英語寫作基礎 課件

Chapter1

ManuscriptForm

andPunctuation※Writeoneveryotherline※Don’twritetotheveryedgeofthepage※Title:a.capitalized:exceptarticles\prep\conjunctionsb.punctuation:(nofullstop,questionmarkisproper)1.Arrangement2.WordDivision※Divisionmadebasedonsyllablesone-syllablewordscannotbedevided(count/health/thought)※isnotrecommended

3.Capitalization※Propernames,keywordsintitles,addresses,andthefirstwordsofsentences※a/o,u/n,doti&j,crosst4.HandWritingPunctuationDifferences．/?！丁贰ⅰ?/p>

……／．．．Itmaybenottheshiningpartinapassage,butitshouldbethenecessarypart.ExercisesThatthatisisthatthatisnotisnotthatthatisisnotthatthatisnotthatthatisnotisnotthatthatis(addsomepunctuationtomakeitunderstandable)Thatthatisis;thatthatisnotisnot;thatthatisisnotthatthatisnot;thatthatisnotisnotthatthatis.Chapter2UsingProperWordsTypesofwords(levelsofwords)※Commonwords:usedinourdailylife(same,speech,piece)※Formalwords:usedinformaloccasions(identical,oration,fragment)※Nonstandardwords:oralEnglish(ain’t,damn,cool,jolly)Typesofwords:generalVsspecific※Generalwords:usedforsummaryandgeneration

※Specificwords:usedfordetailed,vividdescription

Example:agoodmankind,honest,just,generous,sympathetic,warm-hearted,selfless,brave,honorableGuidelinesaboutthechoiceofwordsUsecommonorinformalwordsforgeneralpurposes;useformalornonstandardwordsonlyonoccasionsorforspecialpurpose.Usespecificandconcretewordswhengivingdetails;usegeneralorabstractwordswhenmakingsummariesUseidiomaticexpressionsandwordsinacceptablecollocations;avoidcombinationsaffectedbymothertongue.Whentherearesynonyms,choosethewordthatexpressthemeaningmostexactlyandthatsuitsthecontentandstyle.Meaningsofwords※Conceptualmeanings(basicmeaningsofwords)※Associativemeanings(meaningsrelatedtowords)

Forexample:womananadultfemalepersonweak,gentle,emotional,sentimentalThinkaboutthewordmotherWordsMeaningsofwordsPleasetellthedifferencesbetweenthetwowordscheap/inexpensiveCanyouthinkofmoreexamplesderogatoryneutralskinny/slimstatesman/politicianlaudatory很瘦的、皮包骨的苗條的、纖細的Meaningsofwords(differentcollocation)Pleasetellthedifferencesbetweenthesewords1.small/littlea_____pairofshoesThe___girlissocute.2.durable/lasting3.country,nation,state,landmother___European________documents____wide√√Exercises★

Choosetherightword.economical/meanHeistoo____withhismoneytobuyusameal.Sheisa(n)_____housekeeper.2.homely/uglyHehada(n)____dangerouslookonhisface.Sheisa(n)____girlbutshe’skind-hearted.Exercises★Choosetherightword.3.surprised/stunnedThetaste___him;itwasnotashe’dimaginedit.Hewas____bytheunfairnessoftheirjudgment.4.refused/declinedWeaskedthemtocometoourparty,butthey____theinvitation.Exercises★Findthecorrespondingcommonwords.aid____chamber_____prohibit_____assist____commence_____deem_____indicate_____participate_________initially_______dissimilar________desire_____supply_____endeavor_____feeble_____locate____require_____state_____sufficient______helproomstophelpbeginthinkshowtakepartinatfirstdifferentwantgivetryweaklieasksayenoughExercises★Changeanywordsifnotproperinsentences.Now,let’scommencethemeeting.2.Whendidyouretiretobedlastnight?3.Smallandpoorasthecountrywas,itrefusedtoreceiveeconomichelpfrombigcountries.4.TodayIwannadiscussproblemsconnectedwiththermodynamicsandI’mgonnapresentsomenewmaterialwhichwillbeofconsiderableinteresttoallthepeopleatthisconference.begingoaidwouldliketointendtoWordsWordOrder★Pleasetellthedifferences.1.anoldfriend/Myfriendisold.

alatetrainThetrainislate.thelatepresident2.late晚班的晚點了已故的WordsWordOrder★

Pleasetellthedifferences.3.Ionlyatethevegetables.

