高考英語作文(校公開課)

1、 The Beauty of Writing 高三（三）班高三（三）班 2014.3.21Why is writing so tough?InputOutput高考作文高分卷的特點(diǎn)高考作文高分卷的特點(diǎn)n外在美外在美：第一印象很重要！書寫清：第一印象很重要！書寫清楚，字母勻稱，詞、行間距適當(dāng)，楚，字母勻稱，詞、行間距適當(dāng)，卷面整潔。卷面整潔。n結(jié)構(gòu)美結(jié)構(gòu)美：有合理的段落層次，多為：有合理的段落層次，多為3段式，條理清晰；每段有每段的段式，條理清晰；每段有每段的主題。主題。n詞匯美詞匯美：詞匯反映你知識貯存量的多少，詞匯反映你知識貯存量的多少，也是衡量英語水平的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。也是衡量英語水平的一個(gè)

2、重要標(biāo)志。likebe fond of,be addicted to/ helpdo sb a favor n句式美句式美：運(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)倪\(yùn)用得當(dāng)?shù)母呒壘涫浇Y(jié)構(gòu)高級句式結(jié)構(gòu)可以可以給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝而生輝 。n銜接美銜接美：使用恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂们‘?dāng)?shù)倪B接詞連接詞，對寫一篇，對寫一篇有有“英語味英語味”的文章很重要，能使文章的文章很重要，能使文章上下銜接自然、條理清晰。上下銜接自然、條理清晰。 你校英語社團(tuán)部要組織一次英語賽，你校英語社團(tuán)部要組織一次英語賽， 就就“是否應(yīng)該縮短中學(xué)生在校時(shí)間為是否應(yīng)該縮短中學(xué)生在校時(shí)間為8小時(shí)小時(shí)”這一論題進(jìn)行辯論，

3、請你作為正方代表，寫這一論題進(jìn)行辯論，請你作為正方代表，寫一份發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：一份發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.保證充足睡保證充足睡眠眠 2. 提高學(xué)習(xí)效率提高學(xué)習(xí)效率 3. 增加自主學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間增加自主學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間 注意：注意： 1.詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100左右左右2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫以使行文連貫 3. 辯論稿的開頭已為你寫好辯論稿的開頭已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。 As a senior high student, I strongly recommend that 語法篇語法篇這第一句寫的這第一句寫的 I strongly recommend that

4、This is right we as a senior high student. I strongly recommend that should shorten school time into eight hours.你再看這開頭你再看這開頭 I strongly recommend that the time students devoted to studying in school should be reduced to eight hours a day. The main reasons accounting for it are as follows. 這動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)的這動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)

5、的Short students time in school can have a good effect on study, it can important for students study xiaolu, and increase students own time. 原來改書面表達(dá)就是原來改書面表達(dá)就是改錯(cuò)改錯(cuò) In my opinion, we must have enough time to study, but we also should keep enough time to relax and sleep, either of them are important. B

6、ecause of we have time to relax, we can study energetic. Reduce study time also can improve the quality of our school life. 這詞匯這詞匯你再看這詞匯你再看這詞匯欣賞一下這篇文欣賞一下這篇文章的句式結(jié)構(gòu)章的句式結(jié)構(gòu) If equal amount of work have to be accomplished with a declined school time, study efficiently is expected to be enhanced. Moreover

7、, extra-curricular time will make up more of the students schedule. That is to say, chances are we can make a better use of our time. 卷面篇卷面篇養(yǎng)眼的養(yǎng)眼的當(dāng)批到下午兩點(diǎn)看當(dāng)批到下午兩點(diǎn)看到了它們到了它們太擠了太擠了太亂了太亂了太空了太空了太潦草了太潦草了太花了太花了太沒譜了太沒譜了老師最恨的作文老師最恨的作文大鍋，標(biāo)點(diǎn)呢？段呢？大鍋，標(biāo)點(diǎn)呢？段呢？姐，你長發(fā)及腰的字體姐，你長發(fā)及腰的字體難掩你每句都錯(cuò)的事實(shí)難掩你每句都錯(cuò)的事實(shí)??！?。∩?，你別抄閱讀理解行不？

8、神，你別抄閱讀理解行不？俺們也會(huì)看試卷的！俺們也會(huì)看試卷的！老師最喜歡的作文老師最喜歡的作文Great minds think alike!一點(diǎn)提示一點(diǎn)提示好練的字好練的字筆筆筆筆過長過長答題不可越界答題不可越界作文五檔：（ 從教師閱卷印象角度劃分）n漂漂亮亮 （2125分）n有模有樣 （1620分）n馬馬虎虎 （1115分）n稀里糊涂 （610分）n一塌糊涂 （05分）Three Rules:n1.You learn to write by writing.n2. There is no good writing; only good rewriting.n3. When in dout,

