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讀后續(xù)寫訓(xùn)練12021/5/91Myfatherisa________

tome.teacherfriendsupermanheroliar2021/5/92Sometimesloveishiddenbehindactions,whichmaybeunseentooureyeswithoutspecialattention.Whathaveyoulearnedfromthevideo?2021/5/93Readingforbrief

informationWho:What:acoupleoflovers,God,thedoctor____coupleofloversledan________(envy)lifeinatown.___________(fortunate),themanhadanaccidentandwasseverely_____(injure).Thewoman___________(attend)himdayandnight._________herloverwasstillsleeping,_________(hope),shemadeadeal______God:tobeabutterflyforthreeyearsinexchangefortheman’s________(recover),_____wasahardchoicebuteasytomaketoawillingheart.AenviableUnfortunatelyinjuredattendedtoButhopelesslywithrecoverywhich2021/5/94ReadingforsummaryTheplot(情節(jié))ofthestoryDevelopmentEndingBeginningClimax(高潮)A.Themanwasbadlyinjuredandshowednosignsofrecovery.B.ThewomandealtwithGodtosaveherloverbutanothergirlappearedbetweenthem.C.Themanandthewomanhadanenviablelove.ACB2021/5/95

*structures(結(jié)構(gòu))*sentencepatterns

(句式)*words&phrases(詞和短語)1*theme:negative/positive*interpretation(解意)*keywords(關(guān)鍵詞)

*clues(線索)Step3polish(潤色)Step2draft(擬稿)

Step1compose(構(gòu)思)

Readingforwriting2021/5/96

underlinedwordsenjoyingthesunrisethesunsetconsciousnessthechurchGodtearsloveregretbecamethebutterflyflysweetheart-stricken

underlinedwords(選5個以上)who(人物):God

thebutterflywhere(地點):thechurchevent(事件):enjoyingthesunrisethesunsetconsciousnesstearsloveregretbecameflysweetheart-stricken

clues“Icanhelpyou…for

threeyears…”“Yes,Ido!iwon’tregretdoingthat!”Godalsofeltsad…“Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone?”2021/5/97ReadingforcreationThepossibleversionsoftheendinge….b.Themanandthedoctormarried,andthewomanremainedtobeabutterfly.Themanandthedoctormarried,andthewomanleft.c.Themanproposedtothedoctor,butGoduncoveredthetruthtothemanandgavetheseparatedloversahappyreunion.d.Themanproposedtothedoctor,butGoduncoveredthetruthtothemanwhichinvolvedhiminadilemma.Finally,themanleft.√negativenegativepositivenegative2021/5/98Competition2021/5/99Chooseyourteamleader!2021/5/9101.目睹;見證

(2分)vt._________2.他說過的最甜蜜的話(2分)(提示詞sweet)_________________________________3.蝴蝶難過得情不自禁地哭了。(4分)(提示詞tears)__________________________________________________________________see/witnessThesweetestwordshehaseversaidThebutterflycouldn’thelpsheddinghertearssadly./Thebutterflycouldnolongerholdbackthetears./Tearsfilledhereyesandthebutterflycouldnolongercalmdown.2021/5/9112.第三年的最后一天(2分)____________________________Onthelastdayofthethirdyear1.變深;使加深(2分)vt./vi._________deepen3.他們的愛已成為回憶。(4分)____________________________________________________________Theirlovehasbecomememories./Theirlovehasturnedintomemories./Theirlovehasbecomeapast.2021/5/9122.揭露真相(2分)_____________________1.被打動的;受感動的(2分)adj.be_________bytoucheduncoverthetruth/exposethetruth/revealthetruth/moved/impressed3.對于我為他所做的事我從來沒有后悔過。(4分)

(提示詞regret,用倒裝句式)________________________________________________________________NeverhaveIregrettedforwhatIhavedoneforhim.2021/5/9131.喚醒(2分)vt._________awaken/rouse2.遭受許多挫折(2分)_____________________gothroughmanyobstacles/suffermanystruggles3.男人震驚了,越發(fā)覺得后悔和內(nèi)疚(4分)

(提示詞regrets/guilt)____________________________________________________________________________Themanwasshocked,andthefeelingofregretsandguiltgrewstronger.2021/5/914draftParagraphy1:Thebutterflyknewthatalltheseshouldhavebelongedtoher,butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman.Shecoulddonothingbutrestontheman’sshoulderoffandon.__________________________________________________Paragraphy2:Godalsofeltsadandsighedtothebutterfly,“Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone?”________________________________________________________四人一組,完成寫作任務(wù),每人扮演重要角色如下:Role1:ThemecontrollerRole2:StructurebuilderRole3:GrammarcheckerRole4:Coherence(連貫)master(每人至少寫兩句)

VersionCThemanproposedtothedoctor,butGoduncoveredthetruthtothemanandgavetheseparatedloversahappyreunion.2021/5/915Paragraphy1:Thebutterflyknewthatalltheseshouldhavebelongedtoher,butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman.Shecoulddonothingbutrestontheman’sshoulderoffandon.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________draft

Itwasheartbrokentoseetheirlovedeependaybyday.Timewentbyquickly.OnthelastdayofthethirdyearwhenthedealbetweenGodandthebutterflywasalmostover,themanproposedtohisgirlfriend.Hetookoutabeautifulringandsworethesweetestwordshehaseversaid.Hearingthis,thebutterflycouldn’tbreathe.Herdarkeneyeswerefulloftears.sheflewawaysilentlyingreatgriefanddespair.Atthatmoment,sherealizedthathewouldn’tknowhersacrificesandtheirlovehasbecomeapast.2021/5/916Paragraphy2:Godalsofeltsadandsighedtothebutterfly,“Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone?”____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________draft

Thebutterflysaid,“No.NeverhaveIregrettedforwhatIhavedoneforhim.”movedbyherwords,Godwaslostinthought:shehadgonethroughsomanystrugglesandsheshouldn’tdeservethat.So,thedaybeforethemanandthedoctor’swedding,Goduncoveredthewholetruthtohim.Obviously,themanwasshockedandthefeelingofregretsandguiltgrewstronger.Thelovedeepinsidewasawakened.Herushedtothechurchtobegforthewoman’sforgiveness.Andhedeterminedthatthistimehewon’tlethergo.Hewilltakehertoenjoythesunriseandthesunsetforalifetime.

2021/5/917Paragraphy1:ThebutterflyknewthatalltheseshouldhavebelongedToher,butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman.Shecoulddonothingbutrestontheman’sshoulderoffandon.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________afterrevisionWitnessingtheirlovedeepen

witheachpassingdayswasextremelyhardforher.Timeslippedbyquickly.OnthelastdayofthethirdyearwhenthedealbetweenGodandthebutterflywasalmostover,themanproposedtohisgirlfriendwithabeautifulring,swearingthesweetestwordshehaseversaid.Thebutterflycouldnolongerholdbacktears.Shewastremblingandcouldnotfeelherheartbeating.Withdeepgriefandgreatdespair,sheflewaway.Atthatmoment,shecompletelyrealizedthattimehasburiedeverythingaswellashersacrifices,andtheirlovehasturnedintodustymemories.2021/5/918Paragraphy2:Godalsofeltsadandsighedtothebutterfly,“Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone?”______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thebutterflycleanedhertearyeyesandsaid,“No.IneverfeelsorryforanythingIdoforhim.”Struckbyherreply,Godwaslostinthought:thewomanwhosufferedsomanystrugglesshouldn’tdeserve

suchatragedy.Andhehadotherplans.Thedaybeforetheirwedding,Godreveal

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