大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)強(qiáng)化-書(shū)面表達(dá)

新東方大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)強(qiáng)化班——書(shū)面表達(dá)作文四級(jí)作文評(píng)分方法五級(jí)評(píng)分制：2、5、8、11、14分注意字?jǐn)?shù)適中用不同單詞表達(dá)不同意思如何打動(dòng)評(píng)卷人文章的整體脈絡(luò)清晰段落的銜接暢順用詞造句經(jīng)典書(shū)寫(xiě)美觀英文寫(xiě)作的基本常識(shí)清晰的結(jié)構(gòu)觀點(diǎn)鮮明的開(kāi)頭緊扣主題的結(jié)尾由主題句引導(dǎo)的銜接自然的中間段落統(tǒng)一的中心自然的銜接寫(xiě)作的重中重：邏輯關(guān)系顯性化寫(xiě)作的重中重重復(fù)詞：概括；直接；齊頭序數(shù)詞關(guān)聯(lián)詞：遞進(jìn)；轉(zhuǎn)折；因果平時(shí)如何提高寫(xiě)作閱讀四級(jí)閱讀理解文章等等背誦18篇優(yōu)秀四級(jí)作文看電影——阿甘正傳、獅子王、老友記30遍圖表類(lèi)特點(diǎn)：有圖——趨勢(shì)透，字?jǐn)?shù)少段落安排：第一段：趨勢(shì)（變化）第二段：分析變化的原因第三段：自己的看法和感想正文：第一段：如圖所示Aswecanseefromthechart/graph/table/diagram,……The…displaythatstandingthe……carefully,wecansee.Thechart/graphshows/displaysthat……Ascanbeshowninthetable……,Itisclear/apparentfromthechart/tablethat比例Bhasthelargestpercentage/proportionof…….……account(s)for/take(s)up10%.Onthetopofthelistis……,whichaccountsfor60%.Atthebottomis……,whichaccountsfor10%.Aisranked/ratedfirst,followedbyBat30%andCat25%.增長(zhǎng)與下降Thenumberof……increased/rosesuddenly/rapidly/dramatically（戲劇地）/substantially（實(shí)質(zhì)的）/considerably/sharply/steeply（險(xiǎn)峻地）from1990to2000.Therewasasudden/rapid/dramatic/substantial/considerable/sharp/steepincrease/riseinthenumberof……from1990to2000.Thenumberof……increased/rosesteadily（穩(wěn)定地）/gradually（逐漸地）/slowly/slightlyfrom1990to2000.Therewasasteady/gradual/slow/slightincrease/riseinthenumberof……from1990to2000.下降：decrease/fall/drop；adecrease/drop/reduction/declineinthenumberof……達(dá)到某點(diǎn)Thesituation/figuresreached/hitapeak/highat60%in…….Thesituation/figurespeakedat60%in…….Thesituation/figuresbottomedoutat20%in……. Thesituation/figureshitatroughat20%in…….倍數(shù)Aistwice/three/fourtimeswhatitwasin1990.Aistwice/three/fourtimestheamountin1990. Aistwice/three/fourtimesasmuch/manyas……in1990.Thefigurewasroughlydoubled/tripled/quintupledbetween1990and2000.第二段：As…thenumberof…動(dòng)詞+副詞during…As…earlyas數(shù)字，thenumberwas……,then……itbecause……列舉First……,second……,last（inaddition）Foronething,……,foranotherthing,……,what’smore……Ononehand,……,ontheotherhand,moreover,……Thereforeallthesereasons……thechanges.第三段：總結(jié)：Hencefromthe……喊口號(hào)：=1\*GB3①I(mǎi)tishightimethat+一般過(guò)去時(shí)=2\*GB3②Onlythrough……canwe……只有……我們才能…… =3\*GB3③ +名人名言操辭：上升：rise,increase,goup,boon,rocket下降：decrease,reduce,comedown,onthedecline快速：rapidly,dramatically,sharply（銳）慢：slowly,gradually二選一類(lèi)特點(diǎn)：給出兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)段落安排：第一段：引出將要評(píng)論的事物或者觀點(diǎn)；提出第一種觀點(diǎn)；本觀點(diǎn)支持性分論點(diǎn)。第二段：承上啟下；提出第二種觀點(diǎn)；本觀點(diǎn)支持性分論點(diǎn)。第三段：我的觀點(diǎn)正文：第一段：引言：Inrecentyears,withfasteconomicgrowth,……h(huán)aveappearedinmanyfamiliesinChina. 近年來(lái)，伴隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的快速發(fā)展，……在中國(guó)很多的家庭中出現(xiàn)了。人們對(duì)……有著不同的觀點(diǎn)。Withtheincreaseinthegeneralstandardofliving,someordinaryChinesefamiliesbegintoafforda…….Yet, 伴隨著人們生活水平的提高，一些中國(guó)家庭開(kāi)始能夠買(mǎi)……。但是，人們對(duì)……的觀點(diǎn)是不同的。Eversinceearlythiscentury,……h(huán)asbecomeanessential（本質(zhì)的）partofourmodernlife.