考點(diǎn)28非應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作觀點(diǎn)類說(shuō)明文（解析版）

考點(diǎn)28非應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作：說(shuō)明文（解析版）【命題解讀】短文類寫(xiě)作包括通知、倡議書(shū)、演講稿、新聞報(bào)道、日記、約稿、宣傳稿等類別。 以下對(duì)觀點(diǎn)類、說(shuō)明文等提供對(duì)應(yīng)的模板和基本寫(xiě)作技巧。說(shuō)明文【布局思維導(dǎo)圖】說(shuō)明文用來(lái)解釋或探討各種問(wèn)題，如機(jī)器的制造過(guò)程，自然現(xiàn)象或社會(huì)現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因，工程的規(guī)劃或問(wèn)題的解決方案等等?！菊f(shuō)明事物的順序】我們可以按以下三類順序說(shuō)明事物：1、時(shí)間順序，即按事物的發(fā)生、發(fā)展的先后順序進(jìn)行說(shuō)明。2、空間順序，即按事物空間位置的順序，由上至下，由近及遠(yuǎn)或由里至外地說(shuō)明。3、邏輯順序，即按人們認(rèn)識(shí)事物的規(guī)律進(jìn)行說(shuō)明，如由概括到具體，由整體到部分，由現(xiàn)象到本質(zhì)，由表及里，由原因到結(jié)果，由主要到次要，由特點(diǎn)到用途等。【說(shuō)明事物的方法】1、定義法。定義法的目的是讓不知此事物的人對(duì)此物有一個(gè)起碼的了解，以利于下文的展開(kāi)。如：Athermometerisaninstrumentusedformeasuringtemperature.就是對(duì)thermometer下了一個(gè)定義。有些事物也許不好下個(gè)明確定義，但我們可以交待這個(gè)事物的背景，來(lái)源，或列舉出它的一些典型特征，以便讓讀者明白。這類事物可以是術(shù)語(yǔ)，也可以是外國(guó)人所不了的中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)事物，如龍舟節(jié)等。2、舉例說(shuō)明法。舉出具有代表性的例子，能夠真切地說(shuō)明事物，化抽象為具體，使段落變得有血有肉，豐富起來(lái)。舉例時(shí)常用的表達(dá)有：forexample(例如)，forinstance(例如)，asanexampleof(作為……的例子)，take…forexample(以……為例)等。3、比較法。為了突出事物鮮明的特點(diǎn)，我們常把它與其他事物進(jìn)行比較。比方說(shuō)我們想向讀者介紹什么是“電腦”，我們可以說(shuō)“It’sakindofelectricalorartificial(人工的)brain.”這樣把電腦和人腦進(jìn)行了比較，從而使人們對(duì)“電腦”有更清晰的認(rèn)識(shí)。[來(lái)源:]4、細(xì)節(jié)描述法。介紹一種事物，僅用概述性的詞語(yǔ)如beautiful,friendly,boring,good或bad是不夠的。作者要提供一些細(xì)節(jié)，使被描述的對(duì)象更加形象具體，從而加深讀者的印象。除上述幾種方法外，我們還可以通過(guò)引經(jīng)據(jù)典(即引用專家、名人等的話語(yǔ))、列舉數(shù)字等其他方法說(shuō)明一件事物，從而使文章更加嚴(yán)密，內(nèi)容更具有科學(xué)性，更有說(shuō)服力。也可以綜合運(yùn)用多種方法?！緦?xiě)作模板】模板01（主題型）①________isamosteffective_______to_______.②Formostpeople,it’salmostimpossibleto______.③________isreally_________.④Withthefunctionsof_______,itenablesusto_______.⑤Itcaneven______.⑥Justimagine,allthiscanbedonewith_______.⑦Aconvenienttoolcancertainlymake_______,butitdoesn’talwayshelp_______.⑧Toomuch_________.⑨Toomany________.⑩Relyingtoomuchon_______makes________.①點(diǎn)明要介紹的事物的必要性②介紹該事物對(duì)多數(shù)人的重要意義③該事物優(yōu)勢(shì)或顯著特點(diǎn)④該事物的作用⑤進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明該事物的作用⑥說(shuō)明該事物的重要性⑦承上啟下，介紹事物的另一方面⑧該事物的負(fù)面影響一⑨該事物的負(fù)面影響二⑩總結(jié)說(shuō)明過(guò)分使用該物品給我們帶來(lái)的負(fù)面影響。模板02（說(shuō)明原因型）Nowadays,therearemoreandmore

insomebigcities.Itisestimatedthat

____________________.（用具體數(shù)據(jù)說(shuō)明某現(xiàn)象）Whyhavetherebeensomany

?Maybethereasonscanbelistedasfollows.Thefirstreasonisthat

__________________.（原因一）Besides,

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__________________.（描述要點(diǎn)二）（具體闡述要點(diǎn)二）__________________.Asacollegestudent,

