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PAGEPAGE9Part4Writing記敘文寫作寫作題目你的學(xué)校近期舉行了一次籃球比賽。假定你是學(xué)校英語報的記者,請寫一篇短文,報道這場比賽的決賽。內(nèi)容包括:1.比賽的時間、地點和人物;2.賽前的準(zhǔn)備情況、比賽的過程及結(jié)果;3.你對于這次活動的評論。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
思路點撥主題描述一次籃球比賽體裁記敘文人稱第一、三人稱時態(tài)以一般過去時為主布局文章可分為三部分。第一部分:點出比賽的時間、地點和人物;第二部分:描述賽前的準(zhǔn)備情況、比賽的過程及結(jié)果;第三部分:寫出你對于這次活動的評論。遣詞造句Ⅰ.用本單元所學(xué)單詞或短語填空1.v.抓住
2.v.戰(zhàn)勝,擊敗
3.n.投籃
4.n.對手
5.n.合作
6.n.隊友
7.adj.非凡的;不同尋常的
8.n.自信
9.體育賽事
10.日復(fù)一日
11.為……而競爭;力爭……
12.放棄
13.超出某人的預(yù)期
14.團(tuán)隊精神
15.……的關(guān)鍵
16.促成
答案1.eration6.teammate7.remarkable8.self-belief9.sportsevent10.dayinanddayout11.fightfor12.giveup13.beyondone'sexpectations14.teamspirit15.thekeyto16.contributetoⅡ.本單元語塊、語法運用1.完成句子(1)這場體育賽事前學(xué)生們花了很多時間為籃球比賽做準(zhǔn)備。Studentsspentalotoftimethebasketballgamebeforethesportsevent.
(2)對他們來說,日復(fù)一日地練習(xí)是不容易的。Itwasnoteasyforthemtopractise.
(3)每個隊都為贏得比賽而戰(zhàn)。Eachteamthegame.
(4)最后,二班以一次投籃命中擊敗了對手。Intheend,Class2withoneshotintothebasket.
(5)這件事情出乎每個人的意料。Thisthingwas.
答案(1)preparingfor(2)dayinanddayout(3)foughtforwinning(4)defeatedtheopponent(5)beyondeveryone'sexpectations2.句式升級(6)將句(2)升級為動名詞短語作主語的句子
(7)將句(4)和句(5)合并為含有非限制性定語從句的句子
答案(6)Practisingdayinanddayoutwasnoteasyforthem.(7)Intheend,Class2defeatedtheopponentwithoneshotintothebasket,whichwasbeyondeveryone'sexpectations.連句成篇
參考范文OnApril10,thebasketballfinalbetweenClass1andClass2beganonthebasketballcourt.Studentsspentalotoftimepreparingforthebasketballgamebeforethesportsevent.Practisingdayinanddayoutwasnoteasyforthem.However,eachteamfoughtforwinningthegame.Atfirst,Class2fellbehindClass1inthegame,buttheydidn'tgiveupandseizedeveryopportunitytoattack.Intheend,Class2defeatedtheopponentwithoneshotintothebasket,whichwasbeyondeveryone'sexpectations.Asaresult,theirdreamcametrueandtheywonthegameduetothecooperationbetweenteammates.AsfarasIamconcerned,theteamspiritisthekeytotheirremarkableperformanceandself-beliefalsocontributestotheirsuccess.寫作積累1.After-schoolactivitiescanbringusamusementandhelpustorelaxourselves,amongwhichplayingbasketballismyfavorite.2.Goingoutdoorsandplayingteamgameswithyourfriendsareeffectivewaystokeepagoodmood.3.Isuggestthatourschoolshouldorganizethiskindofactivitymorefrequently.4.Iproposethatyoushouldkeepthebalancebetweenyourstudyandentertainment,suchassports,listeningtomusicandsoon.5.Runningisthemostpopularformofrelaxationthatalmostallcanenjoy.6.Ithinkofrunningasthemostbeneficialactivityinmysparetime.7.Notonlydoesfootballgivemealotofhappiness,butalsoitbringsmechanges.8.It'stimetostayawayfromthecomputerandtotakepartinsportsactivities.9.Sportsactivitieslikeroller-skatingprovideagoodchancetodoexercise.10.Whenitcomestosports,somebelievebasketballisthemostpopularonewhileotherslikefootballbetter.11.Despitethefactthatmostofthemlikeswimming,Iwouldliketochooserunning.12.Manyhavefoundphysicalexerciseisaproductivewaytodealwithstressandimprovetheirhealth.13.Peoplearecomingtorealizethenecessityofsports.Webelievethatsportswillhelptobuildupthebodybetter.14.Wehavebeenbroughtuptobelievethatstudyisthemostimportantthing.Yetexerciseisalsoveryimportant.15.Childrenareundergoingfastphysicaldevelopment,solackofphysicalexercisemayproduceadisastrousinfluenceontheirlaterlife.16.Nowadays,itisgenerallybelievedthattakingphysicalexerciseisanimportantpartofahealthylife-style.17.Takingaccountofallthesefactors,wemayreachtheconclusionthatdoingphysicalexerciseisveryessentialtous.實戰(zhàn)演練(2021山東淄博高二上期末,)假如你是李華,你的美國筆友Jim得知你上周參加了學(xué)校舉行的運動會,他對此很感興趣。請你用英文給他寫封郵件,內(nèi)容包括:1.運動會的情況;2.你參加的項目;3.你的感受。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。DearJim,
Yours,LiHua概要寫作寫作題目閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。InNewYorkCitypublicschools,176differentlanguagesarespokenamongthemorethan1millionstudents.For160,000children,Englishisnottheirfirstlanguage.NewYork'sDepartmentofEducationmakeslearningbetterforthesestudentsbyprovidingdual-languageprograms.Studentsaretaughtintwolanguages,Englishandanotherone,likeChineseorRussian.Math,socialstudies,scienceandallotherregularcoursesaretaughtinbothlanguages.Andtheylearnaboutthecultureoftheothercountry.MiladyBaezisDeputyChancellor(副局長)ofEnglishLanguageLearnersandStudentSupport.Shesaysthesedual-languageprogramswillhelpchildrensucceedinthefuture.“Thejobsofthefuturerequirethatourstudentsknowmorethanonelanguage.Theyaregoingtobetravelingabroad,ortheyaregoingtobecommunicatingwithpeoplefromallovertheworld.Thiswillopendoorsforthem.”ShuyaZhangteachesadual-languageclass.Shesaystheprogramhelpschildrengetreadytoworkwithpeopleinothercountries.“Nowadays,manycountriesstartedeconomicrelationshipswithChina.LotsofcompanieshavebeenmovedtoChina.Theyneedpeoplewithbilingual(會說兩種語言的)skills.”Middleschoolstudentsmightnothavejobsontheirmindsyet.ForKequingJaing,shelikeskeepingupherfirstlanguage,Mandarin.“ItmakesmefeelthatIamhomebecauseIcanspeakinChinese,learninChinese,whilelearninginEnglish.SoitmakesmefeelbetterandmakesmeunderstandmoreaboutthetaskI'mlearning.”Anotherstudent,AnastasiaHudikova,cametotheUnitedStateswhenshewas2yearsold.ShesaystheRussian-Englishprogramkeepsherconnectedtoherheritage(傳統(tǒng))andherparentshappy.“They'rereallyhappyabouttheprogram.TheyarereallyhappythatIcanpreservemycultureandmylanguage,andthatIcanspeakitfluentlyinschool.”TheNewYorkschoolsalsoofferdual-languageprogramsinsevenotherlanguages:Arabic,French,HaitianCreole,Hebrew,Korean,PolishandSpanish.Thereareplanstoaddevenmorelanguagesinthefuture.