高考英語(yǔ)寫作指導(dǎo)地點(diǎn)描寫

1、基礎(chǔ)寫作技巧指導(dǎo)基礎(chǔ)寫作技巧指導(dǎo)Suppose you are a guide to describe a place to tourists, what subjects(主題）主題）will you introduce ?locationpopulationareahistoryculturelivingconditionseducationeconomya placePossible subjects：1.介紹地理位置（介紹地理位置（Location）be located inbe situated inlie in坐落于坐落于腳下腳下/ /頂部頂部stands at the foot

2、of/ on the top of 常用詞語(yǔ)常用詞語(yǔ) 1. 1. 日本在中國(guó)的東方。日本在中國(guó)的東方。 2. 2. 這房子朝南。這房子朝南。 3.3.新教學(xué)坐落在學(xué)校的中央。新教學(xué)坐落在學(xué)校的中央。翻譯翻譯Japan is/lies to the east of China.The house faces (to) the south.The new teaching building lies in the center of the school.4.4.中國(guó)位于亞洲東部，是世界上最大中國(guó)位于亞洲東部，是世界上最大的國(guó)家之一。的國(guó)家之一。China, located/ lying in t

3、he east of Asia, is one of largest countries in the world. 2.介紹人口（介紹人口（Population）:has a population of, （a city） with a population of北京是中國(guó)的首都，是一個(gè)有北京是中國(guó)的首都，是一個(gè)有12001200多萬人多萬人口的大城市。（用一句話）口的大城市。（用一句話）Beijing, the capital of China, is a large city with a population of over 12,000,000.3.介紹面積（介紹面積（Area）ha

4、s/covers an area ofsquare kilometers（a city） with an area ofsquare kilometers城鎮(zhèn)城鎮(zhèn) 面積面積 100100多平方公里多平方公里Its a town with an area of over 100 square kilometers4.介紹歷史（介紹歷史（History）:has a long history (of years)with a long history (of years)歷史悠久歷史悠久它是一個(gè)具有悠久歷史的現(xiàn)代化城市。它是一個(gè)具有悠久歷史的現(xiàn)代化城市。It is a modern city wi

5、th a long history.5.介紹交通（介紹交通（Transportation）take a bus, a train or a plane togo to by bus/train/plane坐汽車、火車、飛機(jī)到坐汽車、火車、飛機(jī)到交通便利交通便利has convenient transportation（a city） with convenient transportation both on land and water經(jīng)濟(jì)迅速發(fā)展經(jīng)濟(jì)迅速發(fā)展economy has been developing rapidly多次進(jìn)入全國(guó)經(jīng)濟(jì)十強(qiáng)城市多次進(jìn)入全國(guó)經(jīng)濟(jì)十強(qiáng)城市has been

6、 listed among the top ten strongest cities in economy several times6、介紹經(jīng)濟(jì)（、介紹經(jīng)濟(jì)（economy）7. 7. 名勝古跡名勝古跡有很多名勝古跡：有很多名勝古跡：places of interest/ historical spots承德是全國(guó)承德是全國(guó)24個(gè)歷史文化名城之一，也是個(gè)歷史文化名城之一，也是44個(gè)風(fēng)景名勝之一。個(gè)風(fēng)景名勝之一。Chengde City is not only one of the well-known 24 historical and cultural cities but also on

7、e of the 44 major scenic spots in China. 一些其它表達(dá)方式：一些其它表達(dá)方式：發(fā)生了很大變化發(fā)生了很大變化great changes have taken place特色鮮明的地方文化特色鮮明的地方文化distinct local culture海岸線總長(zhǎng)海岸線總長(zhǎng)公里公里Its coastline has a total length of kilometers.基礎(chǔ)寫作-情景說明西山鎮(zhèn)依山傍水。過去，這里的人們生活極其貧困。西山鎮(zhèn)依山傍水。過去，這里的人們生活極其貧困。解放后人們的生活在各方面都發(fā)生了很大的變化。解放后人們的生活在各方面都發(fā)生了很大的

8、變化。人口人口約約10萬萬面積面積約約126平方公里平方公里地理概括地理概括 坐落在粵北一山腳下，面臨一條坐落在粵北一山腳下，面臨一條大河，新建有許多工廠商店、醫(yī)院學(xué)校大河，新建有許多工廠商店、醫(yī)院學(xué)校教育狀況教育狀況解放前只有一所學(xué)校且只有富家子弟可以解放前只有一所學(xué)校且只有富家子弟可以上學(xué)，現(xiàn)在有上學(xué)，現(xiàn)在有10所學(xué)校，每個(gè)孩子都可以所學(xué)校，每個(gè)孩子都可以上學(xué)；上學(xué)；生活狀況生活狀況 人們工作之余，可以逛商店、看電影、跳人們工作之余，可以逛商店、看電影、跳舞、參加體育活動(dòng)等舞、參加體育活動(dòng)等寫作要求：寫作要求：1.1.短文標(biāo)題自擬短文標(biāo)題自擬2 2必須使用個(gè)句子介紹全部所給的內(nèi)必須使用個(gè)句

