高三英語(yǔ)作文公開(kāi)課如何使你的作文顏值與才華齊飛

高三英語(yǔ)作文公開(kāi)課如何使你的作文顏值與才華齊飛第1頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)欣賞一個(gè)人，

始于顏值，

敬于才華,

…第2頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)Howaboutacomposition?欣賞一篇文章

始于“顏值”

敬于“才華”第3頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)作文五檔：（從教師閱卷印象角度劃分）漂漂亮亮（21—25分）有模有樣（16—20分）馬馬虎虎（11—15分）稀里糊涂（6—10分）一塌糊涂（0—5分）第4頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)顏值代表第5頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)唐美林22.5第6頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)黃佳倩21第7頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)高“顏值”的文章能夠評(píng)委老師留下好印象，先聲奪人。但是“好文章”卻不僅限于只有“顏值”，…….第8頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)詞匯句型銜接過(guò)渡第9頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)回顧作文題目假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Andy即將到你所在的中學(xué)做一年的交換生，想提前了解一些情況，故向你求助。請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)一封回信，提供有關(guān)天氣、當(dāng)?shù)仫嬍沉?xí)慣、學(xué)校生活方面的信息。第10頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)高級(jí)表達(dá)過(guò)渡詞非限制性定語(yǔ)從句諺語(yǔ)賓語(yǔ)從句動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)第11頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)唐美林22.5第12頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)Itgoeswithoutsayingthatourclassmateisextremelywarm-heartedandopen-minded.Ifirmlybelievethatyouwillhaveacolorfulandmeaningfulschoollifehere.陳梅第13頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)Andourschooloftenhold

activitiestoenrichourschoollife,sowehaveameaningfulandcolorfulschoollife.Topromoteourfriendship,Iwillkeepagoodrelationshipwithyou.Ibelieveyoucanfitinourschoollife……陳小露第14頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)怎樣能使我們的文章顏值與才華齊飛？第15頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)Tips1：顏值★1、分段要合理。絕大多數(shù)高考范文以及高分作文都是分為2~3段的，也有少數(shù)是4-5段的?！?/p>

2、書(shū)寫(xiě)要美觀。書(shū)寫(xiě)要符合英文書(shū)寫(xiě)習(xí)慣，字母的大小，字母之間的距離要?jiǎng)蚍Q，盡量減少涂改、增補(bǔ)的現(xiàn)象。第16頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)Tips2：詞匯1、高級(jí)詞匯代替低級(jí)詞匯chance---opportunity;so---thereforeimportant---vital2、短語(yǔ)代替單個(gè)單詞important---beofgreatimportanceshould---besupposedtohelpsb---dosbafavorvisit---payavisitto可參考三維設(shè)計(jì)P136頁(yè)第17頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)Tips3：句型定語(yǔ)從句賓語(yǔ)從句非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞被動(dòng)句名詞性從句強(qiáng)調(diào)句With的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)常用諺語(yǔ)省略句倒裝句…….第18頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)Thereisnodoubtthat...Itgoeswithoutsayingthat毫無(wú)疑問(wèn),……Thereisnodoubtthat/Itgoeswithoutsayingthatmoreandmorestudentschoosetostudyabroad.

Moreandmorestudentschoosetostudyabroad.固定句型：同位語(yǔ)從句第19頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)MoreattentionshouldbegiventoteachingandlearningEnglish.Measuresshouldbetakentoprotectourmotherriver.固定句型：被動(dòng)句Moreattentionshouldbegivento……Measuresshouldbetakento……第20頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)Itisbelievedthat...Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat.....人們認(rèn)為Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthathealthismoreimportantthanwealth.Healthismoreimportantthanwealth.固定句型：主語(yǔ)從句第21頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)Onlyinthiswaycansbdo….Onlybydoing...cansbdo....只有通過(guò)這種方式我們才能....Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.Onlybytakingexercise

canwe

keephealthy.固定句型：倒裝句第22頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)IfIwereyou,Iwould……IfIwereyou,Iwouldtakepartinmoreactivities.固定句型：虛擬語(yǔ)氣Itishightimethatsbdidsth/shoulddosthItishightimethatwepaid/shouldpay

moreattentiontoourenvironment第23頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)1、Itis/was+被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+that/who+其余成分固定句型：強(qiáng)調(diào)句2、Itis/wasnotuntil……that……3、用do來(lái)強(qiáng)調(diào)動(dòng)詞Ibelieveyoucandoit.Idobelieveyoucandoit.Ourteacheralwayshelpuswhenweareintrouble.Itisourteacherthatalwayshelpuswhenweareintrouble.第24頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)我認(rèn)為......Iamconvincedthat….AsfarasIamconcerned,…..Frommypointofview,…..FromwhereIstand,……第25頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)諺語(yǔ)格言名言1、Afriendinneedisafriendindeed2、Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.3、WheninRoam,doasaRomansdo.4、Practicemakesperfect.5、Nopains,nogains.6、Failureisthemotherofsuccess.7、Roamwasnotbuildinaday.8、Everycoinhastwosides.……Asanoldsayinggoes,“……”第26頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)firstly,secondly,thirdly,then,finally,intheend,what’smore,moreover,moreimportantly,besides，inadditiononeonhand,ontheotherhand，onthecontrary，therefore，asaresult，inotherwords，asyouknow,asweallknow,generallyspeaking,asamatteroffacttotellyouthetruth……Tips4：銜接過(guò)渡第27頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)第28頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)第29頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)可能整篇不完美，也許有一個(gè)段落應(yīng)得稱贊；沒(méi)有一個(gè)段落完美，也許有一個(gè)句子值得肯定；沒(méi)有一句子完美，也許有一個(gè)詞用得精彩。Nevergiveup!!!Aslongasyoukeeptrying,youcansucceed.第30頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)Haveatry:第31頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)DearAndy,

I’mgladtohearthatyouarecomingtostudywithusforayearasanexchangestudent.

It’smygreathonortoprovideyousomeinformationaboutourcityandourschool,hopingitcanhelpyou.

ThereisnodoubtthatourcountryisdifferentfromAmerica,thereforeitisnecessaryforyoutorespectthelocalcustomandgetaccustomedtothelifehere.Inthefirstplace,theweatherhereischangeable.Itiswiseforyoutotakeanumbrellawhenyougoout.第32頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)Inaddition,ourcityhasareputationforitsdeliciousfood.Notonlycanyouenjoythetastyseafood,butalsovariousfruits.However,weallusechopsticks,whichisextremelydifficultforforeigners.Lastbutnotleast,ourschoolisafantasticplacewithmanyafterclassactivities.ourteachersandclassmatesareratherkindandfriendly,youcanturntothemforhelp.Lookingforwardtomeetingyou.Yours,LiHua第33頁(yè)/共38頁(yè)