……isthedrivingforcebehindtheswift（迅速的）progressofindustry,agriculture,scienceandtechnology.Nobodycandenythatthedevelopmentofourcivilizationdependson……. 自從本世紀(jì)初夜，……已經(jīng)成為現(xiàn)代生活的一個(gè)重要部分?！枪I(yè)、農(nóng)業(yè)和科技飛速發(fā)展的動(dòng)力。沒(méi)有人能夠否認(rèn)人類(lèi)文明的發(fā)展依賴(lài)于……。Theissueof……h(huán)asbeenwidelyargued/debated（爭(zhēng)論）currently. 關(guān)于是否……的問(wèn)題，如今公眾已經(jīng)展開(kāi)了廣泛的討論?！環(huán)asbecomeahot/populartopicamongpeoplerecently.Opinionsvaryfrompersontoperson. ……已經(jīng)成為人們談?wù)摰臒衢T(mén)話(huà)題，不同的人對(duì)此有不同的看法。Thereisapublic/general/muchdebate/discussion/controversy（論戰(zhàn)）today/nowadaysabout/on/upon/over/astotheproblem/issueof……. 關(guān)于……的問(wèn)題，公眾已經(jīng)展開(kāi)了討論。Thereisanargument/muchdisagreement/noconsensusofopinionsamongpeopleconcerning/over/asto/on……. 關(guān)于……，人們的看法不盡相同。Thereisnoconsensusofopinionamongpeopleastotheviewof……Somepeoplebelieve/argue/say/maintain/advocate（提倡）/advise/hold/claim/thinkthat…… . 一些人認(rèn)為……Itiswidely/generally/commonly/universallythought/believed/accepted/heldthat…….Tothegeneral/public/poplarmind,……. 人們通常認(rèn)為……Thosewhocriticize/opposeto/objectto……arguethat……. 那些反對(duì)……的人認(rèn)為……。分論點(diǎn)Thereareseveraladvantagesin/of…….Thefist/biggestoneisthat……. ……有很多的優(yōu)點(diǎn)。其中第一個(gè)/最大的好處是……?！環(huán)asappositiveimpact/influence/effectonpeople’slives. ……對(duì)人類(lèi)的生活起到了積極的影響。Mostpeoplewouldagreethattherecanbenosubstitutefor…….Theysaythat…….Besides,theyassert,…… 大多數(shù)人認(rèn)為……是不可替代的。他們認(rèn)為……。另外他們還認(rèn)為……。Anotherattractionabout……isthat…… 另外關(guān)于……的另一個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)是……。Moreover,oneoftheadvantagesof……isthat…… 另外，……的另一個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)是……。Themostimportantadvantageof……isthat…… ……最重要的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是……。Wemustnotlosesightofthefactthatthereareadvantagesto…….Moreimportantly,therecanbenosubstitutefor……. 我們不應(yīng)當(dāng)不注意到……有這樣的優(yōu)點(diǎn)。更重要的是，……是不可替代的。Foronething……foranotherthing……What……wecantakeitforgrantedthat……第二段：承上啟下 即使有其優(yōu)點(diǎn)，但是它們?nèi)匀挥凶陨淼娜毕荨owever,likeanythingelse,theyalsohavetheirownweakness/limits/negativeeffects. 和其它事物一樣，它們也有著自身的缺點(diǎn)。However,theyarenotwithoutshortcomings/faults. 但是它們并不是沒(méi)有缺點(diǎn)的。Ofcourse,thedisadvantagescannotbeignored. 當(dāng)然，缺點(diǎn)也是不能忽視的。However,justaseverythinghastwosides,……alsohasmanydrawbacks. 但是正如每個(gè)事物都有兩面性一樣，……也有很多缺點(diǎn)。Yetothersspeakoftheproblemsof……h(huán)avebrought.Theycomplainthat……. 但是還有人在談?wù)撍鶐?lái)的……問(wèn)題。他們抱怨……。However,……mayalsobringwithitproblemsoursocietyhadnotpreviouslyfaced. 但是，……也有一些我門(mén)未曾遇到的問(wèn)題。Despitetheincreaseinefficiencyandconveniencegeneratedby……,thechangestheybringcouldverywellleadtopotentiallyadverseconsequences. 拋卻……所產(chǎn)生的效率和方便，它們所引發(fā)的變化也許會(huì)導(dǎo)致潛在的不良后果。Thismaybeso,butitmustbepointedoutthat……alsothathasitsdrawbacks. 這也許是這樣（有好處），……自身的缺陷也應(yīng)當(dāng)被指出。However,……mayalsocause/bringabout/leadto/resultin/contributetosomeproblems. 但是，……依然會(huì)帶來(lái)一些問(wèn)題。第二種觀點(diǎn)（Howeveracoinhastwoside）Onthecontrary,someothersthink/believe/argue/emphasis/claim/maintain……because……,besides……However,thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent/obvious/evident.Tobeginwith,…….Tomakemattersworse,…….Worstofall,……. 