牛津滬教版英語六年級下六年級下寫作技巧講解

1、牛津滬教版英語六年級下六年級下寫作技巧講解六年級下寫作技巧講解I好文章的特征1 .中心積極2 .內(nèi)容豐富，結(jié)構(gòu)有邏輯，層次分明，3 .用詞恰切，句子結(jié)構(gòu)合理，要表達(dá)的意思非常清晰4 .行文簡潔，流暢，讀起來，甚至有美感II根本方法1 .積累，詞匯與語法2 .多聽或多看原汁原味的英語廣播，電影電視；多閱讀原汁原味的英語書籍，報紙，雜志等。3 .多以英語加工、表達(dá)信息，形成豐富的，流暢的英語思維4 .適當(dāng)運用寫作技巧，比如謀篇，修辭等。5 .多練筆III步驟一審。即審題?？辞孱}目含義和要求；確認(rèn)文體；準(zhǔn)備寫作的人稱和時態(tài)：如果是日記和故事， 宜采用過去時態(tài)；如是簡介，宜采用現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。二綱。即列提綱

2、。根據(jù)表達(dá)中心的需要，把要寫的文章分為 3段：1.導(dǎo)入。用簡單的幾句話，導(dǎo)出話題，或文章的中心思想。2.正文。根據(jù)短文的內(nèi)容要求，確定先寫什么，后寫什么，按照表述內(nèi)容的情節(jié)發(fā)展和實際需要，一般分成三段。3.結(jié)尾。緊扣主題，兩句話內(nèi)結(jié)束，對文章進(jìn)行總結(jié)和升華。三寫。但要注意句式的靈活運用，長、短句，簡單句，復(fù)合句要搭配運用。 選用單詞、詞組、句型時，要能根據(jù)自己的英語水平，盡量揚長避短，避難就易。遇到想不起的詞、句時，就用同（近）義詞或同義句代替，不要使用沒有把握的詞句，并且要綜合考慮所涉及到的情景、場合， 語言要地道。使用銜接詞，或過渡句，過渡段，使結(jié)構(gòu)層次分明。四修。即修改與潤色?？慈氖欠?/p>

3、符合題目要求，行文是否流暢，有沒有遺漏要點；語法是不是 正確，包括詞的拼寫、大小寫、標(biāo)點符號、時態(tài)、語態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)、主謂一致、冠詞等IV常用A開頭1. Just as every coin has two sides.2. Compared to ., . is more.3. Opinions are divided on the advantages and disadvantages of .D. As we all know,.4. Why do you .?With the development of.6. As a student(.)7. s an old saying goes

4、 8. 連詞1表層: first, firstly, second, secondly, third,thirdly,to begin with,to start with,what is more, last,also,andthen,next,besidesthen/next/after thaAtt first; at last; in the endwhen/while/as soon as/not until in addtionfinallyOnonehand .on the other haneach/one coin has two side2 表轉(zhuǎn)折 but,however,

5、though, although, after all, in spite ofortunatelunfortunatelat the sametim3 表遞近 in addition, besides, moreover, what's mor4 表因果 because, so, because of, thanks to, due to,for, since, owing to, as a result(of), hence, thu5 表例證 for example, for instance, such a6 表利弊 be good/bad for sb.; be harmfu

6、l to sb.; do harm to sb.;have great/much influence on sb.; sth.benefit sb.; sb benefit from sth.; affect; have an effect on sb1.;/ 8 牛津滬教版英語六年級下六年級下寫作技巧講解7)表喜愛：love/like/enjoy ；be fond of ；be interested in ； show great interest in ；lose oneself in ；put one's heart into；8)總結(jié)， As we all know, in g

7、eneral, generally speaking, I think., in fact, in aAs I see, As for meword, in brief, in conclusion, in short, in summary, to sum upC. 萬能句式1. I hope the dream will come true one day.2. It's important/necessary/useful/useless/common (for sb.) to v3. It's nice/kind of sb. to v.4. It's time

8、 for sb. to do sth.5. It's a waste of time to 6. It's - years/days since sb. +ved7. It's great fun to do=sb. have great fun doing8. It's a pity that 9. It's an honor to Part3 范文賞析AWhat' s the matter?【寫作要求】Jack 最近身體不太舒服，經(jīng)常頭疼發(fā)燒，并感覺身體虛弱疲勞?？催^醫(yī)生后，他收到了下面一張診斷表，請根據(jù)其要點并結(jié)合以上內(nèi)容以“Jack

