中考英語作文專題訓練：命題作文30例(含答案解析)

1、.中考英語作文 命題作文30 例1、書面表達 (10 分 )以“ My Best School Trip”為題寫一篇 60 字左右的短文，介紹你的參觀情況。_答案My Best School TripLast school trip, I went to the beach with my classmates on the bus. We had great fun playing on the beach, swimming in the water, surfing, fishing and we took many photos there. Later we visited the

2、Blue Water Aquarium. We saw many different kinds of fishes there. There were sharks, seals, octopuses and so on. Some were big, others were small. In the afternoon, we went to the shop and bought many gifts. Finally, we had a big sea food dinner. We were tired, but really happy. It was my best schoo

3、l trip.2、書面表達。 (15)學校英語社團在舉辦英語征文比賽。請你根據(jù)下表所列的內(nèi)容要點，用英語以“ Learn to smile”為題寫一篇短文，參加比賽。學會對自己微笑生活中會有不愉快的事，如考試不及格（請再舉一個例子）；使你自信；擊敗你的人有時是你自己。學會對他人微笑使人與人更親近;.微笑是一種語言人人都能懂注意： -詞數(shù) 80 左右。短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；參考詞匯：自信 -confidence (n.), confident (adj.);打敗 -beat (beat,beaten) (v.);短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，不要逐句翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；文

4、中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關信息。Learn to smileSmile is an attitude (態(tài)度 ) to life._答案 Learn to smileSmile is an attitude to life. In our life, there may besomething unpleasant. For example, you fail in an exam; oranother time, you are misunderstood by your friends. Theseunpleasant things may make you feel bad. Th

5、en what will you do?Why not learn to smile? Smiling to yourself can bring back yourconfidence. Sometimes, the greatest enemy is yourself; that抯to say, sometimes, you are beaten by yourself. We should alsolearn to smile to others. It will help us to get closer toothers. So, smile is the most widely u

6、nderstood language.3、書面表達 ( 本題 15 分)近年來中國中學生中出現(xiàn)了“出國留學熱”，成千上萬的中學生已經(jīng)去國外學習，而另外的一些學生也一直在設法出國，對此人們有不同的看法。請根據(jù)下面表格的提示，以Studying Abroad為題寫一篇短文。AdvantagesDisadvantages;.與不同文化背景的人交友。年紀小、缺乏生活經(jīng)驗，自理能力差。更快地學習外語。生活和學習費用高。注意： 1、短文須包括所有要點，內(nèi)容連貫；2、80 詞左右，開頭已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）。Studying AbroadIn recent years, studying abroad ha

7、s been popular with Chinese high school students._答案 Studying AbroadIn recent years, studying abroad has been popular with Chinese high school students. Thousands of them have gone to foreign countries to study. Many more are trying their best to go abroad.There are many advantages in studying abroa

8、d. First, students who study abroad can make friends with people of different cultures. Second, they can improve their foreign languages more quickly.On the other hand, there are some disadvantages. Most of the students are too young to live by themselves without any living experience. And the high

9、cost is also a problem for common families.4、書面表達部分（10）以 How to Keep Healthy為題寫一篇 80 詞左右的短文。（ 10 分）;.答案 If we want to keep our bodies healthy, we must have a goodhabit. We should get up and go to bed early and sleep at leasteight hours every day. Do more exercise, such as walking,swimming, playing b

10、alls and so on. We should also eat healthyfood棗 more fruit and vegetables and less meat. If you don抰feel well, you抎 better see a doctor at once. And we shouldwash our hands before meals and drink enough boiled water everyday. It抯 necessary for our health.lth.We should not throw litter about, keep lo

11、ng fingernails andsmoke, etc. It抯 also veery important.5、Write at least 60 words about the topic“I m member of_. ”( 以”我是 的一員”為題寫一篇不少于60 個詞的短文 , 標點符合不占格子” )提示 : 你可以作為任意興趣小組或者社團的人員, 或者作為家庭 , 班級 , 社區(qū)額的一員 , 寫出你的經(jīng)歷 , 感受等 .Use the following points as a reference.Are you glad to be a member of ?What do you

