湖南省雅禮中學(xué)高三月考試卷（一）讀后續(xù)寫天賦VS努力講義

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中文DuringthesummerbeforePattyenteredfifthgrade,shedecidedtotryanewsport.四年級暑假時(shí)，Patty決定嘗試一項(xiàng)新的運(yùn)動(dòng)。SwimtrainingwasnearlyoverandPattywasthefastestswimmerinheragegroup.Shehadalwaysbeenthebest.游泳訓(xùn)練快要結(jié)束了，Patty是她年齡組中最快的游泳者。她一直以來都是成績最好的那個(gè)人。Theneighborhoodwasofferingaoneweektennistrainingcourse.PattyandherfriendDarlagotpermissionfromtheirparentstojoin.社區(qū)提供了為期一周的網(wǎng)球訓(xùn)練課程。Patty和她的朋友Darla得到了父母的許可加入網(wǎng)球課程。OnSaturdaymorning,Darla'smomtookthegirlstoastoreandboughtthemeachagood,usedtennisracket.星期六的早上，Darla的媽媽帶著女孩們?nèi)ド痰?，給她們每個(gè)人買了一把好用的二手網(wǎng)球拍?！癐fyougirlssticktotennis,thenwe'lltalkabout

anewracket.Thesewilldofornow,”saidDarla'smom.“如果你們堅(jiān)持打網(wǎng)球，那我們就會(huì)考慮買一把新的球拍?，F(xiàn)在這些暫時(shí)夠用了，”Darla的媽媽說道。Thegirlswereexcitedabouttheirnewpurchases.女孩們非常開心有了屬于自己的球拍。OnMondaymorning,at7:00a.m.,Patty'smomwokeherup.“It'stimefortennis!”在星期一的早上，上午7點(diǎn)，Patty的媽媽叫醒了她?！霸撊ビ?xùn)練網(wǎng)球了！”Pattycoveredherface.“Mom,it'stooearly!”She

madegreateffortto

getoutofbedanddowntothebreakfasttable.Patty捂住臉?！皨寢?，太早了！”她努力地爬起床，走到早餐桌前。PattyfinishedbreakfastandrantoDarla'shouse,thentheywalkedtothecourt.Patty吃完早餐跑到Darla家，然后她們一起走到球場。Mrs.Cane,thetenniscoach,linedeveryoneupandstartedwiththebasics.網(wǎng)球教練Cane夫人讓大家排好隊(duì)，從基礎(chǔ)訓(xùn)練開始。Afterthat,Mrs.Canetirelesslytaughtthemtopracticetheirforehandandbackhand.在那之后，Cane夫人不厭其煩地教她們練習(xí)正手和反手擊球。Bytheendoftheweek,Pattyhadmadeimpressiveprogress.Mrs.CanementedthatPattyhadlotsofpotential.在那一周結(jié)束時(shí)，Patty取得了令人巨大的進(jìn)步。Cane夫人評論說Patty有很大的潛力。Darla,ontheotherhand,wasstruggling.Theotherteenagerswerehavingatoughtimeofit,too.另一方面，Darla和其他的青少年們一樣還在苦苦掙扎。Pattywastheonlyonewhoseemedtogetsomewhere.Patty是唯一似乎有所進(jìn)展的人。Sincethen,DarlahadalwaysbeenoutintheAugustheat,practicingherservesorhittingtheball.從那以后，Darla總是在8月的炎熱中練習(xí)發(fā)球或擊球。Pattywasn'treallyinterested.Patty對此并不是真的感興趣。Bytheendofthesummer,Darlabegantogetthehangofit.Shejoinedaneighborhoodjuniortennisteam.到了夏天結(jié)束時(shí)，Darla開始掌握了網(wǎng)球的技巧。她加入了一個(gè)社區(qū)的青少年網(wǎng)球隊(duì)。TherewouldbematcheseveryThursday.Pattywantedtojoinaswell,butshedidn'twanttomissherfavoriteTVshow.每個(gè)星期四都會(huì)有比賽。Patty也想加入，但她不想錯(cuò)過她最喜歡的電視節(jié)目。Shetoldherselfthatshewouldjoinitwhenshegotsomefreetime.IfDarlahadfun,shewouldjointheteaminthespring.她告訴自己等她有空的時(shí)候就會(huì)加入。如果Darla覺得加入球隊(duì)是令人開心的事，那她會(huì)在春天加入這個(gè)隊(duì)伍。續(xù)寫第一段：Theweekbeforeschoolstarted,Mrs.Caneheldanothertrainingcourse.在開學(xué)前的那個(gè)星期，Cane夫人又舉辦了一次訓(xùn)練課程。續(xù)寫第二段：Pattycouldn'tstopthinkingofherpoorperformanceonthewayhome.Patty在回家的路上忍不住回想自己糟糕的表現(xiàn)。文本分析：故事大意：Patty和自己的好朋友Darla在暑假參加了一項(xiàng)新的運(yùn)動(dòng)，網(wǎng)球。Patty憑借自己的運(yùn)動(dòng)天賦，取得一定的進(jìn)展。而Darla和其他人卻在苦苦掙扎，Darla非常勤奮，她總是不懼炎熱，勤加練習(xí)。Patty開始因?yàn)橄矚g的電視節(jié)目而沒有參加練習(xí)。在開學(xué)的前一個(gè)星期，Cane夫人舉行了一次訓(xùn)練課程，Patty表現(xiàn)的一塌糊涂。她開始反思天賦是否要比努力重要，最終認(rèn)識(shí)到自己的問題，開始努力訓(xùn)練。有種“龜兔賽跑”的既視感....續(xù)寫情節(jié)：Para1:根據(jù)續(xù)寫第一句，重點(diǎn)寫Patty還在為自己的天賦沾沾自喜，并沒有認(rèn)真練習(xí)，而好朋友Darla已經(jīng)取得了飛速的進(jìn)步，成為了球隊(duì)的隊(duì)長。在比賽中，Patty因?yàn)槭栌诰毩?xí)，表現(xiàn)得不盡如人意。Para2:根據(jù)續(xù)寫第二局，可知Patty開始反思自己得驕傲，認(rèn)為天賦會(huì)超越勤奮是不切實(shí)際的白日夢。決定和好朋友一起努力。試水作文Theweekbeforeschoolstarted,Mrs.Caneheldanothertrainingcourse.

