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1、ding yong hua october 31 2007lets make english writing easy!dont be shy, just try.i enjoy losing face.i enjoy being laughed at.i enjoy being made fun of.i enjoy making mistakes.i enjoy learning from mistakes!the more mistakes i make, the more progress i make!try to make as many mistakes as possible!

2、try to lose face as much as possible!try to make people laugh as much as possible!try to make progress as much as possible!start to make mistakes and lose face today!dont be shy, just try!. we can make the sentences longer!1. its a book.it an interesting book.its an interesting book about henry pott

3、er.its the most interesting henry potter book i have ever read!the book about henry potter is so interesting that i want to read it again.its your turn:he is a boy.this is a school.*adjectives are magic words.2. liu xiang can run.he can run very fast.he runs as fast as he can.he runs fastest in the

4、world.he ran so fast that he won the gold medal in athens olympic games. its your turn:it is raining.he does his homework.*adverbs are magic words, too.*the more elements a sentence contains, the longer the sentence will be, and of course, the more beautiful the sentence will be.3. i saw a film. i s

5、aw an interesting american film with my friend at rose garden cinema after i had dinner.its your turn:my father bought a bike.we will have a picnic. . we can make the sentences more beautiful!1.the book is interestinghow interesting the book is!what an interesting book it is!it is fun to have a picn

6、ic in spring.what fun it is to have a picnic in spring!*陳述句可以陳述句可以改成感嘆句改成感嘆句.time flies fast.our school is beautiful.it is nice to see you again.簡(jiǎn)單句可簡(jiǎn)單句可以改成復(fù)以改成復(fù)合句合句2. he is an honest boy.he is a boy who is honest.he is a boy who never tells a lie.he is so honest that everyone wants to make friends

7、with him.he went to bed. (after, when, not until)he can sing and dance. (not only, but also as well as )we will have a picnic. ( if )we are studying hard. (so that)i like spring. (because)3. miss qin loves us and we love her, too.miss wang loves us and she is loved by us, as well.we can see many flo

8、wers in our school.many flowers can be seen in our school.you help others. others will help you.today you help others, you will be helped tomorrow .主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)可以改成被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)可以改成被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài). they will build a new bridge over the huangpu river. we must do something to protect the earth. iii. we can make the beginning

9、 more attractive!trees a: trees are important.b: what makes air around us cleaner and fresher? what makes our environment more beautiful? trees!運(yùn)用設(shè)問(wèn)句運(yùn)用設(shè)問(wèn)句.books are important. friends are important in our life.watera: water is important.b: can you imagine a world without water? 運(yùn)用反問(wèn)句運(yùn)用反問(wèn)句.our school

10、a: our school is beautiful.b: our school is a beautiful garden!our school is a warm family!our school is a world of knowledge!our school is a palace full of dreams!運(yùn)用運(yùn)用比喻比喻句句without hard work, a dream is just like a cloud in the air that you never can reach.life is like a mirror.a good teacher is li

11、ke a candle-it consumes itself to light the way to others.生活就像一面鏡子生活就像一面鏡子老師就像蠟燭，燃燒了自己，照亮了別人老師就像蠟燭，燃燒了自己，照亮了別人不付出努力，夢(mèng)想就像空中遙不可及的云朵不付出努力，夢(mèng)想就像空中遙不可及的云朵lets fly kites.a: spring is here. lets go out to fly kites.b: when the wind is just gentle, when the sun shines brightly, what do you feel like doing? w

12、hat about flying kites? 運(yùn)用排比句b: as the saying goes: an apple a day keeps the doctor away!apples are good .a: apples are good for people.引用名人名言、諺語(yǔ) you should work hard to achieve success-success never come easily and it never comes suddenly.more english sayings:practice is important-practice makes pe

13、rfectyou should not give up -where there is a will, there is a way. we can make the end more meaningful!1.now that you know shanghai is such a wonderful place, why not spread your wings to visit it?2. if you have a chance to visit china, i am sure shanghai will be your no. 1 choice.3. i am sure if e

14、veryone helps to fight pollution, the sky will be bluer, the water will be cleaner. the land will be greener, and of course, our life will be more enjoyable.4. im looking forward to seeing a younger and healthier father. i hope the air in our home will be cleaner and fresher. i am sure we will have

15、a happier life if there is no smoke in our family.5. lets help each other because everybody needs help. i am sure the happiest person in the world is someone who offers help to others. why not be one? c. i have a high sense of responsibility. we must make the body clear and correct! i want to be a v

16、olunteer of the world expo a. i can speak englishb. i am familiar with shanghai. we can write the english composition easily!thank you,_.who/what would you like to thank?why would you like to thank her? how would you like to show you are thankful to her? she might be one person to the world, but to

17、me she is the whole world. do you know who she is? yes, youve guessed it. she is my beloved mother. she takes good care of me. every day when i get up, she has prepared delicious food for me. she helps me with my lessons as well. she is not only my mother but also my friend. when i have troubles, sh

18、e encourages me .and she is happier than me when i make progress. i am so thankful to her. but i havent got enough money to buy her a present. and i am too shy to give her a kiss. but i have decided to say “thank you, mum. i love you” as loudly as i can. i am sure she will be happy to hear that.how

19、do people celebrate it? (what food to eat? what activities to have?)my favorite festival-lantern festivalwhen is lantern festival? china is country with long history and rich culture. among many festivals, lantern festival is one of the most important ones. it is on the fifteenth day of the first lu

20、nar month. it mark the end of the spring festival. people eat traditional food called yuan xiao. and its fun to go to a lantern show and guess lantern riddles. children as well as adults enjoy setting fire works. but most importantly ,people enjoy a family get-together .lets try to celebrate lantern

21、 festival so as to keep chinese tradition and culture.1. we can use adjectives to modify nouns.3. we can add time, place, condition and other elements.2. we can use adverbs to modify verbs.1. 我們可以使用不同類型的句子：我們可以使用不同類型的句子：陳述句感嘆句陳述句感嘆句簡(jiǎn)單句復(fù)合句簡(jiǎn)單句復(fù)合句主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)1. 我們可以用修辭手法: 設(shè)問(wèn)句 反問(wèn)句 比喻句 排比句 引用 clearcorrectwe must make the body: an attractive beginninga meaningful endinga clear and correct body thank you for your attention! thank you