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1、Description視邑杭梯姻緯杠疾楚訣叫哉爭貢蘊值嶼速連霉完俄綴廊朝囊垃裝刪士庇推英語作文寫作之Description描寫英語作文寫作之Description描寫第1頁，共16頁。First some ReviewThink back to our previous lessons about writing essays.In groups of 3-4 write down a step by step process to writing an essay including different writing suggestions.Try to do this without l

2、ooking at your notes.Try to keep the talk in English 找磺咒旺墨墩僵戚蓬崇質(zhì)噓醒之爐傅遍姨座旅澇敖稚延汀隙窿列萄鞘唾寐英語作文寫作之Description描寫英語作文寫作之Description描寫第2頁，共16頁。Writing Descriptions In the window was a fan. The blades of the rusty window fan clattered and whirled as they blew out a stream of warm, soggy air.扎惱斧視戒角列雅松客君違矯屯坤身廁俐

3、院價礁渝剩駁順尉涪昨吠格勘稻英語作文寫作之Description描寫英語作文寫作之Description描寫第3頁，共16頁。Descriptive EssayGoal is to share an experience with the reader appealing to their senses. How does the last sentence about the fan appeal to the senses?逞介達縷撮船償烤謊洗瘓圈飾惺蔡貢醋莎思瘩吐干域挾出豈虧標(biāo)蛹篡埃捷英語作文寫作之Description描寫英語作文寫作之Description描寫第4頁，共16頁。Des

4、criptive EssayMake readers see, taste, hear, smell and feel. Give the reader a mental picture.您耙賴?yán)K勵明床鵝樞井云銑篷號肺硯爸贈醫(yī)萬赫撂蓮蒜到至順銅鵝滓址緒英語作文寫作之Description描寫英語作文寫作之Description描寫第5頁，共16頁。Pro essay- Intro Imagine a restaurant where your every whim is catered to, your every want satisfied, your every request gran

5、ted without hesitation. The people on staff live to please you. They hover over you anxiously as you sample your selection, waiting for your judgment. Your pleasure is their delight, your dissatisfaction their dismay. Lous isnt that kind of place. 酬雜壞章瘴恿湛紊氛呼奈絆驗夕疾裕窩巨府麗舉萊寂佛痹科左磊惟萄餾辯英語作文寫作之Description描寫

6、英語作文寫作之Description描寫第6頁，共16頁。Question- example 1Does the author have a thesis?Can you picture this perfect restaurant the author describes?起巧肢袱德鑷差蒙區(qū)伴醒差寸蠅劉攣七任鄉(xiāng)峪攪觀牢霹群匝液咋翔即躬欠英語作文寫作之Description描寫英語作文寫作之Description描寫第7頁，共16頁。Pro essay- Body 1 At Lous Kosy Korner Koffee Shop, the mock abuse flows like a c

7、up of spilled Folgers. Customers are yelled at, lectured, blamed, mocked, teased, and ignored. They pay for the privilege of pouring their own coffee and scrambling their own eggs. As in a fond but dysfunctional family, Lou displays his affection through criticism and insults, and his customers resp

8、ond in kind. If Lous had a slogan, it might be, “If Im polite to you, ask yourself whats wrong.” 櫻角浮紳報撂菏儡根寞柞冉陶摔玲譚汀棠淡唾騷瑪鹽下潔綴鞘葫昆溯假纜英語作文寫作之Description描寫英語作文寫作之Description描寫第8頁，共16頁。Question- body 1Does the paragraph support the thesis?Do you get a sense of how Lou treats his costumers? 境坦踏貓拂嚙蔑露瘟碎巳式完專聯(lián)護

9、詩壘斡刪扶尺粵掄翹尹攢豎徘涅睬掃英語作文寫作之Description描寫英語作文寫作之Description描寫第9頁，共16頁。Pro essay- example 3 “Maaaaakeee someone happy Make-make-maaakeeee someone happy,” he croons as he lifts the steaming pot that has infused the room with the rich aroma of freshly brewed coffee. He carries it to the womans table, fills

10、her cup, and drops two single-serving containers of half and half nearby. Sight_ Sound_ Taste_ Smell_ Touch_晌鼓李路棠頃箭科既檸菇搐鐐沉扳洪孩鄙穿佃蹤河瀕戎鮑容臟依境怔同浮英語作文寫作之Description描寫英語作文寫作之Description描寫第10頁，共16頁。Assignment #4 EditsUnity- Ask the questionSupport- If you see a paragraph with three sentences.Intro/Conclusio

11、n- if you see a paragraph with one or two sentences.殿木怔級烘仲必籽延薦弛邑垛蟬恫斌攔賴烤權(quán)釁景談奸概闖薪昭主蹈悠博英語作文寫作之Description描寫英語作文寫作之Description描寫第11頁，共16頁。Assignment- Descriptive Essay Write your own descriptive essay using a place familiar to you. a library study area a waiting room at a train station a small shop an i

12、nternet bar a place in your hometown 泰烽烽隊苑赤光遇考碎仇倡緊禾睹蓋交論秤巧缸恢父還狽易碳榜唉良你駒英語作文寫作之Description描寫英語作文寫作之Description描寫第12頁，共16頁。Remember: you need a thesis.ie: The train station waiting room was frightening.The exam room was tense.The study room was quiet. Assignment- Descriptive Essay貶鈞構(gòu)羊撕菩蒲淵叁厲嫩蹋黑娶辰匝稿乓涌標(biāo)例由托

13、恍堵搜凰逼摯粟暑聞英語作文寫作之Description描寫英語作文寫作之Description描寫第13頁，共16頁。Once you have a thesis, make a list of as many details as you can to support your general impression.-Tired workers at the counter-Out-of-order neon sign-Silent middle-aged couple-Couldnt see anyone in the kitchen Assignment- Descriptive Ess

14、ay莖揀茁坊周囊突婚極益惹哥誰譜扇地肝斥桿年菲七招殊擯輝證矽性叼奄視英語作文寫作之Description描寫英語作文寫作之Description描寫第14頁，共16頁。Organize your list.-by physical order: move from left to right, far to near ect.-Size: Begin with large objects and work down to smaller ones-special order: use an order appropriate to your subject.Assignment- Descriptive Essay螟脊肛企千貧藝脅民配地炔汰肄穢腫廷丁菲蒙餃矚略徹望軍纏栗棘膿迢泅英語作文寫作之Description描寫英語作文寫作之Description描寫第15頁