高考英語讀后續(xù)寫之環(huán)境描寫 修辭手法講義

新高考讀后續(xù)寫之環(huán)境描寫&修辭手法一、環(huán)境描寫烘托情感氣用溫暖陽光表現(xiàn)01.WhenIwasbathedinthesunlight,itfeltliketheamber-likesunshinewaskissingeveryinchofmyskin.當(dāng)我沐浴在陽光下，那感覺就像是琥珀色的陽光親吻著我每一寸肌膚。02.WhenIdrewthecurtainsback,thesunlightfloodedin.當(dāng)我拉開窗簾，陽光傾瀉而入。用藍(lán)天白云表現(xiàn)01.Theclearblueskywasdottedwithfluttering（飄舞;

振翅）larks.天氣晴朗，碧空里星星點(diǎn)點(diǎn)的云雀在翩翩飛舞。

bedottedwith意為“星星般點(diǎn)綴著…”.abutterflyflutteringitswings.…一只拍動(dòng)著翅膀的蝴蝶。Thepaperflutteredtothefloor.

紙飄落到地板上。02.Whitecloudsflowintheblueskylikequietfishswimminginbroadocean.朵朵白云飄在藍(lán)天中，就像安靜的魚兒在廣闊的海洋中暢游。

用徐徐微風(fēng)表現(xiàn)01.Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesoftheweepingwillowlikeacurtain.一陣風(fēng)吹，吹起了彎柳的低垂枝條，就像那卷起的窗簾。02.Therearemanykindsofflowersbloominginthecornerofthepark,eveninautumn.Ismellthefreshscentwithcoolbreeze.Howsweet!即使在秋日里，公園里都開滿了各式各樣的鮮花，香氣伴著微風(fēng)四處彌漫。多么香甜?。?/p>

03.ItwasSaturdaymorning,andallthesummerworldwasbrightandfresh,andfilledwithlife.

Therewasasongineveryheart.

Therewascheerineveryface

and

aspringineverystep.

Theairwasfilledwiththepleasantsmellofflowers.夏日周六的早晨，陽光明媚，空氣新鮮，處處洋溢著生機(jī)。每個(gè)人的心中都蕩漾著一首歌。每個(gè)人臉上都洋溢著歡樂，每個(gè)人都邁著跳躍的步伐?？諝饫飶浡曳嫉幕ㄏ?。

04.Colorfulflowerswerebloomingbeneaththebluesky,andthesunshinereflectedonthelake,makingitshinelikediamonds.ButSusanjustcouldn'tfocusherattentiononthebreathtakingbeauty.蔚藍(lán)色的天空下，百花盛開，陽光灑在湖面上如同鋪上了一顆顆閃耀的鉆石。但是蘇珊并沒有被這令人窒息的美景所吸引。用風(fēng)雨天氣來表現(xiàn)1.Thefrostyairblewin,

cuttinglikeknife.寒冷的空氣吹進(jìn)來，如同刀割般的感覺。2.Therewasa

deathlystillness

inthehouse.房子里一片死寂。3.Theraincamepouringdown,thestreamsrose,andthewindsblewandbeatagainstthehouse.雨傾盆而下，洪流猛漲，狂風(fēng)在肆意地沖擊著房屋。4.Onthatdarkandstormynight,thewaveswerecrashingandthewindswerehowling.在那個(gè)狂風(fēng)暴雨的夜晚，海浪在肆意地拍打著，勁風(fēng)在憤怒地咆哮著。

5.Theboyswerefrightenedasthewindblewseveraltreesontheirsideandthelightcontinuedtocomeandgointhesky.

