讀后續(xù)寫專題有關動物的描寫課件高三英語寫作專項

讀后續(xù)寫：有關動物的描寫Domesticanimals▲ACatwithHindLegsTuckedinandTailCoiledAcat

sprangup

uponthebench,

stretchedherself,

tucked

herhindlegs

underher

and

coiledhertailtightlyroundthem

asthoughtopreventthemfromaccidentally

workingloose.【譯文】一只貓?zhí)祥L凳，伸了個懶腰，把后腿縮在身下，把尾巴緊緊地盤繞在腿上，好像怕尾巴不小心松了似的.【賞析】：一連串的動作描寫，生動形象點出了貓咪的優(yōu)雅和輕盈.AGreyCatThegreycat

seateditself

betweenandbehindthemagain.

Itblinkedslowly.

Theskinoverits

shouldersjerkedforward

underaflea,

andthenslippedslowlyback.

Thecat

lifted

apawand

inspected

it,

flicked

itsclawsoutandinagainexperimentally,

and

lickeditspadswithashell-pinktongue.【譯文】灰貓又在他們中間和后面坐了下來.它慢慢地眨了眨眼睛.它肩膀上的皮膚在一只跳蚤下面向前一縮，然后慢慢地滑了回來.這只貓?zhí)鹨恢蛔ψ訖z查了一下，又試著把爪子朝里朝外彈了幾下，然后用貝殼般粉紅色的舌頭舔舐腳墊.【生詞】blink=whenyou

blink

or

blinkyoureyes

or

youreyesblink

,youshutandopenyoureyesquickly眨眼睛jerk

/d???k/=Ifyou

jerk

somethingorsomeoneinaparticulardirection,orthey

jerk

inaparticulardirection,theymoveashortdistanceverysuddenlyandquickly.

使…猝然一動;

猝然一動flick/fl?k/=Ifsomething

flicks

inaparticulardirection,orifsomeone

flicks

it,itmoveswithashort,suddenmovement.

迅速地移動lickvt.

舔；pad

/p?d/

；n.

襯墊；便簽簿；(貓或狗的）爪墊shell-pick粉紅色；貝殼粉色關于動物的生動描寫DescribingaDog

-Apuppy?childlike

adj.天真爛漫的;孩子似的?innocent

adj.無辜的;無罪的n.天真的人?jade-green

adj.綠玉色的;淺綠色的?velvety

adj.

天鵝絨般柔軟的;醇和的，可口的?hedgehog/'hed3hog/n.刺猬;刺猬狀?racoonn.浣熊?wagv.(狗)搖擺(尾巴)

?adorableadj.可愛的;可敬重的?arrowtips箭頭?yipn.叫喊聲vi.犬吠;尖叫?yelpv./n.

(因興奮、疼痛等)尖叫，大叫;狗吠?cuddly

adj.令人想擁抱的;喜歡摟摟抱抱的;逗人喜愛的?messy

adj.凌亂的;不整潔的?wobbly

adj.不穩(wěn)定的;擺動的歪斜的?wobblyonhisfeet搖搖晃晃地站著AFemaleDog

Thedog,whohad

soundedsoferocious

inthewinterdistances,

wasafemaleGermanshepherd.

Shewasshivering.

Hertailwasbetweenherlegs.

Shehadbeenborrowedthatmorningfromafarmer.

Shehadneverbeentowarbefore.

Shehadnoideawhatgamewasbeingplayed.

HernamewasPrincess.—Jr.

KurtVonnegut;

Slaughterhouse-Five,3.【譯文】這只狗是一只母德國牧羊犬，在遙遠的冬天聽起來是那么兇猛.她顫抖著.她的尾巴夾在兩腿之間.她是那天早上從一個農(nóng)民那借來的.她以前從未上過戰(zhàn)場.她不知道他們在玩什么把戲.她的名字叫公主.【生詞】1.ferocious/f??r????s/=veryaggressiveorviolent;verystrong

兇猛的；殘暴的；猛烈的2.shiver

/???v?(r)/

=[

V]

~(withsth)(

ofaperson

人

)

toshakeslightlybecauseyouarecold,frightened,excited,etc.顫抖，哆嗦（因寒冷、恐懼、激動等）▲TheGreatBigYellowHorseIrememberonceoutatSt.Cloud.

Itwas

abigtwohundredthousandfranceracewithsevenentriesandKzar

abigfavorite.

Iwentaroundtopaddocktoseethehorseswithmyoldmanandyouneversawsuchhorses.

ThisKzarisagreatbigyellowhorse

thatlookslikejustnothingbutrun.

