新教材高中英語UNIT2OnwardsandupwardsPart4Writing提升訓練含解析外研版選擇性必修第一冊

PAGEPAGE3Part4Writing記敘文寫作寫作題目假定你是李華,曾經在一所聾啞學校做過助教,請根據(jù)以下要點用英文寫一篇關于你的助教經歷。1.一位對生活失去信心的失聰女孩Jean在你的幫助下重拾生活信心;2.當時你遇到的最大困難是溝通障礙;3.你是如何克服困難的,并學到了什么。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。

思路點撥主題助殘經歷體裁記敘文人稱以第一人稱為主時態(tài)以一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時為主文章布局第一部分:概述助殘經歷;第二部分:遇到的困難及解決辦法;第三部分:你的收獲。遣詞造句Ⅰ.用本單元所學單詞填空1.adj.難堪的,尷尬的

2.adj.令人愉快的,討人喜歡的

3.n.友誼;友好交往

4.adj.心煩意亂的,煩惱的

5.adv.然而,不過

6.v.鍥而不舍,堅持不懈

答案1.panionship4.upset5.nevertheless6.persevereⅡ.本單元語塊、語法運用1.完成句子(1)總的來說,幫助Jean重拾生活信心是一次愉快的經歷。Onthewhole,Jeanrestoreherconfidenceinlifeis.

(2)我面對的最大的困難是溝通障礙。Thebiggestdifficultywasthecommunicationbarriers.

(3)此外,我盡一切努力與她建立友誼及互相的信任。Furthermore,Imadeeveryefforttowithher.

答案(1)helping;adelightfulexperience(2)Ifaced(3)establishcompanionshipandmutualtrust2.句式升級(4)用it作形式主語改寫句(1)

(5)將句(2)改為強調句

答案(4)Onthewhole,itisadelightfulexperiencetohelpJeanrestoreherconfidenceinlife.(5)ItwasthecommunicationbarriersthatwerethebiggestdifficultyIfaced.連句成篇

參考范文Onthewhole,itisadelightfulexperiencetohelpJeanrestoreherconfidenceinlife.Frommymemory,whenwefirstmet,shewasalwaysupset,makingmeembarrassed.Meanwhile,itwasthecommunicationbarriersthatwerethebiggestdifficultyIfaced.Nevertheless,Imadeit.First,Iadvisedhertogathercouragetoconfrontthedifficultiesinsteadofescapingfromthem.Furthermore,Imadeeveryefforttoestablishcompanionshipandmutualtrustwithher.Eventually,whatmatteredmostwastopersevereinwhatIwasdoing.Fortunately,whatIgetfromthisexperienceisthatconfidenceanddeterminationcanreallycontributetooursuccessandthateveryoneshouldbeconfidentaboutlife.寫作積累1.OnceIwasinvitedto...butwhathappenedlatermademefeel...2.AtfirstIthought...butitturnedouttobe...whichmademefeel...3.OnlywhenIwastoldby...didIbegintorealizewhatasillymistakeIhadmade.4.Seeingthis,MrSmithcouldn'thelplaughingandtoldmehowto...實戰(zhàn)演練P108()假設你是Tom,請根據(jù)以下提示講述你和父親一起爬山的一次經歷。1.去年暑假我和父親早晨出發(fā)去爬山;2.在半路上,下起雨來,我們全身被淋濕了,又冷又累;3.我開始抱怨,想要放棄;4.父親給予我鼓勵和溫暖;5.最終我們成功到達山頂,享受了美景。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。

Part4Writing實戰(zhàn)演練Onepossibleversion:IstillrememberthedaywhenIwentclimbingwithmyfatherinthelastsummervacation.Wesetoffearlyinthemorning.Unluckily,itbegantorainonthehalfway.Igotwetallthrough,feelingcoldandtired.SoIcouldn'thelpcomplainingandwantedtogiveup.Justatthattime,myfatherencouragedmenottogiveupandputhiscoatonmesoftly.Hetoldme,“Wewon