然而，不足之處也是顯而易見(jiàn)的。首先，…。更糟糕的是，……。最后……。Thesideeffects……h(huán)asexertedonhumanbeingscanbeboileddowntoseveralmajoronesasfollows.First,…….Second,…….Inaddition,……. ……對(duì)人類(lèi)所產(chǎn)生的副作用歸納起來(lái)有以下幾個(gè)方面。其一，……。其二，……。此外，……第三段：AsfarasIamconcernedtheformerpointofviewcoincideswithmine.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayeasilydrawtheconductionthat……Unquestionably,thechallengeof……meansweallshouldconsiderhowwecancontrolthem,sothattheywellnotcontrolus. 毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，……的挑戰(zhàn)意味著我們應(yīng)該思考怎樣控制它們而不是被它們控制。Whetherthe……areablessingoracurseisadifficultquestiontoanswer,yetthedesireforthecomfortandindependence……canbringwillnotbeeliminated. ……究竟是一個(gè)祝福還是詛咒是一個(gè)很難回答的問(wèn)題，但是它所產(chǎn)生的舒適和對(duì)立是不會(huì)被忽視的。Anyway/Anyhow/Inanycase,whethertheeffectisgoodorbad,onethingiscertain:ithaschangedandwillcontinuetochangethewayofourentertainment,ourleisureandourlife. 總之，不管是好還是壞，可以確定的是：它已經(jīng)并且還將改變我們的娛樂(lè)、讀家和生活方式。Giventhechoicebetweenthesetwomethodsof……,Iprefer…….ThisisbecauseIamthesortofpersonwhofindsitdifficulttoconcentrateon……. 在……兩者之間做一個(gè)選擇，我會(huì)選……。這是因?yàn)槲沂沁@樣的一種人，我發(fā)現(xiàn)要專(zhuān)注于……是很困難的。……,Ifeel,istheonlyoneinwhichmostpeoplefeelcomfortableapplyingalltheirenergiestotheall-importanttaskof……. 我認(rèn)為……是唯一的（一種方式），從而人們?cè)诎丫ν度氲胶苤匾氖虑椤系臅r(shí)候會(huì)覺(jué)得很舒適。ThereisnodoubtinmymindthatAnowadaysisafarbetterwayto……thanB. 毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，我認(rèn)為現(xiàn)在對(duì)于做……A是比B更好的方式。Inmyopinion,theadvancesmadein……recentlyhavemade……obsolete. 我認(rèn)為，最近……方面的進(jìn)步使得……過(guò)時(shí)了。Takingintoaccountofallthesefactors,wemayreach/draw/cometoconclusionthat……. 考慮到所有這些因素，我們得出結(jié)論……。Alreliableevidencespointtoonesaying/reflectonefact,thatis……. 將所有可靠的因素歸結(jié)為一點(diǎn)就是……。Forthereasonspresented/statedabove,Istronglycommittothenotionthat……. 從上面提到的原因，我強(qiáng)烈地支持這樣的概念是……。WhileitistruethattheargumentIdisagreeholdalittlebitofwater,Ithinkthat……. 有一個(gè)事實(shí)是，雖然我不支持的論點(diǎn)也有一些優(yōu)點(diǎn)，但是我還是認(rèn)為……。Therefore/So/Hence/Thus,itissafelytodrawtheconclusionthat……. 于是我們得出結(jié)論……。Toputallintoanutshell,I……. 綜上所述，我……。Inmyopinion,itiswisetosupportthestatementthatitisbetterto……. 我認(rèn)為，最好同意……的論點(diǎn)是明智的。Frommypointofview,itiswisetochoosesAratherthanB. 從我的觀點(diǎn)來(lái)看，選擇A而不是選擇B將更加明智。Attheriskofaddressingtheissuetoodirect,theadvantagesofAoutweighthatofB. 請(qǐng)?jiān)徫艺f(shuō)得直接一些，A的優(yōu)點(diǎn)要大于B的優(yōu)點(diǎn)。Therearedifferentviewsasto/concerningthistopic.Inmypart,Iwouldliketovotefor……. 關(guān)于這樣一個(gè)論題有各種各樣的觀點(diǎn)，就我個(gè)人而言，我傾向于同意……。AsfarasIamconcerned,IhaveapreferenceforAoverB. 就我個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)來(lái)看，我選擇A而不是B。Bothpatternsof……presentadvantagesanddisadvantages,however,……. 以上兩種情況都有優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)，然而……。Certainly,Iamawareofthatbothmethodshaveshortcomings,nevertheless,frommypointofview,Iamfor/votefor……. 確切地來(lái)說(shuō)兩種情況都有一些缺陷，然而從我的觀點(diǎn)來(lái)看，我傾向于……。TheadvantagesclaimedforAoverBare4nowbeingdoubted/debated.Nonetheless,measureformeasure,IconfessthatBismoreadvantages. A要優(yōu)于B的觀點(diǎn)越來(lái)越受到質(zhì)疑，經(jīng)過(guò)左右權(quán)衡，我認(rèn)為B擁有更多的優(yōu)點(diǎn)。