9、9; s problem ”為題寫一篇 80 詞左右的文章。Name :JackIllness: A bad coldAdvice: Take medicine twice a day; have a good rest; drink lots of water; eat more fruit and vegetables; exercise more; enough sleep【寫作指導(dǎo)】根據(jù)要點提示，文章的內(nèi)容大致分為兩部分：先描述Jack 的病癥，然后根據(jù)表格要點敘述醫(yī)生的診斷結(jié)果和所給的建議。【范文】Jack' s problemJack ist feeling well th

10、ese days. He often has a headache and has a fever. And he is feeling weak and tired. So he went to see the doctor. Here is what the doctor said:Jack has a bad cold. He should take medicine twice a day and have a dood rest. Of course, he should have a healthylifestyle. For example, he should drink lo

11、ts of water and eat more fruit and vegetables. And he should exercise more andhave enough sleepI hope he can be better soon.B.【寫作要求下面是你最好朋友張力的資料，請根據(jù)下表內(nèi)所給的提示，寫一篇不少5 字的英文短文介紹他姓 :張年 : 12外貌特 : 中等身材，戴眼鏡，短頭發(fā)，小眼性有點兒害羞，非常友業(yè)余愛看書，打籃夢想當(dāng)一名作【寫作指導(dǎo)介紹人物，重點是介紹這人物的外貌和性格，在仔細(xì)審題之后，要按照一定的邏輯順序，把表格內(nèi)給的中文提示用英文表達(dá)出來。不要遺漏任何要點【范

12、文Zhang Li is my best friend.He is 12 years old. He is of medium build, and wears a pair of glasses. He has short hair and small eyes. He is a veryfriendlyboy,butheisalittlebitshy.Heisgoodatallhissubjectsatschool,andhishobbiesarereadingandplaying basketball. He wants to be a writer when he grows up,

13、because his father is a writer. His fatherhas writt4en twenty booksso far. Being directed ed by his father, he writes a composition very week. I think his dream may come true one day.Some times, we go cycling at weekends, and sometimes we play computer games at my home,for I have a very smart 2 / 8

14、牛津滬教版英語六年級下六年級下寫作技巧講解computer.It is really a pleasure to have such a good friend.part4. 排序 給下列的文段重新排序A.1. Getting enough sleep is also important for us to stay healthy. So we should go to bed early and get up early.2. At last, we need to do some exercise often because it can keep us active. We '

15、 d betterdo exercise every day.3. First of all, we should have a good eating habit.4. To stay healthy, we must have a healthy lifestyle.5. Try to eat a lot of fruit and vegetables, but try not to eat too much junk food. Drink milk every day.答案： (Key: 43512)B.1. From the chart, we find most of them s

16、pend their pocket money on fast food and computer games.2. About half of them use their pocket money to buy fast food. 12 of them spend their pocket money playing computer games. A few of them spend their pocket money in buying presents, clothes or seeing films.3. So as students, we' d better sp

17、end our pocket money in the right way, such as buying books and something useful4. But as we know, eating too much fast food is bad for our health and playing computer games is a waste 浪 ) of time.5. The chart shows how the 50 students in Class1, Grade8 use their pocket money.6. Only 7 of themspend

18、their pocket money on books.答案 (Key: 526143)C.1. In the afternoon, we played games with them.2. Last Saturday, I volunteered to go to a poor mountain village school with several of my friends.3. We were glad to see the kids were really hard -working and lovely.4. In the morning, we taught some kids

19、to learn English and then told some stories to cheer them up.5. After that, we gave away some books and toys to them.6. My name is Sally. I think volunteering means a lot.7. I hope to go to help them next time if possible.答案 Key:6341537Part5 改改正下列作文的錯誤ALi Ming,who has been working as postman for 1.t

20、wo years,always wears a suit of green uniforms. 2.3 / 8牛津滬教版英語六年級下六年級下寫作技巧講解He worked with care as well as with effort.He 3.serves for the people heart and soul.Every day he 4.gets up early to deliver newspapers or magazines. 5.He is so careful and he has never been wrong. 6.One day he had to send a

21、 dead letter and it happened 7.to be raining hardly outside.But he set out immediately. 8.He had asked nearly everybody in the district after 9.he managed to hand letter to the right person. 10.答案解析1. 在 postman 前加a。 postman 是可數(shù)名詞的單數(shù)形式，需要在前面加不定冠詞。2. uniforms 改為 uniform 。 uniform “制服”之意。此處不能用復(fù)數(shù)。3. wor

