中考英語寫作指導(dǎo)課寫作課-整理課件

Howdowewriteacomposition?

基本句型結(jié)構(gòu)的掌握簡(jiǎn)單句的句子結(jié)構(gòu)：1.主語+謂語。（這里的謂語為行為動(dòng)詞）2.主語+謂語+賓語。3.主語+謂語（及物動(dòng)詞）+間接賓語+直接賓語4.主語+謂語+賓語+賓語補(bǔ)足語（補(bǔ)充說明賓語的成分就叫做賓語補(bǔ)足語）。5,主語+系動(dòng)詞（be/keep/stay/remain/taste/look/sound/smell/feel）+表語（形容詞，名詞，介詞短語）這種結(jié)構(gòu)表示一種狀態(tài)復(fù)合句：其結(jié)構(gòu)是：從句+逗號(hào)+主句=主句+從句（1）條件狀語從句：主句+連詞（if,unless）+從句（2）時(shí)間狀語從句：主句+連詞（when,while,after,before,until,till，assoonas）+從句（3）原因狀語從句：

主句+連詞（because）+從句（4）賓語從句：主語+謂語動(dòng)詞+that/if/whether/疑問詞+從句?！?一審(search)二列(list)三加(add)四連(connect)五美(beautify)考場(chǎng)作文五步法Whilewriting假如你叫肖鵬，是英語學(xué)習(xí)小組組長(zhǎng)。英語課上老師要求展開小組調(diào)查，內(nèi)容包括愛好、理想職業(yè)及原因，然后由各組組長(zhǎng)在班內(nèi)匯報(bào)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容提示，介紹本組成員及自己的情況，寫一篇80詞左右的調(diào)查匯報(bào)SurveyNamesHobbiesDreamJobsReasonsYiKewritingwriterBringherpleasureandsuccessLiRuitravellingguideExperiencelifeandlearnaboutdifferentculturesWuFanlookingafteranima1sWWFworkerhelpanimalsliveinpeaceI(XiaoPeng)

審題，明確寫作主題、體裁、人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、字?jǐn)?shù)、結(jié)構(gòu)、提示要點(diǎn)和補(bǔ)充信息。寫作第一步：審(search)假如你叫肖鵬，是英語學(xué)習(xí)小組組長(zhǎng)。英語課上老師要求展開小組調(diào)查，內(nèi)容包括愛好、理想職業(yè)及原因，然后由各組組長(zhǎng)在班內(nèi)匯報(bào)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容提示，介紹本組成員及自己的情況，寫一篇80詞左右的調(diào)查報(bào)告。SurveyNamesHobbiesDreamJobsReasonsYiKewritingwriterBringherpleasureandsuccessLiRuitrave11ingguideExperience1ifeand1earnaboutdifferentcu1turesWuFan1ookingafteranima1sWWFworkerhe1panima1s1iveinpeaceI(XiaoPeng)

主題字?jǐn)?shù)人稱體裁提示要點(diǎn)補(bǔ)充信息一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)用簡(jiǎn)單的單詞、短語和句子列出文章要點(diǎn)提綱。

注意：要根據(jù)自己的英語水平，盡量揚(yáng)長(zhǎng)避短，避難就易。遇到想不起的詞、句時(shí)，就用同（近）義詞或同義句代替，不要使用明知是錯(cuò)的單詞或沒有把握的詞句，并且要綜合考慮所涉及到的情景、場(chǎng)合，語言要地道，符合英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣。列(list)寫作第二步：YiKe'shobbyiswriting.Shewantstobeawriter.Shethinkswritingmakesherrelaxedanditbringsherpleasureandsuccess.LiRuilikes

travellingbest.Hewantstobeaguide.Hecanexperiencedifferentlifeandlearnaboutdifferentcultures.WuFan'shobby

islookingafteranimals.HewantstobeaWWFworkertohelpanimalsliveinpeace.Mydreamistoworkatschool.IwanttobeanEnglishteacher.BecauseIlikespeaking

