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1、書面表達(dá)點(diǎn)撥八年級(jí)上一、體育與健康（一） 健康是幸福的基石。尤其是青少年的健康，更加受到家庭、學(xué)校乃至全社會(huì)的關(guān)注。假如你是你們學(xué)校的健康達(dá)人，應(yīng)校英語俱樂部的邀請(qǐng)，你將給全體成員做一個(gè)“The Importance and Secrets of Keeping Healthy”的報(bào)告。請(qǐng)參考下面的提示，完成報(bào)告。 要求：1. 80詞左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 2. 所給提示僅供參考，需適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 3. 文中不得使用真實(shí)的校名與姓名。 【思路點(diǎn)撥】 一、審題。 仔細(xì)審題，明確寫作要求，確定文章的體裁、時(shí)態(tài)和格式。本篇書面表達(dá)是一篇介紹健康重要性的報(bào)告。文章總體應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。

2、二、注意寫作要點(diǎn)，梳理寫作框架。 本篇書面表達(dá)是給出提示要點(diǎn)的作文，所給提示的內(nèi)容一定要寫全面，按照提示詞的思路進(jìn)行寫作。 三、連句成篇，注意語言的連貫和過渡。 在寫作過程中，考生應(yīng)適當(dāng)運(yùn)用連詞，使文章過渡自然。最后檢查作文時(shí)，還要注意單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、字母大小寫等細(xì)節(jié)問題。 【范文欣賞】Dear friends, Its a great honor to speak here. My topic is “The Importance and Secrets of Keeping Healthy”. Im so glad you care about health like me. Good

3、 health may bring us a long happy life, good work and even better grades. Keeping healthy is really important. As for the secrets of keeping healthy, I think different people have different answers. In my opinion, having a healthy lifestyle is the most important. First, its helpful to have enough sl

4、eep and a balanced diet. Breakfast is the top meal of the day, so we cant miss it. At the same time, find a physical activity you enjoy and keep on doing it. I have kept playing ping pong for seven years and I really enjoy doing that. Also, everyone should develop a sense of humor and always be a ha

5、ppy person. I hope you look after your health from now on and live a happy and healthy life forever! Thanks for listening!（二） 近年，由教育部、國家體育總局、共青團(tuán)中央聯(lián)合發(fā)起了“全國億萬青少年學(xué)生陽光體育運(yùn)動(dòng)”。你在學(xué)校參加了此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你配合此項(xiàng)活動(dòng)以“Lets Do Sports”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，要求包括以下要點(diǎn)： （1）運(yùn)動(dòng)帶給你的益處； （2）最喜歡的體育項(xiàng)目及原因； （3）號(hào)召大家一起來運(yùn)動(dòng)，強(qiáng)身健體。 【思路點(diǎn)撥】 本篇文段表達(dá)是以“Lets

6、Do Sports”為題，寫與體育運(yùn)動(dòng)相關(guān)的內(nèi)容。首先寫體育運(yùn)動(dòng)給自己帶來的好處；然后寫自己最喜歡的體育運(yùn)動(dòng)，并給出合理的理由；最后發(fā)出號(hào)召，號(hào)召大家一起來運(yùn)動(dòng)，強(qiáng)身健體。【范文欣賞】Lets Do Sports I think doing sports is necessary. Sports can help us relax and concentrate on our studies better. Sports can make us grow well. Sports can bring us friends. Which sport do you like? Running is

7、 my favorite. At first, I went running to keep my body fit. Now, I find it fun and free. You can run anytime you feel like it. All you need is a pair of running shoes. You can see all kinds of scenes while running and stop at those that attract you to appreciate them. Havent you got a favorite sport

8、? Stop hesitating! Come and run with me!二，敘事（記敘文）的寫作 一、敘事記敘文以記述事件、描寫見聞為主要寫作方式。寫敘事記敘文一般是開門見山，直接交代時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件等，然后詳細(xì)敘述事情發(fā)展的原因、過程和結(jié)果等。一個(gè)事件的組成包括許多細(xì)節(jié)，要選擇與作者寫作意圖相關(guān)的主要材料。寫敘事記敘文要注意以下幾點(diǎn)： 1. 仔細(xì)審題，主題要明確。文中所有內(nèi)容都要圍繞主題展開。 2. 勿漏六要素。一篇記敘文通常要包含六要素，即when？該事發(fā)生的時(shí)間；where?該事發(fā)生的地點(diǎn)；who?人物角色是誰；what？發(fā)生的是什么事；why?該事發(fā)生的原因；以及how?

