【寫(xiě)作講座】如何提升高中英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作能力

如何提升英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作能力《高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作復(fù)習(xí)系列》化繁為簡(jiǎn)大道至簡(jiǎn)01遣詞造句目錄02認(rèn)真審題03連句成段04謀篇布局1遣詞造句PartoneKnowinghowtowritebettersentenceswillhelpyouwritebetterparagraphs,whichwillhelpyoubeabetterwriter!

ToparaphraseShakespeare,“thesentenceisthething.”Thesetipswillhelpyouwritebettersentences,whichwillcreatebetterparagraphs,whichwillblossomintobettercompositionsorarticles.Theabilityforbettersentences教學(xué)重點(diǎn)The

sentence

is

the

thing.—Shakespeare12先主干句，后附加句。先寫(xiě)出無(wú)意義的主干句寫(xiě)作技巧點(diǎn)撥再根據(jù)句意要求補(bǔ)充附加信息主語(yǔ)謂語(yǔ)賓語(yǔ)定語(yǔ)狀語(yǔ)詞，短語(yǔ)，從句詞，短語(yǔ)，從句Aliceisagirl.SampleOne"Alice,16yearsold,isanAmericangirl."

"Alice,16yearsold,isanAmericangirlfromamountainousvillageinLosAngeles."

"Alice,16yearsold,isanAmericangirl,apopulardancer,comingfromamountainousvillageinLosAngeles."

ThissentencecommunicatesmuchmoretothereaderandshowsthatyouknowhowtoreallyuseEnglishwell.Sampletwo"Iamverytired."

"Iamalways

tired

afterwork."

"Ialwaysfeeltired

afterworkingfrom9inthemorninguntil10atnight."

"I’mtiredoutafterworkingontheprojectaroundtheclockwithoutanyrestforthreedays."

Remember:Whenyouwrite,youaretryingtocommunicate.Thesespecificdetailsarewhatcommunicateinformationtoyourreader.SampleThree"Canyoucome?"

"Canyoucometomyofficetomorowmorning?"

"Canyoucometomyofficetomorrowmorningbetween9:30and10o'clock?"

"Canyoucometomyofficetomorrowmorningbetween9:30and10o'clocksothatIcangiveyoutheinformationyouwanted?"

RememberThis!

Whenyouarewriting,alwaysremembertoanswerthebasicquestionsindetail:Who?What?When?Where?Why?andHow?

遣詞造句小技巧詞語(yǔ)多在名詞前面，短語(yǔ)多在名詞后面，句子躲在名詞后面。頻度狀語(yǔ)可在句首，句中和句尾

時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)多在句首和句尾，偶居中，多數(shù)程度狀語(yǔ)在句尾，個(gè)別在句首。掌握造句技巧，在于先化繁為簡(jiǎn)，再根據(jù)需要增添附加成分主干句定語(yǔ)成分狀語(yǔ)信息造句小結(jié)2認(rèn)真審題Parttwo

假定你是李華，正在教你的英國(guó)朋友Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)封郵件告知下次上課的計(jì)劃。內(nèi)容包括：

（1）時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；

（2）內(nèi)容：學(xué)習(xí)唐詩(shī)；

（3）課前準(zhǔn)備：簡(jiǎn)要了解唐朝的歷史。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。認(rèn)真審題2017-課標(biāo)IIWhoWhat?whyHOW?突出重點(diǎn)突破難點(diǎn)隨隨便便看一下，就開(kāi)始動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作文句型錯(cuò)誤要點(diǎn)不全寫(xiě)錯(cuò)單詞弄錯(cuò)時(shí)態(tài)認(rèn)真審題認(rèn)真審題Who,What,WhyandWhen

首段切記四要素Follow

the

OrderOnebyOneTenseandPersonalAddingReasonably作文主體要點(diǎn)齊全Echoing(ExpectationandWish)Polite結(jié)束部分最關(guān)鍵3連詞成段PartthreeWho=I[LiHua],LeslieWhat=writeanemailtotellhimabouttheplanforhisChineseclassWhen

=nexttime信息篩選作文首段關(guān)鍵四要素I’mwritingtoyou.I’mwritingtotellyou.I’mwritingtotellyouabouttheChineseclass.I’mwritingtotellyouabouttheChineseclassnextweek.遣詞造句信息篩選When:

Notgiven.“?”Justdependonyou.

What:[1]learnsomepoemsofTangDynasty

Why:?1,2,3,…What:[2]knowsomethingaboutChineseancienthistoryinadvanceBasiccapacitytosettimeonyourownCapacityofreasonableimagination,offeringsomeadditionalinformationbyyourselfaccordingtotheinformationgiven作文主體要點(diǎn)與增添Let’smeetagain.Let’smeetat14:00nextTuesdayagain.Let’smeetatthecoffeeshopat14:00/2:00pmnextTuesdayagain.Let’smeetatthecoffeeshopnearmyschoolat14:00nextTuesdayagain.Let’smeetat2:00p.m.nextTuesdayagain.遣詞造句作文主體要點(diǎn)與增添Iplantohelpyou.IplantohelpyoulearnsomepoemsoftheTangDynasty.IplantohelpyoulearnsomepoemsoftheTangDynasty,whichisanimportantpartofChinesehistory.TheTangDynastyisanimportantpartofChinese[civilization]History.AdditionalinformationgivenbyyouWhy1遣詞造句遣詞造句作文主體要點(diǎn)與增添ManypoemsoftheTangDynasty.ManypoemsoftheTangDynastyhavegreatlyinfluencedChineseliterature.WeChineselearnedthematayoungage.Why2Reasonableimaginationcomesfromourreading.SowestudentsshoulddoalotofreadinginOurfreetime.Why3作文主體要點(diǎn)與增添I’llhelpyoureadtheselectedpoems.I’llhelpyoureadandunderstandtheselectedpoems.I’llhelpyoureadandunderstandtheselectedpoemsbeforewediscussthem.I’llhelpyoureadandunderstandtheselectedpoemsbeforewehaveadiscussionofthem.遣詞造句Why4It’sveryimportantforustomixtheinformationgivenandadditionalbyourselvesinwriting.作文結(jié)語(yǔ)呼應(yīng)與客套IsuggestyougetsomeknowledgeoftheTangdynastyinadvance.遣詞造句IsuggestyoureadsomearticlesandgetsomeknowledgeoftheTangdynastyinadvance.Tomakeiteasier,IsuggestyoureadsomearticlesandgetsomeknowledgeoftheTangdynastyinadvance.Writeashortandsimplesentencefirst,andaddsomeotherinformationinthesentence.Bestwishes!4謀篇布局Partfour作文架構(gòu)謀篇與布局作文分段，思路清晰，起承轉(zhuǎn)合，不可顛倒。首段：寫(xiě)作目的，須有四要素主體：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，增添合邏輯結(jié)語(yǔ)：前后呼應(yīng)，外加客套話。Hi，Leslie,I’mwritingtotellyouabouttheChineseclassnextweek.Let’smeetat14:00nextTuesdayatthecoffeeshopnearmyschoolagain.

IplantohelpyoulearnsomepoemsoftheTangDynasty,whichisanimportantpartofChinesecivilization.ManyoftheTangpoemshavegreatlyinfluencedChineseliterature.AndweChineselearnedthematayoungage.I’llhelpyoureadandunderstandtheselectedpoemsbeforewehaveadiscussionofthem.

Tomakeiteasier,IsuggestyoureadandgetsomeknowledgeabouttheTangdynastyinadvance.Seeyoulater!