八年級上Unit4writing

1、Unit4 Writing Writing a letter of advice寫一封提建議的信寫一封提建議的信Something about Li JieSimonLi JiepenfriendLi Jie has some worries.Simon gives some advice to her .Talk about your homework討論作業(yè)答案 A2 In the letter, Simon tells Li Jie many things she should do. What are they? 完成P59頁的A2，在信中找到Simon告訴Li Jie應(yīng)該做的事情 1

2、 She should take some warm clothes with her 2 _ 3 _ 4 _ 5 _ 6 _ If she want to go to someone else room, she should knock at the door and wait before she goes in.She shouldnt worry about the food and meals.She should be polite and just says “No, thanks.”, if she doesnt like the food.She should try to

3、 talk to peopleShe should ask the family, before she uses the phone Dear Li Jie1 You say you are worried about staying in London with an English family. Are you worried about the cold weather? Take some warm clothes with you. But remember, because it is often cold here, peoples houses are usually ve

4、ry warm. You may be too warm, not too cold! 2 You will have your own bedroom in the familys house. The family will not come into your room, if you dont want them to. If you want to go to someone elses room, always knock at the door and wait before you go in.cb在信中找出表示建議的詞語：3 Most people are worried a

5、bout food and meals. Most families know that you eat a different kind of food and many will try to give you something you like. Be ready to try English food, though. Its OK to say “No, thank you”, if you really dont like it. Just be polite.4 Try to talk to people. If you are polite and ready to talk

6、 to and laugh with people, you will not make them angry. They will enjoy having you in the house.ae5 If you get lonely, you can phone your parents. But remember: you should always ask the family, before you use the phone. Im sure you are very excited about your visit. Best wishes to you and have a g

7、reat time! Good luck! Simond在信中找出表示建議的詞語： 1）_ 2）_ 3) _ 4)_ 5) _ 6)_ 7)_ 8)_Take some warm clothes with youRememberIf you,alwaysBe ready to doIts OK to say “No, thank you”Just be politeTry to doBut remember: you should 1）我認(rèn)為_ 2) 你應(yīng)該/不該_3)你最好_ 4) 以我之見_ 5) 為什么不_ 6) 請_歸納常用的表示建議的句子： I thinkYou should / Y

8、ou should notYoud betterIn my opinionWhy not./Why dont youPleaseWho is she?Jenny UK excitedstudy in China？ live in a host family？ Can you give her some advice on how to learn Chinese and live happily in China？Jenny 李潔擔(dān)心的兩件事：1.Study in China 學(xué)中文的問題2.Live in a host family 在寄宿家庭的生活問題 Can you give her s

9、ome advice? 小組討論 My advice你的英國筆友你的英國筆友JennyJenny將要來中國學(xué)習(xí)。她來信向你咨詢將要來中國學(xué)習(xí)。她來信向你咨詢學(xué)好中文、和寄宿家庭一起生活的建議。請你寫一封學(xué)好中文、和寄宿家庭一起生活的建議。請你寫一封回信給他，提出一些建議幫助他消除擔(dān)憂?；匦沤o他，提出一些建議幫助他消除擔(dān)憂。要點(diǎn)：要點(diǎn)：1.1.怎么樣學(xué)好中文。怎么樣學(xué)好中文。 上中文課；每天練習(xí)中文。上中文課；每天練習(xí)中文。（2 2）學(xué)唱中文歌曲，）學(xué)唱中文歌曲，（3 3）交中國朋友，用中文和他們聊天。）交中國朋友，用中文和他們聊天。 2.2.如何融入寄宿家庭的生活如何融入寄宿家庭的生活 （1

10、1）應(yīng)該友善對待他人。）應(yīng)該友善對待他人。 （2 2）努力嘗試著吃中國菜。）努力嘗試著吃中國菜。 （3 3）最好要做家務(wù)，幫助家人。）最好要做家務(wù)，幫助家人。注意：要點(diǎn)僅供參考，可自由發(fā)揮；開頭語已給出。注意：要點(diǎn)僅供參考，可自由發(fā)揮；開頭語已給出。Dear Jenny,Dear Jenny, Im glad to receive your letter asking for Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese and live in my advice on how to le

