2023屆高考英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)突破短文改錯(cuò)一診專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練

高三一輪復(fù)習(xí)短文改錯(cuò)一診專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練1.真題多維細(xì)目表主題考點(diǎn)卷名體裁主題語(yǔ)境主題語(yǔ)境內(nèi)容動(dòng)詞名詞、數(shù)詞連詞形容詞副詞代詞冠詞介詞2022全國(guó)乙說(shuō)明文人與自我騎車(chē)的好處411102012021說(shuō)明文人與自我做家務(wù)的好處511201002020課標(biāo)全國(guó)I記敘文人與自我家庭生活412101102019記敘文人與自我學(xué)校生活121131102018記敘文人與社會(huì)家鄉(xiāng)變化21112111小計(jì)1666656322020課標(biāo)全國(guó)n記敘文人與自我樂(lè)于學(xué)習(xí)112112022019記敘文人與自我夢(mèng)想職業(yè)121320012018記敘文人與自我家庭生活42100111小計(jì)654433142022全國(guó)甲記敘文人與自我家庭生活401122002021記敘文人與自我學(xué)校生活4110120120202019課標(biāo)全國(guó)出記敘文人與自我生活方式41110210記敘文人與自我個(gè)人夢(mèng)想410102112018記敘文人與自我學(xué)校生活41211110小計(jì)204544932I.命題規(guī)律：.文章體裁以記敘文為主；.試題設(shè)錯(cuò)比例通常為：加詞1個(gè)，刪詞1個(gè)，改正8個(gè);.考頻由高到低為：v.zn./conj.,adj.,adv.,prep.,art.;IL備考策略：.掌握命題規(guī)律，熟悉短文改錯(cuò)解題步驟、解題原則及解題思路；1）解題步驟：通讀全文，掌握大意；上貫下聯(lián)，逐句改錯(cuò)；對(duì)照考點(diǎn)，推敲難點(diǎn)；代人答案，復(fù)讀全文。2）解題原則：①規(guī)范性原則:按照規(guī)定的符號(hào)改錯(cuò)。②四不改原則:詞序不改;大小寫(xiě)不改;標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不改;單詞拼寫(xiě)不改。③五改動(dòng)原則:忠實(shí)原文;一對(duì)一原則;改動(dòng)最少原則;實(shí)詞以改變形式為主;虛詞以添加或刪除為主。2）解題思路：①詞法測(cè)試；②句法測(cè)試；③篇章測(cè)試。.日常學(xué)習(xí)中要：①多歸納、多總結(jié)，且規(guī)范答題格式；②熟記“十字口訣”；動(dòng)名形副冠代介連+邏輯和數(shù)。.一診短文改錯(cuò)再現(xiàn)：（成都七中高2023屆高三一模）DuringashowatmyJuniorhighschool,manyotherstudentchosetoplayamusicalinstrumentortellajoke,butIdecidedsingmyfavoritesong.Ihadpracticedthesongmanytimesandcouldsingitperfectly.However,thisdaydoesn'tgoasIhadplanned.Whenmynamewascalled,Iwalkedonthestage.Suddenly,300peoplewerewatchingus.Iwasverynervousthatmyhandswereshaking.Thenthemusiccameon.Icouldn'trememberofthefirstpartofthesonganddidn'tsingitatall.Tomysurprising,insteadoflaughatme,peopletriedtocheermeon.Ibecamerelaxingandsangtherestperfectly.Itwasreallyaunforgettableexperience.Keys；student-*^students2.sing前力口to3.doesn'tfdidn't4.usfme5.veryfso6.去掉of7.surprising-*^surprise8.laugh-^laughing9.relaxing-*relaxed10.a-*an【解析】【分析】本文是一篇記敘文。文章主要講述作者初中時(shí)一次難忘的演出?！驹斀狻康谝惶帲嚎疾槊~的數(shù)。句意：在我初中的一次演出中，許多同學(xué)選擇演奏樂(lè)器或講笑話，但我決定唱我最喜歡的歌曲。student為可數(shù)名詞，根據(jù)前面的manyother修飾可知用復(fù)數(shù)形式。故將student改為studentso第二處：考查短語(yǔ)。句意：在我初中的一次演出中，許多同學(xué)選擇演奏樂(lè)器或講笑話，但我決定唱我最喜歡的歌曲。decidetodosth.決定做某事。故在sing前加to。第三處：考查時(shí)態(tài)。句意：然而，這一天并沒(méi)有像我計(jì)劃的那樣進(jìn)行。