__________________.（結(jié)合自身描述要點(diǎn)三）Allinall,

__________________.（做出總結(jié)）Therefore,weshould

__________________.（提出建議）模板04（問(wèn)題解決型）Inrecentdays,therehasbeenaproblem

,whichisbeingmoreandmoreserious.（說(shuō)明問(wèn)題及其現(xiàn)狀）First,

__________________.Second,

__________________.（進(jìn)一步闡釋現(xiàn)狀）Weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.Foronething,________.Foranotherthing,________.Finally,________.（列舉解決該問(wèn)題的方法）Personally,Ibelievethat________/Consequently,I’mconfidentthatabrightfutureisawaitingusbecause________.（結(jié)尾段，指出＂我＂的信心及理由）模板05（說(shuō)明利弊題型）

Nowadays,manypeoplepreferAbecauseitisplayingamoreandmoreimportantroleinourdailylife.Generally/Generallyspeaking/Onthewhole,itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows./ithasthefollowingadvantages.Firstofall,_________________(A的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之一).Besides,/What’smore,_________________A的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之二）.

However,everycoinhastwosides./Everythinghasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent./Itsdisadvantagesarealsoobvious.Oneoftheimportantdisadvantagesisthat_________________(A的第一個(gè)缺點(diǎn))．Tomakemattersworse,/Tomakethematterworse,/Tomakethingsworse/What’sworse,_________________(A的第二個(gè)缺點(diǎn))．

Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsoverweighthenegativeones./Theaboveanalysisshowsusthatithasmoreadvantagesthandisadvantages.Therefore,Iwouldliketo_________________(我的看法)．

(FromtheparisonbetweenthesepositiveandnegativeeffectsofA,weshouldtakeitreasonablyanddoitaccordingtothecircumstanceswearein.Onlyinthiswaycanwe_________________(對(duì)前景的預(yù)測(cè))．)【高頻詞句】1簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明圖表內(nèi)容的句型：

