2023年GMAT作文范文及解析：用假花還是真花

第頁共頁2023年GMAT作文范文及解析：用假花還是真花2023年GMAT作文范文及解析：用假花還是真花ThefollowingeditorialappearedintheSouthForkGazette.1，花枯萎了不只和澆水次數(shù)有關(guān)2，不能只從本錢考慮要用假花還是真花還要從收益角度3，最后的那個調(diào)查不可靠4，那個公司提供的本錢數(shù)據(jù)是否可靠sle1Inthethirdplace,thesurveyedbytheauthorisworthlessbecausesomeofitsdetailshavenotbeenprovided.Withoutadditionalinformation,suchasthetotalnumberofpeopleinthecityortheframeworkofwhowereconducted,theresultofthesurveymaylackrepresentative.Wecanpicturethatthecityhasapopulationofmorethan5million,butthissurveyconductedonly1200people,especiallyreaderswhoareeasilyaffectedbythegazette'seditorial.Sincetheauthormitslogicalmistakesmentionedaboveandfailstoconsiderthewholesituationprehensively,hisideasshouldnotbeadopted.Theconclusionwouldbestrengthenedifhecanobviatethesethreemajorlogicalmsitakes.Sle2Inthisargument,theauthormakesaconclusionthatthecityshouldplantartificialflowersinsteadofrealflowersinbigdecorativepotonMainStreet.Theauthor'slineofreasoningisestablishedonhisassumptionthatbyplantingplasticflowers,thecitycansavemoney.Tosupportsuchanassumption,theauthorcitesthreesupportiveexles:lastyear,thecitycontractedwithFlowerPowertoplantavarietyofflowersandtowaterthemeach,yetbymidsummermanyoftheplantswerewilted;althoughtheinitialcostforplasticflowersistwiceasmuchasrealplants,thecitycansavemoneyaftertwoyears;finally,publicreactionwilldefinitelysupporttheproposal.Atthefirstglance,theargumentseemstobesomewhatconvincing.However,acloseanddeepreflectionrevealshowgroundlessandproblematicitis.Inthefollowingparagraphs,Ishouldelaboratethemainflawsintheargument.Inthefirstplace,theauthorfailstoexploretherealunderlyingreasonsforthedeathoftheplantsandflowers.Instead,hemakesagratuitousassumptionthatmorefrequentwateringisneeded.However,theauthorfailstosubstantiatehispoint.Innocasecanthemerefactthattheflowersarewiltedhelptobuildupsuchanassumptionflawlessly.Itispossiblethatmanyoftheplantswerewiltedbecausetheyrequireddriersoilsforsurvivalandthriving.Unlesstheauthorcanbuildupacausalcorrelationbetweenthesurvivaloftheplantsandmoreneededwatering,theassumptionremainsquestionableandopentodiscussion.Inthesecondplace,theauthormentionsthatplantingplasticflowersmeansthesavingofmoneyinthelongrun.However,thecredibilityofsuchanassertionhasyettobeestablished,especiallysincetheauthorignorestopointoutthatmostoftheplasticplantswilllastformorethantwoyears.Oneobviousrebuttaltotheauthor'sreasoningisthatinvestigationsshowthatamajorityofplasticplants,ifplantedontheMainStreet,canonlylastforatmosttwoyear