OnlyIatethevegetables.

4.Evenhecan’tunderstandthequestion.Hecan’tevenunderstandthequestion.Hecan’tunderstandeventhisquestion.WordsFiguresofSpeech★

Findthefiguresofspeechusedintheparagraph.Haveyoueverbeenatseainadensefog,whenitseemedasifatangiblewhitedarknessshutyouinandthegreatship,tenseandanxious,gropedherwaytowardtheshorewithplummetandsounding-lineandyouwaitedwithbeatingheartforsomethingtohappen?WordsFiguresofSpeech★

Personification1.Theleavesaretremblinginthecoldwind.2.Thistimefatewassmilingtohim.Practice:makingsentencesmachine/uncooperativewind/whisperwave/shoreWordsFiguresofSpeech★

Simile1.Hereyesareasblueasthesea.2.Heislikeabravelion.Practice:rewritingsentenceswithsimileThischildisasweetcandy.Hewasstrangledinthenetofgossip.Themanhasaheartofstone.WordsFiguresofSpeech★

Metaphor1.Alltheworldisastage.2.Theparksarethelungsofthecity.Practice:rewritingsentenceswithmetaphorPostcardscameintohisofficelikeaflood.Hisvoicesoundedlikeathunderinthedarknight.Lifeislikeajourneyfullofpitfalls.WordsFiguresofSpeech★

Hyperbole1.Theyalmostdiedlaughing.2.Themoviealmostscaredustodeath.Practice:makingsentencessadtiredhappyWordsFiguresofSpeech★

Oxymoron

Hewasthesonofabankrupt,butbecameamillionaire;ascientistwithaloveofliterature,anindustrialistwhomanagedtoremainanidealist.Hemadeafortunebutlivedasimplelife,andalthoughcheerfulincompanyhewasoftensadinprivate.Aloverofmankind,heneverhadawifeorfamilytolovehim,apatrioticsonofhisnativeland,hediedaloneonforeignsoil.——“AlfredNobel-AManofContrasts”WordsFiguresofSpeech★

TransferredEpithet1.Hespentananxiousdayinthelockup.2.Theassistantkeptarespectfuldistancefromhisbosswhentheywerewalkinginthecorridor.Practice:makingsentences

不眠之夜

不假思索

忙碌一天asleeplessnightanunthinkingmomentabusydayWordsFiguresofSpeech★

Pun1.Wemustallhangtogether,orweshallhangseparately.2.What’swrongwiththisfish?Longtimenosea.3.What’sthedifferencebetweenagirlandasoldier?Agirlpowdersherface,butasoldierfacesthepowder.WordsFiguresofSpeech★

Antithesis1.Toerrishuman;Toforgive,divine.2.Loveisanidealthing,andmarriagearealthing.Practice:rewritingsentencesItiseasiertosaysomethingthantodosomething.Weconsiderthingsinageneralway,butweliveinaverydetailedway.Speechisasgoodassilver,butifyoukeepsilent,youhavegold.WordsFiguresofSpeech★

Euphemism1.AllofuswanttoescapethefactthatJohnwouldnevercomebackagain.2.Hehasbeenjobwaitingforseveralmonths.Practice:findingouteuphemismsHiswifenowneedstoeatfortwo.Sheisfeelingherownagenow.Jackdidsomethingillegalandnowheisstayingatthecorrectionalcenter.WordsFiguresofSpeech★

