2016年高考英語新題型-續(xù)寫

讀后續(xù)寫訓(xùn)練12021/5/91Myfatherisa________

tome.teacherfriendsupermanheroliar2021/5/92Sometimesloveishiddenbehindactions,whichmaybeunseentooureyeswithoutspecialattention.Whathaveyoulearnedfromthevideo?2021/5/93Readingforbrief

informationWho:What:acoupleoflovers,God,thedoctor____coupleofloversledan________(envy)lifeinatown.___________(fortunate),themanhadanaccidentandwasseverely_____(injure).Thewoman___________(attend)himdayandnight._________herloverwasstillsleeping,_________(hope),shemadeadeal______God:tobeabutterflyforthreeyearsinexchangefortheman’s________(recover),_____wasahardchoicebuteasytomaketoawillingheart.AenviableUnfortunatelyinjuredattendedtoButhopelesslywithrecoverywhich2021/5/94ReadingforsummaryTheplot（情節(jié)）ofthestoryDevelopmentEndingBeginningClimax(高潮)A.Themanwasbadlyinjuredandshowednosignsofrecovery.B.ThewomandealtwithGodtosaveherloverbutanothergirlappearedbetweenthem.C.Themanandthewomanhadanenviablelove.ACB2021/5/95

*structures（結(jié)構(gòu)）*sentencepatterns

（句式）*words&phrases（詞和短語）1*theme：negative/positive*interpretation（解意）*keywords（關(guān)鍵詞）

*clues（線索）Step3polish（潤色）Step2draft（擬稿）

Step1compose(構(gòu)思）

Readingforwriting2021/5/96

underlinedwordsenjoyingthesunrisethesunsetconsciousnessthechurchGodtearsloveregretbecamethebutterflyflysweetheart-stricken

underlinedwords（選5個以上）who(人物）：God

thebutterflywhere（地點）：thechurchevent（事件）：enjoyingthesunrisethesunsetconsciousnesstearsloveregretbecameflysweetheart-stricken

clues“Icanhelpyou…for

threeyears…”“Yes,Ido!iwon’tregretdoingthat!”Godalsofeltsad…“Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone?”2021/5/97ReadingforcreationThepossibleversionsoftheendinge….b.Themanandthedoctormarried,andthewomanremainedtobeabutterfly.Themanandthedoctormarried,andthewomanleft.c.Themanproposedtothedoctor,butGoduncoveredthetruthtothemanandgavetheseparatedloversahappyreunion.d.Themanproposedtothedoctor,butGoduncoveredthetruthtothemanwhichinvolvedhiminadilemma.Finally,themanleft.√negativenegativepositivenegative2021/5/98Competition2021/5/99Chooseyourteamleader!2021/5/9101.目睹；見證

(2分)vt._________2.他說過的最甜蜜的話(2分)（提示詞sweet）_________________________________3.蝴蝶難過得情不自禁地哭了。(4分)（提示詞tears）__________________________________________________________________see/witnessThesweetestwordshehaseversaidThebutterflycouldn’thelpsheddinghertearssadly./Thebutterflycouldnolongerholdbackthetears./Tearsfilledhereyesandthebutterflycouldnolongercalmdown.2021/5/9112.第三年的最后一天(2分)____________________________Onthelastdayofthethirdyear1.變深；使加深(2分)vt./vi._________deepen3.他們的愛已成為回憶。(4分)____________________________________________________________Theirlovehasbecomememories./Theirlovehasturnedintomemories./Theirlovehasbecomeapast.2021/5/9122.揭露真相(2分)_____________________1.被打動的；受感動的(2分)adj.be_________bytoucheduncoverthetruth/exposethetruth/revealthetruth/moved/impressed3.對于我為他所做的事我從來沒有后悔過。(4分)

（提示詞regret,用倒裝句式）________________________________________________________________NeverhaveIregrettedforwhatIhavedoneforhim.2021/5/9131.喚醒(2分)vt._________awaken/rouse2.遭受許多挫折(2分)_____________________gothroughmanyobstacles/suffermanystruggles3.男人震驚了，越發(fā)覺得后悔和內(nèi)疚(4分)

（提示詞regrets/guilt）____________________________________________________________________________Themanwasshocked,andthefeelingofregretsandguiltgrewstronger.2021/5/914draftParagraphy1:Thebutterflyknewthatalltheseshouldhavebelongedtoher,butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman.Shecoulddonothingbutrestontheman’sshoulderoffandon.__________________________________________________Paragraphy2:Godalsofeltsadandsighedtothebutterfly,“Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone?”________________________________________________________四人一組，完成寫作任務(wù)，每人扮演重要角色如下：Role1：ThemecontrollerRole2：StructurebuilderRole3：GrammarcheckerRole4：Coherence(連貫）master（每人至少寫兩句）

VersionCThemanproposedtothedoctor,butGoduncoveredthetruthtothemanandgavetheseparatedloversahappyreunion.2021/5/915Paragraphy1:Thebutterflyknewthatalltheseshouldhavebelongedtoher,butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman.Shecoulddonothingbutrestontheman’sshoulderoffandon.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________draft

Itwasheartbrokentoseetheirlovedeependaybyday.Timewentbyquickly.OnthelastdayofthethirdyearwhenthedealbetweenGodandthebutterflywasalmostover,themanproposedtohisgirlfriend.Hetookoutabeautifulringandsworethesweetestwordshehaseversaid.Hearingthis,thebutterflycouldn’tbreathe.Herdarkeneyeswerefulloftears.sheflewawaysilentlyingreatgriefanddespair.Atthatmoment,sherealizedthathewouldn’tknowhersacrificesandtheirlovehasbecomeapast.2021/5/916Paragraphy2:Godalsofeltsadandsighedtothebutterfly,“Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone?”____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________draft

Thebutterflysaid,“No.NeverhaveIregrettedforwhatIhavedoneforhim.”movedbyherwords,Godwaslostinthought:shehadgonethroughsomanystrugglesandsheshouldn’tdeservethat.So,thedaybeforethemanandthedoctor’swedding,Goduncoveredthewholetruthtohim.Obviously,themanwasshockedandthefeelingofregretsandguiltgrewstronger.Thelovedeepinsidewasawakened.Herushedtothechurchtobegforthewoman’sforgiveness.Andhedeterminedthatthistimehewon’tlethergo.Hewilltakehertoenjoythesunriseandthesunsetforalifetime.

2021/5/917Paragraphy1:ThebutterflyknewthatalltheseshouldhavebelongedToher,butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman.Shecoulddonothingbutrestontheman’sshoulderoffandon.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________afterrevisionWitnessingtheirlovedeepen

witheachpassingdayswasextremelyhardforher.Timeslippedbyquickly.OnthelastdayofthethirdyearwhenthedealbetweenGodandthebutterflywasalmostover,themanproposedtohisgirlfriendwithabeautifulring,swearingthesweetestwordshehaseversaid.Thebutterflycouldnolongerholdbacktears.Shewastremblingandcouldnotfeelherheartbeating.Withdeepgriefandgreatdespair,sheflewaway.Atthatmoment,shecompletelyrealizedthattimehasburiedeverythingaswellashersacrifices,andtheirlovehasturnedintodustymemories.2021/5/918Paragraphy2:Godalsofeltsadandsighedtothebutterfly,“Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone?”______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thebutterflycleanedhertearyeyesandsaid,“No.IneverfeelsorryforanythingIdoforhim.”Struckbyherreply,Godwaslostinthought:thewomanwhosufferedsomanystrugglesshouldn’tdeserve

suchatragedy.Andhehadotherplans.Thedaybeforetheirwedding,Godreveal