(完整版)AgreeorDisagree型

1、Increasingthepriceofpetrolisthebestwaytosolvegrowingtrafficandpopulationproblems（兩個(gè)問題要提出兩個(gè)解決方案）.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?Whatothermeasuresdoyouthinkmightbeeffective?（第一句寫背景）Thereisnodoubtthattrafficandpollutionfromvehicleshavebecomehugeproblems,bothincitiesandmotorways（高速公路）everywhere.（第二句點(diǎn)明

2、自己的觀點(diǎn)）Solvingtheseproblemsislikelytoneedmorethanasimpleriseinthepriceofpetrol.（第二段第一句肯定題目方案的有用之處，提高油價(jià)直接可以抑制私家車的使用數(shù)量）Whileitisundeniablethatprivatecaruseisoneofthemaincausesoftheincreaseintrafficandpollution,higherfuelcostsarelikelytolimitthenumberofdriversforlong（長久）.（第二句承上啟下，以“這個(gè)政策”開頭，同時(shí)提出這樣做的不可行性，

3、從而否定這一觀點(diǎn)）Asthispolicywouldalsoaffectthecostofpublictransport,itwouldbeveryunpopularwitheveryonewhoneedstotravelontheroads.（第三句轉(zhuǎn)折，引出下一段，點(diǎn)明有其他更可行的方法）Buttherearevariousothermeasures（措施）thatcouldbeimplemented（實(shí)施）thatwouldhaveahugeeffectontheseproblems.（第一句點(diǎn)明，先說解決污染的問題）1thinktotackletheproblemofpollution

4、,cleanerfuelsneedtobedeveloped.（第二句說明可行的原因，因?yàn)榧夹g(shù)已經(jīng)支持電動(dòng)汽車的生產(chǎn)）Thetechnologyisalreadyavailabletoproduceelectriccars（that說明電動(dòng)汽車的好處）thatwouldbebothquieterandcleanertouse.（既然好，就要廣泛采用，那么應(yīng)該采取什么具體措施呢）Persuadingmanufacturersandtravelerstoadoptthisnewtechnologywouldbeamoreeffectivestrategyforimprovingairquality

5、,especiallyincities.（第一句說明僅僅這樣不能解決堵車問題，從而引出第四段對(duì)堵車問題的解決方法）Howeve,trafficcongestion（堵車）willnotbesolvedby（對(duì)上一段的總結(jié)）changingthetypeofprivatevehiclepeoplecanuse.（既然不能解決，怎么做？）Todothis,weneedtoimprovethechoiceofpublictransportservicesavailabletotravelers.（第三句，舉例論證）Forexample,ifsufficientskytrainsandundergro

6、undtrainsystemswerebuiltandeffectivelymaintainedinourmajorcities,（因果論證，改寫）thentrafficontheroadswouldbedramaticallyreduced.（第四句繼續(xù)舉例）Long-distancetrainandcoachservicesshouldbemadeattractiveandaffordablealternativestodrivingyourowncarforlongjourneys.Inconclusion,Ithinkthatlong-termtrafficandpollutionre

7、ductionswoulddependoneducatingthe（公眾怎么做）publictousepublictransportmore,andongovernments（政府怎么做）usingpublicmoneytoconstructandrunefficientsystems.Itisimportantforchildrentolearnthedifferencebetweenrightandwrongatanearlyage.Punishmentisnecessarytohelpthemlearnthisdistinction.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordis

8、agreewiththisopinion?Whatsortofpunishmentshouldparentsandteachersbeallowedtousetoteachgoodbehaviortochildren?（第一句寫背景）Oneimportantstageinachild'sgrowthiscertainlythedevelopmentofaconscience,whichislinkedtotheabilitytotellrightfromwrong.（第二句thisskill開頭承上啟下）Thisskillcomeswithtimeandgoodparenting,（第

9、三句點(diǎn)明自己的觀點(diǎn)）andmyfirmconvictionisthatpunishmentdoesnothavemuchofaroletoplayinthis.（第四句同樣是點(diǎn)明觀點(diǎn)，反對(duì)題目的觀點(diǎn)）ThereforeIhavetodisagreealmostentirelywiththegivenstatement.（具體情況具體對(duì)待）Tosomeextentthequestiondependsontheageofthechild.（第二句展開支持句具體舉例）Topunishaveryyoungchildisbothwrongandfoolish,（舉例解釋）asaninfantwillno

10、tunderstandwhatishappeningorwhyheorsheisbeingpunished.（既然懲罰不合適，那么可以改用獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)制度）Oncetheageofreasonisreached（承上啟下）however,achildcanberewardedforgoodbehavioranddiscouragedfrombad.（thiskind指代“獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)制度”，與懲罰比較）Thiskindbutfirmapproachwillachievemorethanharshpunishments,whichmightentail（牽涉）manynegativeconsequencesun

11、intendedbytheparents.（那么老師和家長應(yīng)該怎么做）Tohelpachildlearnthedifferencebetweenrightandwrong,teachersandparentsshouldfirstlyprovidegoodrolemodelingintheirownbehavior.Afterthat,ifsanctions（懲罰）areneeded,thepunishmentshouldnotbeofaphysicalnature,（每個(gè)觀點(diǎn)都要解釋原因）asthatmerelysendsthemessagethatitisacceptableforlarg

12、erpeopletohitsmallerones一anoutcomewhichmaywellresultinthechildstartingtobullyothers.Norshouldthepunishmentbeinanywaycruel.（提出第二個(gè)可行方案）Rather,teachersandparentscanuseavarietyofmethodstodiscipline（管教）theiryoungcharges,suchasdetention（監(jiān)禁，放學(xué)后留校），withdrawalofprivilege,andtime-out.Makingthepunishmentfitthecrimeisausefulnotion（觀念），（舉例論證）whichwouldseechildrenbeingmadetopickupru