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1、10高考英語(yǔ)作文寫作攻略1.請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇100詞左右的短文，簡(jiǎn)要描述漫畫(huà)內(nèi)容，并結(jié)合生活實(shí)際， 就漫畫(huà)主題發(fā)表感想，題目自擬。參考詞匯：公民道德civic virtue【解題指導(dǎo)】本文要求描述高考資源網(wǎng)漫畫(huà)內(nèi)容，結(jié)合生活實(shí)際，就漫畫(huà)主題發(fā)表感想。體裁為議論文，人稱為第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。先讀懂漫畫(huà)含義，抓主體；然后展開(kāi)合理想象，揭寓意；最后根據(jù)實(shí)際，談?wù)J識(shí)?！舅悸伏c(diǎn)撥】1細(xì)心審閱畫(huà)面，包括提示文字，描述漫畫(huà)。本文寫清以下要點(diǎn)隨地吐痰；亂扔香蕉皮；孩子手拿公民道德，詢問(wèn)“誰(shuí)丟了公民道德”；發(fā)表議論。2聯(lián)系實(shí)際，揣摩畫(huà)面寓意。3遣詞造句see sb do sth throw sth on

2、the ground The boy handing the book, shouted, “Who lose civic virtue?” I wish4.根據(jù)畫(huà)面構(gòu)思，連句成文?！痉段男蕾p】Who Lose Civic Virtue?One day, a child went home after class. On his way home, he saw some adults spit on the ground. On the other side of the road, a man threw the garbage on the ground after eating a b

3、anana. The child found a book Civic Virtue, lying on the ground. So he picked up the book and shouted, “Who lose civic virtue?”The childs words should make people think more. Now, many people are scared of civic virtue, and dont protect public environment at all. I wish this cartoon can wake their v

4、irtue and make our life better. 【點(diǎn)評(píng)】1本文命題新穎，手法獨(dú)到，走出近幾年高考英語(yǔ)寫作俗套，以漫畫(huà)為依據(jù)，考查考生對(duì)客觀世界的感知和認(rèn)識(shí)，從而考查考生的思維想象、觀察和明辨能力。2采分點(diǎn)突出，標(biāo)題一語(yǔ)中的，結(jié)尾議論得體。文中用了不少的高級(jí)詞匯和優(yōu)美語(yǔ)句，如：saw some adults spit on the ground, threw the garbage on the ground,picked up the book and shouted, make people think more, wake their virtue and make our

5、 life better, 等，使文章內(nèi)容豐富，也體現(xiàn)了作者熟練的語(yǔ)言基本功?！緦懽鞴ヂ浴?仔細(xì)觀察漫畫(huà)，弄清畫(huà)面的含義，抓住畫(huà)面的主體。漫畫(huà)寫作中，畫(huà)面的主體往往是人物。要從畫(huà)面中人物的形體、相貌、服飾等，弄清人物的性別、年齡、身份；從人物的表情、動(dòng)作，推測(cè)人物的思想面貌，以及他在干什么；還要觀察周圍環(huán)境，弄清事件發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)以及和事件有關(guān)的情況。2根據(jù)畫(huà)面內(nèi)容，進(jìn)行合理想象，使畫(huà)面“動(dòng)”起來(lái)，從而形成一個(gè)完整的小故事。畫(huà)面上的人物，景物，甚至色彩，要求借助于圖畫(huà)提供的形象，聯(lián)系生活經(jīng)驗(yàn)進(jìn)行合理想象，把圖上的人物寫活，把事情的來(lái)龍去脈交代清楚。寫人、記事、寫景、狀物不僅要有色，而且要有聲

6、；不僅描繪事物的靜態(tài)，而且要有事物的動(dòng)態(tài)；不僅要有人物的外貌、神態(tài)，而且要有人物的語(yǔ)言行動(dòng)及人物的思想感情?？傊?，要把靜止的畫(huà)面“活動(dòng)化”，要把平面的事物“立體化”。但想象不是盲目的，要有目的，絕不能脫離畫(huà)面，任意發(fā)揮。3認(rèn)真安排內(nèi)容，布局謀篇。在寫作時(shí)，要按照從整體到部分，由遠(yuǎn)到近等順序，做到言之有序；要抓住重點(diǎn)，突出中心；在語(yǔ)言表達(dá)上，既要有連貫的敘述，又要有形象的描寫，達(dá)到生動(dòng)、形象地表達(dá)畫(huà)面的內(nèi)容。完稿后，再對(duì)照漫畫(huà)反復(fù)閱讀，認(rèn)真地加以修改。這樣，一篇好的漫畫(huà)作文就產(chǎn)生了。漫畫(huà)作文不僅讓學(xué)生輕松作文，寫下真實(shí)的內(nèi)容，而且它變枯燥乏味的作文為興趣主動(dòng)地寫作，培養(yǎng)了學(xué)生的觀察、想象、思維、