12、 do in it?How do you feel as such a member?;.【寫作思路】一、審題本文要求寫一篇介紹自己作為某興趣小組或某社團成員的文章，要求學生寫出自己的經(jīng)歷以及感受等。二、列舉寫作要點1. have been a member of singing and dancing club for +時間；2. I m an actor in the this club.3. Though I am very tired, I like to sing and dance every day.三、列出關鍵短語和句型be a member of , an actor, s

13、inging and dacing, feel very happy,答案范文A Possible Version：I m a Member of the Singing and Dancing ClubHello, everyone! Im very glad to be a member of the Singingand Dancing Club. I have been in this club for 2 years. Im anactor in the club. I like singing and dancing very much. I singand dance with

14、my classmates on weekends. Though I am verytired, I like to sing and dance every day. It makes me feel very happy.6、章題目和開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總次數(shù)）description (appearance, character)favorite teacherfriendship(an event between you; thestory of becoming friends)the best quality（kind; warm-hearted; strict; helpful

15、）My favorite teacherMy favorite teacheris_;._答案參考答案：My favorite teacher is Ms. Wang. She is a 36- year-old woman. But she is tall and has long straight hair. And she often wears black pants and a white shirt. She teaches us English. We all like listening to her. Her classes are very interesting and

16、creative. Because she has different ways of teaching. But she is very strict with us in everything. She is warm-hearted. We all know she is always ready to help others. When we are in trouble, she can try her best to help us. We all like her, and she likes us, too.7、隨著“創(chuàng)建全國文明城市”活哦的那個的開展。貴陽中學生英語報正在開展

17、校規(guī)校紀大討論。該報正在向各校學生征文。請你以“ Rules of MySchool ”為題，寫一篇征文，談談你對校規(guī)的了解和認識。要點如下：1. 你所知道的校規(guī)（列舉 3 條）；2. 你對這些校規(guī)的認識；3. 請你對改善校規(guī)題意見注意：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的校名及姓名；2. 必須寫在答題卡上指定的位置，詞數(shù)不少于80 詞。答案 Rules of My SchoolThere are lots of rules in my school. For example, we mustclean our classroom every morning. I think it抯 very neces

18、saryfor us to keep it clean. And it抯 good for our health. We haveto wear school uniform every day. I think the uniforms are ugly.In my opinion, we should be allowed to choose our own clothes.;.We can抰 talk in the classroom. As far as I am concerned,keeping quiet is good for studying.ng.8、俗話說：“國有國法，家

19、有家規(guī)。”為了使子女身心健康、順利成長，使家庭成員之間的關系更融洽、更和諧，每個家庭都會有這樣或那樣的家庭規(guī)矩。比如：必須按時回家，不準打電子游戲等。請你結合家庭的實際情況，根據(jù)下面的提示和要求，以“My Family Rules ”為題，寫一篇短文。提示： 1、家里有哪些家規(guī)； 2、對家規(guī)的感受； 3、對父母的建議。要求： 1、必須包括提示內(nèi)容，可以適當發(fā)揮；2、詞數(shù)：不少于 90 詞； 3、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名和人名。My Family Rules答案My parents are very strict with me, and they have made some basic rul

20、es which I must obey.Firstly, I must finish my homework in time. Secondly, I cannot play computer games, even in my free time or on weekends. Thirdly, I have to do some housework, such as making the bed and tidying my bedroom and so on. If I break one of them, I will be punished. But thanks to these

21、 rules, I can live a healthy and regular life.I think the second rule is unfair to me. I hope sometimes I could be allowed to play computer games for a while, it will make me relaxed.;.9、隨著社會的發(fā)展，網(wǎng)上購物成為一種新型的購物方式。請根據(jù)下表提示，談談網(wǎng)上購物的利與弊。要求： 1. 語句流暢，書寫規(guī)范。 2. 包含提示內(nèi)容，并可適當發(fā)揮。3. 詞數(shù)80 左右，首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。4. 文中不能出現(xiàn)人名

22、、地名等真實信息。AdvantagesDisadvantages方便（ convenient ）； 24 小時營看不見物品；容易受到欺騙（be業(yè)；cheated ）；不用排隊不能享受和朋友一起購物的樂趣Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now._答案 Shopping online is quite popular in our daily life now. It is a new way of shopping. Many things are offered and wait for your choosing. Con

23、venience is the most important advantage. Youcan buy anything as you like. You dont have to queue withother shoppers.Meanwhile, it is often open for 24 hours a day. However, thereare many disadvantages about shopping online. You can抰actually see the real products. So you may be cheated easily.Also,