11、arn Chinese and live in China._China._ _Best wishes!Yours truly* Dear Jenny,Dear Jenny, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese and live in China.on how to learn Chinese and live in China. In your letter,you said

12、 that you are worried about studying in China and living in a host family.In my opinion ,you should have Chinese class everyday ,so you can practice Chinese and make it better.Also you should learn some Chinese songs and chat with your Chinese friends. When you live with your host family,you ought t

13、o be friendly to your family members.Try to eat Chinese food and you will like it.Lastly ,youd better help your host family to do some housework. I hope my advice can help you and you can enjoy yourself in China. Best wishes!Yours truly* goodbye Your friend Sophie is going to the UK next month. Writ

14、e a letter to her and give her some advice about the weather, the food and how to get along with the host family. You may use the information in A2 to help you. The beginning of the letter is given below.運(yùn)用以上表建議的句子和A2的句子完成課本A3的寫作，文章開頭已給出，并注意審題。Dear Sophie I am happy to hear that you are going to stu

15、dy in the UK. But it seems you are worried about the weather, the food and how to get along with the host family . If you are worried about the weather,_ you should take some warm clothes with you. If you are worried about the food , I think you should be ready to try English food, you should not wo

16、rry about the food and meals, you should be polite and just says “No, thanks”, if you dont like the food. In order to get along with host family, you should try to talk to people politely. I hope my advice can help you and you can enjoy yourself in UK.你的英國筆友你的英國筆友JennyJenny將要來中國學(xué)習(xí)。她來信向?qū)⒁獊碇袊鴮W(xué)習(xí)。她來信向你咨

17、詢學(xué)好中文、和寄宿家庭一起生活的建議。你咨詢學(xué)好中文、和寄宿家庭一起生活的建議。請你寫一封回信給他，提出一些建議幫助他消請你寫一封回信給他，提出一些建議幫助他消除擔(dān)憂。除擔(dān)憂。要點(diǎn)：要點(diǎn)：1.1.怎么樣學(xué)好中文。怎么樣學(xué)好中文。 上中文課；每天練習(xí)中文。上中文課；每天練習(xí)中文。（2 2）學(xué)唱中文歌曲，）學(xué)唱中文歌曲，（3 3）交中國朋友。）交中國朋友。 2.2.如何融入寄宿家庭的生活如何融入寄宿家庭的生活 （1 1）應(yīng)該友善對待他人。）應(yīng)該友善對待他人。 （2 2）努力嘗試著吃中國菜。）努力嘗試著吃中國菜。 （3 3）最好要做家務(wù)，幫助家人。）最好要做家務(wù)，幫助家人。注意：可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；開頭

18、語已給出。注意：可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；開頭語已給出。Dear J,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese lessons, because youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to

19、 watch TV and read books, newspapers, and magazines in Chinese. Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because it can help you learn and remember Chinese words more easily. In addition, You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help

20、you learn Chinese.I hope youll find these sugguestions useful and I hope you can enjoy your life in Hua Du. Good luck with you.Best wishes, Li Hua假如你叫孫軍，是恩施高中的學(xué)生，要給市長假如你叫孫軍，是恩施高中的學(xué)生，要給市長寫一封信，反映學(xué)校門前交通擁擠現(xiàn)象，包括寫一封信，反映學(xué)校門前交通擁擠現(xiàn)象，包括以下要點(diǎn)：以下要點(diǎn)：參考詞匯參考詞匯: 穿行穿行 thread ones way 天橋天橋 overpass 問題問題建議建議學(xué)校和一所小學(xué)毗鄰，對

21、著學(xué)校和一所小學(xué)毗鄰，對著大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小之孩子小, 家長接送。交通家長接送。交通更擁擠；學(xué)生過街在車輛中更擁擠；學(xué)生過街在車輛中穿行危險(xiǎn)。穿行危險(xiǎn)。政府應(yīng)采取措施政府應(yīng)采取措施,如修天橋等。如修天橋等。第一步第一步: What must we pay attention to when writing an article ?題材題材：人稱人稱 Person (The first/ third person)時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)：Tense (the simple present tense)要點(diǎn)：要點(diǎn)： a letter第一步：審題第一步：審題養(yǎng)成重視審題的習(xí)

