讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習火中救人-高考英語二輪復習

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習1——火中救人題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Atfirst,MichaelSurrelldidn'tseetheblacksmokeorflamesshootingfromthewindowsofhisneighbors'home.HeandhiswifehadjustparkedaroundthecornerfromtheirownhouseinAllentown,Pennsylvania,whentheygotacallfromoneofhisdaughters:“Thehousenextdoorisonfire!”Hewenttoinvestigate.That'swhenhesawawomancryingdesperatelyontheirporch.“Thebaby'sinthere!”thewomancried.Thoughthefiredepartmenthadbeencalled,Surrell,then64,instinctivelyraninside.“Thebaby”was8-year-oldTiaraRoberts,thewoman'sgranddaughter.Enteringtheburninghousewaslike“runningintoabucketofblackpaint,”Surrellsays.Thethicksmokecausedhimtostumbleblindlyaround,burnedhiseyes,andmadeitimpossibletobreathe.Theconditionswouldhavebeendangeroustoanyone,butforSurrell,whohaschronicobstructivepulmonarydisease（慢性阻塞性肺病）,theywerelife-threatening.4續(xù)寫原文Afterafewminutesinthesmoke-filledhouse,heretreatedoutsidetocatchhisbreath.Surrellknewhecouldn'tholdhisbreathforlong.Takingadeepbreath,hewentinasecondtime.Thedarknesswasoverwhelming.Yetbecausethehousehadasimilarlayout（布局）tohis,hefoundthestairsandmadeittothesecondfloor.Heturnedtotherightandwasmetbyintenseheat.Hewasalreadyoutofbreath.Histhroatandlungsburnedasifhe'dbreathedinfireinsteadofthesmokeandsootintheair.Everyblinkstunghiseyes.Allhecouldhearwasthecracklingandpoppingofburningwood.Thenasoftbutdistinctmoan（呻吟聲）emerged.Stillunabletosee,Surrellfelltohiskneesonthehotwoodfloor.Hecrawledtowardthesound,feelingaroundforanysignofthegirl.5段首句Paragraph1:Finally,hetouchedsomething—ashoe,thenanankle.Paragraph2:Surrellwokeupinthehospitalacoupleofdayslater.6Part2題目分析7點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點8續(xù)寫建議第一段：最后，他摸了摸東西——一只鞋，然后是一只腳踝。他拉著蒂亞拉向他。她的身體很虛弱，沒有呼吸。他把她抱進懷里，站了起來。他感覺到臉頰上火焰的熱度。轉(zhuǎn)過身，他在煙霧中掙扎，盲目地跑進了黑暗中。蘇雷爾把蒂亞拉放在門廊上。他開始心肺復蘇術(shù)-這是他第一次這樣做。很快，她睜開眼睛，自己吸了一口氣。蘇雷爾的喉嚨閉上了。插9續(xù)寫建議第二段：幾天后，蘇雷爾在醫(yī)院醒來。他的氣管和肺部上部嚴重燒傷。他在醫(yī)院呆了一個多星期?；馂氖固K雷爾的肺部狀況惡化，即使在兩年后，他仍然感受到了這種影響。結(jié)果，他服用了額外的藥物來幫助打開他的氣道?！斑@是一個很小的代價，”他說?！拔視谛奶性僮鲆淮?。不會再考慮了。10Part3范文呈現(xiàn)11范文呈現(xiàn)Finally,hetouchedsomething-ashoe,thenanankle.HepulledTiaratowardhim.Herbodywasweakandshewasn'tbreathing.Hehuggedherintohisarmsandstood.Hefelttheheatoftheflamesonhischeeks.Turning,hefoughtthroughthesmokeandranblindlyintotheblackness.SurrellputTiaradownontheporch.HestartedCPR-thefirsttimehe’deverdoneso.Soonsheopenedhereyesandtookabreathonherown.Surrel'sthroatclosedoff.12范文呈現(xiàn)Surrellwokeupinthehospitalacoupleofdayslater.Hesufferedsevereburnstohiswindpipeandtheupperportionofhislungs.Hespentoveraweekinthehospital.ThefireworsenedSurrell’spulmonarycondition,andhefeelstheeffectseventwoyearslater.Asaresult,hetakesextramedicationthathelpsopenhisairways.“It’sasmallpricetopay,”hesays.“I’ddoitagaininaheartbeat.