英語2008-2011年作文例文分析

1、20082011年作文例文分析作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)2分 條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。5分 基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語言錯(cuò)誤。8分 基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫；語言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。11分 切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯(cuò)誤。14分 切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，基本上無語言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。字?jǐn)?shù)不足應(yīng)酌情扣分：2007年英語作文范文 When it comes to the topic of life and time , l strongly believe that

2、no one would deny that life is too short and time is too precious .As the old Chinese saying goes, it was rate for one to live to 70. And thanks to present better medical care and living .standard ,the average age that people can live has been older ,but still not over 70 in most areas .So life may

3、not be as long as we have expected ,therefore, time is limited for all of us . While our school days ,the best time in our life ,is even shorter .We should spend only 12 years to finish our primary and middle school .lf we are lucky enough ,we can spend another 4 or 5 years in a university .These ye

4、ars ,for many of us ,is only once in our lives ,which accounts for a small part of our whole life .Short as the school days is ,it is just these years that decide what we are and what we going to be . As is known by the proverb , time is a playful thing ,and it slips quickly and drinks the day like

5、a bowl of milk. It means time goes so easily lf we dont make good use of it .It is urgent that we make the most of our school days.2008年作文范文 My favorite sport is basketball. It is a team sport usually involving two teams with five players each. It is also commonly played three-on-three, two-on-two,

6、or one-on-one. Since it is a team sport, the two key factors of winning are concentration and cooperation. Basketball is good exercise providing me with a variety of benefits. Basketball is an excellent way to burn calories, which helps me keep fit and healthy. Basketball, as a team sport, also trai

7、ns me to cooperate with others. In addition, playing basketball enables me to relieve stress and boost energy levels. On the whole, basketball is fun and exciting to play. Every Sunday I will play basketball with my friends. And we always enjoy the game.2009 With so many new inventions in modern soc

8、iety，people can find information via many different waysPeople can make use of older ways like radio，television and telephoneYoung people prefer newer and faster means such as cell phone and internetAmong these ways，internet is my favorite Internet is very convenientOn internet，people can find infor

9、mation of different kinds from all sources1 can switch from political news to a jobhunting page just by one click，which saves a lot of timeI can even talk to my parents and friends on the same computerSome people may say that there is too much false information on the internet，which can bring bad in

10、fluence to youFor me，this is not a problemI always save some popular，reliable and respectable websites and make good use of them and care little about the attached advertisementSmall kids can also learn a lot of things from the internet if their parents tell them how to tell good from bad2010年作文范文St

11、udy Strategies at College Good morning everyoneMy name is Li MingI am glad to stand here to give a speech about my study strategies at colleges to all freshmenI am the chairman of the Student Union Firstly1ets e all freshmen hereWhen I entered our college，1 was also a little puzzled about the study

12、strategies because they are quite different from that of our high school ThereforeI think it is necessary to introduce itIn college，we need to form a good habit of study，and adopt different methods to study different subjectsBesides，it is equally important to arrange our time wellas there are so man

13、y activities waiting us to take part inBut what we should remember is that obtaining knowledge is our main job in collegeMeanwhile，we also need to get enough rest and learn to build relationship with others Thenduring the study period，we also have to combine studying by ourselves with cooperation wi

14、th otherswhich is important for college students At lastI send my best wishes to you and wish you a colorful and splendid college lifeAnd I also help you can make great progress in your study.Thats a11Thank you2011 How to relieve my pressure Todays college students face many pressures, mainly from p

15、arents expectation, study, economy, employment and all kinds of competition. For me, my pressure is to study well and gain the permission from others, then find a good job and make my parents to live a better life. I dont want to think too much, what I should do is as follows; First, set a clear aim of a struggle. The aim can give me motivation, and make me e active. Second, have the opinion to study hard and master the major skills well and strengthen my ability in all sides. Third, to make as more friends as possible, which will help ea