英語(yǔ)作文范文

1、 寫 作 指 導(dǎo)同學(xué)們： 大學(xué)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)大綱修訂本對(duì)語(yǔ)言測(cè)試的目的作了清晰的闡釋：語(yǔ)言測(cè)試重點(diǎn)考核學(xué)生的語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)和語(yǔ)言應(yīng)用能力。所謂的語(yǔ)言應(yīng)用能力，是指“綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)進(jìn)行讀、聽、說、寫、譯等語(yǔ)言活動(dòng)的能力”?！霸谂囵B(yǎng)讀、聽、說、寫、譯等各項(xiàng)技能時(shí)，既要強(qiáng)調(diào)掌握和應(yīng)用語(yǔ)言知識(shí)的準(zhǔn)確性，又要注意應(yīng)用語(yǔ)言時(shí)的流利程度和得體性?！本蛯懽鞫?，最主要的問題就是語(yǔ)言的“準(zhǔn)確性”和“得體性”。 在過去的考試中，考生普遍存在的突出問題依然是語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較多，缺乏自如地駕馭英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言的能力。 四級(jí)作文采用總體評(píng)分（Global Scoring）方法，閱卷教師就總的印象給出獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)分（Reward Scores）,

2、從內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言兩個(gè)方面對(duì)作文進(jìn)行綜合評(píng)判，而不是按語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)的錯(cuò)誤數(shù)目扣分。要考慮作文是否切題，是否充分表達(dá)思想，也要考慮是否運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)“準(zhǔn)確”而“得體”地表達(dá)思想，也就要考慮語(yǔ)言上的錯(cuò)誤是否造成理解上的障礙。評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分為五檔：2分、5分、8分、11分和14分。閱卷教師參照樣卷對(duì)考生的作文進(jìn)行評(píng)分，首先確定作文和哪個(gè)檔次的樣卷最為接近，再根據(jù)評(píng)分原則上下浮動(dòng)。 14分-漂漂亮亮：切題，思想表達(dá)清楚，文字通順，連貫性好，基本無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，或僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。 11分-清清楚楚：切題，思想表達(dá)清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò) 誤。 8分-馬馬虎虎：基本切題，有些地方表達(dá)不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中

3、有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。 5分-糊里糊涂：基本切題，思想表達(dá)不清楚，連貫性差，有較多嚴(yán)重語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。 2分-一塌糊涂：條理不清，思路紊亂，語(yǔ)言支離破碎或大部分句子都有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。以下是本學(xué)期寫作范文五篇，供同學(xué)們參考：1.Write a passage with a problem-response-evaluation structure.Topic: The Fight against Air PollutionThe region has been seriously polluted by harmful smog, which proves to be the cause of

4、many illnesses and for the climbing death rate. As a result, people have started to move out of the area.In response to the problem, the local government has decided to fight against air pollution. It has closed down several factories, which were considered to be the major cause of the pollution. Ma

5、ny power plants have been modernized to give off less pollution and also moved further away from peoples homes so as to decrease the damage. At the same time, the local government has decided to plant trees in and around the region because trees can absorb some of the pollution.People welcome all th

6、e measures taken by the government. Consequently, more and more people have begun to move back to the region to take part in this battle for a clean environment.2.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: The Effects of Exercise on Our Health. You should write at

7、 least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:1分析體育鍛煉給我們帶來(lái)的益處。2. 分析體育鍛煉給我們帶來(lái)的壞處。3. 給出如何參加體育鍛煉的建議。 The Effects of Exercise on Our HealthExercise does bring a lot of benefits to our health. First, it can greatly strengthen our hearts, lungs, bones and muscles. Besides, it can also powe

8、r up the brain. And best of all, it can help us breed optimism about our tough life. But all the above does not mean that we can turn a blind eye to the negative effects exercise brings about. Exercise, even moderate exercise may lead to reduced iron in the blood. And worst of all, excessive exercis

9、e can result in sudden death. Therefore, a scientific approach must be taken to face the problem of exercise. On the one hand, our physical exercise must be based on regularity. On the other, we must go in for physical exercise according to local as well as health conditions of our own. 3For this pa

10、rt, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Private School. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese: 1. 近年來(lái)，中國(guó)的私立學(xué)校逐漸興起。2. 私立學(xué)校有諸多好處。3. 私立學(xué)校也有弊端。 Private School In recent years, private schools in ever-increasing numbers are being set

11、up in China, ending the state monopoly (國(guó)家壟斷) of the countrys educational system. Although private schools are still on the experimental stage and are much more expensive compared with public schools, there is no lack of application for enrollment.People welcome private schools for several reasons.

12、First of all, those schools are relieving our government of part of the financial burdens. Secondly, parents are willing to send their only child to private schools because of their higher teaching quality, even if they cost more. Since the private schools provide higher wages for teachers than the

13、government-funded public schools, they attract better qualified teachers, and they can also offer better environments, including superior living facilities and more advanced teaching equipments.However, private schools bring bad influence at the same time. Adequate money doesnt guarantee good educat

14、ion. If not well guided, and properly disciplined, the privileged young children might turn out to be new aristocrats, and therefore unfit for our highly competitive modern society. 4For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Spring Festival Gala on CCTV . You sho

15、uld write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:1. 有人認(rèn)為春晚應(yīng)該取消2. 有人認(rèn)為應(yīng)該繼續(xù)3. 你的觀點(diǎn)Spring Festival Gala on CCTV The Spring Festival Gala on CCTV has long been a tradition for Chinese people to celebrate the Lunar New Year. It was very popular at the beginning, but now, some peo

16、ple suggest that it should be stopped because many of its programs are outdated and boring.Others think that the Gala should continue to be held every year. Firstly, it still has a large audience who prefer to spend their new years eve watching it. It has become a custom for them. Secondly, as it is

17、 broadcasted throughout the world, it can be a good chance to show our traditional culture to the rest of the world. Thirdly, it is an important program for Chinese people living in other nations. By watching the program, they can feel like being at home.If you ask me, then I say I will support its

18、continuation, because the Spring Festival Gala is quite meaningful. It shouldnt be stopped, but be held on year by year.5. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: The Use of Energy . You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chine

19、se:1. 能源與人類的關(guān)系2. 能源的使用3. 人類對(duì)待能源的態(tài)度 The Use of Energy People need all kinds of energy for their survival, the construction of cities, and the establishment of factories. Cooking and heating need energy of heat and lighting needs energy of electricity. It can be concluded without any exaggeration that human being will not be able to survive without energy, nor can the society develop. The modern world is depend