Rhyme1.TheraininSpainstaysmainlyintheplain.2.Nosweetwithoutsweat.Practice:findingouttherhymingwordsSomethingisroughandtough.Thedayisfreshandfair,andthereisasmellofnarcissusintheair.Itisonlyablessedghost.WordsFiguresofSpeechExercises:pointoutkindsoffiguresofspeech1.Thecarrodeassmoothlyasashipincalmwaters.2.Theboystoodtherefrightenedtodeath,hiseyes,asbigassaucers,staringatthecorpse.3.Shecameintotheroomlikeashipenteringharborafteratriumphantvoyage.4.Herrichrelativesrainedbirthdaypresentsonheronlyson.similesimile,hyperbolesimilemetaphorWordsFiguresofSpeechExercises5.Hisfriendspraisedhisdaughter’sperformancetotheskies.6.Imustbecruelonlytobekind.7.Thehandsomehousesonthestreettothecollegewerenotfullyawake,buttheylookedveryfriendly.8.TheytalkedtotheforeignerinhesitantEnglish.hyperboleoxymoronpersonificationtransferredepithetWordsFiguresofSpeechExercises9.Wallshaveears.10.ThisshortandeasytripmadealastingandprofoundchangeinHarold’soutlook.11.Hehasbreathedhislastnoblebreath.12.Whatdolawyersdowhentheydie?Liestill.personificationpunantithesiseuphemismWordsChoiceofwords★

Exactness

Donotwritesothatyourwordsmaybeunderstood,butwritesothatyourwordsmustbeunderstood.anoldEnglishsayingThedifferencebetweentherightwordandthealmost-rightwordisasgreatasthatbetweenlightningandthelightningbug.MarkTwainWordsChoiceofwords★

ExactnessA.ClearabouttheconceptualmeaningsofwordsShetoldustheincrediblestoryofher134daysinthedesert.Heraisedhiseyebrowsandgavemeanincredulouslook.Thisistheonlybridgeacrossthebridge.Lookbothwaysbeforeyoucrosstheroad.WordsChoiceofwords★

ExactnessB.ClearabouttheassociativemeaningsofwordsManypoliticiansarenotorioushypocrites.Franceisfamousforitswine.TheoldestexistingmanuscriptTheoldestlivingmanuscriptWordsChoiceofwords★

ExactnessC.SpecifywordsAndlocalresidents,seeingthesamebagladyonthesamecornereveryday,willgivehersomechangeastheypass.“Youneveraskmyopinionaboutanything,”Rodsaid.complainedslipWordsChoiceofwords★

ExactnessD.ProperwordsinproperoccasionsOnhearingthathisfatherhadkickedthebucket,wewrotehimalettertoexpressoursympathies.passedawayWordsChoiceofwords★

ExactnessExercises:rewritesentenceswithmoreaccuratewords.Sheput

thewastepaperintothebasket.Thebabymovedclosertohismother.Theboy

lookedatthestrangerinanangryway.Therestaurantservesgoodfood.Myuncleisagoodman.flungcrawledglaredhonestdeliciousWordsChoiceofwords★

ConcisenessA.Turnclausesandsentencesintowordsorphrases1.Whenyoucometothesecondtrafficlight,turnright.Turnrightatthesecondtrafficlight.2.Thenovel,whichiswritteninthreeparts,toldastorythattookplaceintheMiddleAges.Thethree-partnoveltoldastorysetintheMiddleAges.Brevityisthesoulofwit.WordsChoiceofwords★

ConcisenessB.UsewordswithoutnotoshownegativemeaningsWhenkidsdonothavedisciplinesattheirschools,itmeanstheydonothavedisciplineinthehome.

Absenceofdisciplineintheschoolsreflectsabsenceofdisciplineinthehome.WordsChoiceofwords★

ConcisenessB.Usewordswithnegativemeanings2.Asanaccountant,Idonotagreewithpeopleusingcompanymoneythatisnotpre-authorized.Asanaccountant,Idisagreewithpeopleusingunauthorizedmoney.WordsChoiceofwords★

ConcisenessC.AvoidbeingwordyduetothefactthatduringthesametimethatconcerningthematterofinordertoregardlessofthefacthastheabilitytosingbecausewhileabouttoalthoughcansingWordsChoiceofwords★

ConcisenessD.AvoidmeaninglessrepetitionItisimpossibletoaskmetodotheimpossible.Youcannotexpectmetodotheimpossible.2.Agreatmanyofthestudentsintheclasslacktheabilityofbeingabletospeakfluently.