9、事件的結(jié)果是如何造成的。 3.合理運(yùn)用“順敘”、“倒敘”和“插敘”的方法，但初學(xué)者最好采用“順敘”的方法。 4.注意人稱、數(shù)以及時(shí)態(tài)的一致性和連貫性。 二、范文欣賞 假設(shè)你是李華，上周末你參加了一次郊游(outing)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的提示信息寫一篇題為“A Pleasant Outing”的英語短文，參加某英文報(bào)紙的征文比賽。時(shí)間上周末參加者你和地點(diǎn)北山公園(the North Hill Park)活動(dòng)騎自行車、爬山、野餐、做游戲感受 要求： （1）不要逐條翻譯表格中的信息，可適當(dāng)增減內(nèi)容； （2）短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、人名和校名； （3）詞數(shù): 80110。 參考詞匯：go for

10、an outing; climb the hill; have a picnic 【思路點(diǎn)撥】 1. 郊游的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物； 2. 在the North Hill Park的活動(dòng)內(nèi)容； 3.對(duì)郊游活動(dòng)的感受。A Pleasant Outing Last weekend, I went for an outing with my classmates. At 7:30 in the morning, we met at our school gate. We went to the North Hill Park by bike. On the way, we were so excited

11、that we sang loudly. When we arrived there, we started to climb the hill at once. We had a picnic on the top of the hill. After that, we walked down the path and had a rest. Later, some girls danced under the trees and some boys played games happily. We didnt t go back until 4:00 p.m. .We were tired

12、 but very happy. What a pleasant outing it was!三、家庭生活 今天是父親節(jié)。假定你是李華，請(qǐng)給你的美國筆友John寫一封電子郵件，談?wù)勀銓⑷绾闻c父親一起度過這個(gè)特別的日子。要點(diǎn)如下： 表述你與父親間的情感； 為父親制作一張卡片； 幫助父親做點(diǎn)兒事； 陪父親散步等。注意：1. 詞數(shù)80100； 2. 請(qǐng)不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 3. 郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 【思路點(diǎn)撥】 步驟一：審題。 仔細(xì)審題，注意題目的具體要求，明確寫作要求，確立文章的體裁和要用的時(shí)態(tài)和格式。本篇書面表達(dá)要求考生闡述在父親節(jié)時(shí)，如何與父親度過這個(gè)特別的日子，

13、主要包括表達(dá)情感，為父親制作卡片，幫助父親做點(diǎn)兒事情，陪父親外出活動(dòng)等要點(diǎn)。作文總體應(yīng)以一般將來時(shí)為主。 步驟二：注意寫作要點(diǎn)，理出寫作框架。 本篇書面表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給了，考生應(yīng)將所提示的內(nèi)容寫全面，按照提示的思路進(jìn)行寫作。 步驟三：連句成篇，注意語言的連貫和過渡。 在寫作過程中如果適當(dāng)運(yùn)用連詞，會(huì)使文章過渡自然。最后，還需檢查單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、大小寫等細(xì)節(jié)問題。【范文欣賞】Dear John, Its Fathers Day today. Its a special day, isnt it? I think we should do something to show our love

14、for our fathers on this special day. My father and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, he is always there, ready to help me. Today I will make a beautiful card for him, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help him wash the car this afternoon and cook his favorite foo

15、d in the evening. Besides, Ill take a walk with him after dinner and then play chess with him, for he likes it very much. Im sure hell be very happy. Whats your plan for Fathers Day? Im looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua四，日記的寫作 一、英文日記與漢語日記的結(jié)構(gòu)相似，主要由兩部分組成，即書端與正文，日記的形式多樣，多以記敘文或簡單的議論文為體裁

16、。寫日記要注意以下幾點(diǎn)： 1.日記的第一行要寫清日期、星期和天氣狀況。日期和星期寫在正文的左上角，天氣狀況寫在正文右上角。 2.日記常用第一人稱寫。日記是對(duì)生活的記錄，是把自己一天中最有意義的事情記錄下來所形成的書面材料。 3.英文日記的時(shí)態(tài)。日記中所記述的事情通常發(fā)生在過去，常用一般過去時(shí)；但當(dāng)記述天氣、描寫景物或展望未來時(shí)，也可以用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)或一般將來時(shí)。 4.日記的正文可以根據(jù)實(shí)際情況采用各種題材，如敘事、描述、說明、議論或抒情等。 5.日記切忌寫成流水賬。二、范文欣賞。 假設(shè)你是初三畢業(yè)生，考上了理想的學(xué)校。今天是開學(xué)第一天，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所列的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，用英語寫一篇日記，寫下這一天的感

