9.10-9.13作文擊破班真題第1天-課件

1、GRE作文擊破班Day 1: Argumentyanyu日程安排Argument (今天晚上)Ie (周六上午)沖刺 (周日上午)：Argument今日”類instruction“考慮Argument四種instruction現(xiàn)場講解學(xué)生作文現(xiàn)場寫作“考慮”類instructionWrite a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the arg

2、ument.evidence類instruction出現(xiàn)頻率30% ( 52/174)從字面上來理解：Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.還需要什么特定來評價（作者的）論證從字面上來理解：Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidenc

3、e is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.解釋（這些）如何增強(qiáng)或削弱論證幾個值得思考1. 作者的論證和結(jié)論一定錯誤嗎？幾個值得思考2. 新只能削弱作者的論證嗎？幾個值得思考3.的目的是增強(qiáng)作者論證嗎？對于這類instruction而言作者的結(jié)論/建議需要判斷，但暫時無法判斷對于這類instruction而言作者的結(jié)論/建議需要判斷，但暫時無法判斷因為作者的論證過程中存在問題，論證得不好對于這類instruction而言作者的結(jié)

4、論/建議需要判斷，但暫時無法判斷因為作者的論證過程中存在問題，論證得不好但是，如果有了新，作者的結(jié)論就可以判斷了對于這類instruction而言作者的結(jié)論/建議需要判斷，但暫時無法判斷因為作者的論證過程中存在問題，論證得不好但是，如果有了新，作者的結(jié)論就可以判斷了也許對，也許錯得看具體可能是什么如何確定所需的？尋找作者論證過程中存在如何確定所需的？尋找作者論證過程中存在考慮什么樣的信息能夠解決這個問題（注意是解決，不是否定?。┤绾未_定所需的？尋找作者論證過程中存在考慮什么樣的信息能夠解決這個問題這個信息的載體就是練習(xí)：評價以下sement還需要哪些的幫助？高速公路的安全性，P市去年把所有高速

5、公路的限為了速由55英里/小時降到了45英里/小時。但是這樣的努力嘗試失敗了：事故發(fā)生的數(shù)量沒有下降。練習(xí)：評價以下sement還需要哪些的幫助？Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive patternhave previously been found onlyhe immediate vicinity of theprehistoric village of Palea and therefore were beved to havebeen made only by the Palean people. Recentl

6、y, however, archaeologists discovered such a Palean basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found.Thus it follows uniquely Palean.t the s

7、o-called Palean baskets were not：Argument今日”類instruction“考慮Argument四種instruction現(xiàn)場講解學(xué)生作文現(xiàn)場寫作回到這個Argument本身作者論證有問題，為什么？Write a response in which you examine thesed and/or unsed amptions of theargument. Be sure to explain how the argumentdepends on these amptions and what theimplications are for the a

8、rgument if theamptions prove unwarranted.找出下文中的amption(s)：In an effort to improve our employees productivity, we shouldimplemen their worksectronic monitoring of employeesernet use fromions. Employees who use theernet from theirworksions need to be identified and punished if we are toreduce the numb

9、er of work hours spent onal orrecreational activities, such as shop installing software to detect employeesor playing games. By ernet use on companycomputers, we can prevent employees from wasting time, foster abetter work ethic at Climpson, and improve our overall profits.回到這個Argument本身作者沒證明假設(shè)，？Wri

10、te a response in which you discuss one ormore alternative explanationst could rival theproed explanation and explain how yourexplanation(s) can plausibly account for the factspresentedhe argument.找出下文的alternativeexplanation(s)：In an effort to bring new jobs to Dillton and stimulate the citys flaggin

11、g economy, Dilltons city council voted last year to lower the citys corporate tax rate by 15 percent; at the same time, the city began offering generous relocation grants to any companyt would move to Dillton. Since these changes wento effect,twfactories have opened in Dillton. Although the twofacto

12、ries employ moren 1,000 people, the unemployment ratein Dillton remains unchanged. The only clear explanation for thisist the new factories are staffed with out-of-town workersrathern Dillton residents.但是，就算作者沒有給出嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)證明作者的結(jié)論一定錯嗎？但是，就算作者沒有給出嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)證明作者的結(jié)論一定錯嗎？或者能判斷哪種解釋正確嗎？進(jìn)一步思考：如何判斷哪種解釋正確？如何判斷作者結(jié)論是否正確？Write

13、 a response in which you discuss whatspecific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.找出下文中需要的evidence(沒有s！)：Twenty years ago, Dr. Field, a noted anthropologist, visited the islandof Tertia and concluded from his observationst

14、childrenertiawere reared by an entire village rathern by their own biologicalparents. However, my recenterviews with children livinghegroup of islandst includes Tertia showt these children spendmu adultsore time talking about their biological parentsn about otherhe village. This research of mine pro

15、vest Dr. Fieldsabout Tertian village culture is invalid and thust theobservation-centered approach to studying cultures is invalid as well.Theerview-centered methodt my team of graduate students iscurrently usingertia will establish a muore accurateunderstanding of child-rearing traditions there and

16、 in other islandcultures.是不是少了一種instruction？Write a response in which you discuss what questions would needto be answered in order to decide whether themendationand the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help toevaluate themendat

17、ion.找出下文中需要考慮的questions：For many years the city of Grandview has provided annual funding for the Grandview Symphony. Last year, however, private contributions to the symphony increased by 200 percentand attendance at the symphonys concerts-he-park seriesdoubled. The symphony has also announced an in

18、creaseicketprifor next year. Given such developments, some citycommisers arguet the symphony can now be fully self-supporting, and theymendt funding for the symphonybe eliminated from next years budget.：Argument今日”類instruction“考慮Argument四種instruction現(xiàn)場講解學(xué)生作文現(xiàn)場寫作本次課程布置的文章Ten years ago our company had twoffice buildings constructedas regional headquarters for two regions. The bui