7、創(chuàng)新能力。漫畫(huà)作文不失為高考中的一條新路。【技巧點(diǎn)撥】1 漫畫(huà)作文屬于材料作文中的一種，認(rèn)真讀圖，解其內(nèi)涵，用正確的認(rèn)識(shí)領(lǐng)悟漫畫(huà)的深刻寓意是成功之本。2善于選點(diǎn)。“選點(diǎn)”就是確定寫作的立意點(diǎn)，一幅漫畫(huà)的寓意可以多角度理解，在審讀的時(shí)候，要做到理解到位。否則，文章內(nèi)容頭緒眾多，是不利于表達(dá)的。3善于引發(fā)。由此及彼地加以聯(lián)想與引申，在畫(huà)面意義的基礎(chǔ)上聯(lián)想到另一層新的內(nèi)容。4思維要與漫畫(huà)的寓意保持一致；情節(jié)的發(fā)展，人物的刻畫(huà)要以人物的動(dòng)作描寫和心理描寫等來(lái)完成，慧眼獨(dú)到與作者的思想達(dá)到一致，因?yàn)閷?duì)于一幅漫畫(huà)，不是所有人都能讀出它的奧妙來(lái)?！炯磿r(shí)演練】2.閱讀下面漫畫(huà)，先對(duì)漫畫(huà)的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行描述，然后對(duì)這

8、一現(xiàn)象發(fā)表自己的看法。（100詞左右）The boy and the girl in the picture sat on a bench talking merrily while eating a water-melon. When they went away they left the melons skin on the bench, making it very dirty. They didnt want to take any trouble throwing it into the dustbin although it was very near where they we

9、re sitting. Instead, they said that there would be someone who should clean the rubbish.However, what they did violate public morality. If everyone behaves in this way, the world will be a big rubbish dump with files flying round and people will live in a world of diseases. Besides, dustmen will hav

10、e a very, very hard job to clean the world we live in.3.假如你是李平，就讀高三，最近收看了中央電視臺(tái)青春中國(guó)某欄目，對(duì)你啟發(fā)很大。片中介紹的情況如下表，請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容給某英文報(bào)社寫信，談?wù)勀愕目捶?。欄目主題：大學(xué)生活狀況現(xiàn)象1，大學(xué)生到校后，有失落感，精神萎靡不振。2，有的自加壓力，爭(zhēng)強(qiáng)好勝，造成精神分裂，甚至自殺。你的看法1，雖在原校很優(yōu)秀，但大學(xué)人才濟(jì)濟(jì)，都很優(yōu)秀。因此保持心理平衡，是確保學(xué)好的第一因素。2，做好心理準(zhǔn)備，努力學(xué)習(xí)，考取大學(xué)。建議正確引導(dǎo)，關(guān)注學(xué)生健康成長(zhǎng)。 要求：1，書(shū)信內(nèi)容必須包括表中所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。 2，信

11、的開(kāi)頭已為你寫好。 3，詞數(shù)，120150左右。 Dear editor, Recently I have watched the program “Youth china” on CCTV _ _yours Li Ping Dear editor,Recently I have watched the program “Youth China” on CCTV. I feel very astonished. In one of the sections, the host shows us some college students had a feeling of being negle

12、cted after entering college, as the result that they were in low spirits and didnt work hard; And that some of them, however, forced themselves to remain the first of his class, worked harder and harder, of course, and at last were upset at it. Whats worse, even some killed themselves.In my opinion,

13、 maybe one is excellent in the past, but at college many capable people get together. One should keep the balance in his mind and first of all, knowing how to study is the highest of the highest. As a senior 3 student, I think, I should study hard to enter college smoothly and at the same time I sho

