萬圣節(jié)記憶小狗Coco的意外之選講義-高二下學(xué)期讀后續(xù)寫解析

江蘇省四所百強(qiáng)校2024屆高二6月份英語學(xué)科測試試卷讀后續(xù)寫TheHalloweenwascoming!MyfriendOllieandIhadaHalloweenideawhichcamewithsomanychallengesthatwethoughtaboutgivingup.Thenoneday,myparentswerebusybakingmuffinsandcookiesinthebakeryforabakesaletosupporttheanimalshelter.OllieandIwerealsobusyhelpingscoop(用勺舀)flour(面粉)fromacontainerholdingbagsofit."Goodgirls!Everylittlebithelpsthoseanimals,"mymumsaid."Ijustwishwecouldencourageourneighborstocontribute.""Aha!Ihaveabrilliantidea,"shoutedOllie,tossing(扔；擲)thescoopintothecontainerexcitedly,thewhiteflourspattered(濺；灑)alloverherface."Howabouthavingacostume-contestfund-raiser?""Yeah!"Isaid,pointingatOllie'sfaceandlaughing."Andsinceit'sfortheanimalshelter,itcouldbeacostumecontestfordogs."Wesatdowntomakeourto-dolist,thengottowork.Numberoneonthelistwasfindingalocation.Wethoughttheshelterwouldbeperfect,butwhenweaskedthem,theysaidtheyweren'tsetupforevents.Thelibrary,themovietheater,andthecornercafesaidnotoo."Maybeweshouldjustgiveup,"Olliegrumbled(咕噥；嘟囔.)"Wait!"Isaid."Whydidn'tIthinkofitsooner?Ibetmyparentswouldletushavetheeventoutsidetheirstore!"Weranovertothebakerytoask,andfinallygottheyeswe'dbeenwaitingfor.Ahundredyearslater,wehadenoughposterstoputuparoundtheneighborhood.Wepreparedallweekafterschool,andatlast,thebigdaycame.Andlotsofpeopleshowedup."Wow,youtwodidawonderfuljob!"saidmydadtoOllieandme."I'veneverseensomanydogsinsomanydifferentcostumes.""Meneither."Mymomgrinned.Butthen,alittlegirlarrived.Sheatthebakery,crying."MyCoco,"herhandsstrokingapoodle(貴婦犬)withbigbrowneyes,"hadaperfectsuperherocostume,butitripped(裂開)onourway.Nowshedoesn'thaveacostumeatall!""Aw,I'msorry,"Isaid."Hereyouare!Maybethismuffinandcookiewillmakeyoufeelbetter,"Olliesaid."Thankyou."shesmiled.Paragraph1:Thecostumeshowbegan.Suddenly,Cocostartedbarkingandracingallovertheplace!Paragraph2:"Well,WhiteCoco,"mymomsaidwithagiggle,"Nowyou'rewearingtheever-bestcostume!"這篇文章講述了一次為動物收容所籌款的萬圣節(jié)狗狗服裝比賽。故事的主人公和她的朋友Ollie在準(zhǔn)備活動過程中，遇到了許多挑戰(zhàn)，包括找不到合適的活動場地，甚至一度想要放棄。然而，他們最后決定在主人公父母的面包店外舉行活動，并得到了父母的同意?；顒幽翘欤S多人帶著他們的狗狗參加了活動，其中一個(gè)小女孩的狗狗Coco的服裝在路上撕破了，讓小女孩很傷心。然而，主人公和Ollie通過給小女孩提供糕點(diǎn)來安慰她，使得活動的氣氛變得更加歡樂。接下來要寫的兩段中，第一段將描述服裝比賽開始后，Coco的突然反應(yīng)及其帶來的結(jié)果。可能是因?yàn)楦恻c(diǎn)的刺激，Coco開始叫并在場地上奔跑。第二段將描述主人公的媽媽用俏皮的語氣贊美Coco，認(rèn)為她現(xiàn)在穿著的“服裝”是最好的，這可能暗示了Coco在奔跑過程中身上的面粉就像是一件獨(dú)特的服裝，這將為活動增添更多的樂趣。主題立意：這篇故事的主題是堅(jiān)持與創(chuàng)新。主人公和她的朋友Ollie在面臨困難時(shí)選擇了堅(jiān)持，并通過創(chuàng)新的方式解決了問題。同時(shí)，故事也強(qiáng)調(diào)了小動物對人類生活的重要性，以及人們應(yīng)盡力幫助需要幫助的動物。續(xù)寫方向：故事的下一部分將以Coco的“新服裝”和她在比賽中的行為為主線，展現(xiàn)一次充滿歡樂和意外的狗狗服裝比賽。Coco將變成比賽的焦點(diǎn)，為這次籌款活動帶來歡聲笑語，也讓人們更深入地認(rèn)識到小動物的魅力和重要性。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)：1 描述Coco在比賽開始后，因?yàn)槌粤烁恻c(diǎn)而產(chǎn)生的獨(dú)特行為。2 描述人們對Coco行為的反應(yīng)，特別是她如何成為比賽的焦點(diǎn)。3 描述主人公的媽媽如何贊美Coco的新“服裝”。4 描述這次活動對動物收容所籌款的影響，以及它對社區(qū)的影響。續(xù)寫可能存在的難點(diǎn)：1 如何維持故事的趣味性和歡樂氣氛，同時(shí)傳達(dá)出重要的信息。2 如何準(zhǔn)確地描繪Coco的行為和人們的反應(yīng)，使得這部分的故事生動且富有動感。