孫玉蘭stress概寫公開課

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Whatdoyouthinkisthemostdifficultpartwhenfacedwithsuchanassignment.Whattoinclude…Whattoleaveout….Asummary

isabriefreviewofapieceofwrittenmaterial.Itshouldincludeonlymainideaand

keysupportingdetails.ItshouldNOTincludeminordetailsoranypersonalopinions.(Herzfeld-Pinpkin2007)DefinitionsofasummaryMinordetailsKeysupportingdetailsMainidea(Conclusion)×MainideaKeysupportingdetailsMinordetailsFindthemainidea,keysupportingdetails,andminordetails.

2.Therearenumerousphysicaleffectsofstress.Stresscanaffecttheheart.Itcanincreasethepulserate,maketheheartmissbeats,andcancausehighbloodpressure.Stresscanaffecttherespiratory(呼吸的)system.Itcanleadtoasthmaandcauseapersontobreathetoofast,resultinginalossofimportantcarbondioxide.Stresscanaffectthestomach.Itcancausestomachachesandproblemsofdigestingfood.Theseareonlyafewexamplesofthewiderangeofillnessesandsymptomsresultingfromstress.Therearenumerousphysicaleffectsofstress.Stresscanaffecttheheart

Stresscanaffecttherespiratory(呼吸的)system.

Stresscanaffectthestomach.=..affectotherpartsofthebody…=..affectotherpartsofthebody…Treemapoftheparagraph2.Therearenumerousphysicaleffectsofstress.Stresscanaffecttheheart.Itcanincreasethepulserate,maketheheartmissbeats,andcancausehighbloodpressure.

Stresscanaffecttherespiratory(呼吸的)system.

Itcanleadtoasthmaandcauseapersontobreathetoofast,resultinginalossofimportantcarbondioxide.Stresscanaffectthestomach.

Itcancausestomachachesandproblemsofdigestingfood.Theseareonlyafewexamplesofthewiderangeofillnessesandsymptomsresultingfromstress.Manyphysicalproblemsarecausedbystress,whichcaninfluencetheheart,therespiratorysystem,thestomachandotherpartsofthebody.(A)

Stresscausesmanyphysicalproblems.Besides,itwillalsoaffecttheheart,therespiratorysystemandthestomach.However,theseareonlyafewexamplesresultingfromthestress.(B)ComparethetwoversionsMainideaKeysupportingdetailsManyphysicalproblemsarecausedbystress,…whichcaninfluencetheheart,therespiratorysystem,thestomachandotherpartsofthebody.

Manyphysicalproblemsarecausedbystress,whichcaninfluencetheheart,therespiratorysystem,thestomachandotherpartsofthebody.(A)

"Stoptheworld,Iwanttogetoff!"Thispopularexpressionreferstoafeelingofpanic,orstress,thatmakespeoplewanttostopwhatevertheyaredoing,trytorelax,andbecomecalmagain.Stressisoneofthemostcommoncausesofhealthproblemsinmodernlife.Toomuchstressresultsinphysical,emotional,andmentalhealthproblems.

Therearenumerousphysicaleffectsofstress.Stresscanaffecttheheart.Itcanincreasethepulserate,maketheheartmissbeats,andcancausehighbloodpressure.Stresscanaffecttherespiratory(呼吸的)system.Itcanleadtoasthmaandcauseapersontobreathetoofast,resultinginalossofimportantcarbondioxide.Stresscanaffectthestomach.Itcancausestomachachesandproblemsofdigestingfood.Theseareonlyafewexamplesofthewiderangeofillnessesandsymptomsresultingfromstress.Emotionsarealsoeasilyaffectedbystress.Peoplesufferingfromstressoftenfeelanxious.Theymayhavepanicattacks.Theymayfeeltiredallthetime.Whenpeopleareunderstress,theyoftenoverreacttolittleproblems.Forexample,anormallygentleparentunderalotofstressatworkmayyellatachildfordroppingaglassofjuice.Stresscanmakepeopleangry,moody,ornervousLong-termstresscanleadtoavarietyofseriousmentalillnesses.Depression,anextremefeelingofsadnessandhopelessness,canbetheresultofcontinuedandincreasingstress.Alcoholismandotheraddictionsoftendevelopasaresultofoveruseofalcoholordrugstotrytorelievestress.Ifstressisallowedtocontinue,thenone'smentalhealthisputatrisk.

