模塊ⅦUnit2創(chuàng)新作文市公開課金獎(jiǎng)市賽課一等獎(jiǎng)?wù)n件

第1頁第1頁【寫作任務(wù)】依據(jù)題目《師父被熏暈過去了》漫畫和下面要求寫一篇關(guān)于河水污染感想。1．情況；2.原因；3.后果；4.辦法。詞數(shù)：120左右。第2頁第2頁____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思緒點(diǎn)撥】1．單幅圖作文需要在理解基礎(chǔ)上，結(jié)合提醒發(fā)揮自己合抱負(fù)像，所表示內(nèi)容有頭有尾，有條有理。2．本文三個(gè)層次(1)陳說圖畫所表示某一天所發(fā)生事，用過去時(shí)為主；(2)陳說發(fā)生該事件“師父被熏暈過去了”原因，用過去時(shí)；(3)針對(duì)“后果”，人們和政府采用什么辦法和作者有何希望，以現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。第3頁第3頁【詞匯熱身】1．walk________ariver涉水過河2．fell________thehorse掉下馬3．pourwastewaterandrubbish________theriver往河里傾倒污水和垃圾4．take________todosth.采用辦法做……5．makerivers________凈化河流【答案】1.o4.measures/steps5.clean第4頁第4頁【一句多譯】1．他們發(fā)覺河水太臭以至于難以呼吸。①________________________________________________________________________②________________________________________________________________________第5頁第5頁2．污水致死了魚和其它河水里生物。①________________________________________________________________________②________________________________________________________________________第6頁第6頁【答案】1.①Theyfoundthesmellofthewatersobadthattheycouldhardlybreathe.②Theyfoundthesmellofthewatertoobadtobreathe.2．①Fishandotherlivingthingsintherivergotkilledbythepollutedwater.②Fishandotherlivingthingsdiedofthepollutedwater.第7頁第7頁【自主操練】________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第8頁第8頁【自我校正】________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第9頁第9頁【范文內(nèi)化】OnedaySunWukongtogether_with_his_Master_and_brothers_was_walking①acrossariver.SuddenlyhisMasterfelloffthehorsebythebadsmellofriverwater.Theyfoundthewaterso_dirty_that②theycouldhardlybreathe.第10頁第10頁Alotoffactoriesalongtheriveralwayspouredtheirwastewaterandrubbishstraightintotheriverwhichmadetheriverwaterpolluted.Inthiswaymostofthefishintheriverwerekilled.Iftheriverwateralloverthecountryispollutedlikethis，nolivingthingswillexistinthewater.Nowmoreandmorepeoplehave_come_to_realize③howseriousthisproblemis.Ourgovernmentisdoing_its_best_to_take_measures_to_fight_against_pollution.④Weexpectthatthewaterineveryriverwillbemadecleaner_and_cleaner⑤