高中英語高考二輪復(fù)習(xí)二輪復(fù)習(xí) 二輪復(fù)習(xí) 高考英語建議信寫作學(xué)案

作文展5：建議信假如你的朋友李華已經(jīng)在美國留學(xué)三年，現(xiàn)在正面臨著畢業(yè)后是留在美國還是回到中國的問題，請你用英語給他寫一封信，給出你的建議并寫清原因。要求：1詞數(shù)100左右：2可以適當(dāng)加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearLiHua,HearingthatyouarewonderingwhetheryoushouldreturntoChinaorstayinUSA,I'mwritingtooffersomeadvice.Frommystandpoint,it’scomingbacktoChinathatisthebestchoiceforyou.Andthereasonsareasfollows.Initially,Chinaisenjoyingaperiodofprosperityandpeace,whichmeansthatyoucanacquirenumerousgoldenopportunities.Additionally,aftercomingback,notonlycanyouattendtoyourparentsmoreeasily,butalsoyoucanworkandliveinafamiliarenvironment,givingyouasenseofbelonging.Mostimportantlyofallit,it’sourdutytomakeeveryendeavortoserveourmotherland.Lastlybutnotleast,sooutstanding/distinguishedareyouthatIbelieveyouareboundtocutastrikingfigureinChina.Lookingforwardtoyourreplyandmayyouembraceabrightprospect.YoursWangWeDearLiHua,ScarcelycouldIcontainmyconcernwhenIheardthatyouareconfrontedwithanimportantdecision.Frommystandpoint,youaresupposedtoreturntoChina.Somereasonsareasfollows.Initially,withthedevelopmentofChina,thereareanabundantofwell-paidpositionstochoosefrom.Thusitisanythingbutdifficultforyoutohuntforagoodjob.Ontopofthat,youexcelat(擅長)technology,whichcontributestothedevelopmentofChina.NowthetechnologyistoChinawhatsunshineistoplantsandyouareboundtobeoccupiedwithahighly-paidvocation.Lastbutnotleast,yourparentsaregettingolder.It'syourdutytoreturntolookafterthem.Onlywhenyoucomebackcanyourparentsleadahappyandsweetlife,soitpaystoregress(回歸).I'mfirmlyconvincedthatyouwillachievealotifyoureturn.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursWangWeDearLiHua,MyhonorwasbeyonddescriptionwhenIheardthatyouturntomeforsomeadviceontheupcominggraduationchoice.Takingallthefactorsintoconsiderconsideration,I’dliketoofferwhatIcomeupwith.Frommyperspective,goingbacktoChinaishighlyrecommended.Reasonsareasfollows.Firststatedisthejobhuntingaspect.ItwouldbemoreconvenientandalternativetofindjobsinChina.Furthermore,whatdeservesspecialattentionisthatyoucanstayclosetoyourfamilyandfriends,withoutwhichlifewouldbequiteboringandmeaningless.AllabovearemyadviceIhopeallthesecandosomegoodtoyouandwishyouabrightfuture.YoursWangWeiDearLiHua,IamwritingtorecommendyoutoreturntoChinaforabrighterfuture.Reasonsareasfollows.Consideringthefactthatyouhaveboastedtonsofknowledgeandpotential,I’minthefirmbeliefthatyouareboundtoderive(獲得)abundantopportunities.Besides,yourexperienceofstudyinginAmericaalsocontributestomakingyoucutastrikingfigureinjobinterviews.Inaddition,withthefastdevelopmentofChinacomenumerousfields’blossom.Youcan'taffordtomissthisbrillianttime.InChina,notonlycanyouluxuriate（茂盛的生長）inaharmoniousatmosphere,butalsoyouhaveaccesstosuccessinmanyaspects.IhopethatyoucanfulfillyourdreaminChina.Shouldmyadviceberewarding,Iwouldbemorethandelighted.YoursWangWeiDearLiHua,How'sitgoing.Aftera3-yearstudyinAmericayouarefacedwiththedilemmawhetherstayinginAmericaorreturningtoChina.Inviewofthefollowingreasons,comingbacktoChinaisregardedasthebestchoiceforyou.Ononehand,withtimepassing,anincreasingnumberoftremendousimprovementsareshininginourhomeland.Bathedinaboomingatmosphere,itcanbesaidwithcertainthatyouwillacquirenumerouspossibilitiestofulfillyourdream.Ontheotherhand,whatcallsforspecialattentionisthatourcountryisingreatneedofdistinguishedpersons.ItishightimethatyoushouldpourwhatyouhavelearntintotheconstructionofamorepowerfulChinaanditisbelievedthatyouwillmakegreatcontributionstoit.