9、refer to Rule No. 1 and 2.Five Steps:nAnalyze the writing task.nOrganize it.nDraft.nRevise.nEdit.高考英語寫作中高考英語寫作中怎樣使用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)怎樣使用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)1.1.適當(dāng)?shù)恼Z態(tài)適當(dāng)?shù)恼Z態(tài)2.2.使用不定式使用不定式 3.3.使用過去分詞使用過去分詞4.4.使用使用V.+ingV.+ing形式形式 5.5.使用名詞性從句使用名詞性從句 6.6.使用定語從句使用定語從句7.7.使用虛擬語氣使用虛擬語氣8.8.使用倒裝句使用倒裝句, ,感嘆句感嘆句 怎樣運(yùn)用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)：怎樣運(yùn)用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)：怎樣運(yùn)用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)：怎

10、樣運(yùn)用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)：1.1.主動(dòng)轉(zhuǎn)被動(dòng)主動(dòng)轉(zhuǎn)被動(dòng) People suggest that the conference be put off. (一般一般) that the conference be put off.that the conference be put off. (高級高級)The advisor is expected to work 4 hours a week . We expect the advisor to work 4 hours a week . It is suggested2. 2. 使用不定式使用不定式3. 3. 使用過去分詞使用過去分詞In order

11、to earn money by myself and broaden my horizonsShe walked out of the room and many students followed her. (一般一般) , she walked out of the room . . (高級高級) ，I intend to look for a part-time job as a salesman. （為了獨(dú)立賺錢和拓寬視野）（為了獨(dú)立賺錢和拓寬視野）Followed by many students4. 4. 使用使用v-ingv-ing形式形式2 2） , , Ill Ill vi

12、sit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation.（天氣允許的話）（天氣允許的話）1）Now our school has three teachers. They teach 48 pupils. (一般一般)Now our School has three teachersNow our School has three teachers，Weather permittingteaching 48 pupils. 伴隨狀語伴隨狀語What is the most important is that5. 5.

13、 使用名詞性從句使用名詞性從句2. I can I can help children improve their English.(help children improve their English.(最為重最為重要的是要的是) )1.I am sorry. I didnt reply without delay. I am sorry that I didnt reply without delay.6. 6. 使用定語從句使用定語從句1）The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (一般一般)The

14、girlThe girl was was highly spoken of.spoken of. (高級高級)2)maybe I will work as a volunteer for a school as a teaching assistant_.(這將豐富我這將豐富我的生活的生活)which is able to enrich my life.which will make my life colorful.whose composition was well writtenenriching my life7. 7. 使用虛擬語氣使用虛擬語氣我相信如果你是我，你也會(huì)做出同樣的我相信

15、如果你是我，你也會(huì)做出同樣的選擇。選擇。 I believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice. 8. 8. 使用倒裝句、感嘆句使用倒裝句、感嘆句 earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. (我不僅能獨(dú)立賺錢)1. I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. (我多么希望)2. not only but also引起的倒裝How I wish Not only can I高

16、考英語寫作中高考英語寫作中要要學(xué)會(huì)使用恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞學(xué)會(huì)使用恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞 III.常用的常用的連接詞連接詞1. 表示遞進(jìn)表示遞進(jìn);在同一話題上補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容在同一話題上補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容 另外，還有另外，還有：whats more; besides; also; moreover; in addition2. 表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系 但是，但是， 然而，然而， 相反相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.3. 表示因果關(guān)系表示因果關(guān)系 因?yàn)?，因此，所以因?yàn)?，因此，所? since; as; because (of )

17、; so; thus; therefore; as a result; 4. 表示條件關(guān)系表示條件關(guān)系 如果，只要如果，只要: if ;on condition ( that ); as long as 除非除非: unless 否則否則: or else 5. 表示時(shí)間關(guān)系表示時(shí)間關(guān)系 當(dāng)當(dāng) 的時(shí)候的時(shí)候 : when ; while 在在之后之后: after 在在之前之前: before 直到直到: until 直到直到才才: notuntil 一一就就 : as soon as 后來，后來， 然后然后: later; afterwards 不久不久: soon 近來近來: lately

18、; recently 自從自從 :since 從那時(shí)起從那時(shí)起: from then on6. 表示特定的順序關(guān)系表示特定的順序關(guān)系 首先首先:firstly 最主要的最主要的: above all 其次其次: secondly 然后然后: then; next 最后最后: finally; in the end7. 換一種方法表述換一種方法表述 換句話說換句話說: in other words; that is to say; 8. 進(jìn)行舉例說明進(jìn)行舉例說明 例如，比如例如，比如: for instance; for example; like; such as that is to say, namely, actually, and so on, believe it or not, to tell you the truth, for this reason 9. 用于陳述事實(shí)用于陳述事實(shí) 實(shí)際上實(shí)際上: in fact; actually; as a ma