書面表達問題例析

1、書面表達常見問題v單詞拼寫錯誤v詞形變化錯誤v用詞錯誤v短語誤用v時態(tài)語態(tài)錯誤v句型結(jié)構(gòu)錯誤v按漢語杜撰英語v胡亂拼湊復(fù)雜句子，導(dǎo)致邏輯混亂v語句形式單調(diào)，通篇缺少變化v語篇缺乏條理v1. Laura loves to listen classical music and eats ice cream.v2. I hope you can good at studying English.v3. She likes something differently.v4. My English is well.v5. She liked eatting cakes.Laura loves liste

2、ning to classical music and eating ice cream.I hope you can be good at studying English.She likes something different.My English is good.She liked eating cakes.問題例析問題例析v6. Youll maybe a doctor.v7. She doesnt afraid of anything.v8. I met she yesterday.v9. I hard to memorize the words. Its bored.v10.

3、Before, Katie had a lot of trouble of studying English.Youll be a doctor. / You may be a doctor.She isnt afraid of anything.I met her yesterday.Its hard for me to memorize the words. Its boringIn the past, Katie had a lot of trouble studying English.v11. I also have many problems to learn English, l

4、ike, hard to memorize the words, cant understand spoken English.v12. Laura twelve years ago, she personality was serious and quiet, and now she personality was relaxed and noisy.I also have many problems (in) learning English, for example, Its hard for me to memorize the words. And I cant understand

5、 spoken English, either.Twelve years ago, Laura was serious and quiet, but now she was relaxed and noisy.v13. The homework they do not only means they are hard-working but also is full of their love.v14. Its not only can help family, but also can practice ourselves , Itnt it?The homework they do sho

6、ws they are hard-working, and they also shows their love to parents by doing lots of chores at home when they are free. We can not only help our families, but also get many chances to practice and train ourselves, can we?多個形容詞修飾名詞的順序v限定詞-數(shù)詞-描繪詞-（大小，長短，形狀，新舊，顏色）-出處-材料性質(zhì)-類別-名詞。例如： a small round table

7、a tall gray building a dirty old brown shirt a famous German medical school an expensive Japanese sports carvOne day they crossed the _bridge behind the palace. A. old Chinese stone B. Chinese old stone C. old stone Chinese D. Chinese stone old vLaura used to have long straight brown hair, but now h

8、er hair is short, curly and bright red.Correct your mistakesv1. If people dont drink water for three days, they must be dead.v2. We cant drink clean water.v3. If people have no water in it like a bird without wings.v4. There are around 13 cities in China are serious lack the water city.v5. There is

9、few water in the world can be used.We have no clean water to drink. If people have no water in them, they are like a bird without wings.Around 13 cities in China lack water seriously.Little water in the world can be used.We have no clean water to drink. If people have no water in them, they are like

10、 a bird without wings.We have no clean water to drink.Around 13 cities in China lack water seriously. If people have no water in them, they are like a bird without wings.We have no clean water to drink.Little water in the world can be used.Around 13 cities in China lack water seriously. If people ha

11、ve no water in them, they are like a bird without wings.We have no clean water to drink. If people dont drink water for three days, they will die.v6. In many places have found that the rivers and lakes turned black.v7. Somewhere peaceful can make me relaxed.v8. I think is useful and universal becaus

12、e many countries use the language.v9. Although I cant understand all the lyrics meanings.In many places people find that the rivers and lakes have turned black.I think it is useful and universal because the language is used in many countries. Although I cant understand the meanings of all the lyrics

13、.A peaceful place can make me relaxed.v10. There is really fascinating and beautiful. v11. The water becomes much more dirty.v12. I got out play in the neighborhood of the river. In surprised, I didnt see any fish in it.v13. Water makes up about 71% of the earths surface is covered.v14. I has heard

14、the most beautiful songs is called Yesterday Once More.The scenery there is really fascinating and beautiful.The water becomes much dirtier.I got out to play in the nearby river. In surprise, I didnt see any fish in it.Water covers about 71% of the earths surfaceThe most beautiful song I have heard

15、is called Yesterday Once More.v15. I like music that speak English very much.v16. I dont have the lyrics, I cant stand to get them.v17. My study is very busy.v18. I would like to read a novel named Harry Potter rather than the movies called that.I like music English songs very much. I dont have the lyrics, and I cant wait to get them.Im busy with my study.I would like to read a novel named Harry Potter rather than watch the movies with the same name.v19. She hurried to check if something losing.v