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Writing上海高二年級(jí)SummaryWritingWriteaSummaryofanExposition“Thinkgreen!"Wehaveallheardthissloganmanytimes,butdoweunderstandwhatitmeans?Climetechangeisreal,anditwillhaveaneffectonus,ourhealth,andthehealthoftheplanet,somaybeit'stimetodosomethingaboutit.Agreatwayto"thinkgreen"istotumofftheelectronicsinourhomesandspendtimedoingotheractivitiesinsteadofwatchingTVorsurfingtheInternet.Theplanetishelpedbecauseweareusinglessenengy.Andifwearenotusingourelectronicdevices,wewillhavetimetoexercise,connectwithourfriends,anddevelopotherinterestsandhobbies.Wecanchooseactivitiesthatarebothenjoyableandkindtothepianet.So,whatisagoodwaytousethisfreetime?Oneideaistoplantavegetablegarden,whichwillhelpboththegardenerandtheplanet.Thegardenergetsexercise,timeoutdoorsinthefreshair,thesatisfactionofraisingfood,aswellasthebenefito?eatingwell.WriteaSummaryofanExpositiInaddition,ifyougardenorganically,youwon'tusetoxicchemicalsandpesticidesThiswillkeepourwatercleanerandensurethatsmallanimals,birds,andbeneficialinsectsareneharmed.Gardeningisonesmallwaytogogreenandrelievestress,butyoucanaisoencourasenvironmentalresponsibilityinbiggerways.Itisalsoimportanttosupportgreenprojectsthathelpthepianet.Evenifwecan'taffordtosolerenergypanelsoranelectriccar,wecanencouragegovernmentsandbusinessestouseenefromsolarpowerortobuildfewerroadsandmorebicyclelanes.Orwecanvolunteerforprojinourowncommunities,suchascleaningourgreenspacesandrivers.Inthisway,wecanexercisewhileweworktomakeacleanerplacetoenjoynature.Supportingandparticipatingreenprojectsishealthyforusandtheplanet.Wecaneachbeasmallpartofthesolutiontoenvironmentalproblems.Ifwestartwitverydaychoices.,wecan"thinkgreen”,“actgreen”,and"supportgreen”.Whoknows?Pethroughouractionswewillmakeadifferencetoboththeearthandourselves.Inaddition,ifyougardenorgTowriteagoodsummary,youshould_______________Containallthekeypoints.Omitunnecessarydetailslikeexamples,explanationsandotherunimportantinformation.Usepropertransitions.Useyourownwords.Copytheoriginalsentences

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Towriteagoodsummary,yous4TypeStructuresexposition（說(shuō)明文）3.phenomenon+cause+effect2.object+function+blem+blem+solutionTypeStructures3.phenomenon+cStepstowriteasummary5.Polish

thesummarywiththechecklist.1.Readthepassagetogetthegeneralidea.2.Locate

thekeypoints.3.Rephrasethekeypoints.4.Reconstructthekeypointsintoasummary.Stepstowriteasummary5.Po6problem+solutionsproblem+solutions7ProblemProblem8Climatechangeisreal,anditwillhaveaneffectonus,ourhealthandthehealthoftheplanet,somaybeit’stimetodosomethingaboutit.

ReadPara1andunderlinethekeypoints.Assohaveaneffectonaffectsomethingmust

bedoneplanetearth_________

mustbetakentoavoid_______________ofclimatechange.ActionnegativeeffectsAsclimatechangewillaffectusandtheearth,somethingmustbedoneaboutit.takeaction(29words)(15words)(11words)Climatechangeisreal,andit2.Changepartofspeech.（改變?cè)~性）1.Usedifferentconjuctions.（用不同的連詞）5.Usegenerealwords.(用概括性的詞）4.Usedifferentvoices.（用不同的語(yǔ)態(tài)）6.UseNon-predicatestoreplaceclauses.（用非謂語(yǔ)代替從句）Useyourownwords.3.Usesynonymsandantonyms.(用同義詞和反義詞)2.Changepartofspeech.（改變?cè)~性10Solution1Solution12.______________

activities____________________________________________________bothenjoyableandkindtousandtheplanet1._______________

ReadPara2andunderlinethekeypoints.wehavetimeuselessenergytoconnectwithfriendstodevelopotherinterestsandhobbiesbeneficialTurnofftheelectronicstoexercise2.______________activities____Weshouldturnofftheelectronics________wecanuselessenergyanddoother____________________

sothatbeneficialactivities.