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.YoursWangWeiDearLiHua,OnhearingthefactthatyouareatalosswhethertostayinAmericaortocomebacktoChinaI'mwritingtoprovidesomesuggestionsforyou.Frommypointofview,it’sabetterchoiceforyoutoreturntoChina.Heregothereasons.FirststatedisthatwhileinAmericaitisnotasconvenientasinChinatokeepyourfamilyaswellasyourfriendscompany,whichislikelytobringaboutyourhomesickness.Additionally,withtheeconomydevelopingrapidly,Chinaiscallingfortalentslikeyou.Asaconsequence,sovaluableisthischancethatyoucannevermissit.Ontopofthat,I'mfirmlyconvincedthatitisthefantasticpoliciesmadebythegovernmentforthebenefitofoutstandingindividualsthatappealtoyou,asaresultofwhichyourcapabilitywillbemadefulluseof.I'minthehopethatmyadvicewillbebeneficialtoyou.YoursWangWeiDearLiHua,HearingthatyouareconfusedaboutwhethertostayinAmericaorreturntoChinaaftergraduation,I'mwritingtoadviseyoutocomebacktoyourmotherland.ReasonsareasfollowsInitially,withChina’ssoar-awaydevelopment,whoeverhasadreamisboundtoachieveitaslongasheoffershistoilandsweet.Soitpaystocomeandspareyoureffortstomakeit.Furthermore,Chinaisinneedofmoreoutstandingpeoplelikeyoutoflourishitself,thusmakingitapowerfulcountryintheworld.Moreover,giventhatyouweredrownedinthemarvelousChinesecultureinyourchildhood,itsenvironmentmustbemorefamiliartoyou.Lastbutnotleast,ifcomingback,youcanalsoattendtoyourparentsandhangoutwithyourfriendsoften,whicharereallypleasantandwarm.Chinaistouswhatsunshineistoplants.Itdeservesourcontributionstomakeitabettercountry.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursWangWeiDearLiHua,I'mdelightedtohearfromyou.Ithasbeen3yearssinceyoustudiedabroad.AndyouareconfrontedwiththeproblemofwhetherreturntoChinaornot.Whatisstronglyrecommendedisthatyou'dbettercomeback.Initially,asitknowntoall,the21stcenturyhaswitnessedtherapiddevelopmentofChinaInaddition,thegovernmenthasconductedmanylawstomotivatepeoplewhoareoutstandingtomakecontributionstoourcountry.Therefore,manyemploymentchancesarewaitingforyouandChinawillneverfailtolivetouptoyourexpectations.Whatismore,ifyoucomeback,moretimecanbespentwithyourparents.Theycanalsoassistyouwheneveryouhavetrouble.Additionally,Chinesepeoplearefriendlyandhelpful,whichmakesiteasytogetalongwellwiththem.AndIbelieveyouwillleadahappylife.Shouldmyadviceberewarding,youcouldtakeitintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursWangWei建議信—suggestionletter第一段：寫作背景和寫作目的(明確表明觀點(diǎn)態(tài)度)第二/三段：提出建議及理由第三/四段：表達(dá)希望時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)人稱：第一、二人稱A：建議信首段PurposeandProblems我很高興收到你的來信詢問關(guān)于...的意見。1.Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceonhowto…andI'lltrytomakesomesuggestions.’mgladtoreceiveyourletter,askingformyadviceonhowto...3.I'vereceivedyourletter,saying...4.AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat…5.Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter.6.Iamwritingtoyouinreplyto...7.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewson/concerning…8.It'smypleasuretoofferyousomeadviceon...我的建議如下：Herecomesomesuggestionsforyou./Mysuggestionsareasfollows.B.建議信正文常用句式（詳述建議，合情入理）1.Haveyouconsidereddoing.../Sowhynotdo...?2.Don'tyouthinkitmorebeneficialifyoucould…3.Iwouldliketosuggestthatyou(should)…4.IfIwereyou,Iwould…5.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.6.Whenitcomestosuchasituation,Iwouldliketomakeasuggestionthatyou(should)…7.You'dbetterdo.../Itis/seemsbetterforyoutodo...8.Thebestwaytodosthistodo…/Thereisnobetterwaytodosththantodosth...9.How/Whataboutdoing...?10.Whatif...?11.Itwouldbeagoodideaif...C.建議信結(jié)尾常用句式（歸納總結(jié)，提出希望）1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoconsideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful/helpful.3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard(在這一點(diǎn)上).4.Idohopethatmyideaswillwork.5.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindtheseideasuseful.6.Iwouldbereadytofurtherdiscussthismatter/discussthismatterwithyouinfurtherdetail.7.Let’skeepintouch.Ihopetoheargoodnewsfromyou.8.Ihopewhat'smentionedabovemightbehelpful.常用關(guān)聯(lián)詞1.表示并列的過渡詞或短語aswell;or;too;also;aswellas;and;notonly…butalso….;both…and….either…or…;neither…nor…Foronething;Foranother(thing)2.表示遞進(jìn)的過渡詞或短語Moreover;What’smore;Besides;What’sworse3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比的過渡詞:but,however,insteadof,onthecontrary,although,differentfrom,despite,inspiteof,Ontheonehand,…;Ontheotherhand,…Some…;Others…4.表原因的過渡詞:because,becauseof,since,as,for,nowthat,thanksto,dueto（由于）5.表結(jié)果的過渡詞:so,thus,therefore,asaresult,sothat,then,