根據(jù)全文時(shí)態(tài)可知，陳述過(guò)去事情,用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。故將doesnt改為didnt。第四處：考查代詞。句意：當(dāng)叫到我的名字時(shí)，我走上了舞臺(tái)。突然，300個(gè)人都在看著我。根據(jù)前后邏輯和句意可知，這里指下面的觀眾看著“我”。故將us改為me。第五處：考查固定句式。句意：我緊張得雙手發(fā)抖。so…that…如此……以至于……。故將very改為so。第六處：考查動(dòng)詞。句意：我不記得這首歌的第一部分，所以根本就沒(méi)唱。動(dòng)詞remember為及物動(dòng)詞，后面直接接賓語(yǔ)。故去掉of。第七處：考查固定短語(yǔ)。句意：使我吃驚的是，人們不但沒(méi)有嘲笑我，反而設(shè)法鼓勵(lì)我。toone's+抽象名詞形式。toone'ssurprise令某人吃驚的是。故將surprising改為surprise。第八處：考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。句意：使我吃驚的是，人們不但沒(méi)有嘲笑我，反而設(shè)法鼓勵(lì)我。insteadof而不是,介詞of接動(dòng)名詞形式。故將laugh改為laughing。第九處：考查形容詞。句意：我放松下來(lái)，把剩下的部分唱得很完美。主語(yǔ)是人，此處表示人的感受，需用-ed結(jié)尾的形容詞。故將relaxing改為relaxedo第十處：考查冠詞。句意：那真是一次難忘的經(jīng)歷。形容詞unforgettable發(fā)音為元音音素開(kāi)頭，所以用不定冠詞an。故將a改為an。（成都七中高2022屆高三一診）Howareyoudoing,myfriends?Thetwoweeksexchangeactivityhascometoanend.However,lookbackonthepastdays,wehavegainedalotindeed.InthepasttwoweekswehadcommunicatedwitheachotherfacetofaceinEnglish.Inthisway,wehavenotonlyimprovedouroralEnglish,andyouhavealsoknownmoreaboutourcultureandtradition.What*smore,abridgeoffriendshiphasestablishedbetweenus.Besides,noonewillforgetthefarewellpartythatweenjoyedthedelicioustraditionalfoodofourcountryandyouramazingsongsanddances.Formanyofus.thetimewespenttogetherisveryunforgettablethatIthinkIwillvaluethemforever.Ihopewecanallkeepmakingaprogressinstudies.Inthemeanwhile,Idohopetoseeyouagainatthenearfuture.短文改錯(cuò)：1.weeks一weeks*2.look-looking3,had-have4.and---but.在established前力口been.that-where7.very-so8.them-it9.刪去progress前的alO.at-in（成都七中高2021屆高三一診）Welcometomyschool!Whenyouarrive,therewillbeapartyforyouholdingbymyclassmates.YoumayattendtoEnglishclassestofeeladifferentlylearningstyle.Afterthat,youcangotoyourhostfamilythatyoucanexperiencetheChinesewayoflife.Youcanhavemealstogetherchattinganythingthatinterestsus.Thehostfamilywillalsoshowyouaroundsomefamousscenicspot.Youcanseepicturesandstatuesofpandaseverywherebecauseourcitywashometopandas.Therearemanykindsofsouvenirstochoosefrom.Soisn'titthegoodideatobuysomeforyourfriends?Writetomeunlessyouhaveanyquestionsabouttheschedule.短文改錯(cuò)：1.holding-held2.去掉to3.differently—>different4.that—>where.