Manystudentsintheclasslacktheabilityofspeakingfluently.WordsChoiceofwords★

ConcisenessE.Usepronounsinsteadofrepetitionofnouns

Inacertainstorewheretheysellpuddings,anumberofthesedeliciousthingsarelaidoutinarowduringtheChristmasseason.Hereyoumayselecttheonewhichismosttoyourtaste,andyouareevenallowedtosamplethembeforecomingtoadecision.

WordsChoiceofwords★

ConcisenessF.UseabstractnounsWhentheWhiteHousescandalbroke,manysaidtheyhadrespectforwhatthePresidentsymbolizes

butnotthePresidenthimself.WhentheWhiteHousescandalbroke,manysaidtheyhadrespectforthePresidencybutnotthePresident.WordsChoiceofwords★

ConcisenessF.Useabstractnouns2. Thegirlsuddenlybecamefrightenedandfledtothecastle,whichmadeherfeelsafe.Thegirlsuddenlybecamefrightenedandfledto

thesafetyofthecastle.WordsChoiceofwords★

ConcisenessExercises:makesentencesconciseItmakesmepainfultothinkthatshehastowork12hoursadayandsevendaysaweek.2.Mrs.Walkersatby,noddingherheadtoshowherapproval.3.ThereasonwhyIstaybehindwasbecauseIhadnomoney.painsmeWordsChoiceofwords★

ConcisenessExercises:makesentencesconcise4.Hewasfrightenedwithfearbythemysterioussoundbehindhim.5.Whatistheretolearnfrompasthistory?6.Inthebookittellsaboutaspringwhennobirdssang.TheWordsChoiceofwords★

ConcisenessExercises:translateintoconciseEnglish你覺得合適就干，不合適就別干。Goaheadifyouthinkthejobsuitsyouand________.2.狗總愛追貓，但是很少有貓去追狗。Dogsoftenchasecatsand___________________.3.紅燈亮著表示機器在運轉，不亮表示機器不在運轉。Themachineisworkingwhentheredlightisonand______________.don’tifnotnotusuallyviceversanototherwiseWordsChoiceofwords★

EffectivenessA.Figuresofspeech

支票掉到了地上。

Thecheckflutteredtothefloorlikeabirdwithabrokenwing.2.Uponarrival,wedefeatedourenemiesandseizedtheterritory.Wecame,wesaw,weconquered.WordsChoiceofwords★

EffectivenessB.Seektherightwords

1.樹葉落了下來。

Afewleavesfellfloatingtotheground.Afewleavescamewhirlingdown.

2.Myauntwalkedintothegrocerystoreangrilyandaskedforarefund.Myauntstormedintothegrocerystoreanddemandedarefund.WordsChoiceofwords★

EffectivenessExercises:makesentenceseffectiveShewasnothappywiththerehearsal,andneitherthesetsnorherdressingroom

northeacousticsofthetheaterweregoodenoughforher.notwith___notwithnotwith,,WordsChoiceofwords★

EffectivenessExercises:makesentenceseffective2.

Theywalkedinsidetheroominacautiousmanner.crept3.

Aboltoflightningappearedinthesky.flashed4.

Itisthebesttimetoact,andwemustseizetheopportunityrightnow.Thetimeisnow;thetimeisright.SentencesTypesofsentences★

Exercises

Forapersonwhoislookingforjob,itisaessentialskillsforhimtofindabetterposition.2.It’smakemehappyandhavenopressure.3.I’mfeelinghaveachocolate.4.Andthewinterwithoutsnowevenmuchcolderthanbefore.5.Ifyouaskmewhydoyouwanttobeateacher… CorrectsentencesSentencesTypesofsentences★

Exercises

5.Becausewedidn’tknowsthathowcanwefoundarefuge.6.JustoneyearIwillleaveschoolgotoanothercollectivity.7.Mypersonalityisenthusiasmandpatiently.8.So,themoreread,themorewisest.9.Itmademesawasobeautifulpicture. CorrectsentencesSentencesTypesofsentences★