TheadvantagesofAcarrymoreweightthanthoseofB. A的優(yōu)點(diǎn)大于B的優(yōu)點(diǎn)。Inmypointofview,Aisasimportantas,ifnotmoreimportantthan,B.soitissagacioustochooseA. 從我的觀點(diǎn)來(lái)看，A和B一樣重要，如果不是更重要的話(huà)。所以選擇A是比較明智的。Nodoubt,IpreferA,sincetherearetoomanybenefitsthatoutnumberitsdisadvantagesofnotchoosingit.ButB,ontheotherhad,hasadvantagesnomorethanitsdisadvantages. 毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)我選擇A，因?yàn)锳的益處大大超過(guò)了不選擇它的缺點(diǎn)，現(xiàn)飯B的缺點(diǎn)要大于它的好處。Astome,Ithinkthemeritsoutweigh/carrymoreweightthanthedemerits. 我認(rèn)為利大于弊。Butforme,Ithinkwhatismoreimportantisitspositiveside. 但就我而言，我認(rèn)為它積極的一面更加重要。Theadvantagesof/derivedfrom……faroutweigh/aremuchgreaterthanthedisadvantages/problems……entails. ……的優(yōu)點(diǎn)遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)多于它所引發(fā)的問(wèn)題。闡釋類(lèi)特點(diǎn)：提綱比較隨意；與前兩類(lèi)文章有千絲萬(wàn)縷的關(guān)系文章分類(lèi)：舉現(xiàn)象、說(shuō)原因、談感受、論影響舉現(xiàn)象單舉：Forexample/Forinstance/acaseinpoint/takeanexamplefor多舉：1.Forexample……nextto……furthermore……2.Forexample……and……also……even……3.Forexample……besides……論影響：Theinspect/effect/influence（harm）ofrumorhasbecomemorethemobviousatthatmoment.Foronething……foranotherthing……Recentlythephenomenonhas引起了關(guān)注/……becomeahottopicamongpeoplerecently/Nowadays,…h(huán)asbecomeaproblemweface.解決問(wèn)題：Thekeyfactortosolvethisproblemis……/Thereisnoimmediatesolutiontotheissueof……,but……mightbehelpful.正文：第一段：引出話(huà)題 當(dāng)前我國(guó)/我們社會(huì)所面臨的最棘手的問(wèn)題是……。由于它已經(jīng)嚴(yán)重影響了……，所以也引起了公眾的關(guān)注。 最近有一項(xiàng)官方報(bào)告表明，有至少百分之十/超過(guò)四分之一/四分之一的大學(xué)畢業(yè)生/年輕人/看電視的人……（和1990年相比）?！F(xiàn)象已經(jīng)引起了公眾的關(guān)注。Nowadays,……h(huán)asbecomeaproblemwehavetoface. 如今……已經(jīng)成為我們必須面臨的問(wèn)題。Nowadays,moreandmorepeopleareconcernedabouttheproblem……. 現(xiàn)在越來(lái)越多的人開(kāi)始關(guān)注……的問(wèn)題。Onceinanewspaper,Ihitupon/cameacrossareportthat……. 我曾經(jīng)在報(bào)紙上看到一篇關(guān)于……的報(bào)道。Recently,theissue/problem/questionof……h(huán)asbeenbroughtintofocus/broughttopublicattention/posedamongpublicattention. 最近……問(wèn)題已經(jīng)成為人們關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)。Inrecentlyyears,manycities/nations/peoplehavebeenfaced/troubledwiththeserousproblemof……. 在最近幾年里，很多城市/國(guó)家/人已經(jīng)面臨……問(wèn)題/受到……的干擾。Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplecometorealize/beawareoftheimportanceof……. 越來(lái)越多的人開(kāi)始意識(shí)到……的重要性。Itundeniable/Thereisnodenyingthefactthat……h(huán)asbecometheutmostconcernamongpeoplenowadays. 不可否認(rèn)，……已經(jīng)成為人們最關(guān)注的問(wèn)題。Recently,theriseinthephenomenonof……h(huán)asdrawn/aroused/capturedworldwideattention. 最近……現(xiàn)在日益增多已經(jīng)引起了全世界的注意。第二段：細(xì)節(jié)論證分析原因 在人們所提出的對(duì)……最重要/有說(shuō)服力的原因當(dāng)中，有一點(diǎn)值得強(qiáng)調(diào)……。 這個(gè)趨勢(shì)/增長(zhǎng)/現(xiàn)象應(yīng)當(dāng)被看成是……的一種象征/結(jié)果。 ……的增長(zhǎng)/改變/失敗/成功的主要/部分原因是這樣的……。 我們應(yīng)當(dāng)在……方面批評(píng)……，但這個(gè)問(wèn)題的產(chǎn)生是有更深層次的原因的。 產(chǎn)生這個(gè)顯著/非凡增長(zhǎng)/變化/下降的原因有很多。一、…… 導(dǎo)致該變化/上升/下降/成功/失敗/發(fā)展的因素有很多。 產(chǎn)生……的另一個(gè)因素是……。 另一個(gè)因素是……。 為什么……？首先……。其次……。也許最重要/首要的原因是……。 ……是導(dǎo)致……增長(zhǎng)/下降的另一個(gè)/部分/主要/唯一的原因。 產(chǎn)生……的原因是眾多的，也許它們存在于這樣的事實(shí)……之中。 我們可能百密一疏，產(chǎn)生……的根本原因是……。 