教你如何銜接與過渡2

寫作進階提升之四

——教你如何銜接與過渡

寫作進階提升銜接與過渡：

把要點按照時間先后，空間順序，邏輯關(guān)系，因果關(guān)系整理，加以適當調(diào)整，加入過渡詞來串句成文。體會一下Eg1.Heworkshard.Heisnotlikelytohaveasuccessfulcareer.Hewillstillbeausefulpersoninthesociety.Heworkshard,butheisnotlikelytohaveasuccessfulcareer.However,hewillstillbeausefulpersoninthesociety.Eg2.Becausehehelpedmeintime,Ipassedtheexam.Thankstohistimelyhelp,Ipassedtheexam.Asaresultofhistimelyhelp,Ipassedtheexam.Hehelpedmeintime,asaresult,Ipassedtheexam.表時間關(guān)系的關(guān)聯(lián)詞開始

然后

最終atfirst,atthebeginningof,inthebeginning,tobeginwith,first(ly),firstofall

atlast,atlength,finally,eventually,intheendafterawhile,afterwards,andthen,later,afterthat,next,shortlyafter,thenextmoment同時

atthesametime,inthemeantime,meanwhile過去

atthattime,beforebythattime,earlier,formerly,inthepast現(xiàn)在

atpresent,presently,rightnow,nowadays,uptonowEg.ThenIwillbehappytobeyourguide.

Thenextmomentthecarhithimwhilehewascrossingtheroad.其他

fromnowon,immediately,rightaway,rightnow,shortly,soon,until,when,assoonas,sincethen,forthetime,themoment/minute,hardly...when,nosooner...than,soonerorlater,gradually,beforelong,suddenly

表空間關(guān)系的關(guān)聯(lián)詞說明文和描寫文中，表空間方位和順序

before,behind,below,beneath,between,here,there,where,beyond,nearby,under,above,over,ontheright/left,in(the)frontof,inthemiddleof,atthebackof,atthebottomof,oppositeto,nextto,ononeside,ontheotherside,atthefoot/endof,west/eastofEg.Ourlibraryisinthecenteroftheschool.Thereisabeautifulgardeninfrontofitandourclassroombuildingisrightbehindit.表起始關(guān)系的關(guān)聯(lián)詞Firstofall,aboveall,sofar,sofaras,accordingto,tobeginwith,inmyopinion

表順序，序列關(guān)系的關(guān)聯(lián)詞

firstofall,tobegin/startwith,first(ly)...second(ly)...third(ly),inthefirstplace...andinthesecondplace...,foronething...andforanother...,inmyopinion,accordingto,asfarasIamconcerned,asyouknowEg.TherearethreereasonswhyIlikehim:first,heishonest,second,heiskind,andthird,heishandsome.表遞進的關(guān)聯(lián)詞

what’smore,moreover,

furthermore,additionally,inaddition,

also,too,besides,aswell

,still,notonly...butalso,what’sworse,tomakethingsworse,worsestill

Eg.Chargingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway.What’smore,itwillbecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls.表轉(zhuǎn)折的關(guān)聯(lián)詞

(al)though,however,onthecontrary,but,inspiteof,nevertheless,yet,otherwise,despite,while,instead

Eg.Icoveredmyearswithhands,butitwasnouse.Althoughthecityismodernandconvenient,therearestillsomeproblems.表因果的關(guān)聯(lián)詞asaresult,thus,so,therefore,hence,accordingly,consequently,asaconsequence(of),

because,for,forthisreason,as,since,onaccountof,

thanksto,forthesakeof,dueto,owingto

表解釋說明或列舉的關(guān)聯(lián)詞

forexample,

forinstance,

take...foranexample,

suchas,thatis,asfollows,toillustrate,namely,inotherwords,andsoon,believeitornot,totellthetruth,inthiscase,inparticular,

particularly,

specially

Eg.Icanfollowmyowninterestssuchasreadingbooks,visitingmuseumsandtakingcomputerlessons.表異同關(guān)系的關(guān)聯(lián)詞

similarly,

likewise,like,unlike,justas,inlikemanner,

inthesameway,but,

yet,however,

nevertheless,

ontheotherhand,

onthecontrary,

incontrast,instead,atthesametime,comparedwith,differentfromEg.Tomysurprise,myfatherdidn’tcriticizeme.Hepraisedmeinstead.表平行，對等或選擇關(guān)系的關(guān)聯(lián)詞

and,both...and,aswell(as),neither...nor,or,either...or,notonly...butalso,besides,what’smore

Eg.ThiswilldoalotofharmnotonlytotheirChineselearningbutalsototheirfutureEnglishlearning.表強調(diào)的關(guān)聯(lián)詞

do,indeed,actually,really,truly,especially,tobehonest,tobefrank,inparticular,torepeat,aboveall,obviouslyEg.Aboveall,Icanlearnmoreaboutnature.表條件，讓步的關(guān)聯(lián)詞If,unless,so/aslongas,onconditionthatAs,though,evenif/though,whoever,nomatterwhat表結(jié)論或摘要的關(guān)聯(lián)詞

asaresult,finally,so,therefore,accordingly,thus,consequently,inconclusion,inshort,inbrief,inaword,tosumup,ingeneral,onthewhole,allinallEg.Inshort,thingshavebegantoimprovesinceschoolswerecalledontoreducelearningload.表插入的關(guān)聯(lián)詞Ithink/believe,tobehonest,generallyspeaking,asfarasIknow,asweallknowpractice因為他充分利用時間學習英語，所以順利通過高考。2.他有許多朋友，但沒有一個富有。BecausehemadegooduseofhistimetolearnEnglish,hepassedthecollegeentranceexam.Hehasmanyfriends,noneofwhomarerich.3.因為他弄丟了鑰匙，所以進不了房間。4.李平是我的朋友，我很喜歡他。Havinglosthiskey,hecouldn’tentertheroom.LipingismyfriendandIlikehimverymuch.1.Johnisclever,diligentandpolite,_____________,heisagoodstudent.2.Lucyis12andLilyis11,_______,LucyisoneyearolderthanLily.3.Heisagoodmaster________hetreatshisservantswell.4.Youmustworkharder,___youwillbeputintoanotherclass.5.Heispoor,___heiscontented.6.Somepeoplewastefood_____othersdon’thaveenough.inotherwordsthatisbecauseorbutwhile

Radioandtelevisioncanbeseeneverywhere.____theTVsetismoreusefulthantheradio________onTVyoucanseeandhearwhatishappeningintheworld._______