Itisobviousthatstressisaseriousproblem.Itattacksthebody.Itaffectstheemotions.Untreated,itmayeventuallyresultinmentalillness.Stresshasagreatinfluenceonthehealth,ourfeelings,andourminds.So,reducestress:stoptheworldandrestforawhile.Trytomakeatreemapforparagraphs341.2.3.4.5.Trytomakeatreemapforparagraphs34MainideaKeysupportingdetailsMinordetails(leadin)

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Emotionsarealsoeasilyaffectedbystress.Peoplesufferingfromstressoftenfeelanxious.Theymayhavepanicattacks.Theymayfeeltiredallthetime.Whenpeopleareunderstress,theyoftenoverreacttolittleproblems.Forexample,anormallygentleparentunderalotofstressatworkmayyellatachildfordroppingaglassofjuice.Stresscanmakepeopleangry,moody,ornervous.Emotionsarealsoeasilyaffectedbystress.Stresscanmakepeopleangry,moody,ornervous.Treemapofparagraph3

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Emotionsarealsoeasilyaffectedbystress.Peoplesufferingfromstressoftenfeelanxious.Theymayhavepanicattacks.Theymayfeeltiredallthetime.Whenpeopleareunderstress,theyoftenoverreacttolittleproblems.Forexample,anormallygentleparentunderalotofstressatworkmayyellatachildfordroppingaglassofjuice.

Stresscanmakepeopleangry,moody,ornervous.Trytomakeatreemapforparagraphs234MainideaKeysupportingdetails

4.Long-termstresscanleadtoavarietyofseriousmentalillnesses.Depression,anextremefeelingofsadnessandhopelessness,canbetheresultofcontinuedandincreasingstress.Alcoholismandotheraddictionsoftendevelopasaresultofoveruseofalcoholordrugstotrytorelievestress.Ifstressisallowedtocontinue,thenone'smentalhealthisputatrisk.Long-termstresscanleadtoavarietyofseriousmentalillnesses.Depression,anextremefeelingofsadnessandhopelessness,canbetheresultofcontinuedandincreasingstress.Alcoholismandotheraddictionsoftendevelopasaresultofoveruseofalcoholordrugstotrytorelievestress.similarmeaningTreemapofparagraph4()

4.Long-termstresscanleadtoavarietyofseriousmentalillnesses.Depression,anextremefeelingofsadnessandhopelessness,canbetheresultofcontinuedandincreasingstress.

Alcoholismandotheraddictionsoftendevelopasaresultofoveruseofalcoholordrugstotrytorelievestress.Ifstressisallowedtocontinue,thenone'smentalhealthisputatrisk.

2.Therearenumerousphysicaleffectsofstress.Stresscanaffecttheheart.Itcanincreasethepulserate,maketheheartmissbeats,andcancausehighbloodpressure.Stresscanaffecttherespiratory(呼吸的)system.Itcanleadtoasthmaandcauseapersontobreathetoofast,resultinginalossofimportantcarbondioxide.Stresscanaffectthestomach.Itcancausestomachachesandproblemsofdigestingfood.Theseareonlyafewexamplesofthewiderangeofillnessesandsymptomsresultingfromstress.Manyphysicalproblemsarecausedbystress,whichcaninfluencetheheart,therespiratorysystem，stomachandmanyotherpartsofourbody.句式轉(zhuǎn)換–主動(dòng)-被動(dòng)

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同義詞替換…..3.Emotionsarealsoeasilyaffectedbystress.Peoplesufferingfromstressoftenfeelanxious.Theymayhavepanicattacks.Theymayfeeltiredallthetime.Whenpeopleareunderstress,theyoftenoverreacttolittleproblems.Forexample,anormallygentleparentunderalotofstressatworkmayyellatachildfordroppingaglassofjuice.Stresscanmakepeopleangry,moody,ornervous.

Stressalsoinfluencesemotionseasily,__________peopleangry,moodyornervous.Toomuchstressalsoinfluenceouremotions,leadingto__________________________and______________.makingangermoodinessnervousness句式轉(zhuǎn)換–被動(dòng)-主動(dòng)

改詞性非謂語動(dòng)詞4.Long-termstresscanleadtoavarietyofseriousmentalillnesses.Depression,anextremefeelingofsadnessandhopelessness,canbetheresultofcontinuedandincreasingstress.Alcoholismandotheraddictionsoftendevelopasaresultofoveruseofalcoholordrugstotrytorelievestress.Ifstressisallowedtocontinue,thenone'smentalhealthisputatrisk.______________stresscancause___________seriousmentalillnesses,___________depressionandalcoholism.Continuedvarioussuchas近義詞替換

舉例..suchas/like/including…..Someseriousmentalillnesses,______________depressionandalcoholism__________________ifsomeoneisunderpressure___