22、慣。養(yǎng)成重視審題的習(xí)慣。雖然基礎(chǔ)寫作題是半封閉性的，但審題仍然十分重要?，F(xiàn)以樣題為例，談?wù)勅绾螌忣}：思考的問題思考的問題樣題分析樣題分析第幾人稱？（第幾人稱？（person）文章的題材是什么？文章的題材是什么？要寫的文章主題是什么要寫的文章主題是什么 (topic)怎樣安排信息點(diǎn)的順序？怎樣安排信息點(diǎn)的順序？ (order)動(dòng)作是什么時(shí)候發(fā)生的？動(dòng)作是什么時(shí)候發(fā)生的？(時(shí)態(tài)時(shí)態(tài)) (when)第一人稱第一人稱一封信一封信建議政府采取措施舒緩交建議政府采取措施舒緩交通擁擠的狀況通擁擠的狀況說理邏輯性說理邏輯性一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)適當(dāng)運(yùn)用模板適當(dāng)運(yùn)用模板Dear Bob,Im glad to re

23、ceive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主題引出主題). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句此三句不同不同的句式提出建議的句式提出建議)As to , I suggest (有時(shí)根據(jù)需要有時(shí)根據(jù)需要具體到某一反面具體到某一反面). In addition, (其他建其他建議議). Im su

24、re (預(yù)測可能的結(jié)果，給對預(yù)測可能的結(jié)果，給對方以行動(dòng)的信心和決心方以行動(dòng)的信心和決心).Im looking forward to (表達(dá)愿望表達(dá)愿望).Sincerely yours,Li HuaDear_, You have asked me for my advice with regard to _, and Ill try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion(以我拙見以我拙見), you would be wise to take the following actions: _. I ho

25、pe youll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with you.Yours,XXX 第二步：搜索相關(guān)詞組或句型第二步：搜索相關(guān)詞組或句型問題建議學(xué)校和一所小學(xué)毗學(xué)校和一所小學(xué)毗鄰，對著大街，高鄰，對著大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小之孩子小, 家長接家長接送。交通更擁擠；送。交通更擁擠；學(xué)生過街在車輛中學(xué)生過街在車輛中穿行危險(xiǎn)。穿行危險(xiǎn)。政府應(yīng)采取措施政府應(yīng)采取措施,如修天橋等。如修天橋

26、等。 學(xué)校與一所小學(xué)毗鄰學(xué)校與一所小學(xué)毗鄰,對著大街對著大街stand next to primary face/be faced with the main streetTheres a primary school near our school, and both schools face the main street.Our school stands next to a primary school, faced with/facing the main street.推薦句型：推薦句型：There be+并列句并列句非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)Standing next to a pri

27、mary school, our school is faced with/faces the main street.潤色潤色小建議小建議Next to a primary school將介詞短語提前（全倒裝）將介詞短語提前（全倒裝） stands/lies/is our school, faced with / facing a main street.可將可將stand next to替換為高級詞匯替換為高級詞匯/短語短語be located next to (near/beside/by) border/adjoin vt. be adjacent to與與毗鄰毗鄰在在對面對面 be

28、opposite to The traffic is busy during the rush hours.高峰期交通繁忙高峰期交通繁忙.traffic. during the rush hoursDuring the rush hours, there are so many cars and buses going on the road thatDuring the rush hours, there is a lot of traffic.so. thatwith結(jié)構(gòu)結(jié)構(gòu)With so many cars and buses going on the road, 潤色潤色小建議小建議“

29、高峰期高峰期”可意譯可意譯:at peak time，a large current of cars and people“交通繁忙交通繁忙”可譯為可譯為:traffic jamcongestion 交通堵塞交通堵塞be choke up withbe crammed with 被被堵塞堵塞/塞滿塞滿 加之孩子小加之孩子小,家長接送家長接送,交通更擁擠交通更擁擠 sendto, fetch. , 非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)非謂語結(jié)構(gòu).Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the tra

