假定你是李華，你校攝影俱樂部（photography club）將舉辦國際中學(xué)攝影展。請給你的英國朋友Peter寫封信。請他提供作品。信的內(nèi)容包括： 1主題：環(huán)境保護(hù)； 2展覽時(shí)間； 3投稿郵箱：.注意： 1詞數(shù)100左右； 2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！敬鸢浮緿ear Peter,Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Show. The theme of the show is envir

12、onmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and youve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you v

13、isited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to . Hope to hear from you soon. Yours Lihua【名師點(diǎn)睛】本篇范文很好地完成了要求的所有任務(wù)，要點(diǎn)擴(kuò)充合情合理，符合生活實(shí)際。建議對方參加本次展覽的理由符合邏輯：對方恰好有這一主題的作品。全文句式多樣化，并沒有一直使用陳述句，穿插使用祈使句，符合邀請函的特點(diǎn)。

14、文章中使用了較多的復(fù)合句，如定語從句Any students who is interested in welcome to participate.時(shí)間狀語從句. theme the last time you visited our school.條件狀語從句If you want to join.；等。全文沒有中國式英語句式，體現(xiàn)出很高的駕馭英語的能力?？键c(diǎn)：考查半開放作文3.【2016全國新課標(biāo)III】書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）假定你是李華，與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好一起去書店，因故不能赴約。請給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示歉意；2.說明原因；3.另約時(shí)間。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以

15、適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！敬鸢浮緿ear Bob, Im sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble. Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early

16、so that well have more time to read and select books. If its convenient for you, lets meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.Yours,Li Hua【解析】試題分析：題目要求寫一封道歉信，就不能如約一起去書向Bob道歉，使用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)進(jìn)行寫作。寫作內(nèi)容包括：表示歉意

17、；說明原因；另約時(shí)間。注意使用連接詞，使作文內(nèi)容連貫。亮點(diǎn)說明：范文包括了所有要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，做到了語意連貫。范文使用了賓語從句that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon和the change will not cause you too much trouble；目的狀語從句so that well have more time to read and select books；條件句If its convenient for you；省略句If not等，長短句結(jié)合，使內(nèi)容更加豐富?？键c(diǎn)：書信類作文 ks5u【名

18、師點(diǎn)睛】題目是常規(guī)的書信作文，要求寫一封道歉信，是應(yīng)用文的一種。寫作的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，表達(dá)歉意的同時(shí)，還要與對方另約時(shí)間。因此，不僅僅是一封道歉信。寫作時(shí)注意涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，還要兼顧上下文的連貫性。4. 【2016北京】書面表達(dá)（共兩節(jié)，35 分） 第一節(jié)（15分） 假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國朋友Jim 在給你的郵件中提到他對中國歷史很感興趣，并請你介紹一位你喜歡的中國歷史人物。請你給Jim回信，內(nèi)容包括：1. 該人物是誰； 2. 該人物的主要貢獻(xiàn)； 3. 該人物對你的影響。 注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于50；2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 Dear Jim, _ _Yours,Li

19、 Hua【答案】Dear Jim, Its great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history. As for my favourite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Mps and Records of the World), introduced modern technolog

20、ies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college to be a bridge between China and the world. Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know. Cheers!Yours,Li Hua亮點(diǎn)說明：范文使用了詞組hear from, As for, In fact和搭配 inspire

21、sb to do sth等，豐富了作文內(nèi)容；范文注意上下文的語意連貫。 考點(diǎn)：應(yīng)用文寫作【名師點(diǎn)睛】題材偏向于信息介紹類的開放式寫作，對于應(yīng)用文格式的要求并不高，但對于語言組織和詞匯積累的要求極高。本次應(yīng)用文并沒有限定考生必須寫某一位歷史人物，但是談及人物的貢獻(xiàn)和對自己的影響時(shí)，考生有可能會(huì)遇到大量的詞匯障礙，故難度較去年明顯提升。第二節(jié) （ 20 分）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華。你班同學(xué)參加了學(xué)校的“地球日”系列活動(dòng)。請按照以下四幅圖的先后順序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”為題，給?？坝⒄Z角”寫一篇英文稿件，介紹活動(dòng)的全過程。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。提