14、uld be well prepared in my mind. At last I call on all teachers and the whole society to guide the students correctly and care for their growing up. Yours Li Ping 4. 近年來(lái)，在迅速積累財(cái)富的過(guò)程中，有些廠家和商家為牟取暴利，生產(chǎn)和銷售假冒偽劣產(chǎn)品。假如你是校園小記者，請(qǐng)以“Harmfulness of fake products”為題，就你身邊情況，根據(jù)下表提供情況，向觀眾作以報(bào)道，提醒消費(fèi)者注意。危害1，廠家及商人以賺錢、贏利為

15、目的，不顧及群眾的生命安全。2，假冒偽劣食品流入市場(chǎng)，引起食物中毒。3，劣質(zhì)奶粉，嚴(yán)重威脅下一代。防范措施1，公民應(yīng)提高防范意識(shí)，安全、衛(wèi)生措施應(yīng)得到保證。2，政府部門應(yīng)加強(qiáng)執(zhí)法力度，嚴(yán)厲打擊制假、買假行為。呼吁努力學(xué)習(xí)，懂得自己肩負(fù)的重任，長(zhǎng)大切實(shí)為人民服務(wù)。注意：1，文章必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。2，詞數(shù)120左右。3，參考詞匯：制假、買假 make and sell fake products 肩負(fù)重任shoulder the responsibility of參考答案：Harmfulness of fake products In the race to beco

16、me rich quickly, some factories and businessmen just think to make money and profits, To make and sell fake products, they dont allow for the peoples life. Now fake food products come to the markets, causing people poisoned. Food poisoning is an increasing problem in both cities and the countryside.

17、 Fake milk powder threatened babies seriously. I think people should improve the conscience of defence to guarantee the peoples safety and hygiene. On the other hand, the government should strengthen to enforce the law strictly and crack down the conducts of making and selling of fake products. As s

18、tudents we know we shoulder the responsibility of building our motherland, we should work hard to serve the people heart and soul after growing up. 5.假如你是校園網(wǎng)絡(luò)播音員，就新義務(wù)教育法向師生進(jìn)行宣傳：1.農(nóng)村義務(wù)教育學(xué)段，學(xué)?！安皇諏W(xué)費(fèi)，雜費(fèi)”，反映了教育的公益性。2. 學(xué)校不得向?qū)W生收取其他費(fèi)用，包括學(xué)校活動(dòng)和辦學(xué)支出，校服，臥具等。3. 新法采取了多種措施，保障兒童平等地接受教育。4.保證了適齡兒童接受教育，促進(jìn)學(xué)生全面發(fā)展，保證了教育質(zhì)

19、量。One possible versionDear schoolmates,Look at the picture in the screen, why are the children so happy? Here is a piece of news! As is shown in the picture, “we all can afford to go to school”. Indeed, the New Laws of Compulsory Education has been published by our government recently. And all rural

20、 school students will never be charged for their tuition fees and all other expenses for school, which further shows the public welfare of education.Now all kinds of measures have been taken to ensure all children of school age, who can go to school free of charge and exams, can receive education eq

21、ually. The new laws make it a rule that all schools mustnt collect any fees, such as expenses on school activities, school uniforms, beddings and so on. The performance of the new laws of compulsory education can ensure all school age children to receive education, promote the development of all stu

22、dents and improve the quality of education. 【解題指導(dǎo)】1. 文章主要內(nèi)容為宣傳新義務(wù)教育法，可確定體裁說(shuō)明文，時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，第三人稱。2. 表達(dá)過(guò)程要緊扣新義務(wù)教育法主要內(nèi)容，即提示要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不能偏離主題。3. 注意使用學(xué)過(guò)的詞匯，句型和適當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)，予美化，點(diǎn)綴?！痉段牧咙c(diǎn)】1. as is shown in the picture, 2. can afford to do sth3. charge sb for sth4. take measures to do sth5. make it a rule that6.receive

23、 education, promote the development of all students and improve the quality of education.6.以“建設(shè)和諧社會(huì)為主題，根據(jù)下面表格所給出的要點(diǎn)提示，用英語(yǔ)為同學(xué)們寫一封倡議書(shū)。提示：人與社會(huì)對(duì)祖國(guó)、家鄉(xiāng)、學(xué)校，熱愛(ài)關(guān)心人與人對(duì)家人、師長(zhǎng)、同學(xué)，誠(chéng)信互助人與自然對(duì)能源、環(huán)境、動(dòng)植物，愛(ài)惜保護(hù)你的態(tài)度？要求：1，詞數(shù)120左右。2，內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意表明你的態(tài)度。One possible versionDear fellow students,The Party Central Committee calls