22、ked 改為 works 。短文的基本時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時。4. 去掉for。 serve 為及物動詞。5. or 改為 and 。這里不是選擇關(guān)系。6. and 改為 that 。后面是一個結(jié)果狀語從句。7. 正確。8. hardly 改為hard。 hardly 是“幾乎不”的意思，意義矛盾。9. after 改為 before 。10. 在letter 前加the。B.It is on Sunday today.Early in the morning my 1.classmate and I went to Xi Shan by bus to plant 2.Trees.As soon a

23、s we got there,we began work. 3.Some were digging,some planted,and there were 4.still some watering.Both of us were trying hard to 5.plant as much as we could.All of us were afraid of 6.falling behind.After work,we were wet all over.Looking 7.at lines of young trees,we forgot our tiredness.We 8.came

24、 back at 12.we all think it is necessary of us to take 9.part in this kind of physically labor. 10.答案解1. 去 on2. classmate 改為復(fù) classmates。從下文 some,still some 看，有一群學(xué)生3. work 之前tbegin to dosth. 的用法4. planted 改 planting 。與上文digging 并列，省略wer5. Both 改 Alboth 用于二者的情況，現(xiàn)在是一群學(xué)生，應(yīng)al6. much 改 man 其后省去tree7. 正確8

25、. lines之前the。特指種下的那一行行樹9. of 改 fo10. physically 改 physical 。要用形容詞作定語修飾名詞CDear editor,My name is Xiao Hai,boy student in senior Three. I don't think it is necessary to write the “ S”in a capital letter what doyou think, Editor? 1.Recently I've read in Shanghai Students' Post that 2.4 / 8牛

26、津滬教版英語六年級下六年級下寫作技巧講解you need some students reporters.I am anxious to 3.be one of them.I very like English.I have been 4.learned it since eight years ago.Now I can talk 5.with foreigners with English.I can read China Daily. 6.I took the first place in writing an English composition 7.contest.Besides,

27、I do well in a computer competition. 8.Would you be so kind as to receive me? 9.I am looking forward to hear from you soon. 10.Yours, Jimmy 答案解析1. boy 前加 a。2. 正確。注意in Shanghai Students' Post 不是動詞read 的賓語，故不能去掉in 。其賓語是that引起的名詞性從句。3. students 改為 student 。除 woman,man 修飾復(fù)數(shù)名詞時用復(fù)數(shù)外，其它名詞作定語時均用單數(shù)。4. 去掉

28、very。中國人常說"很喜歡"，英語中則該說"likevery much "。very much通常不放在 like 之前，故不要在very 之后加 much 。5. learned 改為 learning。 have been doing， 主動的現(xiàn)在完成進(jìn)行時。6. 第二個with 改為 in 。用某一語言介詞用in 。7. 去掉writing 。不是“在寫作文中”，而是“在作文競賽中”。8. do 改為 did 。電腦競賽顯然是以前的事。9. receive 改為 accept 。不是“收到我”，而是“接受我”。10. hear 改為 hearin

29、g 。其前的to 為介詞，故用動名詞。Part 6 寫作A上周的體育課上，有個同學(xué)忽然肚子痛，引發(fā)了學(xué)校對 “體育課安全”的關(guān)注。請以 “ How tokeep safe in PE 為題在班會課上作主題發(fā)言。內(nèi)容包括1 描述意見發(fā)生在你身上的或你看到的發(fā)生在體育課上的意外事件（經(jīng)過和結(jié)果2 提出解決這種意外的建議（至條）3 呼吁每個學(xué)生要注意體育課安全要求：語句連貫，字8 個左右。作文開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入字?jǐn)?shù)How to keep safe in PEGood afternoon !Do you know that our PE class could be dangerous if we are not careful enough?For example,Thas all. Thank you.思路：第一步：三確確定體 確定時態(tài)確定人稱第二步：擬提5 / 8牛津滬教版英語六年級下六年級下寫作技巧講解第一自然段第二自然段第三自然段第三步：四檢查 寫作點字?jǐn)?shù)點格式點語法點改錯：B目前，提倡“節(jié)儉型社會"e economized society ),和“光盤行動：(Clean Plate Campaign)。請根據(jù)下表格中的信息，為英語報社寫一篇短文，談?wù)勛鹘?名中學(xué)生，在日常生活中如何勤儉節(jié)約，反對浪費， 并作簡要評論。What