22、示詞：地球日Earth Day【答案】Actions for a Greener Earth A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth. Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials. We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes, pieces of car

23、dboard and empty plastic bottles and turned those into dolls, handbags, tissue boxes and small vases. That weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there. All were very happy with those unexpected gifts, especially little kids and elderly people. We did so well that

24、 we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school. We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.【解析】試題分析：題目要求按照四幅圖的先后順序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”為題，給校刊“英語角”寫一篇英文稿件，介紹活動(dòng)的全過程。詞數(shù)不少于60詞，參考詞匯必須使用。使用一般過去時(shí)和第一人稱進(jìn)行寫作。亮點(diǎn)說明：范文使用了非謂語動(dòng)詞call

25、ing upon us to join in the actions和so.that句型與賓語從句we can do more for a better world等，句式多樣；還使用了固定詞組call sb to do sth, join in, come up with. Make use of, o, give away, be proud of等，使作文內(nèi)容變得豐富?？键c(diǎn)：情景作文【名師點(diǎn)睛】話題比較常規(guī)，整體難度適中。“地球日”系列活動(dòng)屬于保護(hù)環(huán)境的體裁內(nèi)容，考生并不陌生。內(nèi)容主要包括：公告欄了解活動(dòng)、分工制作、變廢為寶的宣傳活動(dòng)、主題講座等。一定要按照四幅圖的順序來

26、寫，不可打亂順序；注意行文的連貫性，多使用一些連接詞。5.【2016天津】書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的學(xué)生會(huì)主席李津。一批來自英國的高中生與你校學(xué)生開展了為期兩周的交流活動(dòng)?，F(xiàn)在，他們即將回國，你將在歡送會(huì)上致辭。請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿。（1） 回顧雙方的交流活動(dòng)（如學(xué)習(xí)、生活、體育、文藝等方面）；（2） 談?wù)勈斋@或感情；（3） 表達(dá)祝愿語期望。注意：（1） 詞數(shù)不少于100；（2） 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，是內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；（3） 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear friends,How time flies! Thank you.【答案】One possible ver

27、sion: Dear_friends,_How_time_flies! Two weeks went by before we realized that our exchange activities ended. On behalf of our school, I would like to express my feelings.As scheduled, we took part in several instructive activities. We have learnt many Chinese characters and often took exercise toget

28、her. We went to the restaurant to taste the Chinese traditional food. The food was extremely delicious and different from our food. While visiting the art exhibition, we discussed the great artists works.As far as Im concerned, everyone here is a member of our big family. And at last I sincerely wis

29、h you a pleasant trip to your country. I hope well get together again next year. Thank_you. 【考點(diǎn)定位】考查提綱作文【名師點(diǎn)睛】這篇作文屬于典型的提綱類作文。根據(jù)要求確定要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)對要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行發(fā)揮。關(guān)鍵在于詞匯和句式的選用，盡量使用簡潔的語言。ks5u6.【2016上?！縂uided Writing Directions: Write an English composition in 120150 words according to the instructions given below in Ch

30、inese. 假設(shè)你是中華中學(xué)學(xué)生姚平，最近參加了一項(xiàng)研究性學(xué)習(xí)調(diào)研，課題為“父母是否以子女為榮”。通過調(diào)研你校學(xué)生及其父母，結(jié)果發(fā)現(xiàn)雙方對此問題的看法有差異（數(shù)據(jù)如圖所示）。根據(jù)圖表寫一份報(bào)告，在報(bào)告中，你必須：1.描述調(diào)研數(shù)據(jù)；2.分析可能導(dǎo)致這一結(jié)果的原因。【答案】（略）【解析】試題分析：本文屬于圖表作文。要求考生以姚平的身份寫一則報(bào)告，通報(bào)“父母是否以子女為榮”的調(diào)研報(bào)告的內(nèi)容。文章使用第三人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主的時(shí)態(tài)。要點(diǎn)：1. 最近參加了一項(xiàng)研究性學(xué)習(xí)調(diào)研，課題為“父母是否以子女為榮”。通過調(diào)研你校學(xué)生及其父母，結(jié)果發(fā)現(xiàn)雙方對此問題的看法有差異。2.百分之80的父母親以孩子為榮；自由