在chatting后力口about.us一you7.spot—spots8.was一is9.the—>a10.unless一if（成都石室中學(xué)高2022屆高三一診）Itisthecommonphenomenonnowadaystherearesomepersonsdisobeyingtrafficrulesontheroad.What'sworse,manyapersonalwayslitterhereandthereinthestreets,thatisofourgreatconcern.Ihavesomespecificideastosharewhenitcomestohandletheseproblems.IwillobservetrafficruleswheneverI'monmywaytoschool.Firstandforemost,neverwillIcrossaroaduntilthetrafficlightturnedgreen.Secondly,Twillalwaysusethezebracrossing.Thirdly,Iwillneverthrowrubbishandspitontheroad.Equallyimportant,it'snecessarytoeveryonetoincreaseawarenessofsafetravel.Asthesayinggoes,“Manyhandsmakelightwork.”Therefore,lefsjoinhandtoobeytrafficrules,whichwillmatteralot.短文改錯(cuò)：ItisthecommonphenomenonnowadaysAtherearesomepersonsdisobeyingtrafficrulesonathattheroad.What'sworse,manyapersonalwayslitterhereandthereinthestreets,thatisoflitterswhichourgreatconcern.Ihavesomespecificideastosharewhenitcomestohandlethesehandlingproblems.IwillobservetrafficruleswheneverI'monmywaytoschool.Firstandforemost,neverwillIcrossaroaduntilthetrafficlightturnedgreen.Secondly,Iwillalwaysturnsusethezebracrossing.Thirdly,Iwillneverthrowrubbishandspitontheroad.Equallyorimportant,it'snecessaryofeveryonetoincreaseawarenessofsafetravel.Asthesayinggoes,"ManyImportantlyforhandsmakelightwork."Therefore,let'sjoinhandtoobeytrafficrules,whichwillmatteralot.handsthe改成a?！癮commonphenomenon”表示一種普遍的現(xiàn)象。nowadays后加thato此處考查主語(yǔ)從句的引導(dǎo)詞that。litter改成litters。manya接名詞單數(shù)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用三人稱單數(shù)。that改成which,此處是非限定性定語(yǔ)從句。handle改成handling,前面to是介詞。turned改成turns,此處應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。and改成or,否定句中用or。important改成importantly,副詞做狀語(yǔ)。of改成for,固定搭配：it'snecessaryforsb.todosth.ohand改成hands,此處指我們攜手。（綿陽(yáng)中學(xué)高2020屆高三一診）Itwasfineandtheskywasclearblue.Iwantedtogosomewhereexcitedwithmyroommates.FinallywedecidedtoclimbtotheGreatWall.Ittookusoneandahalfhourtogettherebybus.Uponarriving,webegintoclimbhappily,sharingstoriesabouttheWall.Aftertwohoursofclimbing,wereachedthetop,whereweenjoyedthebreathtakingsceneryortookquiteafewphotos.SeetheGreatwallwinditswayoverthemountains,bothofusfeltreallyamazed.Howawonder!Asthefamoussayinggoes,“HewhohasneverbeentotheGreatWallnotatrueman."IfeltlikeIwasthetrueman.【答案】Itwasfineandtheskywasclearblue.Iwantedtogosomewhereexcitedwithmyroommates.FinallyweexcitingdecidedtoclimbtotheGreatWall.Ittookusoneandahalfhourtogettherebybus.Uponarriving,webegintoclimb去掉tohoursbeganhappily,sharingstoriesabouttheWall.Aftertwohoursofclimbing,wereachedthetop,whereweenjoyedthebreathtakingsceneryottookquiteafewphotos.SeetheGreatwallwinditswayoverthemountains,bothofusfeltandSeeingallreallyamazeiHowawonder!Asthefemous