產(chǎn)生這個(gè)復(fù)雜現(xiàn)象/趨勢(shì)的因素是多樣的，要把它們找出來(lái)不是一件容易的事情。后果 它將導(dǎo)致……的巨大變化/增長(zhǎng)。 它將產(chǎn)生一系列問(wèn)題。 它將對(duì)……產(chǎn)生深遠(yuǎn)的/巨大的/有益的/災(zāi)難性的影響 這會(huì)導(dǎo)致一些嚴(yán)重的/致命的后果。第三段：提出解決方案Peoplehavefoundmanysolutions/approachestodealingwiththisproblem. 人們已經(jīng)找到了許多解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題的辦法。Wecanfigureoutmanywaystorelievethepresentcrisis. 我們可以想出很多辦法來(lái)緩解目前的危機(jī)。Then,howshouldwesolvethisproblem?Herearesomesuggestions,whichmaybeofsomehelp. 那么，如何來(lái)解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題呢？這里有些建議可能會(huì)有幫助。Facedwith,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation. 面對(duì)……，我們應(yīng)該采取一系列的措施來(lái)應(yīng)付目前的形勢(shì)。Itishightimethat…….Hereareafewexamplesofsomeofthemeasuresthatmightbetakenimmediately. 是……的時(shí)候了。這里有幾個(gè)可以馬上付諸實(shí)施的措施。 為了扭轉(zhuǎn)局勢(shì)，我們必要采取有效的措施。 并沒(méi)有很容易的方法來(lái)解決這個(gè)問(wèn)題，……有可能會(huì)有幫助。 （大家）建議我們?nèi)σ愿啊?。記敘?lèi)記述明確中心思想情節(jié)人物對(duì)話(huà)的描述圍繞中心展開(kāi)六要素：時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、起因、經(jīng)過(guò)、結(jié)果按順序：事物發(fā)展順序，或者提綱的順序詳略得當(dāng)時(shí)態(tài)：一般過(guò)去時(shí)，插敘用過(guò)去完成時(shí)使用副詞，使文章生動(dòng)介紹地點(diǎn)抓住所介紹地點(diǎn)的基本特征，說(shuō)出一事物與另一事物區(qū)別的特征，使讀者在短時(shí)間內(nèi)獲得足夠的信息遵循一定的順序，使文章條理清楚中心突出（時(shí)間、空間、邏輯）運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)姆椒ㄟM(jìn)行特征描寫(xiě)語(yǔ)言做到準(zhǔn)確無(wú)誤，尤其是方位詞書(shū)信：例文：December26,2004KenNEWEASTNERAUTOTEXTLISTDearMomandDad,Iammosthappytohearfromyou/receiveyourletter.Howareyou?（領(lǐng)導(dǎo)：Iamsorrytooccupyyourprecioustime,butIreallyhavesomethingtotellyou.）….Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.AUTOTEXTLISTBestregards,AUTOTEXTLISTDan開(kāi)頭段：告知對(duì)方你的身份（假如對(duì)方不認(rèn)識(shí)你）DearSirorMadam:/Mr.Promentheus,Iwasastudentatyourcollege,enrolledinPhilosophyDepartment.Iama……atyour……Iama……atyourcollege,enrolledinthe……course.Mynameis……,Iam…….問(wèn)候收信人（假如他/她是你的朋友）DearPrometheus,HelloHi.Howareyou?Ihopeeverythingisfine.Howarethingsgoingwithyou?Howareyougettingonin/gettingalongwith……?解釋寫(xiě)信的原因致謝Ideeplyappreciate（感激）yourcourtesy（謙恭）andIhopetoreciprocate（酬答）yourfavorwhentheopportunity.Iamgreatlyindebted（感恩的）toyoufor（thedouble）youhavegonetoonmybehalf.ThankyouforyourletteraboutstudyinginCanada.Iamwritingtoyoutoexpressmyheartfelt（衷心的）gratitude.IamwritingtotellyouhowgratefulIamfor…….Iwouldliketothankyoumostsincerelyfor…….抱怨Iamwritingtocomplainaboutthepoorserviceatyourdining-room.Iamwritingtoexpressmydissatisfactionwith/at…….Iwishtomakeacomplaintabout…….Iamwritingtodrawyourattentionto…….IamafraidIhavegotacomplaintabout…….致歉Iwouldbegratefulifyouwouldbesokindastoprovidemewithcertainessentialinformationregardingthefollowingaspects.IamwritingtoyoubecauseIamunableto…….Ianterribly（十分）sorrythat……Iwouldliketoexpressmyapologiesfornotbeingableto…….詢(xún)問(wèn)Iwouldliketoobtain/request/seek/inquireaboutsomeinformationabout…….Iamwritingtoaskifyoucandomeafavor.Iwouldlikesomedetailedinformationon/about…….結(jié)尾段：發(fā)出請(qǐng)求Pleasegivethismatteryourimmediateattention.Iwouldverymuchappreciateitif……assoonaspossible.Pleaserender（呈遞）mesomevaluableadvicewhichisconducivetomayfinaldecision.