Exercises

10.Youcanshoppingatanytimeifyoulikebecausetheon-lineshopareopened24hoursaday.11.Title:Aglanceofspring12.Itinsomewaycarrytopeoplethejustvoiceofthesociety.13.Iveryliketheseclothes. CorrectsentencesSentencesTypesofsentences★

Simplesentence

Short,ConciseandClear1. Christmaswascoming.Iwantedapony.Tomakesurethatmyparentsunderstood,IdeclaredthatIwantednothingelse. “Nothingbutapony?”myfatherasked. “Nothing,”Isaid.S+V只包含一個主謂結構的句子SentencesTypesofsentences★

Simplesentence

Short,ConciseandClear2.Hedid.Heransprints,heranhurdles,herandistanceraces.Hehigh-jumped,helong-jumped.Hethrewthejavelinandtheshot.Finishingfirstineightevents,thebigfellowbeatthewholeLafayetteteam.S+V只包含一個主謂結構的句子SentencesTypesofsentences★

Simplesentence

Short,ConciseandClear3. PeoplethinkIamfoolishandignorant,butI’mnot.Ilisten.Ihear.Isee.Ithink.Iread.Iwalkalonebymyself.S+V只包含一個主謂結構的句子SentencesTypesofsentences★

Simplesentence

Short,ConciseandClear4.Ihardlyheard,Icouldscarcelywait.Iwassohappy,sothrilled.Irodeoffupthestreet.Suchabeautifulpony.Andmine!S+V只包含一個主謂結構的句子EllipticalSentenceSentences

PointoutellipticalsentencesHalfthefunofgoingwestisdiscovering,alongtheway,howmuchthepastisstillwithus.Oldwives’tales.Littleoldfarmtownsshadedfromthesummerheatbyenormousmapletreesonstreets.White-hairedfolksreadingthepaperontheirfarmhouseporchesatsunset.Wornoutwindmillsstandingaloneonpastures…

Allinall,wedidnotseemuchevidencethatsmall-townAmericaisvanishing…古老的傳說、老式的農村小鎮(zhèn)、沿街兩側的巨大楓樹、白發(fā)蒼蒼的讀報老人及牧場上的破舊風車SentencesTypesofsentences★

Compoundsentence

,+conj.我主修計算機科學，我妹妹主修通信專業(yè)。－Iamstudyingcomputerscience,andmysisteris

majoringincommunications.凱特想去購物，湯姆不愿意開車帶她去。－Katewantedtogoshopping,butTomrefusedtodriveher. Twoormoresimplesentencesconnectedwithconjunctionsorpunctuations.SentencesTypesofsentences★

Compoundsentence

2.conj.我轉動了鑰匙不過引擎沒開。－Iturnedonthekeybuttheenginewouldn’tstart.那是２０年前我住在巴黎。－ItwastwentyyearsagoandIwaslivinginParis. Twoormoresimplesentencesconnectedwithconjunctionsorpunctuations.SentencesTypesofsentences★

Compoundsentence

3.;－Allhappyfamiliesarelikeoneanother;eachunhappyfamilyisunhappyinitsownway.－Igotajob;moreover,Igotaraisesoon. Twoormoresimplesentencesconnectedwithconjunctionsorpunctuations.;+transitionalwords(therefore,thus,besides)SentencesTypesofsentences★

Compoundsentence

4.,/;foratleastthreesentences－Icame,Isaw,Iconquered.－Thenarrow,sunlesshallsmelledunpleasantlyofstalecabbage;thewallsweredirtywithinkmarks;itwasallsilent. Twoormoresimplesentencesconnectedwithconjunctionsorpunctuations.SentencesTypesofsentences★

Exercises

Sandyseemedwillingtohelpcleanup.Sheleftimmediatelyafterdinner.2.Thethunderroared.Thelightningflashed.3.I’mnotdeaf.I’mnotblind.4.Manypeoplethinkbigisdefinitelynotbeautiful.Manypeoplegoonadiet. Combinethetwosentencesintocompoundsentences.SentencesTypesofsentences★