31、百分之60的孩子認(rèn)為父母以我為榮。3.分析原因：父母親把全部的精力都傾注在孩子身上，孩子的成功也證明自己的教育方法是正確的；而現(xiàn)在的孩子因?yàn)槟挲g較小，并沒有很強(qiáng)的責(zé)任感，他們并沒有感受到自己承擔(dān)的義務(wù)和責(zé)任。建議在寫作的時(shí)候添加適當(dāng)?shù)闹V語，如Every coin has two sides.提升文采，以增加獲得高分的可能性；穿插使用多種句式，讓文章富有變化。同時(shí)要使用兩到三個(gè)復(fù)合句，并適當(dāng)使用串聯(lián)詞?？键c(diǎn)：考查圖表作文7.【2016四川】書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)正舉辦“The Season I Like Best”的征文活動(dòng)。請用英文寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1. 你最喜歡的季節(jié)；

32、2. 你喜歡該季節(jié)的兩條理由（如：氣候、景色、活動(dòng)、感受）。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 題目已為你寫好；3. 行文連貫，語篇完整；4. 文中不得透露個(gè)人真實(shí)信息?！緟⒖挤段摹縊ne possible version: Among the four seasons in a year, summer is my favourite, which makes me free, excited and energetic. When summer vacation for us students comes every year, we can do all that we cant do d

33、uring our school time, going shopping with friends, swimming in warm water and even hiking and camping in the deep valleys, all of which, I think, lead me to full freedom. We can find us in an exciting world every day, with the sun shining brightly, trees growing greenly and flowers coming out with

34、all kinds of colours. Summer makes me full of energy and I feel I have the strength to do the most difficult things in my life. I like summer best, and what about you？8.【2016浙江】書面表達(dá)（滿分30分）“Planning is good ,but doing is better”是一句英國名言。請以此為題目用英語寫一篇100-120詞的短文。要求如下： 1.簡述你對這句名言的理解； 2.用一個(gè)具體事例加以說明； 3.給出恰

35、當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾。注意：1.文章的標(biāo)題已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）： 2.文中不得以任何形式透露地區(qū)、學(xué)校、老師或同學(xué)姓名等真實(shí)信息，否則按作弊行為認(rèn)定。 Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better 【答案】One possible student versionPlanning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do. However, a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out. M

36、y experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point. A month before the event, I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps. After that, I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic, wrote a speech, and practiced its delivery in beautiful pron

37、unciation with good public speech skills. I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner. I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.【名師點(diǎn)睛】本篇范文短小精悍，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，語言簡練，時(shí)態(tài)人稱準(zhǔn)確，很好的完成了寫作任務(wù)。在文章開頭作者緊扣題目，提出自己對plan的理解，同時(shí)引出下文，然后用自己的親身經(jīng)歷表明要將計(jì)劃付諸實(shí)施這點(diǎn)非常重要。在文中作者用到了

38、短語in detail , bear no fruit ,carry out, set out to等短語，避免了文章句式的單一。此外，還用到了賓語從句how we do , It came from good planning and better doing combined.等，這些都給樸素的語言帶來了亮點(diǎn)?？键c(diǎn)：考查開放式作文9.【2016江蘇】書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）81.請閱讀下面短文，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。In recent years, internet voting has become increasingly popular in China. Peop

39、le not only cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “ Cutest Baby”.Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the “ Best Police Officer 冶 competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a

40、 better understanding of police officers daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “ Future Singer冶 c

41、ompetition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This is a q

42、uestion that troubles him very much.【寫作內(nèi)容】1.用約30個(gè)單詞寫出上文概要；2.用約120個(gè)單詞闡述你對網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票的看法，并用2 3個(gè)理由或論據(jù)支撐你的看法。【寫作要求】1.寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.不必寫標(biāo)題?！驹u(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)?！敬鸢浮縊n-line voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in it. It is beneficial to some pe