ReadPara2andunderlinethekeypoints.turnoffswitchoffstopusinguseconsumesaveenergyWeshouldturnofftheelectroSolution2Solution2

plantavegetablegarden

thegardenertheplanet

ReadPara2andunderlinethekeypoints.helpexercise

timeoutdoors

satisfactionofraisingfoodbenefitsofeatingwellplantorganically

benefit…plantavegetablegarden,whichwillhelpbothgardenerandtheplanet.Weshouldplantavegetablegarden,___________

thegardenerandtheplanet.helpfultoReadPara2andunderlinethekeypoints.planetearthPlantingavegetablegarden_________________________will_______thegardenerandtheplanet.benefit…plantavegetablegarSolution3Solution3

________

forusandtheplanetsupportgreenprojectshealthy

ReadPara3andunderlinethekeypoints.twowaysencourage…tousesolarenergyortobuildfewerroadsandmorebicyclelanes

volunteerforprojectsinourowncommunities________forusandtheplWecansupportgreenprojectsby___________the______of

solarenergyand___________________________projects.encouragingvolunteeringforuseReadPmunityWecansupportgreenprojectsPartFunctionI.Para.________II.Para._____to_____III.Para._________

123Topresentthe________.To__________________4problemTorestate.suggestsolutionsThestructureofthepassagePartFunctionI.Para.________IReconstructthesummaryofthepassage.ReconstructthesummaryoftheDoesthissummarybeginwithatopicsentence?Doesthissummaryincludeallthemainpoints?Isitwritteninyourownwords?Arepropertransitionalwordsused?Arethereanymistakesinspelling,grammarandpunctuation?Checkyoursummary.DoesthissummarybeginwithaOmitunnecessarydetailsContainallthekeypoints.Usepropertransitions.Useyourownwordstoexpressthewriter'sideas.AgoodsummaryBriefCompleteCoherentObjectiveOmitunnecessarydetailsContai232.Changepartofspeech.（改變?cè)~性）1.Usedifferentconjuctions.（用不同的連詞）5.Usegenerealwords.(用概括性的詞）4.Usedifferentvoices.（用不同的語(yǔ)態(tài)）6.UseNon-predicatestoreplaceclauses.（用非謂語(yǔ)代替從句）Useyourownwords.3.Usesynonymsandantonyms.(用同義詞和反義詞)2.Changepartofspeech.（改變?cè)~性241.Handintherevisedworktomorrow.2.UsewhathasbeenlearnedtowriteasummaryofPassage2.Assignment1.Handintherevisedworkto25ForReferenceActionmustbetakentoavoidnegativeeffectsofclimatechange.Weshouldturnofftheelectronicssothatwecan

saveenergyanddootherbeneficialactivities.Weshouldplantavegetablegarden,helpfultothegardenerandtheplanet.Wecansupportgreenprojectsbyencouragingtheuseofsolarenergyandvolunteeringforcommunityprojects.ForReferenceActionmustSummary

Writing上海高二年級(jí)SummaryWritingWriteaSummaryofanExposition“Thinkgreen!"Wehaveallheardthissloganmanytimes,butdoweunderstandwhatitmeans?Climetechangeisreal,anditwillhaveaneffectonus,ourhealth,andthehealthoftheplanet,somaybeit'stimetodosomethingaboutit.Agreatwayto"thinkgreen"istotumofftheelectronicsinourhomesandspendtimedoingotheractivitiesinsteadofwatchingTVorsurfingtheInternet.Theplanetishelpedbecauseweareusinglessenengy.Andifwearenotusingourelectronicdevices,wewillhavetimetoexercise,connectwithourfriends,anddevelopotherinterestsandhobbies.Wecanchooseactivitiesthatarebothenjoyableandkindtothepianet.So,whatisagoodwaytousethisfreetime?Oneideaistoplantavegetablegarden,whichwillhelpboththegardenerandtheplanet.Thegardenergetsexercise,timeoutdoorsinthefreshair,thesatisfactionofraisingfood,aswellasthebenefito?eatingwell.WriteaSummaryofanExpositiInaddition,ifyougardenorganically,youwon'tusetoxicchemicalsandpesticidesThiswillkeepourwatercleanerandensurethatsmallanimals,birds,andbeneficialinsectsareneharmed.Gardeningisonesmallwaytogogreenandrelievestress,butyoucanaisoencourasenvironmentalresponsibilityinbiggerways.Itisalsoimportanttosupportgreenprojectsthathelpthepianet.Evenifwecan'taffordtosolerenergypanelsoranelectriccar,wecanencouragegovernmentsandbusinessestouseenefromsolarpowerortobuildfewerroadsandmorebicyclelanes.Orwecanvolunteerforprojinourowncommunities,suchascleaningourgreenspacesandrivers.Inthisway,wecanexercisewhileweworktomakeacleanerplacetoenjoynature.Supportingandparticipatingreenprojectsishealthyforusandtheplanet.Wecaneachbeasmallpartofthesolutiontoenvironmentalproblems.Ifwestartwitverydaychoices.,wecan"thinkgreen”,“actgreen”,and"supportgreen”.Whoknows?Pethroughouractionswewillmakeadifferencetoboththeearthandourselves.Inaddition,ifyougardenorgTowriteagoodsummary,youshould_______________Containallthekeypoints.Omitunnecessarydetailslikeexamples,explanationsandotherunimportantinformation.Usepropertransitions.Useyourownwords.Copytheoriginalsentences