English.Icanbegoodwithchildrenanditmakesmehappyandpleased.加首尾句，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整。可以采取總分總?cè)问浇Y(jié)構(gòu)或總分一段式結(jié)構(gòu)，開頭或結(jié)尾的句子應(yīng)注意簡(jiǎn)潔，漂亮。加(add)寫作第三步：YiKe'shobbyiswriting.Shewantstobeawriter.Writingbringsherpleasureandsuccess.LiRuilikestravellingbest.Hewantstobeaguide.Hecanexperiencedifferentlifeandlearnaboutdifferentcultures.WuFan'shobbyislookingafteranimals.HewantstobeaWWFworkertohelpanimalsliveinpeace.IwanttobeanEnglishteacher.IlikespeakingEnglish.Icanbegoodwithchildrenanditmakesmehappyandpleased.Boysandgirls，Everyonehashobbiesanddreams.Nowletmeshareourswithyou.Ihopeweenjoyourhobbiesandourdreamscancometrue.aniceheadanicetailanicebody恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使得文章層次清晰，各個(gè)部分銜接自然。連(connect)寫作第四步：英語作文連接詞1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：Firstofall;Firstly/First;Secondly/Second…Andthen;Finally;Intheend;Atlast…

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：Whatismore;Besides;notonly…butalso,

Inaddition;3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However;But;Although;

Ontheonehand…Ontheotherhand…;so…that…4.表因果關(guān)系：Because;As;So;Asaresult，

therefore5.表換一種方式表達(dá)的：Inotherwords;thatistosay…

6.表進(jìn)行舉例說明：Forexample;suchas+n/doing…7.表時(shí)間關(guān)系：when,while,after,before,then,…

8.表達(dá)自己觀點(diǎn)：AsfarasIknow;Inmyopinion，tomyunderstanding,

frommypointofview,…

9.表總結(jié)：Inshort;ingeneral;AsIsee,Asforme,Asweallknow,ina

word;Allinall;Generallyspeaking，

Boysandgirls，Everyonehashobbiesanddreams.Nowletmeshareourswithyou.

YiKe'shobbyiswriting.Shewantstobeawriter.Shethinkswritingmakesherrelaxedandit

bringsherpleasureandsuccess.LiRuilikestravellingbest.Hewantstobeaguide.

hecanexperiencedifferentlifeandlearnaboutdifferentcultures.WuFan'shobbyislookingafteranimals.

hewantstobeaWWFworkertohelpanimalsliveinpeace.IwanttobeanEnglishteacher.IlikespeakingEnglish.Icanbegoodwithchildrenanditmakesmehappyandpleased.Ihopeweenjoyourhobbiesandourdreamscancometrue.alsoInthiswayBecause

美(beautify)用好詞好句，美化文章。在有把握的情況下展示自己的語言功底。寫作第五步：Boysandgirls，Everyonehashobbiesanddreams.Nowletmeshareourswithyou.YiKe'shobbyiswriting.Soshethinkswritingmakesherrelaxedanditalsobringsherpleasureandsuccess.LiRuilikestravellingbest.Inthiswayhecanexperiencedifferentlifeandlearnaboutdifferentcultures.WuFan'shobbyislookingafteranimals.IwanttobeanEnglishteacher.BecauseIlikespeakingEnglish.Icanbegoodwithchildrenanditmakesmehappyandpleased.Ihopeweenjoyourhobbiesandourdreamscancometrue.Shewantstobeawriter.Shewantstobeasuccessfulwriterinthefuture,justlikeMoYan.

Hewantstobeaguide.

Heislookingforwardtotravellingabroadsohewantstobeaguideinforeigncountries.

HewantstobeaWWFworkertohelpanimalsliveinpeace.