43、ople, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not. In my opinion, on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed, since it is no more than a way to participate in public life. It makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates go

44、around to seek supports. In addition, the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space. Furthermore, voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible. To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting, but because they are divide

45、d between emotion and fairness. Things will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards on- line voting. (150 words)Possible version two:Internet voting is quite popular nowadays. Many people are somewhat puzzled a

46、t the negative side of the voting, although some are quite happy with it, ks5u and active in doing it. In my opinion, internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society. Firstly, people may feel forced when asked to do things that they dont want to. Secondly, voting of this

47、 kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors, but rather on how many social-networking resources they have. Thirdly, the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.In short, internet voting, to some extent,

48、is unfair, if not immoral, and cannot be trusted. Therefore, rules should be worked out and strictly observed. Everyone in our society should help those in need, but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.(150 words)2.支持：網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票和生活密切相關(guān)，我們應(yīng)該積極參與。3.理由及依據(jù)：（1）它是一種社會(huì)生活的方式；網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票方便容易，不受時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)的束縛。同時(shí)網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票的

49、反饋迅速可靠。（2）雖然有時(shí)候網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票也會(huì)給我們帶來困擾，但如果有更好的參與規(guī)則，網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票會(huì)更加規(guī)范合理。3.反對：網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票會(huì)給人帶來負(fù)面影響。（1）人們會(huì)因?yàn)榫W(wǎng)絡(luò)投票而產(chǎn)生被迫的感覺。（2）網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票結(jié)果并不客觀；（3）網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票可能會(huì)被故意利用。建議考生在寫作概述時(shí)，語言簡練不拖沓。注意使用本人熟悉的詞匯及句式，以增加獲得高分的可能性。不要堆砌使用串聯(lián)詞，穿插使用陳述句、祈使句和被動(dòng)句式，讓文章更加豐富多樣化。【名師點(diǎn)睛】本篇范文很好地完成了所有任務(wù)。文章結(jié)構(gòu)合理，層次分明。第一段總結(jié)歸納短文內(nèi)容提出網(wǎng)絡(luò)投票很流行，給人們帶來好處同時(shí)也有不利之處。第二段提出個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)并給出理由，兩篇范文中正反觀

50、點(diǎn)明確，論據(jù)有力；第三段中提出合理化建議；時(shí)態(tài)和人稱運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確無誤無誤，全文無中國式英語思維，體現(xiàn)出很高的運(yùn)用語言的能力。從寫作技巧來看，文章中使用了較多的復(fù)合句，如定語從句. in which candidates go around to seek supports.狀語從句.if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey.同時(shí)文章中串聯(lián)詞運(yùn)用較為合理，如in my opinion、in addition、furthermore、to be honest等等?？键c(diǎn)：考查任務(wù)型讀寫2015年高考試題 書面表達(dá)之文字提

51、綱式1.【2015新課標(biāo)全國II】書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）假如你是李華，計(jì)劃和同學(xué)去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人們國重陽節(jié)（the Double Ninth Festival）。請給外教Lucy寫封郵件，邀她一同前往，內(nèi)容包括：1. 出發(fā)及返回時(shí)間；2. 活動(dòng)：包餃子、表演節(jié)目等。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 結(jié)語已為你寫好。_ Looking forward to your reply.Yours Li Hua【參考答案】 Dear Lucy, Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to

52、the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. Well go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. Well also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We sho

53、uld be back around 4 oclock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and well wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning.Looking forward to your reply.Yours Li Hua【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)屬于英文書信，根據(jù)提示信息說明邀請Lucy去參加的活動(dòng)和時(shí)間等。寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確三個(gè)要點(diǎn)：邀請、時(shí)間、具體活動(dòng)。2、提綱是文章的

54、總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)憽?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般將來時(shí)態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明。Well also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.中用了which引導(dǎo)的定語從句和句式spend time doing。此外，還有if從句以及一些短語如invite you to join us，for a visit to，make dumplings等。【考點(diǎn)定位】考查提