17、受。注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右； 2.日記的開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)； 3.日記須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮， 使其連貫、通順； 4.日記中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。去校前興奮(原因自擬） 擔(dān)憂(原因自擬）到校后發(fā)現(xiàn)老師、同學(xué)友好 忘了緊張、感覺自在離校時(shí)不會(huì)再擔(dān)心 相信會(huì)快樂 Monday,Sept.3rd Fine Today was the first day of my new life. I looked at my new books and checked everything for the new school year, I was excited

18、 as well as worried. I was excited because I am a student of senior middle school now. I was worried because I didnt quite know about the teachers, students in this school. I was afraid that I couldnt fit in well. When I got to school, I found everyone was really sweet to me. The teachers were kind

19、and ready to help us. I soon forgot my nervousness. I felt at home. At the end of today, I felt no more fear and I believe I will have lots of fun at this new school.五，書信的寫作一、書信具有實(shí)用性強(qiáng)、使用廣泛等特點(diǎn)，是我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪袘?yīng)用最為廣泛的一種文體，中考對(duì)書信寫作的整體要求是：格式正確，內(nèi)容簡明扼要，條理清楚，表意明確，禮貌適度。英文書信一般由以下幾部分組成： 1.信頭：寫信人地址和日期，有時(shí)可省去寫信人地址，但一般要寫日

20、期，要寫在信的右上角。 2.稱呼：指對(duì)收信人的稱呼，寫在左上角，頂格寫；稱呼后面的標(biāo)點(diǎn)一般接逗號(hào)。常用Dear，后一般接名字；Mr.,Mrs.,Miss后用姓或姓與名。 3.正文：是信件的主體部分寫在稱呼的下一行，一般由左邊第三個(gè)或第五個(gè)字母處開始寫起。正文第一段也可頂格寫，但以后各段應(yīng)空兩格。 4.結(jié)尾：指正文下面的結(jié)尾客套話，位置應(yīng)低于正文一行或兩行，一般從信紙的中間稍右寫起，第一個(gè)字母大寫，末尾用逗號(hào)。常用Yours sincerely, Yours, Sincerely yours 等。 5.簽名：寫在結(jié)尾語的下面一行。二、常用句型： 1.Thank you for your lett

21、er.謝謝你的來信。 2.I was glad/happy to receive your letter.很高興收到你的信。 3.How is everything going?一切安好？ 4.How are you these days?/How are you getting on these days?近來如何？ 5.Im writing to you to.我給你寫信是為了 6.Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.盼望你盡快回信。 7.Please send my love to.請(qǐng)代我向問好。三、范文欣賞。 假如你是簡，你的好友瑪麗

22、在微博上說最近很累很不開心，而且很擔(dān)心即將到來的期末考試，請(qǐng)你在瑪麗的微博中回復(fù)，給她一些建議，使她振作起來。（注意：文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校等相關(guān)信息）提示： 1.分析瑪麗不開心的原因； 2.給她一些建議使她減少壓力； 3.給她美好的祝福?！舅悸伏c(diǎn)撥】 這是一封書信的寫作，應(yīng)注意書信的格式。 信件內(nèi)容應(yīng)針對(duì)提示來寫，不可隨意發(fā)揮。 信中表提議的句子應(yīng)語氣委婉。Dear Mary, Im sorry to know that you arent happy these days. Maybe it is caused by the coming final exam. I know that

23、 the exam is very important to you. But it is also important to learn to relax, so that you wont feel so tired. Here are some suggestions, and I hope they can help. First, you can spend some time taking part in playing table tennis. After all, having a good body is the most important. Second, you ca

24、n often talk with your parents and teachers. They will be glad to listen to you and give you some useful advice. Of course, music can make you feel relaxed. In a word, I hope you can pass the final exam from the bottom of my heart, and you can become happy in your life. Yours, Jane 六，寫作典例之學(xué)校生活（一） 假如

25、你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給你的英國筆友Michael寫一封信，介紹你們的校園活動(dòng)，并說說你對(duì)校園活動(dòng)的看法。 注意： （1）內(nèi)容應(yīng)至少包含兩項(xiàng)校園活動(dòng)，要求意思、語句連貫； （2）詞數(shù)80100，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； （3）注意書信格式，信中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名?！痉段男蕾p】June 13th,2011Dear Michael, Im glad to tell you something about our colorful school life. We usually have our activities from 4:30 to 6:00 in the afternoon.

26、We have different kinds of activities. Some of us are interested in sports. They play football and basketball. Every term there is a basketball match between students and teachers in our school. We also have some clubs, such as drawing club, dancing club and singing club. But computer is the most po

27、pular in our school now. We have a computer room in our school. Therere more than 100 computers in it. Every afternoon, some students go and play computer games. On Thursday afternoon we go to English corner. We like talking in English there. We like English corner very much. Because we practice lots of oral Eng