文本分析Ⅰ.語篇解讀本文是一篇說明文,采用“呈現(xiàn)現(xiàn)象(Paragraph1)→講述不同人的看法(Paragraphs2—4)→總結(jié)(Paragraph5)”的形式,結(jié)構(gòu)比較清晰。Ⅱ.段落主題全文共分五段。第一段主要介紹了紐約教育部為了讓母語非英語的學(xué)生能受到更好的教育而提供了雙語項目;第二段介紹了MiladyBaez的觀點——雙語教學(xué)有助于學(xué)生在未來取得成功;第三段介紹了一位雙語教學(xué)的老師ShuyaZhang的觀點——雙語教學(xué)能夠讓學(xué)生們準(zhǔn)備好未來與其他國家的人合作;第四段介紹了兩個學(xué)生對雙語教學(xué)的看法;第五段介紹了雙語教學(xué)在紐約的一些學(xué)校的現(xiàn)狀以及未來的發(fā)展。每段主旨如下:第一段:NewYork'sDepartmentofEducationmakeslearningbetterforthesestudentsbyprovidingdual-languageprograms.第二段:MiladyBaezsaysthesedual-languageprogramswillhelpchildrensucceedinthefuture.第三段:ShuyaZhangsaystheprogramhelpschildrengetreadytoworkwithpeopleinothercountries.第四段:TheprogrammakesKequingJaingkeepingupherfirstlanguageandAnastasiaHudikovaconnectedtoherheritage.第五段:Thereareplanstoaddevenmorelanguagesinthefuture.篩選、整合信息、轉(zhuǎn)換表達(dá)要點1:第一段主旨可概括為要點1,可將makeslearningbetter改為,并用不定式短語作目的狀語;可用動詞替換providing;補(bǔ)充對學(xué)生身份的解釋信息:Englishisnottheirfirstlanguage,改為定語從句.
要點2:第二、三段主旨可概括為要點2,該要點略去原句的主語,將句子主語改為以突出該項目帶來的好處;用句型合并句子;用aroundtheworld替換原文的inothercountries,用becomesuccessful替換原文的succeed。
要點3:第四段主旨可概括為要點3,用連接,進(jìn)一步闡述該項目帶來的好處;用guaranteethecontinuouspracticeoftheirnativelanguage替換keepingupherfirstlanguage;用thelearningoftheirnativeculture替換connectedtoherheritage;用非限制性定語從句補(bǔ)充該項目對他們的發(fā)展帶來的好處。
要點4:第五段主旨可概括為要點4,將原文中句子改為被動語態(tài):主語改為moredual-languageprograms,動詞planstoadd改為一般將來時的被動語態(tài)。
答案要點1:improvetheirlearning;offer;whosefirstlanguageisnotEnglish要點2:dual-languageprograms;notonly...butalso要點3:Inaddition;whichisbeneficialtotheirdevelopment要點4:willbeadded連句成篇
參考范文Toimprovetheirlearning,NewYork'sDepartmentofEducationoffersdual-languageprogramstothosestudentswhosefirstlanguageisnotEnglish.(要點1)Dual-languageprogramswillnotonlyhelpchildrenworkwithpeoplearoundtheworld,butalsohelpthembecomesuccessfulinthefuture.(要點2)Inaddition,itcanguaranteethecontinuouspracticeoftheirnativelanguageandthelearningoftheirnativeculture,whichisbeneficialtotheirdevelopment.(要點3)Consideringallthebenefits,moredual-languageprogramswillbeaddedinthefuture.(要點4)寫作積累概要寫作常用關(guān)聯(lián)詞:一、順序概括要點時,可以使用表示順序的連接詞,這樣可以使文章脈絡(luò)清楚。first,second,third首先、第二、第三firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally首先、第二、第三、最后tobeginwith,then,furthermore,finally首先、然后、其次、最后tostartwith,next,inaddition,finally首先、然后、其次、最后firstofall,besides,lastbutnotleast首先、其次、最后但同樣重要的是mostimportantofall,moreover,finally最重要的、再者、最后二、并列aswellas也;notonly...but(also)不僅……而且……;including包括三、對比ontheonehand...ontheotherhand...一方面……另一方面……;foronething...foranother...一方面……另一方面……;onthecontrary與此相反;nevertheless然而;comparedto與……相比;incontrastwith與……成對比四、遞進(jìn)even甚至;besides除了……之外(還);what'smore更重要的是;as
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