30、ffic heavier.Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, making the traffic heavier. , which.加之孩子小，家長接送，交通更擁擠加之孩子小，家長接送，交通更擁擠Whats more, pick up. make.To make things worse/ whats worse, many parents coming to pick up their children make the street more crowded.In addition/

31、Additionally, many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier.Whats more, parents often attend their kids to school, resulting in more serious traffic jams.What makes things worse is that children have to be picked up by their parents owing to th

32、eir young age.making the situation more serious.making the traffic heavier可意譯為：可意譯為： so. that.=tootoThe children are so young that parents have to send them to school and fetch them home, which makes/making the traffic heavier.making 可替換為：可替換為： causing, leading to, resulting in“sendfetch” 可替換為短語：可替換

33、為短語：pick up潤色潤色小建議小建議 學(xué)生過街在車輛中穿行危險(xiǎn)學(xué)生過街在車輛中穿行危險(xiǎn)thread ones way，when doingIt is dangerous for the students to thread their way among buses and cars when crossing the road.固定句型固定句型It is +adj. for to do.1.Students are risking their lives to thread their way among cars.潤色潤色小建議小建議2. Some are exposed to da

34、nger when crossing the ocean/ sea of cars. 靈活運(yùn)用其它的短語進(jìn)行意譯：靈活運(yùn)用其它的短語進(jìn)行意譯： 適當(dāng)增加形容詞和副詞：適當(dāng)增加形容詞和副詞： it is extremely dangerous，it is of great/ tremendous danger政府應(yīng)采取措施政府應(yīng)采取措施,如修天橋等。如修天橋等。 suggest/suggestion, take steps/ measures/ action to do such asMy suggestion is that the government should表語從句表語從句固定句型固

35、定句型 It is high time that(虛擬語氣虛擬語氣)It is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like buildingI suggest that the government should take steps such as building an overpass.簡單句簡單句1. In order to release the stress of traffic problems, 潤色潤色小建議小建議2. Aimed at solving these problems, the gove

36、rnment shouldA. 適當(dāng)添加一些意思（過渡句）適當(dāng)添加一些意思（過渡句）The government should pay more attention to it and try to solve it.B. 語義的意譯語義的意譯3. Seeing these matters, never will I stop urging our government to take some measures. For the sake of improving the quality of traffic, it is significant to buildC. 添加形容詞和副詞添加形

37、容詞和副詞I strongly suggest, active/effective measures第三步第三步. 連句成文連句成文但要注意：篇章的連貫性但要注意：篇章的連貫性Next to a primary school stands our school, facing a main street. _, its crammed with cars during the rush hour. _ children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age. _, its of great danger f

38、or the students to go through the traffic. _, it is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like building an overpass.A. As a consequence B. According to the phenomenon stated above C. When it comes to traffic jamsD. What makes things worse is that A.C.D.B.反面范例反面范例反面范例反面范例反面范例反面范例反面范例

39、反面范例不推薦字體不推薦字體優(yōu)秀作文范例優(yōu)秀作文范例1優(yōu)點(diǎn)：考生能靈活地處理各個(gè)信息點(diǎn)，大量運(yùn)用優(yōu)點(diǎn)：考生能靈活地處理各個(gè)信息點(diǎn)，大量運(yùn)用非謂語，介詞短語，從句，連詞等來提亮句子，非謂語，介詞短語，從句，連詞等來提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯個(gè)性和語言功底。使得文章更彰顯個(gè)性和語言功底。優(yōu)秀作文范例優(yōu)秀作文范例2優(yōu)點(diǎn)：考生的書面整潔，字體美觀，運(yùn)用優(yōu)點(diǎn)：考生的書面整潔，字體美觀，運(yùn)用there be句型，介詞短語，從句，非謂語，套用句式等來句型，介詞短語，從句，非謂語，套用句式等來提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯內(nèi)涵和語言功底。提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯內(nèi)涵和語言功底。優(yōu)秀作文范例優(yōu)秀作文范例3優(yōu)點(diǎn)：考生運(yùn)用倒