24、 on us to build a harmonious society. I think it is every citizens duty to work hard to achieve this goal.As high school students, what should we do?First of all, we should love our motherland. Lets take a great interest in the development of our hometowns and take an active part in our school and a

25、ctivities.Secondly, lets fill the world with love. We should show our respect for old people, our parents and our teachers. We should also care for each other and help those in need. More importantly, all of us must be faithful and honest in our daily life.Finally, lets work together to save energy

26、and protect our natural environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass.As for myself, I will study even harder and try my best to do all the above. Dear fellow students, lets start fight now and spare no effort/efforts to do a little bit every day, every hour, and every minute!7.“建設(shè)社會(huì)主義新農(nóng)村

27、”成為熱點(diǎn)話題。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示，以“New Socialist Countryside in the Future”為題描繪一下未來(lái)“建設(shè)社會(huì)主義新農(nóng)村”的藍(lán)圖。項(xiàng)目未來(lái)新農(nóng)村的藍(lán)圖新農(nóng)業(yè)農(nóng)業(yè)技術(shù)現(xiàn)代化，科技化，增加農(nóng)業(yè)產(chǎn)量，又不損害環(huán)境新農(nóng)民有知識(shí)、懂科技、知法律、會(huì)管理新生活收入增加，住房改善，環(huán)境優(yōu)美新社保子女免費(fèi)義務(wù)教育，醫(yī)療保障系統(tǒng)不斷提高，完善。你的態(tài)度？字?jǐn)?shù) ：120左右參考詞匯：義務(wù)教育compulsory education醫(yī)療保障系統(tǒng)medical care systemOne possible versionNew Socialist Countryside in th

28、e Future With the efforts and support from the government in many aspects, a new socialist countryside will appear in China. There will be more new farmers with the basic knowledge of science and technology, laws and management. Many farming techniques will have been modernized. With the help of sci

29、entists, farmers will use the latest technologies to increase agricultural production without harming the environment. As a result, the yearly income of the farmers will be increased and their housing conditions will be improved as well. People in the new countryside will enjoy a clean, tidy and ord

30、erly living condition. Whats more, the government will provide free compulsory education for rural kids and also perfect medical care system for farmers.As students, we should study hard to be well prepared for the future construction of the new socialist countryside, thus making our country more be

31、autiful and powerful.8.國(guó)家正在提倡建設(shè)節(jié)約型社會(huì),你將以How to build an economized society為題向21世紀(jì)報(bào)投稿。文章應(yīng)包含以下要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,談?wù)勛约旱囊恍┫敕ɑ蜃龇?。要點(diǎn)提示:節(jié)約型社會(huì)你的想法或做法節(jié)電及時(shí)關(guān)閉燈,電扇,電腦等; ？節(jié)水隨手關(guān)水龍頭,廢水利用等;節(jié)能拒用塑料袋,廢物回收等;注意:1.詞數(shù):100左右.短文標(biāo)題,開(kāi)頭已為你寫好,但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2.內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,注意行文連貫.How to build an economized societyOur government is aiming to build an

32、economized society. I think it is every citizens duty to work hard to achieve this goal .One possible versionHow to build an economized society Our government is aiming to build an economized society. I think it is every citizens duty to work hard to achieve this goal. To build an economized society

33、, we must keep the following points in our minds. Firstly, make sure that the lights and the electric fans are turned off when there is no one left in the room. Set the room temperature at above 26. Remember to turn off the computer when you are not using it. Secondly, try to form the habit of turni

34、ng off the tap after it is used. Use basins when washing faces or vegetables, so that the water can be used again to clean toilets or water flowers. Thirdly, it will be good enough to use a basket instead of a plastic bag when you go to the market. As we know, a basket can be reused many more times.In a word, we should try our best to build an economized society.9.近日，你班在“知榮明恥”教育活動(dòng)中，召開(kāi)了一次關(guān)于學(xué)生榮辱觀的主題班會(huì)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫一段文，