高三英語作文公開課如何使你的作文顏值與才華齊飛

1、The Beauty of Writing欣賞一個人，欣賞一個人，始于顏值，始于顏值，敬于才華敬于才華,HOW ABOUT A COMPOSITION?欣賞一篇文章欣賞一篇文章 始于始于“顏值顏值” 敬于敬于“才華才華” 作文五檔：（作文五檔：（ 從教師閱卷從教師閱卷印象角度印象角度劃分）劃分）n漂漂亮亮 （2125分）n有模有樣 （1620分）n馬馬虎虎 （1115分）n稀里糊涂 （610分）n一塌糊涂 （05分）顏值代表顏值代表唐美林唐美林 22.5黃佳倩黃佳倩 21高“顏值”的文章能夠評委老師留下好印象，先聲奪人。但是“好文章”卻不僅限于只有“顏值”，.才華才華詞匯詞匯句型句型銜接銜接過

2、渡過渡回顧作文題目回顧作文題目假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國筆友假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國筆友Andy 即將到你所在的中學(xué)做一年的交換生，即將到你所在的中學(xué)做一年的交換生，想提前了解一些情況，故向你求助。想提前了解一些情況，故向你求助。請給他寫一封回信，提供有關(guān)請給他寫一封回信，提供有關(guān)、方面的信息。方面的信息。高級表達(dá)高級表達(dá)過渡詞過渡詞非限制性定語從句非限制性定語從句諺語諺語賓語從句賓語從句動名詞做主語動名詞做主語唐美林唐美林 22.5It goes without saying that our classmate is extremely warm-hearted and open-minded.

3、I firmly believe that you will have a colorful and meaningful school life here.陳梅陳梅And our school often hold activities to enrich our school life, so we have a meaningful and colorful school life. To promote our friendship, I will keep a good relationship with you. I believe you can fit in our schoo

4、l life陳小露陳小露怎樣能使我們的文章TIPS 1：顏值：顏值1、分段要合理。絕大多數(shù)高考范文以及高分作文都是分為23段的，也有少數(shù)是4-5段的。 2、書寫要美觀。書寫要符合英文書寫習(xí)慣，字母的大小，字母之間的距離要勻稱，盡量減少涂改、增補(bǔ)的現(xiàn)象。TIPS 2：詞匯：詞匯1、高級詞匯代替低級詞匯chance-opportunity ; so-thereforeimportant-vital 2、短語代替單個單詞important-be of great importance should-be supposed to help sb-do sb a favorvisit-pay a vis

5、it to可參考三維設(shè)計可參考三維設(shè)計P136頁頁TIPS 3：句型：句型定語從句定語從句賓語從句賓語從句非謂語動詞非謂語動詞被動句被動句名詞性從句名詞性從句強(qiáng)調(diào)句強(qiáng)調(diào)句With 的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)常用諺語常用諺語省略句省略句倒裝句倒裝句.There is no doubt that/more and more students choose to study abroad. More and more students choose to study abroad. 固定句型：同位語從句固定句型：同位語從句固定句型：被動句固定句型：被動句 health is more important

6、than wealth.Health is more important than wealth.固定句型：主語從句固定句型：主語從句只有通過這種方式我們才能只有通過這種方式我們才能.Only in this way can you solve this problem.Only by taking exercise keep healthy.If I were you, I would If I were you, I would take part in moreactivities.It is high time that sb did sth/should do sthIt is hi

7、gh time that we paid/ should pay more attention to our environment 1、It is/was +被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+that/who+其余成分其余成分2、It is/was not until that3、用、用do來強(qiáng)調(diào)動詞來強(qiáng)調(diào)動詞I believe you can do it. I do believe you can do it.Our teacher always help us when we are in trouble. It is our teacher that always help us when we

8、are in trouble. 諺語格言名言1、A friend in need is a friend indeed2、Where there is a will, there is a way.3、When in Roam, do as a Romans do.4、Practice makes perfect.5、No pains, no gains. 6、Failure is the mother of success.7、Roam was not build in a day.8、Every coin has two sides.As an old saying goes, “”fir

9、stly, secondly, thirdly, then, finally, in the end, whats more, moreover,more importantly, besides， in additionone on hand, on the other hand， on the contrary， therefore，as a result， in other words，as you know, as we all know, generally speaking, as a matter of factto tell you the truth Tips 4：銜接過渡：

10、銜接過渡可能整篇不完美，也許有一個段落應(yīng)得稱贊；可能整篇不完美，也許有一個段落應(yīng)得稱贊；沒有一個段落完美，也許有一個句子值得肯定；沒有一個段落完美，也許有一個句子值得肯定；沒有一句子完美，也許有一個詞用得精彩。沒有一句子完美，也許有一個詞用得精彩。Never give up!As long as you keep trying, you can succeed.HAVE A TRY:Dear Andy, Im glad to hear that you are coming to study with us for a year as an exchange student. Its my g

11、reat honor to provide you some information about our city and our school, hoping it can help you. There is no doubt that our country is different from America, therefore it is necessary for you to respect the local custom and get accustomed to the life here. In the first place, the weather here is c

12、hangeable. It is wise for you to take an umbrella when you go out. In addition, our city has a reputation for its delicious food. Not only can you enjoy the tasty seafood, but also various fruits. However, we all use chopsticks, which is extremely difficult for foreigners. Last but not least, our school is a fantastic place with many after class activities. our teachers and classmates are rather kind and friendly, you can turn to them for help.Looking forward to meeting you. Yours, Li Hua計時工具 學(xué)號抽取工具Presentation 寫一篇文章，我們要做到顏值與才