風(fēng)猛刮著身側(cè)的樹木，閃電在空中持續(xù)亂舞，孩子們嚇壞了。

Thenightwasveryquiet,soeventheslightestsoundmadetheboysjumpfromfear.夜晚非常安靜，所以即使是最輕微的聲音也使孩子們驚得跳起。二、修辭手法修辭手法

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明喻(simile)

like1.Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.（情感描寫）她臉上的笑容像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光。2.IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.（情感描寫）我感覺自己像漂浮在悲傷的海洋中。3.Thesceneryalongthejourneyisjustlikeabreath-takinglandscapepainting.(景物描寫)沿路的風(fēng)景就像一幅美麗的山水畫卷。4.Theicywindstartedhowling,cuttingmyfacelikeasharpknife.(景物描寫)寒風(fēng)開始咆哮，像鋒利的小刀一樣刺痛了我的臉。5.Clustersofstarsdecoratedthevastskylikesparklingjewels.(景物描寫)繁星像閃閃發(fā)光的珠寶一樣裝飾了浩瀚的天空。as...as1.Thesmileonherfacewasasvibrantasthesunonasummerday.（情感描寫）她臉上的笑容和夏天的太陽一樣充滿活力。2.Ireachedouttotouchherface,whichwasascoldastheice.(人物描寫)我伸手去摸她的臉，發(fā)現(xiàn)她的臉像冰一樣冰冷。更多搭配

asbusyasabee忙忙碌碌

ashungryasawolf饑腸轆轆

asproudasapeacock傲如孔雀

aseasyasABC極其容易

asbraveasalion勇猛如獅

asprettyasapicture美如畫asif1.MrsSatherlookedatmyeyesasif(shewere)seeingmyinnerselflockedawayinside.Sather老師看著我的眼睛，仿佛看到了我靈魂深處封閉的自我。2.Herhairgrewgreyerandgreyer,asif(itwere)coveredwithsnowandfrost.（肖像描寫）他的頭發(fā)越來越白了，簡直像蓋了一頭皚皚的霜雪。3.Shefeltasifherhearthadbeenrippedfromherbody.（情感描寫）她感覺自己心好像從她的身體里被撕開了。(2)

暗喻(metaphor)

be1.Herhairwasaflowinggoldenriverstreamingdownhershoulders.（肖像描寫）她的頭發(fā)像是一條流淌在她肩上的金色河流。2.Thebeautifulparkwasascentedcarpetofcolor.(景物描寫)美麗的公園就是一個(gè)芬芳的彩色地毯。3.Lifeisanunexploredriverfulloftwistsandturns.(哲理)生活就像一條未被涉足的河流，有各種曲折。(3)

擬人(personification)

把自然現(xiàn)象當(dāng)作人來描寫1.Thewindstoodupandgaveashout.

大風(fēng)凜冽，發(fā)出怒吼。2.Thebreezegentlykissedhercheeks.

微風(fēng)輕柔地親吻著她的臉龐。3.Thefeatherysnowflakesdancedinthenightair,makingabeautifulpicture.鵝毛般的雪花在空中飛舞，像一幅美麗的圖畫。4.Themistswallowedhimup.薄霧把他包圍起來。5.Theicywindstartedhowling,stingingmyface.寒風(fēng)開始咆哮，刺痛了我的臉。6.Starswinkedatmeinadarkeningsky.夜空中星星向我眨眼睛。7.Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.頃刻間，黑暗統(tǒng)治了森林。8.我拾起頭，望見兩只紅色的風(fēng)箏，帶著長長的藍(lán)色尾巴，在天空中冉冉升起。它們舞動(dòng)著，飛越公園西邊的樹林.ThenIglancedupandsawapairofredkiteswithlongbluetails,soaringinthesky.Theydancedhighabovethetreesonthewestendofthepark.把含蓄抽象的概念當(dāng)作人來描寫1.Fearseized/swallowedhim.恐懼把他吞噬了。2.Angerchokedmywords.我氣得說不出話來。3.Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.我突然想到一個(gè)好主意。4.Smiletookholdofhim.他笑容滿面。5.Anxietytornhimintopieces.她焦慮不安，十分崩潰。6.Courage/Confidencedesertedhim.他沒信心了。7.Excitementdeprivedmeofallpowerofspeech.我興奮的啥也說不出來了。把動(dòng)物當(dāng)作人來描寫1.Inthedeadofnight,thecricketsplayedonthe