24、many people will miss the best opportunity to get along;.well with their friends and share the joy of shopping.In conclusion, we should make proper use of the internetshopping.10、為配合我市舉行的“ 6·5 世界環(huán)境日”萬人騎自行車城區(qū)環(huán)游活動，請你根據(jù)提示要求寫一篇以“Lower Carbon （低碳） , Happier Life”為主題的英語短文。（以上背景內(nèi)容無需表述）提示：1、在 6 月 5 日自己

25、騎自行車上學，父母騎自行車上班；2、在家使用節(jié)能燈；減少洗澡淋浴時間；3、將用過的課本留給下屆學生；4、請你就此話題補充12 點個人做法。要求：1、不要逐詞翻譯；2、在文中不要提及真實的校名和姓名；3、詞數(shù) 80 左右；短文標題和首尾句已給出，不計入詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：節(jié)能燈energy-saving lamp，用過的 used, 下屆 lower gradesLower Carbon, Happier LifeIt s our duty to save environment._Lower carbon, happier life. Lets take actions.答案 Lower Carb

26、on, Happier LifeIt s our duty to save the environment. On June 5th, I will goto school by bike or on foot instead of taking the bus. And Iwill also ask my parents to ride bikes to work that day. Athome, we will use energy-saving lamps and spend less time whenwe are taking a shower. Don 抰 throw away

27、the used textbooks and leave them to the students of lower grades. At the same;.time, I will tell my parents to take bags when they go shopping.I will turn off the lights before leaving the room.Lower carbon, happier life. Let抯 take actions.11、為了解同學們的理想，我們在學校的l00 名學生中進行了一次調(diào)查采訪。采訪主要是圍繞“ What do you w

28、ant to be when you grow up?”和“ Why?”這兩個問題進行的，請你根據(jù)以下調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)寫份以“ the dream jobs ”為主題的報告并談談你自己的理想與原因。詞數(shù) 80 個左右。 ( 報告開頭語已給出不計人作文總詞數(shù)。 )The Dream JobsIn order to help us form good ideals ( 理想 ), we made a survey among 100 students in our school. Here are the results.;.答案 The Dream JobsIn order to help us for

29、m good ideals, we made a survey among100 students inour school last week. Here are the results.Most of thestudents want to he businessmen, because they want to be rich and buy what they need in the future. More students are dreaming of being doctors, because they are proud of saving the sick people

30、. And being good teachers is some students?dream. They think it 抯 a pleasure to make students learn more from them.m.Different students have different ideals. As for me, I want to be a policeman, and make our society much safer.12、愛是心中的太陽，融化你我身邊的冰雪。假設你是李明，你們學校的“ English Canden ”正在辦主題為“付出既是收獲”的征文活動，請

31、你聯(lián)系自己平時的愛心行為和感受寫一篇文章投稿。要求： 1、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名等相關信息。2 、 80 100 詞。標題和文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。答案Giving is ReceivingI m a student from Green Middle School. My name is LI Ming. I like helping others because I think it makes me very happy. I;.often help my classmates with their schoolwork. Sometimes Ihelp clean up c

32、ity parks. I go to the old people抯 home and dosome cleaning for them once a month. So I抦 pretty popularthere. I often visit the children抯 hospital to cheer the sickkids up. I read stories and sing songs for them. I am good with children. I also give money to charities to help people in trouble. I th

33、ink giving is receiving. Helping others is helping ourselves. Do you agree with me?me?13、同學們，運動使我們健康、快樂。今年廣西第十二屆運動會將在我市舉行，請你以“ Let s do sports”為題寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容提示： 1. 運動的重要性。2. 你喜歡什么運動，每天你做什么運動？3.作為一名中學生，為迎區(qū)運會你打算做些什么？要求： 1 文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實姓名和所在學校的名稱。，2 可自由發(fā)揮，詞數(shù) 70 左右。 3 短文開頭已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)。提示詞be good for, feel relax

34、ed, strong, favourite, the 12th Games ofGuangxi, clean, beautiful,friendly答案Let s Do SportsI think it is important for everyone to do sports. I likesports because they are good for our health. Doing sports makesus stronger and stronger.It is also good for ourstudy. After sports I usually feel relaxe