9、子介紹全部所給的內(nèi)容；容；3 3將個(gè)句子組織成連貫的短文將個(gè)句子組織成連貫的短文title if necessary(標(biāo)題）標(biāo)題）tense and voice （時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)）（時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)）person （人稱）（人稱）style （文章題材）（文章題材）the important points （要點(diǎn)要全）（要點(diǎn)要全）1.How to analyze the directions (審題審題)? Great Changes in Xishan Town一般現(xiàn)在、一般過去、現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)一般現(xiàn)在、一般過去、現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)第三人稱第三人稱應(yīng)用文應(yīng)用文List the important points o

10、ut :解放后人們的生活發(fā)生了很大的變化。解放后人們的生活發(fā)生了很大的變化。西山鎮(zhèn)的人口約西山鎮(zhèn)的人口約1010萬；萬；Since liberation great changes have taken place in peoples lifeXishan town has a population of aboutThe population of Xishan town is about 100,000. 面積約面積約126126平方公里平方公里 It covers/has an area of about126 square kilometers. The size of it is

11、about 126 square kilometers.坐落在粵北一座山腳下，面臨一條大河坐落在粵北一座山腳下，面臨一條大河 Xishan town is located at the foot of a mountain of North Guangdong Province and faces a big river. Xishan town is located /stands at the foot of a mountain of North Guangdong province and in front of it flows a big river. 新建有許多工廠商店、醫(yī)院學(xué)校

12、新建有許多工廠商店、醫(yī)院學(xué)校 Many factories, shops, hospitals and schools have been built/ set up.解放前只有一所學(xué)校且只有富家子弟可以上學(xué)。解放前只有一所學(xué)校且只有富家子弟可以上學(xué)。現(xiàn)在有現(xiàn)在有1010所學(xué)校，每個(gè)孩子都可以上學(xué)；所學(xué)校，每個(gè)孩子都可以上學(xué)；人們工作之余，可以逛商店、看電影、跳舞、參人們工作之余，可以逛商店、看電影、跳舞、參加體育活動(dòng)等加體育活動(dòng)等Now there are 10 schools and every child can go to school.Before liberation there

13、was only one school for children from wealthy families.After work people go shopping, see films, go dancing and have sports.用個(gè)句子介紹全部所給的內(nèi)容；用個(gè)句子介紹全部所給的內(nèi)容；用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞或在必要的地方改變句用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞或在必要的地方改變句子結(jié)構(gòu)將個(gè)句子組織成連貫的短文子結(jié)構(gòu)將個(gè)句子組織成連貫的短文 1.Xishan town is a small town, _ is located at the foot of a mountain of North Guan

14、gdong province and in front of it flows a big river.whichLets try!2.Xishan town has a population of about 100,000 _ covers an area of about 126 square kilometers.Xishan town, _ an area of about 126 square kilometers, has a population of .Xishan town covers an area of about 126 square kilometers_100,

15、000 . andcoveringwith a population of多種表達(dá)法靈活表達(dá)多種表達(dá)法靈活表達(dá)3.Before liberation, people there lived a hard life _ since liberation great changes have taken place_ many factories, shops, hospitals and schools have been built. butand now4.Before liberation there was only one school for children from wealth

16、y families_ now there are 10 schools and every child can go to school. 5.After work people go shopping, see films, go dancing and have sports .butLets share!One possible version :1.Xishan town is a small town, which is located at the foot of a mountain of North Guangdong province and in front of it

17、flows a big river. It has a population of about 100,000 and covers an area of about 126 square kilometers. Before liberation, people there lived a hard life but great changes have taken place since liberation and now many factories, shops, hospitals and schools have been built. The school education

18、has also improved, for example , before liberation there was only one school for children from wealthy families, but now there are 10 schools and every child can go to school. After work people go shopping, see films, go dancing and have sports .南極洲世界上最寒冷的地方，南極洲世界上最寒冷的地方，常年有冰雪覆蓋常年有冰雪覆蓋 Antarctica, is the coldest continent in the world.Antarctica, is covered with cold thick ice and deep snow all year round.1.使用定語(yǔ)從句或同位語(yǔ)優(yōu)化句子表達(dá)使用定語(yǔ)從句或同位語(yǔ)優(yōu)化句子表達(dá)which is covered with coldthick ice and deep snow all（the) year round, the coldest continent in the worl