Exercises

5.Investyourmoneyinstocks.Putitinthebank.6.SanFranciscoattractsthousandsoffinefoodloverseachyear.Thatcityhasmanytwo-andthree-starrestaurants.7.Menmadehouses.Womenmadehomes. Combinethetwosentencesintocompoundsentences.SentencesTypesofsentences★

Exercises

YesterdayJanetlostherpurse,andshewenttothestore.2.Mysisterisacollegegraduate,andshehastenchildren.3.YellowstoneNationalParkofferstrulyunusualsights,butIcouldn’tgetanyvacationtimelastsummer. Rewritethesentencestomakeitmeaningful.SentencesTypesofsentences★

Complexsentence

－WhenJerrylosthistemper,healsolosthisjob.－IcheckedmymoneybeforeIinvitedJerryforlunch.

mainsentence+clauseDifferencesincompoundandcomplexsentencesColleaguesBossandemployees

SentencesTypesofsentences★

Compoundsentence

Pointoutthedifferencesa.Johnappearedinover200film;hewasthebiggestbox-officeattractionofhistime.b.John,whoappearedinover200films,wasthebiggestbox-officerattractionofhistime.c.John,whowasthebiggestbox-officeattractionofhistime,appearedinover200films.SentencesTypesofsentences★

Exercises

Thereportisuseless.Itsinformationisnolongercurrent.(because)2.Youstealfromoneauthor.It’splagiarism.Youstealfrommany.It’sresearch.(if)3.Morningshowstheday.Childhoodshowstheman.(as) Combinethetwosentencesintocomplexsentences.SentencesTypesofsentences★

Exercises

4.Lovesceasetobeapleasure.Lovesceasestobeasecret.(when)5.Thebrainisgivenplentyofexercise.Itkeepsitspower.(aslongas)6.TheEnglishboiltheirvegetablesinwater.TheSpanishfrytheirvegetablesinoil.(whereas) Combinethetwosentencesintocomplexsentences.SentencesTypesofsentences★

Exercises

7.IcoatedmyselfwithUVmoisturizinglotion.Igetsunburns.(lest)8.Youareentitledtoafreephotoalbum.Youbuyfiverollsoffilm.(providedthat)9.DaveliesinacemeteryinJerusalem.DavewaskilledintheclashwithJewishsoldiers.(who) Combinethetwosentencesintocompoundsentences.SentencesTypesofsentences★

Exercises

Astormcanbeterrifying.Itisterrifyingwhenyoucannotfindshelter. Drivinginastormisequallyterrifying. Combinesentences.Key: Astormcanbeterrifyingwhenyoucannotfindshelterindriving.SentencesTypesofsentences★

Exercises

2.Doctorsareincreasingrapidlyinnumber.DoctorsarenotincreasinginruralareasoftheUnitedStates. Doctorsareneededintheseareas. Combinesentences.Key: IntheUnitedStates,doctorsareincreasingrapidlyinnumber,butnotinruralareaswheretheyareneeded.SentencesTypesofsentences★

Exercises

3.Creditcardsaredangerous. Theyencouragepeopletobuythings. Oftenthesearethingspeopleareunabletoafford. Oftenthesearethingspeopledonotreallyneed. Combinesentences.Key: Creditcardsaredangerousbecausetheyencouragepeopletobuythingseithertheycan’taffordortheydon’treallyneed.SentencesTypesofsentences★

Exercises

4.Bearsarenolongeracommonsight.Wolveshavevanished. Bearsandwolveswerehuntedfiercely. Combinesentences.Key: Huntedfiercely,wolveshavevanished,andbearsarenolongeracommonsight.SentencesTypesofsentences★

Exercises

5.Hydrogeniscolorless.Itisinflammable. Ithasnosmell. Itisthelightestofalltheelements. Combinesentences.Key: Thecolorless,odorless,andinflammablehydrogenisthelightestofalltheelements.SentencesTypesofsentences★

