2024屆高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫（關(guān)愛他人）講解課件

讀后續(xù)寫--關(guān)愛他人Mariaknewherneighbor'sroutine.Everyday,Mrs.HernandezwalkedherdogMarisolpastMaria’shouse,usuallyJustasMariawashurryingforschoolinthemorningandagainwhenMariawasreturningintheafternoon.Mrs.Hernandez,alwayssmiling,alwaysstoppedtochat.Mariaenjoyedtheirsmalltalks.ThenonedayMrs.HernandezdiscoveredthatMarialikehomemadecookies.Fromthenon,shegaveMariaaboxofherspecially-madecookieswithanotethatread,”ToMaria-mygoodfriend!”O(jiān)necoldNovembermorningwhenMarialeftforschool,shedidn’tseeMrs.HernandezandMarisol.Mariadidn'tknowwhy.Thatafternoonherneighboragainfailedtoappearattheregulartime.Mariabecamealittleworried.AsshewalkedbyMrs.Hernandez'shouse,shelookedatthehousecarefullyandsawnothingunusual."Mrs.Hernandezjustisn'thometoday,Iguess,"shespoketoherself.Laterthatnight,MariatoldherparentsandherbrotherRamonaboutnotseeingMrs.Hernandez.Sheaskedthemiftheyknewwheretheirneighborhadgone.WhileMariawasworriedRamonthoughtthatnothingwaswrong.Maria'smotheralsotriedtomakeMariafeelbetter:"Sheprobablywenttoseeadoctor.Ormaybeshesinanothercityvisitingherdaughter"Still,Mariawasnotsatisfied.SheaskedherparentsifperhapssheshouldknockonMrs.Hernandez'sdoor.Maria'sfatherwasnotworriedeither.Hethoughtthattheyshouldn'tbotherMrs.Hernandez.“Maria,honey,I'mcertainshesjustfine.Weneedn'tspendtimeworryingabouther.Thenextmorning,Mariastilldidn'tseeMrs.Hernandez.MariabecameevenmoreworriedInsteadofwaitingfortheschoolbus,sherushedbackhome.Maria'smotherwaswashingthebreakfastdishes."Ididn'tseeMrs.Hernandezagainthismorning,andnowI'mterriblyworriedabouther."Mariasaid."Shedidn'ttalkaboutgoingaway,soIwanttocheckonherbeforegoingtoschool.Ihopeyou'llcomewithme.

Paragraph1:Maria’smotheragreedtogowithherworrieddaughtertotheirneighbor’shouse.Paragraph2:Then,Mariaandhermotherwaitedthereanxiously.Readingforcharactersandrelationship

MariaMrs.HernandeztheirnieghborMaria’familyThenonedayMrs.HernandezdiscoveredthatMarialikehomemadecookies.Fromthenon,shegaveMariaaboxofherspecially-madecookies

withanotethatread,”ToMaria-mygoodfriend!”ReadingforplotsandemotionBeginningClimaxEndingonecoldNovemembermorningpayattentiontothetimeline.DevelopmentEverydayLaterthatmorningThenextmorningReadingforplotsandemotionEverydayMariaandMrs.Hernandezbecamegoodfriends,becauseoftheirdailyroutine.delightedonecoldNovemembermorningMariadidn’tseeMrs.Hernandezasusual.worriedThatafternoonMrs.Hernandezfailedtoappearattheregulartime.worriedLaterthatnightMariaaskedherfamilyiftheyknewherneighborwasandtheytriedtocomfortedher.worriedThenextmorningMariastilldidn’tseehernieghborandrushedbackhomeinsteadofgoingtoschool.moreworriedlGettingclues(線索)fromthegivenpassageOnecoldNovembermorningwhenMarialeftforschool,shedidn’tseeMrs.HernandezandMarisol.Thatafternoonherneighboragainfailedtoappearattheregulartime.Thenextmorning,Mariastilldidn'tseeMrs.Hernandez.

Mariasaid."Shedidn'ttalkaboutgoingaway,soIwanttocheckonherbeforegoingtoschool.Ihopeyou'llcomewithme.

ReadingfortheConflictHerconversationhermothersuggestwhatshewasgoingtodo.Tip:Thedevelopmentofthestorycanbeinferredfromthegiveninformation.Fromtheclue,wecanknowWhatkindofpersonMariawas?Sheiskind,friengly,caring.sowhatisthetheme?careforothers,bekindandfriendly.Itshowsthatasimplekindacthastheabilitytochangeone’slife.ReadingforthethemeListseveralimportantquestions.

心理描寫有效對話動(dòng)作描寫場景描寫Whyandwheredidtheywaitanxiously?HowwasMrs.Hernandez?Howdidtheyfeel.Lessongained.Whatwassheworriedabout?WasMrs.Hernandezathome?(seeadoctor?falloverherselfandlieonthefloor)WhathappenedtoMrs.Hernandezandherdog?Paragraph1:Maria’smotheragreedtogowithherworrieddaughtertotheirneighbor’shouse.Paragraph2:Then,Mariaandhermotherwaitedthereanxiously.ListtheoutlineParagraph1:Maria’smotheragreedtogowithherworrieddaughtertotheirneighbor’shouse.快速去他鄰居的家里，敲門、按門鈴Paragraph2:Then,Mariaandhermotherwaitedthereanxiously.門開了。發(fā)高燒、咳嗽嚴(yán)重去醫(yī)院、叫救護(hù)車門沒開想辦法開門了解里面的情況。摔倒受傷、暈倒叫救護(hù)車救護(hù)車來了，醫(yī)生來了送去醫(yī)院探望康復(fù)感激放心Appreciatingapossibleversion

Para.1:Maria'smotheragreedtogowithherworrieddaughtertotheirneighbor'shouse.AstheyapproachedMrs.Hernandez’shouse,Mariafeltuneasy.Sherangthedoorbellseveraltimes.Maria’smotherrepeatedlycalledouttoMrs.Hernandez.Inside,Marisolbegantobark.“somethingterriblemusthappentoMrs.Hernandez”,Mariaspoketoherself.Suddenly,Mariafoundthewindowopenandpeeredinside.ShesawthedogMarisolandMrs.Hernandezlyingonthefloor.“Mom,”shescreamed,“gethelp!”Maria’smotherrushedtoaneighbor’shouseandtelephonedthehospital.Paragraph2:Then,Mariaandhermotherwaitedthereanxiously.Momentslater,somedoctorsarrivedinanambulance.TheydiscoveredthatMrs.Hernandezhadslippedandbrokenherhip,andtheytookhertohospitalatonce.Thatafternoon,Mariaandhermotherdroppedbythehospital.AnursesaidMa