英語(yǔ)必修一寫(xiě)作建議信

Writingaskforadvice（一）命題分析本單元要求寫(xiě)一封建議信。建議信是向收信人就某事提出寫(xiě)信人的建議和忠告。建議信要寫(xiě)出寫(xiě)信的理由，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由。提出的理由要入情入理，語(yǔ)氣要禮貌當(dāng)先。（二）寫(xiě)作模板P7首段：表明寫(xiě)作意圖。陳述事由。主體段落：應(yīng)該首先肯定對(duì)方的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，然后再寫(xiě)需要改進(jìn)的地方，或針對(duì)具體情況提出自己的建議和忠告（一般3點(diǎn)）。千萬(wàn)注意不要讓人認(rèn)為你是在投訴，而不是在提建議。尾段：對(duì)提出的建議進(jìn)行總結(jié)或祝福。DearXiaodong,I’msorryyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou:First,whynotgoandtalktopeoplestandingontheirown?

Samplewriting:Iagreethatthisisdifficultbutthatpersonmaybelonelytoo.Ifyoudothis,I’msureyouwillsoonhaveanewfriend.Second,youcanbegintheconversationbyaskingabouttheirlikesanddislikes.Thatwayyouwillsoonfindpeoplewiththesameinterests.Ithinkthatisagoodwaytofindnewfriends.Finally,youshouldtrytojoinadiscussion.Youmaynotfeelthatisright,butbydoingthisyouarelettingpeopleknowhowfriendlyyouare.Sothereshouldbenoproblem.Itshouldcertainlyprovideyouwithsomenewfriends.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Yours,MissWang真題（2008山東）假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生張華，班里從外地轉(zhuǎn)來(lái)一名同學(xué)李明，他一時(shí)無(wú)法融入新的班集體中，感到很苦惱。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)封信：1.幫他分析原因2.給他提出建議3.陳述你幫助他的具體打算注意：詞數(shù)120~150付浩輝、陳基偉SamplewritingDearLiMing,Iknowyourarenowhavingtroublecommunicatingwithothers,andyoumayoftenfeellonely.That’sbecauseyouarenewhereandpeopledon’tknowaboutyou.ButIthinkyoucanmakeitifyoucanfollowtheadvicebelow.First,youshouldtakeanactivepartinthediscussionsandshowyourownopinionsaboutthematters.Atthesametime,listentootherpeople’sviews.Secondly,youshouldlearnaboutyourclassmates’likesanddislikes.Thenyoucanhavemuchcommonwiththem.Thiswayyoucangettoknowmoredifferentpeopleandshowthemthatyouarefriendly.Lastbutnotleast,I’malwaysherereadytohelp.WetakepartinsomeactivitiestogetherandIcanintroduceyoutoothers.Withtimegoingon,peoplewillknowyoubetterandwillliketomakefriendswithyou.Yours,ZhangHuaHaveatry假如你是張華，收到朋友Lucy的來(lái)信。她在信中說(shuō)，自己很喜歡玩電腦，但父母擔(dān)心影響她的學(xué)習(xí)不讓她玩，她有時(shí)和父母爭(zhēng)吵，很煩惱，卻不知道要怎么辦。請(qǐng)你給Lucy回個(gè)信給出解決辦法。提示：1.建議如下：首先要冷靜下來(lái)，畢竟父母與子女意見(jiàn)不一很正常，可以給父母寫(xiě)封信，把你的想法告訴他們；其次，承認(rèn)不應(yīng)該和他們吵架，向他們道歉；再者，試著跟他們做朋友…2.100詞左右，信件首尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearLucy,Thanksfortellingmeaboutyourproblem…