Exercises

6.Maryearnedafour-yeardegreeatPennState.ShethenreceivedalawdegreefromHarvardUniversity. ThenshereceivedanappointmentasassistanttoaSupremeCourtjustice.Key: AfterMaryearnedafour-yeardegreeatPennStateandalawdegreeatHarvardUniversity,shereceivedanappointmentasassistanttoaSupremeCourtjustice.SentencesTypesofsentences★

Exercises

7.ThecoachisanativeChicagoan.TheteamcaptainisanativeChicagoantoo. Theyroomedtogetheratcollege. Theyarefriendlyrivalsasaresultoftheirlongfriendship. Combinesentences.Key: NativeChicagoansandcollegeroommates,thetwocoacheshavelongbeenfriendlyrivals.SentencesTypesofsentences★

Exercises

8.Ginahadworeglassesforfifteenyears.Shedecidedtogetcontactlenses. Shewouldbeabletoseebetter. Shewouldlookmoreglamorous. Combinesentences.Key: Afterwearingglassesforfifteenyears,Ginadecidedtogetcontactlensestoseebetterandtolookmoreglamorous.SentencesCommonmistakesinwritingsentences

Ispentalldayintheemploymentoffice.Tryingtofindajobthatsuitedme.Ispentalldayintheemploymentoffice,tryingtofindajobthatsuitedme.SentencesCommonmistakesinwritingsentences

Manythingsmattertome.Suchashealth,love,andmoney.Manythingsmattertome,suchashealth,love,andmoney.SentencesCommonmistakesinwritingsentences

Ateenagerwhodreamsofbecomingamoviestar.Iwasateenagerwhodreamedofbecomingamoviestar.SentencesCommonmistakesinwritingsentences

Ibegansleepingbetteratnight.AfterIstoppeddrinkingtea.AfterIstoppeddrinkingtea,Ibegansleepingbetteratnight.SentencesCommonmistakesinwritingsentences

1.Sentencefragment一般來說,在書面英語中,串在一起的詞沒有主語或謂語動詞,不是主謂結構,在結構上殘缺,在意義上含糊,這種語病就是句子片斷.SentencesCommonmistakesinwritingsentences★

ExercisesofSentencefragment

Bobhasalwayslovedsports.Suchastennis,football,andgolf.Ilookforwardtoholidays.Forexample,ThanksgivingandChristmas.Peterisashyboy.Unlikehistwinbrother.Weenjoytidinginthecountry.Especiallyinthespring. Correctsentences.SentencesCommonmistakesinwritingsentences

Ihadtwoflattires,Istillarrivedintimeforthewedding.IhadtwoflattiresIstillarrivedintimeforthewedding.SentencesCommonmistakesinwritingsentences

2.CommaspliceandRun-onsentence逗號連接指僅用逗號連接兩個簡單句；粘連句指兩個簡單句粘在一起，之間既無并列連詞又無標點符號。SentencesCommonmistakesinwritingsentences★

ExercisesofCommaspliceandRun-onsentence

Manysenttwoemails,shestudiedforherEnglishexamIlovespaghettiIdon’tlikehamburgers.TheOrientalPearlisthetallestbuildinginShanghai,visitorsmaytakeanelevatortothetopforabreathtakingviewofthecity. Correctsentences.SentencesCommonmistakesinwritingsentences

Myhobby____oldcars.EitherheorI___goingtoworkonnightshift.Thefamily____planningtomovetoCanada.ThePresident,aswellashiswifeanddaughter,______Chinese.(love)isamarelovesSentencesCommonmistakesinwritingsentences

3.disagreementofsubjectandverb謂語動詞在數上和主語保持一致就近原則主語為集體名詞時，強調整體謂語動詞用單數，強調個體謂語動詞用復數在主語有附屬短語時，仍與主語保持一致SentencesCommonmistakesinwritingsentences★

Exercises

Ridingthehorsewasthetwogirls,valerie.Decidingthattheycouldreachnodecisionthatnight,thejuryretiredtoitsroomstogetsomesleep.Hehurriedbecauseheknewhisfamilywaswaitingforhimanxiously.Thebook,withotherbooksonthesamesubject,arefailingtowinalargeaudience. Correctsentences.Se