提供幫助Ihopethese……willbehelpful,andpleasefeelfreetocontactmeformoreinformation.……willbetakingoverresponsibility（責(zé)任）foryouandifyoushouldneedanyassistance（援助）,she/hewillbepleasedtohelpyou.再次表示歉意或感激Thankyouforyourkindassistance.Pleaseacceptmyheartfeltthanksanddeepestgratitude（感激）,nowandalways.IamsorrythatIcannot……,andtrustthatyouwillunderstand.Inaddition,letmeapologizeforanyinconvenienceImayhavecaused.Ishallfeelobligedbyareplyatyourearliestconvenience.Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.期盼回信Ilookforwardtoyourprompt（即時(shí)的）response.Lookingforwardtoapromptreply.Iexpecttohearfromyouverysoon.Ihopetoreceiveyourreplyshortly.Iamalreadyeagerlyawaitingyourreplytothisfirstletter.潤(rùn)色文章：原則用詞老辣——核心動(dòng)詞。平時(shí)積累近義詞及其例句用句經(jīng)典It作形式主語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)Therebe被動(dòng)句強(qiáng)調(diào)句虛擬語(yǔ)氣名人名言錯(cuò)誤平行方面：在n個(gè)并列的句子中，若出現(xiàn)相同相近，相反，相對(duì)的概念時(shí)，要求用一致的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)基本表達(dá)越來(lái)越：beincreasingly+adj.，beontherise，agrowingnumberof人們認(rèn)為：itisgenerally/widelybelieved/held/agreedthat許多問(wèn)題：ahost/numberofproblem引起人們注意：claimcall/attractgeneral/public/worldattentiontosth.意識(shí)到：thereisagrowingawareness（知道）/realizationof/that，awakensb.Tothefact/danger適應(yīng)新的形勢(shì)/變化：adapt/adjust/accommodate（使適應(yīng)）oneselftonewenvironment/change接觸各種思想/經(jīng)歷：beexposedtonewideas/experiences/problems接觸社會(huì)：comeintofrequent/closecontactwiththeworld/society獲得成功：achieve/accomplishsuccess提出觀點(diǎn)/建議：advance/putforward/comeupwiththearguments/ideas/suggestions作出努力：maketremendous（極大的）/persistent（持久穩(wěn)固的）/sustained（持續(xù)不變的）efforttodosth.，takegreatpainstodo（withwork/study）影響學(xué)習(xí)：interferewithstudies/work產(chǎn)生影響：have/exertaprofound（深刻的）influenceonlife/personality，haveadramatic/undesirable（令人不快的）effecton較好地駕馭生活：beabetterpilotofone’slife剝奪機(jī)會(huì)/權(quán)力：depriveoneselfofthechance/right/opportunity取代：substitute（替代）for/taketheplaceoftheoldway采取措施：takeeffectivesteps/measuresto控制我們的環(huán)境：take/gainincreasingcontroloverourownenvironment躲避危險(xiǎn)/挑戰(zhàn)：shy（躲避）/runawayfromthedangers/challenge滿(mǎn)足要求：meet/satisfy/accommodatethedemandof補(bǔ)償損失：compensatefor/makeupfortheloss/damage解釋某現(xiàn)象：accountfor/explainthephenomenon對(duì)……很好的了解：haveabetterunderstanding/appreciationof，haveanewperspective（觀點(diǎn)）on，provide/gainaninsightinto把某因素考慮進(jìn)去：takesth.intoaccount（consideration），givemuchthoughtto品位人生/自由青春：savorthelife/freedom/youth培養(yǎng)對(duì)……的信心：develop/fosterone’sinterest/confidencein經(jīng)歷變化/困難/艱險(xiǎn)：undergo/experiencegreatchanges/hardships/experience表現(xiàn)出自信心等：projectone’sconfidence/feeling/image生活充滿(mǎn)不公正的地方：lifeisfullofminorirritation/injustice追求學(xué)習(xí)/職業(yè)：pursueone’sacademic（理論的）interest/professionalcareer學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)/技術(shù)：pursue/acquireknowledge/technology/skill被看作學(xué)習(xí)的……榜樣：beheldupasagoodexample交流經(jīng)驗(yàn)/知識(shí)：shareexperience/ideas/problems/knowledge發(fā)揮/起到重要作用：playan（important/active/great）role/part逃學(xué)/缺課：skipschool/aclass/ameeting/alecture知識(shí)/經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富：richinknowledge/experience確立/追求目標(biāo)：set/pursueagoal/higherstandard到達(dá)目標(biāo)：achieve/accomplish/stainthegoal/aim/object克服困難：overcomeobstacles/difficulty面臨危險(xiǎn)/困難：beconfronted/facedwith/inthefaceofdanger/difficulty阻礙了成功：standinthewayofsuccess，beanobstacle（障礙）/barriertosuccess/growth阻礙了發(fā)展：hamper/impede/stuntthedevelopmentof持傳統(tǒng)的看法：holdconventionalwisdom發(fā)表看法：voice/expressone’sopinion持相反/合理的觀點(diǎn)：taketheopposite/freshview揭穿某種一貫的說(shuō)法：shatterthemythof求得幫助：enlistone’ssupport/help縮小差別：bridge/narrow/fellthegap/gulf（betweencityandcountry）把成功/錯(cuò)誤歸咎于：attribute/ownthesuccess/failureto對(duì)……重要：beindispensable/important/vitalto施加壓力：put/exertaacademicpressureon重視：assign/attachmuchimportance/significanceto強(qiáng)調(diào)：place/putmuchemphasis/stress/valueon把注意力集中在：focus/concentrateone’sattention/efforts/thoughtsupon提供機(jī)會(huì)/信息：provide/offer/furnishanopportunity/informationforsb.抓住機(jī)會(huì)：grab/seize/taketheopportunity得到機(jī)會(huì)：enjoy/gainaccesstoaopportunity/likelihoodthat有可能：thereis（little/much）possibility/likelihoodthat，chances/theodds（可能的機(jī)會(huì)）arethat展開(kāi)競(jìng)爭(zhēng)：competeagainst/withsb.fortheprize/position/control/themasteryof開(kāi)展運(yùn)動(dòng)：conduct（carryon/undertake/initiate/launch/wage）avigorous/nation-wide/publicity/advertising）對(duì)我很有/沒(méi)有什么意義：makemuch/littlesensetome帶來(lái)無(wú)窮的幸福/滿(mǎn)足：beasourceofhappinesssatisfaction/contentment（滿(mǎn)意）/pride/complaint獻(xiàn)身于：devote/dedicate/commitoneselftoacause/career大不（沒(méi)什么）兩樣：makemuch（little/no）difference真正重要的是：whatreallymatters/accountsis……改變生活旅程：change/alterthecourseoflife建立在大量的學(xué)習(xí)/實(shí)踐上：buildontremendousamountofstudy/practice進(jìn)行調(diào)查/執(zhí)行任務(wù)：conduct/carryoutanstudy/task/experiment辭去工作/學(xué)習(xí)：leave/quitone’sjob/work/school參加考試/競(jìng)賽等：enter（for）theexamination/contest,race參加活動(dòng)/討論：takepart/participate/beengagedinsports/activities/discussion影響思想/態(tài)度/時(shí)間的形成：shapeone’sthinking/attitude進(jìn)入大學(xué)/社會(huì)/家庭/勞動(dòng)力市場(chǎng)/職業(yè)：enteraschool/college/society/theworkforce/professionals實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的理想/愿望：realize/fulfill/achieveone’sdream（hops/wish/desire）減輕壓力/緊張：reduce/alleviate/relievethestress/pressure/tension提高社會(huì)地位：enhance/improve/upgradesocialstatus/position/standingrisetothepositionofleadership提高技術(shù)/能力：sharpen（increase/improve/enhance/boost）one’smetalskill/ability加快/促進(jìn)發(fā)展：accelerate/facilitate/advance/enhance/boostthedevelopmentof隨著生活節(jié)奏的加快：withthequickeningpace/rhythm/tempoofmodernlife/society開(kāi)闊眼界/興趣：broadenone’sinterest/outlook，expand（broaden/enlarge）one’smentalhorizons有助于了解/發(fā)展/宣傳/解決：contributemuch/little有助于解決問(wèn)題：goalongwayto（towards）solvingtheproblem迷戀名利/分?jǐn)?shù)：beobsessed/preoccupied（全神貫注的）withgrades/fame/fortune把時(shí)間花/浪費(fèi)在：spend/wastetimedoingsth.，putinhoursdoingsth.