6.表?xiàng)l件的過渡詞:if,unless,aslongas

7.表時(shí)間的過渡詞:recently,atthesametime,finally,atlast,fromnowon,8.表特定的順序關(guān)系的過渡詞:first,firstly,second,secondly,third,thirdly,aboveall,firstofall,then,next,finally,intheend,atlast9.表換一種方式表達(dá)的過渡詞:inotherwords,thatistosay

10.表進(jìn)行舉例說明的過渡詞:forinstance,forexample,suchas

11.表陳述事實(shí)的過渡詞:Infact,Totellyouthetruth

12.表目的的過渡詞：forthisreason,forthispurpose,sothat,inorderto,soasto

13.表總結(jié)的過渡詞:inaword(總之，簡言之),inshort(總之),generallyspeaking,finally,inconclusion,atlast,insummary假如你是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請你給校委會(huì)寫一封信，就開辦一個(gè)藝術(shù)畫廊給出自己的建議及理由，內(nèi)容包括；1）建議開辦一個(gè)校園藝術(shù)畫廊，展示在校學(xué)生自己的作品；2）畫廊可以給學(xué)生提供一個(gè)展示自我的平臺，開闊學(xué)生視野、傳播校園文化DearCommitteemembers,Iwishtomakeasuggestionaboutstartingaschoolartgallery.Therearemanystudentswhoaregoodatpaintinginourschool.Theschoolartgallarycanprovidethesestudentswithaverygoodplatformtodisplaytheirownpaintings,throughwhichotherstudentsmaynotonlygetachancetoadmiretheartisticachievementsandthedevelopmentofschoolculturebutalsocanwidentheirknowledge.Ifyouweretooffersuchanopportunitytothestudentswhoarefondofart,Ibelievetheywouldgiveyouabigsurprise.Iwouldbemorethandelightedifmysuggestioncouldbeconsidered.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua假如你（WangHong）是一名導(dǎo)游，你將帶領(lǐng)一個(gè)外國旅游團(tuán)游覽廣東，請簡單介紹廣東現(xiàn)在的情況。地理位置：廣東位于中國東南部，南臨南海，海岸線總長3368公里，島嶼眾多。歷史：廣東歷史悠久，簡稱粵（yue）特點(diǎn)：1.素有“水果王國”之稱，香蕉、甘蔗、荔枝、菠蘿為其四大名果；2.是華南工業(yè)發(fā)達(dá)之省，水陸交通便利；3.有三個(gè)經(jīng)濟(jì)特區(qū)：深圳、珠海、汕頭；4.有“食在廣東“（Don’thesitatetohavemealshere）之稱。參考詞匯：海岸線coastline甘蔗sugarcane荔枝lychee菠蘿pineapple經(jīng)濟(jì)特區(qū)specialeconomiczoneLadiesandGentlemen,WelcometoGuangdongProvince.I’mWangLihong.AndI’mmorethangladtobeyourguide.GuangdongProvince,alsocalledYueforshort,hasalonghistoryandisknownforthesaying,“Don’thesitatetohavemealshere.”LocatedbytheSouthSeainthesoutheastpartofmainlandChina,ithasquiteafewislandsoffitscoastlinewhichhasatotallengthof3,368kilometers.Knownasafruitking,GuangdongProvinceisfamousforitshigh-qualitybananas,sugarcane,lycheesandpineapples.ItisalsooneofthemostdevelopedindustrialprovincesinSouthChina,w