brief

complete

coherent

Do

not

include

your

own

ideas

or

emotions

on

the

topic.

objective

Towriteagoodsummary,yous30TypeStructuresexposition（說(shuō)明文）3.phenomenon+cause+effect2.object+function+blem+blem+solutionTypeStructures3.phenomenon+cStepstowriteasummary5.Polish

thesummarywiththechecklist.1.Readthepassagetogetthegeneralidea.2.Locate

thekeypoints.3.Rephrasethekeypoints.4.Reconstructthekeypointsintoasummary.Stepstowriteasummary5.Po32problem+solutionsproblem+solutions33ProblemProblem34Climatechangeisreal,anditwillhaveaneffectonus,ourhealthandthehealthoftheplanet,somaybeit’stimetodosomethingaboutit.

ReadPara1andunderlinethekeypoints.Assohaveaneffectonaffectsomethingmust

bedoneplanetearth_________

mustbetakentoavoid_______________ofclimatechange.ActionnegativeeffectsAsclimatechangewillaffectusandtheearth,somethingmustbedoneaboutit.takeaction(29words)(15words)(11words)Climatechangeisreal,andit2.Changepartofspeech.（改變?cè)~性）1.Usedifferentconjuctions.（用不同的連詞）5.Usegenerealwords.(用概括性的詞）4.Usedifferentvoices.（用不同的語(yǔ)態(tài)）6.UseNon-predicatestoreplaceclauses.（用非謂語(yǔ)代替從句）Useyourownwords.3.Usesynonymsandantonyms.(用同義詞和反義詞)2.Changepartofspeech.（改變?cè)~性36Solution1Solution12.______________

activities____________________________________________________bothenjoyableandkindtousandtheplanet1._______________

ReadPara2andunderlinethekeypoints.wehavetimeuselessenergytoconnectwithfriendstodevelopotherinterestsandhobbiesbeneficialTurnofftheelectronicstoexercise2.______________activities____Weshouldturnofftheelectronics________wecanuselessenergyanddoother____________________

sothatbeneficialactivities.

ReadPara2andunderlinethekeypoints.turnoffswitchoffstopusinguseconsumesaveenergyWeshouldturnofftheelectroSolution2Solution2

plantavegetablegarden

thegardenertheplanet

ReadPara2andunderlinethekeypoints.helpexercise

timeoutdoors

satisfactionofraisingfoodbenefitsofeatingwellplantorganically

benefit…plantavegetablegarden,whichwillhelpbothgardenerandtheplanet.Weshouldplantavegetablegarden,___________

thegardenerandtheplanet.helpfultoReadPara2andunderlinethekeypoints.planetearthPlantingavegetablegarden_________________________will_______thegardenerandtheplanet.benefit…plantavegetablegarSolution3Solution3

________

forusandtheplanetsupportgreenprojectshealthy

ReadPara3andunderlinethekeypoints.twowaysencourage…tousesolarenergyortobuildfewerroadsandmorebicyclelanes

volunteerforprojectsinourowncommunities________forusandtheplWecansupportgreenprojectsby___________the______of

solarenergyand___________________________projects.encouragingvolunteeringforuseReadPmunityWecansupportgreenprojectsPartFunctionI.Para.________II.Para._____to_____III.Para._________

123Topresentthe________.To__________________4problemTorestate.suggests