利用機(jī)會(huì)/技術(shù)：make（full/better）useof/takeadvantageofopportunity/time，tap/harnesstechnologypotential/skills/talent把知識(shí)/經(jīng)驗(yàn)運(yùn)用到……：apply/putthetheory/knowledge/experience……取得進(jìn)步：makemuchprogress/strides/ginsin充分發(fā)揮潛力/能力：developone’sability/potentialtothefull，givefullplaytoone’sability充滿(mǎn)激情/渴望：haveaburningdesire/agreatpassionfor起承轉(zhuǎn)合起：now，nowadays，atpresent，first，firstly，firstofall，inthefirstplace，inrecentyears，recently，Itgoeswithoutsayingthat承：second，secondly，then，besides，indeed，still，third，thirdly，moreover，furthermore，certainly，obviously，truly，especially，particularly，inaddition，whatismore，whatisworse，forexample，forinstance，infact，inotherwords，atthesametime轉(zhuǎn)：however，nevertheless，otherwise，yet，but，or，whereas，inspiteof，instead，ontheotherhand，incontrast，onthecontrary，conversely合：therefore，thus，hence，inshort，inrief，inaword，inconclusion，asaresult，asaconsequence，consequently，aboveall，atlast，finally，eventually，afterall，tosumup，ingeneral，generallyspeaking，onthewhole，ashasbeennoted，asIhavesaid30個(gè)最經(jīng)典的替換詞：1.individuals,characters,folks代替(people,persons)2:positive,favorable,rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding代替good3:dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse(有害的)代替bad如果bad做表語(yǔ)，可以有belessimpressive代替eg.Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames,enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,theyfindtheiracademicrecordsarelessimpressive.4.(anarmyof,anoceanof,aseaof,amultitudeof,many,ifnotmost)代替many.注：用many,ifnotmost一定要小心，many后一定要有詞。Eg.Manyindividuals,ifnotmost,harbortheideathat….同理用most,ifnotall,代替most.5:asliceof,quietafew,several代替some6:harbortheideathat,taketheattitudethat,holdtheviewthat,itiswidelysharedthat,itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat)替think(因?yàn)槭菚?shū)面語(yǔ)，所以要加that)7:affair,business,matter代替thing8:shared代common9.reaphugefruits代替getmuchbenefit）10:formypart,frommyownperspective代替inmyopinion11:Increasing(ly),growing代替moreandmore(注意沒(méi)有g(shù)rowingly這種形式。所以當(dāng)修飾名詞時(shí)用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly.Eg.sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.Sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth.12.littleifanything,或littleornothing代替hardly13..benefitialrewarding代替helpfulbebeneficialof14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,代替customer15.exceedingly,extremely代替very16.hardlyunnecessary,hardlyinevitable...代替necessary,inevitable17.sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb代替sbtakeinterestin18.captureone'sattention代替attractone'sattention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect20.beindicativeof,besuggestiveof,befearfulof代indicate,suggest,fear21.giveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger代替cause.22.Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth代替..reasonsforsth23.desire代替want.24.pourattentioninto代替payattentionto25.bearinmindthat代替remember26.enjoy,possess代替have(注意process是過(guò)程的意思)27.interaction代替communication28.frownonsth代替beagainst,disagreewithsth29.tonameonlyafew,asanexample代替forexample30.nextto/virtuallyimpossible,代替nearlyimpossible作文過(guò)關(guān)技巧句型1．表示原因

1）Therearethreereasonsforthis．

2）Thereasonsforthisareasfollows．

3）Thereasonforthisisobvious．

4）Thereasonforthisisnotfartoseek．

5）Thereasonforthisisthat．．．

6）Wehavegoodreasontobelievethat．．．

2．表示好處

1）Ithasthefollowingadvantages．

2）Itdoesusalotofgood．

3）Itbenefitsusquitealot．

4）Itisbeneficialtous．

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