35、d and happy. My favourite sport is swimming. I often go swimming with my friends at the Weekends. I run in the morning. I plan basketball in the afternoon .The 12th Games of Guangxi is coming ,I am going to do sports every day. We will do some;.cleaning to make our city more beautiful .We will tell

36、everyone to be friendly14、給出 ,不計入總詞數(shù)。提示詞語： collect bottlesturn offdutymake a realdifferenceGood environment is important for everyone.答案Good environment is important for everyone. To help with it, I pick up the litter when I see it on the floor. Besides, I always collect bottles and I never forget t

37、o turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.As students, I think it 抯 our duty to protect the environment of our school. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reusebooks as long as possible. And it 抯 also a good idea to take part

38、in recycling programs.s.I hope everyone will care about the environment. I believe we can make our school more and more beautiful.解析試題分析：作文要圍繞要點展開寫作：具體做法，感受，建議。要符合題目要求，觀點正確，要點齊全。句式多樣，詞匯豐富。語言準確，語意連貫，表達清楚，具有邏輯性. 注意提示語 collectbottlesturn offdutymake a real difference的運用。注意作文的升華，提出環(huán)保的意義。【亮點說明】 To help w

39、ith it, I pick up the litter when I see iton the floor. Besides,I always collect bottles and I neverforget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.1.具體做法最好寫上三點，三點之間要有過渡。過渡不要頻繁使用first，second， third 。這篇文章處理的很好，to help with it, Besides,and。 2.注意從句的運用，比如時間狀語從句，定語從句等。;.15、寒假就要到了。很多學生打算在假期打工鍛煉自己

40、，可是有些家長不同意。他們認為打工既耽誤學習，又不太安全。請你以“ Should teenagers be allowed to have part-time jobs?"為題寫一篇 80 詞左右的短文，談談你的看法。 Should teenagers be allowed to have part-time jobs?答案 Should teenagers be allowed to have part-time jobs? Winter holiday is coming. Many students plan to have part-time jobs. But some p

41、arents disagree. They think it wastes thestudents time and it isnt safe as well.In my opinion, teenagers should be allowed to do some part-time jobs. Firstly, they can experience different lives and get more knowledge outside school. Meanwhile, after learning about the difficulty of making a living,

42、 they will cherish what they have now. What 抯 more, teenagers should have chances to make decisions by themselves.Of course, safety is the most important. Teenagers should learn to protect themselves when doing part-time jobs.解析16、書面表達（ 20 分）;.A. 在這些字母中藏著五個句子。你能找到它們并正確書寫嗎？注意大小寫及標點符號。（ 5 分 寫在答題卷上）【小題

43、 1】_【小題 2】_【小題 3】_【小題 4】_【小題 5】_答案【小題 1】I am a Chinese student.【小題 2】His name is Tony.【小題 3】What is your name?【小題 4】Nice to meet you.【小題 5】Goodbye, Miss Li.17、書面表達（本大題共5 分）近年來霧霾天氣（ haze）越來越嚴重。請就此話題寫一篇80 詞左右的短文。內(nèi)容提示：因為霧霾天氣，學生的戶外活動比以前少了；人們不得不戴面罩（ mask）出行 ,道路上也發(fā)生了更多交通事故；空氣污染問題嚴重，不利于健康；每個人都應該采取措施來保護環(huán)境。例

44、如 注意：短文須包括所有要點，不必逐句翻譯，要求語句通順、意思連貫；;.第 4 個要點的內(nèi)容須適當發(fā)揮；短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。These years the haze weather appears more and more often.答案 These years the haze weather appears more and more often. Because of the haze weather, students have fewer outdoor activities than before.People have to wear masks when they

45、 go out. Also, there are more traffic accidents on the road.Air pollution has become a serious problem. It is bad for our health. Everyone should take action to protect the environment. For example, we can change our life style. We can ride bikes or take buses when we go out. I plan to plant more trees in the future.18、書面表達（共15 分）請根據(jù)以下提示，以“ Tom's lifestyle”為題，寫一篇不少于50 詞的短文。提示： 1Tom今年 13 歲2他經(jīng)常吃漢堡、雞肉，但很少吃蔬菜和水果；3他兩頓飯之間還吃甜點，很少運動；4他打算每天跑步30 分鐘，每周游泳兩次；多吃蔬菜，多喝水，;.答案 Tom's lifestyleTom is 13 year old. He often eats hamburger