Whenshegrowsup,shewantstobeaWWFworkertosavetheanimalsindangerandhelpanimalsliveinpeace.Timeismoney.一寸光陰一寸金Timewaitsfornoman.歲月不待人Knowledgeispower.知識(shí)就是力量Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者，事竟成Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧It’snevertoooldtolearn.活到老，學(xué)到老……SkillOne適當(dāng)運(yùn)用名言或俗語

SkillTwoMakeyoursentencescorrect

(標(biāo)題、大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、單詞拼寫、語法錯(cuò)誤、人稱代詞、第三人稱單數(shù)等等）Goodgoodstudy,daydayup.Weshoulddosportsaweekonce.WatchTVtoomuchisbadforyoureyes.Thereisgoingtohaveameetingtoday.IhopeIcancometruemydream.onceaweekWatchingbeachieve

簡(jiǎn)單句的擴(kuò)展Sheisatallgirl.Shehaslonghair.

Sheisatallgirlandshehaslonghair.

(添加并列連詞and)

Sheisatallgirlwhohaslonghair.

(運(yùn)用關(guān)系代詞who引導(dǎo)定語從句)

SkillThreeExpressindifferentways.

Expressindifferentways

Whenhespokemore,hegotmoreexcited.

Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhegot.

WeshouldlearnEnglishgrammar.

It’simportantforustolearnEnglishgrammar.同義表達(dá)的替換他們?cè)诤┥下犚魳贰Theylistenedtothemusiconthebeach.BTheyenjoyedthemusiconthebeach她還小，搬不動(dòng)這么重的箱子。ASheisveryyoung.Shecan’tcarrytheheavybox.BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.CSheissoyoungthatshecan’tcarrythe…DSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe…Summary:searchlistaddconnectbeautify一診寫作那些事兒Afterwriting:中考書面表達(dá)評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第一檔（很好）（17--20分）

包含所有信息要點(diǎn)，能圍繞信息適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，內(nèi)容豐富。使用較豐富的語言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫，表達(dá)清楚，沒有或幾乎沒有語言錯(cuò)誤，完全達(dá)到寫作目標(biāo)，格式正確。書寫工整，規(guī)范，美觀。第二檔（好）（13--16分）

完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，涵蓋了基本內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，使用了要求的語言結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)；語言有少量錯(cuò)誤，行文基本連貫，表達(dá)基本清楚，達(dá)到預(yù)期寫作目標(biāo)。第三檔（一般）（9--12分）

基本完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，寫出了一些內(nèi)容；語言有一些錯(cuò)誤，行文不夠連貫，

格式正確，書寫狀況。第四檔（較差）（5--8分）

未能恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，只能寫出個(gè)別要點(diǎn)；語言錯(cuò)誤較多，未能清楚傳達(dá)信息，格式不正確，書寫較差。第五檔（差）（0---4分）

未能完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，只能寫出與內(nèi)容有關(guān)的一些單詞；語言錯(cuò)誤較多，語句無條理，未能清楚傳達(dá)信息。未寫直接0分。一診寫作中出現(xiàn)的問題及現(xiàn)象：1.語法錯(cuò)誤:youeyes，musttodo

Youshouldkeeptodoeyeexercises.

Anddon’twatchphonestayuplate.2.固定搭配：

keepyoureyeshealth,doeye’sexercises3.單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤:.some

advises,eatsomefriuts4.標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤：5.有部分學(xué)生篇幅寫的太長(zhǎng)，甚至寫滿了整頁6.卷面不整潔，書寫不規(guī)范7.傳說中的惡搞作文出現(xiàn)，抄閱讀段落；拼音作文等Romeisnotbuiltinaday.Tips:1.強(qiáng)化單詞、短語的背記，盡量回避在作文中的拼寫失誤而丟分；2.加強(qiáng)詞性的用法講解，尤其是名詞（可數(shù)語不可數(shù)）、代詞（人稱代詞、物主主代詞）這一塊；動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)以及固定搭配等……3.加強(qiáng)五種簡(jiǎn)單句的基本句型在作文中的指導(dǎo)；4.著重強(qiáng)調(diào)卷面整潔和規(guī)范書寫的習(xí)慣，盡量減少學(xué)生在寫作能力之外的失分；5.建議考試作文不必寫的過長(zhǎng)，從而回避“言多