3 如何通過主人公的媽媽的話語，巧妙地表達(dá)出Coco的新“服裝”其實(shí)是一種意外的創(chuàng)新。語料：Coco在比賽開始后，因?yàn)槌粤烁恻c(diǎn)而產(chǎn)生的獨(dú)特行為。Assoonasthecostumeshowbegan,Cocoembarkedonanunusualadventure,racingaroundandbarkingwithjoy.(比賽一開始，Coco就開始了一場不同尋常的冒險(xiǎn)，她在周圍奔跑和歡樂地叫著。)2 Amidthecommotion,Cocodashedtowardsthetableladenwithbakedgoods,snatchingasugar-dustedmuffin.(在混亂中，Coco沖向擺滿烘焙食品的桌子，抓起一個(gè)撒著糖粉的松餅。)3 Withtheicingsugardecoratingherfur,Cocowasnowahumorous,yetadorable,visionofasnowpoodle.(糖霜裝飾了她的毛皮，Coco現(xiàn)在看起來像是一個(gè)滑稽卻可愛的雪白貴婦犬。)4 Herantics,coupledwithhernew'costume',createdauniquespectacle,turningherintotheunexpectedstaroftheshow.(她的滑稽行為，配上她的新“服裝”，形成了一個(gè)獨(dú)一無二的景象，讓她成為了這場表演的意外之星。)描述人們對Coco行為的反應(yīng)：1 Thecrowdcouldn'thelpbutlaughatCoco'samusinganticsandherunexpectednewlook.(人群忍不住笑起來，他們被Coco滑稽的行為和意外的新造型逗樂。)2 Coco'sexuberantenergyanddistinctivelookmadeherthecenterofattention.(Coco充沛的活力和獨(dú)特的外觀使她成為了眾人關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)。)3 Amidthecheersandlaughter,itwasevidentthatCocohadstolenthespotlight.(在歡笑和掌聲中，顯然，Coco已經(jīng)搶走了聚光燈。)4 Theaudience,charmedbyCoco'santics,crownedhertheunintentionalstaroftheevent.(被Coco的滑稽行為所吸引的觀眾，將她封為這次活動的無意之星。)描述主人公的媽媽如何贊美Coco的新“服裝”：1 "Well,WhiteCoco,"mymomsaidwithagiggle,"Nowyou'rewearingtheever-bestcostume!"(媽媽笑著說：“好啊，白色的Coco，你現(xiàn)在穿著有史以來最好的服裝！”)2 Mymother'spraiseforCoco'saccidentalcostumebroughtanotherroundoflaughterfromthecrowd.(媽媽對Coco意外服裝的贊揚(yáng)引起了觀眾的又一陣笑聲。)3 ThecomplimentfrommymomonlyaddedtothecharmofCoco'suniqueappearance.(媽媽的贊美使Coco的獨(dú)特外觀更具魅力。)4 HerhumorouscommentcelebratedthespiritoffunandspontaneitythatCocoembodied.(她的幽默評論贊美了Coco所體現(xiàn)的樂趣和自發(fā)性的精神。)描述這次活動對動物收容所籌款的影響，以及它對社區(qū)的影響：1 Theeventendedupbeingagrandsuccess,raisingagenerousamountfortheanimalshelter.(這次活動最終取得了巨大的成功，為動物收容所籌集了大量的資金。)2 Themoneyraisedwouldsignificantlyhelptheshelterintakingcareoftheanimals.(籌集的資金將大大幫助收容所照顧動物。)3 Beyondthefundraising,theeventhadapositiveimpactonthecommunity,bringingpeopletogetherandcreatingacherishedmemory.(除了籌款活動，這次活動對社區(qū)產(chǎn)生了積極影響，使人們聚在一起，創(chuàng)造了一個(gè)珍貴的記憶。)4 Thefundraisernotonlybenefittedtheshelterfinanciallybutalsopromotedcommunityspirit,aspeoplecametogetherforagoodcause.(這次籌款活動不僅在經(jīng)濟(jì)上幫助了收容所，而且促進(jìn)了社區(qū)精神，因?yàn)槿藗優(yōu)榱艘粋€(gè)良好的原因聚集在一起。)文章基本結(jié)構(gòu)：Introduction(Background&Exposition):隨著萬圣節(jié)的臨近，講述者和她的朋友奧利有了一個(gè)關(guān)于萬圣節(jié)的活動想法。他們最初面臨一些困難，考慮過要放棄。在這些挑戰(zhàn)中，講述者父母在烘焙店舉行烘焙銷售活動以支持當(dāng)?shù)氐膭游锉幼o(hù)所，設(shè)定了故事背景。RisingAction(Problem&Development):女孩們想到了舉辦狗狗裝扮比賽作為籌款活動的主意。他們開始準(zhǔn)備，首要任務(wù)是尋找合適的活動地點(diǎn)。在幾個(gè)可能的場地都遭到拒絕后，講述者建議在她父母的烘焙店外舉辦活動，他們終于得到了積極的回應(yīng)。Climax(TurningPoint):活動的日子來臨了。女孩們的辛勤付出得到了回報(bào)，看到了大量的參與者。當(dāng)一個(gè)小女孩帶著她的貴賓犬Coco到來，Coco的裝扮撕裂了，她沒有裝扮，發(fā)生了一個(gè)小危機(jī)。Coco四處奔跑，偷了一個(gè)撒有糖粉的松餅，結(jié)果看起來像一只雪貴賓犬，這讓每個(gè)人都笑了。FallingAction(Resolution):活動的日子來臨了。女孩們的辛勤付出得到了回報(bào)，看到了大量的參與者。當(dāng)一個(gè)小女孩帶著她的貴賓犬Coco到來，Coco的裝扮撕裂了，她沒有裝扮，發(fā)生了一個(gè)小危機(jī)。Coco四處奔跑，偷了一個(gè)撒有糖粉的松餅，結(jié)果看起來像一只雪貴賓犬，這讓每個(gè)人都笑了。FallingAction(Resolution):人群喜歡這個(gè)意外的裝扮，它被認(rèn)為是最好的。小女孩的失望變成了歡樂。Conclusion(Denouement):裝扮比賽大獲成功，為動物庇護(hù)所籌集了一大筆資金。超越籌款的意義，活動為社區(qū)創(chuàng)造了一個(gè)將被珍藏多年的難忘經(jīng)歷。Questionstocheckwhetherstudentstotallyunderstandthewholestory.