Ineversawsuchahorse.

Hewasbeingledaroundthepaddocks

withhisheaddown

andwhenhewentbyme

Ifeltallhollowinsidehewassobeautiful.

Thereneverwassuchawonderful,

lean,

runningbuilthorse.

Andhewentaroundthepaddock

puttinghisfeetjustsoandquietandcarefulandmovingeasy

likeheknewjustwhathehadtodoandnotjerkingandstandinguponhislegs

and

gettingwildeyedlikeyouseethesesellingplaterswithashotofdopeinthem.

ThecrowdwassothickIcouldn'tseehim

againexceptjusthislegsgoingbyandsomeyellow.——ErnestHemingway:

MyOldMan.【生詞】francen.法郎entry

/?entri/

n.參賽總人數(shù)paddock/?p?d?k/=

asmallfieldwherehorsesarekept.(放牧馬匹的)

小圍場hollow

/?h?l??/

adj.空心的；空洞的builtadj.有…體格的jerk

/d???k/

vi.

痙攣；急拉；顛簸地行進sellingplaters（美國俚語）(賽馬用語)劣等賽馬ashotofdope

一針興奮劑thesesellingplaterswithashotofdopeinthem

這些注射過興奮劑的蹩腳賽馬【動物的外貌描寫】1.apairoflargewateryeyes

一雙水汪汪的大眼睛2.twobigroundeyes兩只圓溜溜的大眼睛3.beady/sparkling/twinklingeyes小珠般圓亮的/亮晶晶的/閃閃發(fā)亮的

眼睛4.anoselikeasmallblackgem一顆黑寶石般的鼻子5.long/muscular/skinny/spindlylegs長的/肌肉發(fā)達的/皮包骨的/干瘦的

腿6.furisaswhiteassnow皮毛像雪一樣潔白7.alonglittletail一條長長的小尾巴8.littleearsonthetopoftheheard頭頂上長著對小耳朵【動物的動作描寫】1.wagthetail

搖尾巴2.smell/sniff

嗅3.bark/yap/yelp

狗吠4.lick

舔5.puttheearsup

把耳朵豎起來6.shakethewholebody

抖動全身7.bitethecornerofthecoat

咬住衣角8.rubtheirnecksandbackswiththeirpaws

用爪子摩擦它們的脖子和背部9.holdittightlywiththepaws

用爪子緊緊按住10.fallonitsback

摔得四腳朝天11.runaroundme

圍著我跑12.keepscratchingyouwithhisfrontpaws

用前爪不停撓你13.raiseitswholebodyonitshindlegs

用后腿支起全14.leaptoitsfeet

跳起來15.restthenoseinitspaws

把鼻子擱在爪子里16.keepitsforelegsdoubledup

保持前腿彎曲17.curluponthesofa蜷縮18.reachoutitsfluffypaws伸出毛茸茸的爪子19.popitsheadout探出頭20.cling

totheedgeofthebox抓住邊緣(3)Herparentswatchedthemplayingaroundandsmiledwithrelief（輕松地笑了）–Poppywasbacktoheroldcheerfulself!(4)IhadjustfinishedwashingthelunchdisheswhenthedoorslammedandBeckyrushedin,cheeksflushedwithexcitement（激動得面紅耳赤）.(5)Receivingapositiveanswer,Samwaswildwithjoy

（欣喜若狂）andRoland,wagginghistailmerrily,asifintoxicated（好像喝醉一樣）.3、動物類有關的放松描寫：(1)Oncethehelicopterlanded,wegotontoitinnotime,excitedandrelieved（又興奮又放松）.(2)Seeingallofthese,wesighedwithrelief（興奮地嘆氣）,sparklesofdelightarisinginourfaces.(3)Thenearerthehelicoptergot,themoreexcitedandhopefulshewas（她就越興奮和有希望）.4、動物類有關的害怕描寫：(1)Terrified（非常害怕）,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.(2)Seeingtheapproachofthepolarbear,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch（被恐懼嚇呆，害怕到動也不能動）.(3)MywifeElligraspedmyclothesandtrembled,

swallowinghard（抓住我的衣服，顫抖著，使勁吞口水）.(4)Anumbingchillgrippedme（一種麻木的寒戰(zhàn)擢緊了我）.【動物類話題結尾的主題升華句】1.ElliandIlearnedourlesson（學到一個教訓）:Beawareofabearwithatoothache.2.Despitethechillautumnwind,theirhomewasfilledwiththewarmthofloveandreunion（充滿愛和團聚的