Thistime,thetrainingwascentredonenhancingtheplayers'technicalskills.

Pattyattended,

confidentinhernaturaltalent.

However,itsoonbecameapparentthatherskills

hadstagnated.

Patty,whohadbeenthestarswimmer,wasnowstrugglingtokeeppaceonthetenniscourt.

Incontrast,

Darlawaseffortlesslyserving,andtheotherplayerswhohaddiligentlytrainedoverthesummershowed

impressiveprogress.

Patty

foundherselffallingbehind,hernaturaltalentovershadowedbytheothers'hardworkanddedication.

Pattycouldn'tstopthinkingofherpoorperformanceonthewayhome.

The

goldenauraof'naturaltalent'seemedtohavefaded,

exposingthe

harshtruthofherlackofeffort.

Sheacknowledgedthattalentalonewasinsufficientandthatsheneededtoinvestrealworkintotennisdrills,conditioning,practicematches.

Thewalkhomewasatimeforreflection.PattyglancedatDarla,hereffortlessservesreplayinginhermind.Shefinallyunderstoodthevalueofhardwork.

Determined,PattyturnedtoDarlaandasked:"Darla,wouldyoubewillingtoassistmewithtennispracticetomorrow?"

Pattymadeamitmentinhermind,notjusttotennis,buttotheeffortrequiredforsuccess.

Herdecisionmarkedasteptowardsdedicationand

theacceptanceofthetransformativejourneyshewasabouttoembarkupon.讀后續(xù)寫：（官方范文）Theweekbeforeschoolstarted,Mrs.Caneheldanothertrainingcourse.DarlaandPattysignedupimmediately.Mrs.CanewaspleasedwithDarla'sprogress."Well,Icantellwho'sbeenpracticing!"PattywishedthatshehadbeenasdiligentasDarla,butshewasstillproudthatshehadsuch"natural"ability.Darladecidedtojointheneighborhoodjuniortennisteam.MatcheswouldbeeveryThursday.Pattywantedtojoin,butshedidn'twanttomisstheYouthTroopTVshow.Shedaydreamedaboutbeingthenexttennisstar.Shetoldherselfthatshewouldcontinuetohitthetennisballwhenshegotsomefreetime.IfDarlahadfun,shewouldjointheteaminthespring.Severalweekspassed,andPattywenttooneofthematches.Shewasreallyimpressedwiththewaythegirlswerehitting.Shewasalittlebitlost,too."Thirtylove,"criedDarla,beforesheserved."Whatisshetalkingabout?"thoughtPatty.Shewantedtoaskbutshedidn'twanttoappeardumb.Finally,thematchwasover.Darlaandherpartnerlost,buttheyhadawonderfultime.Allthekidswerereallynice.Pattywishedshehadjoined.Itwastoolate,now.Pattycouldn'tstopthinkingofherpoorperformanceonthewayhome.ThatwastheworstweekofPatty'slife.Shewasveryexcitedforthegirlsandcheeredthemon.Butinsideshewasmiserable."Whydidn'tIgoaheadandjoinwhentheyaskedme?"shethought.Nowitreallywastoolate.Noonewasbegginghertojointheteamanymorebecausetheydidn'tneedher.Thegirlshaddevelop