1 WhatwastheinitialchallengethatthenarratorandOlliefacedrelatedtotheirHalloweenidea?2 HowdidCocobecomethestaroftheshow?3 WhatwastheimpactofCoco'saccidentalcostumeontheevent?4 HowdidtheeventrelatetotheHalloweenthemediscussedinthebeginningofthestory?5 Whatroledidthenarrator'sparentsplayinthestory?6 Inyourownwords,explainthesignificanceofthephrase"Everylittlebithelpsthoseanimals."inthecontextofthisstory.Answers：1 TheinitialchallengethatthenarratorandOlliefacedrelatedtotheirHalloweenideawasthevariousdifficultiesinorganizingittotheextentthattheyconsideredgivingup.2 Cocobecamethestaroftheshowwhenshestartedbarkingandrunningallovertheplace.Shedashedtowardsthetablefilledwithbakedgoodsandsnaggedamuffindustedwithicingsugar.Thepoodlecamebackcoveredinwhiteicing,lookinglikeafunnyyetadorableversionofasnowpoodle,whichamusedeveryone.3 Coco'saccidentalcostumeupliftedthespiritoftheeventandcreatedalotoflaughterandapplause.Itturnedouttobethemostuniqueandmemorablecostumeoftheday.4 TheeventwasoriginallyinspiredbyHalloween,anditrelatedtothisthemethroughtheideaofcostumes.Althoughtheeventultimatelyturnedintoafundraiser,theHalloweenspiritremainedthroughtheemphasisoncreativecostumes,particularlywithCoco'saccidental"snowpoodle"costume.5 Thenarrator'sparentsplayedasupportiveroleinthestory,helpingbyallowingtheeventtotakeplaceoutsidetheirbakeryandcomplimentingthegirlsonthesuccessfuloutcome.6 Thephrase"Everylittlebithelpsthoseanimals"signifiesthateveryeffort,nomatterhowsmall,contributestothegreatercause.Inthecontextofthisstory,itunderscoresthethemeofcommunityinvolvementandhowindividualcontributionscanleadtoasuccessfuleventandasignificantimpactonacause,suchassupportingtheanimalshelter.范文1

Thecostumeshowbegan.Suddenly,Cocostartedbarkingandracingallovertheplace!Thelittlepoodletookcenterstage,jumpingandrunningwithsuchenthusiasmthateveryonestartedlaughingandclapping.Shewasthestaroftheshow,herfurrybodydashingandhertailwaggingwildly.Amidstthechaos,shedashedtowardsthetablefilledwithbakedgoods,snaggingamuffindustedwithicingsugar.Asshedashedbacktoherowner,thelittlegirlgaspedinsurpriseasCocowasnowcoveredinwhiteicing,lookinglikeafunnyyetadorableversionofasnowpoodle."Well,WhiteCoco,"mymomsaidwithagiggle,"Nowyou'rewearingtheever-bestcostume!"Thecrowderuptedintolaughterandapplause.Itwasanaccidentalcostume,yetitwasthemostuniqueandmemorableoftheday.Thelittlegirl’stearstransformedintopealsoflaughter.Thespiritoftheeventwasuplifted,anditturnedouttobeagrandsuccess.Thecommunityraisedagenerousamountfortheanimalshelter,butmoreimportantly,theycreatedamemorythatwouldbecherishedforyearstocome.范文2Thecostumeshowbegan.Suddenly,Cocostartedbarkingandracing