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paid…【真題1】（2016·浙江卷）“Planningisgood,butdoingisbetter”是一句英國(guó)名言。請(qǐng)以此為題用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100~120詞的短文。要求如下：1.簡(jiǎn)述你對(duì)這句名言的理解；2.用一個(gè)具體事例加以說(shuō)明；3.給出恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾。注意：1.文章的標(biāo)題已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）：2.文中不得以任何形式透露地區(qū)、、老師或同學(xué)姓名等真實(shí)信息，否則按作弊行為認(rèn)定。PlanningIsGood,ButDoingIsBetter________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】PlanningIsGood,ButDoingIsBetterPlanningisgoodasitdecidesindetailhowwedowhatwewanttodo.However,aplancanbearnofruitwithoutbeingactuallycarriedout.MyexperienceintheEnglishspeechcontestlastOctoberisacaseinpoint.Amonthbeforetheevent,Ispenthoursworkingoutascheduleoutliningmygoalsandpracticalsteps.Afterthat,Isetouttoreadwidelyforaninspiringtopic,wroteaspeech,andpracticeditsdeliveryinbeautifulpronunciationwithgoodpublicspeechskills.Ifinallycameoutofthecontestasthefirstprizewinner.IknowhowIachievedmysuccess.Itcamefromgoodplanningandbetterdoingbined.【真題2】（2017·江蘇）請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面有關(guān)我國(guó)電影票房收入（box-officeine）的柱狀圖及相關(guān)文字，并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的文章。SaturdayAfternoon.InaShoppingCentre.LiJiang:Hi,SuHua.SaturdayAfternoon.InaShoppingCentre.LiJiang:Hi,SuHua.Whichmovieshallwesee?SuHua:Whatever.We’vegotsomanychoices,KungFuYoga,JourneytotheWest…Eachsoundsgreat!LiJiang:Yeah!Andsomemoviestarsarefantastic.SuHua:Andthehigh-tech!...LiJiang:Perfect!Let’sgetsomefoodfirst.Weonlyhave20minutesleft.SuHua:Nohurry.Thecinemaisonthesamefloor.OneDayin2016.AtHome.Son:Mum,shallwegoandseeafilmtonight?Mother:Whybother?Wecanstayathomeandwatchfilmsonline.It’sconvenientwithournewandfasternetworkSon:Butitfeelsgoodinacinema.Mother:Andtheprice…Wehavetopay50yuanaticket.Son:Only10yuanmorethanlastyear.Mother:Butstillwecannotgetthemoney’sworth.Somefilmsarejustboring…【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】1.用約30個(gè)單詞概述柱狀圖信息的主要內(nèi)容；2.我國(guó)電影票房收入變化的原因有哪些，簡(jiǎn)要談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎㄉ鲜鰧?duì)話僅供參考，原因不少于兩點(diǎn)）；3.談?wù)勀銓?duì)我國(guó)電影票房收入走向的看法，并簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明理由。【寫(xiě)作要求】1.寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句；2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和名稱；3.不必寫(xiě)標(biāo)題。【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】?jī)?nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)?！緟⒖挤段摹緼sisindicatedinthegraph,thebox-officeineofChinesefilmsincreasedconstantlyfrom2012to2015,butitsgrowth,foronereasonoranother,sloweddownin2016.Theincreaseinthebox-officeinecanbeattributedtoanumberoffactors.Thequalityoflifehasimprovedandwatchingfilmsisregardedasagoodmeansofentertainment.Besides,filmingtechnologyhasadvancedandmorequalityfilmsareonoffer.Moreover,theInternetplaysanimportantpart.OntheInternet,peoplecanseekinformationabouttheirfavoritestarsandbuyticketsatadiscountaswell,whichisbothtime-savingandeconomical.However,thefilmmarketmaywitnessaslowdowninthenearfuture.CinemashavegraduallygivenwaytotheriseoftheInternetandcellphones,andtheticketpriceisontheincrease.Therefore,thefilmindustryshouldmakegreatereffortstoattractmoreviewers.【真題3】（2015·江蘇）請(qǐng)閱讀下面文字及圖表,并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的文章.[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]1.用約30個(gè)單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容;2.結(jié)合上述信息,簡(jiǎn)要分析導(dǎo)致交通問(wèn)題的主要原因;3.根據(jù)你的分析,從社會(huì)規(guī)范(rulesandregulations)和個(gè)人行為兩方面談?wù)勀愕玫降膯⑹?不少于兩點(diǎn))。[寫(xiě)作要求]1.寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句;2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和名稱;3.不必寫(xiě)標(biāo)題。[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]內(nèi)容完整,語(yǔ)言規(guī)范,語(yǔ)篇連貫,詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。【參考范文】Thetrafficissueisahardnuttocrack.Itnotonlyaffectsoureverydaylife,butmayalsothreatenpeople’slives.Thethreeselectionspresentedabovearetypicalexamples.Quiteafewthingsgiverisetothetrafficproblem.Inspiteofthelarge-scaleconstructionofroadsandhighways,thereisstillmuchroomforimprovement,becauseoftheeverincreasingnumberofcarstheseyears.What’sworse,somedrivers,cyclistsandpedestriansdonotthinkitvitaltoobeytrafficrules.Infact,trafficrulesarepartoftherulesandregulationscloselyrelatedtopublicorder.Withoutthem,peoplecouldnotenjoyharmonyorthecountrywouldbeinchaos.Butrulesalonedon’tsecureanorderlysociety.Itisthepeoplewhoobeytherulesthatmatter.Itiseverybody’sdutytoobservethemtokeepoursocietyinorderandgoingontherighttrack.【真題4】（2015·廣東）Sallywalkedontotheplatform,pickedupapieceofchalkandwroteontheblackboard:“Rule1:Wearefamily!“Allstudentsstoppedtolookather.AndshecontinuedwithRule2,Rule3…Inthefollowingweeks,Sallyworkedout10classrulesandpostedthemonthewallsoftheclassroom.Shepatientlyexplainedalltherulestothestudentsandrequireeveryonetofollowthem.Surprisingly,Sallywasnotdrivenoutliketheformerteachers;instead,shewonrespectfromthestudents.Overtheyear,shewitnessedgradualchangeintheclass.Atthegraduationceremony,justassheexpected,shewasveryproudtostandwithaclassofcare,mannersandconfidence.[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]1.用約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。2.用約120個(gè)詞就班規(guī)談?wù)勀愕南敕?，?nèi)容包括：(1)你們班最突出的問(wèn)題是什么？(2)針對(duì)該問(wèn)題你會(huì)設(shè)計(jì)一條什么班規(guī)？(3)你認(rèn)為班規(guī)會(huì)帶來(lái)什么影響？【寫(xiě)作要求】1.作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。2.作文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和名稱。【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫?！緟⒖挤段摹縎allywasateacher.whotaughtsomestudentsfullofproblems.Thestudentsdidn’tfollowtheschoolrules.Therefore,shemadetherulesforthem.Latertheymadegreatprogress.Inourclass,somestudentsdon’tworkhardandoftenfightwitheachother.Iwilltellthemsomestoriesabouthard-workingpeople.Iwillmakeastudyplantoencouragethemtostudywork.Iputupsomesayingsonthewallstoremindthemtodoso.Iwillexplaintothemthatstudyinghardisveryimportant.Theyaren’tallowedtofightatschool.Inthisway,studentshaveagoodhabit.Mostofthestudentsfollowtheschoolrulesandstudywork.Theywillrespectteachersandotherclassmates.Theywillhavegoodmannersandconfidence.Latertheywillgetbettergrades.【真題5】（2015·浙江）在班級(jí)活動(dòng)中，當(dāng)你的想法與大多數(shù)同學(xué)不一致時(shí)，你是堅(jiān)持自己的觀點(diǎn)并說(shuō)服別人，還是尊重大多數(shù)同學(xué)的意見(jiàn)？請(qǐng)你以“WhenIHaveaDifferentOpinion”為題，用英文寫(xiě)一篇100～120個(gè)詞“短文。要求如下：1.從以上兩種做法中選擇一種；2.以具體事例闡述你選擇的理由。注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地區(qū)、、同學(xué)姓名等真實(shí)信息。否則，按考試作弊行為認(rèn)定。WhenIHaveaDifferentOpinion_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】WhenIHaveaDifferentOpinionWemayhavedifferentopinionsinorganizingclassactivities.Wemayhavevariouswaystodealwithsuchasituation.WhenIhaveabetteridea,Iwouldchoosetosticktoit.Bydoingso,Icannotonlysharegoodideaswithothersbutalsolearntoexpressmyselfclearly.Oncewewerediscussingwheretogoforanouting.MostofmyclassmateswantedtogotoaparkwhileIhadanideaofgoingtoanicerpeace.Imanagedtopersuademyclassmatesintoacceptingmyidea.Wedidhaveagoodtimethatday.Goodopinionsareworthstickingtobecausetheycanbenefitusall.【真題6】（2015·重慶）請(qǐng)就以下話題，按要求用英文寫(xiě)作。Ifyoucouldgiveyouryoungerselfonepieceofadvice,whatwouldyousay?要求：（1）作出回答并說(shuō)出理由；（2）詞數(shù)不少于60；（3）在答題卡上做答。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】WereIthreeyearsyoungerthanIamnow,IwouldstronglyremendthatIsetmorepracticalandspecificgoals.Asanoldsayinggoes,livingwithoutaclearandachievableaimislikesailingwithoutapass.paredwithmanyabstractobjectives,practicalonescanbringusmorecourageandconfidencewheneverwemakeonestepforward.IfonlyIcouldgobackandresetmygoals.【真題7】[2014·福建卷]如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面的引語(yǔ)(quotation)，按要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文?！癝uccessistheabilitytogofromonefailuretoanotherwithnolossofenthusiasm.”—SirWinstonChurchill內(nèi)容要求：1．你對(duì)該引語(yǔ)的理解；2．你的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷；3．恰當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾。注意：1．短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2．文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息；3．詞數(shù)120左右。ThisquotationfromWinstonChurchilltellsusthat___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】This_quotation_from_Winston_Churchill_tells_us_thatweshouldn'tgetdiscouragedrightafterfailures.Rather,weshouldkeeptryingwithenthusiasm.Successconsistsintheabilitytocontinueeffortsthroughfailures.Attheageoftwelve,Igotanicebikeasabirthdaygift.SoexcitedwasIthatIcouldn'twaittotrymyhandatridingit.However,itwasharderthanexpected.Thebikeseemedtooheavyanddifficulttocontrol.Worsestill,Itookmanyfallsoffthebike.Iwasabouttogiveupwhenmyfathercameandencouragedmetokeepgoing.Withmorepractice,Ididbetterandbetter.Lookingback,IfeelIwouldn'tbeabletorideabikehadIlostheart.Actually,wecan'tsucceedineverythingwetry.What'simportantisthatweshouldstickatit.【真題8】[2013·福建卷]孩子的成長(zhǎng)和教育是社會(huì)熱議的話題，現(xiàn)今父母包攬一切、孩子過(guò)度依賴等現(xiàn)象十分嚴(yán)重。請(qǐng)閱讀下面的漫畫(huà)，按要求用英文寫(xiě)一篇短文。內(nèi)容要求：1.描述漫畫(huà)內(nèi)容；2.分析漫畫(huà)所揭示的問(wèn)題；3.提出你的看法。注意：1.短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.考生可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)、連貫；3.詞數(shù)120左右；4.文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息。參考詞匯：鋪路pavethewayFromthepicturewecanseeafamilyofthreewalkingonalongredcarpet.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】From_the_picture_we_can_see_a_family_of_three_walking_on_a_long_red_carpet.Theson,welldressed,wavesproudlyinthemiddlewhilethefatherbehindbendsforwardtoholdthejacketandthemotherinfrontrollsoutthecarpet,sweating.Itshowsamonphenomenonnowadaysthatchildrenarethefocusoffamilies,shoulderingthehopeoftheirparents.Parentsarrangeeverythingfortheirchildrenandsparenoefforttopavethewayfortheirsuccess.Asaconsequence,childrenbeesoreliantontheirparentsthattheyhavenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas.Suchasituationisofgreatconcern.Inmyopinion,overprotectionandtoomuchcareareextremelybadforchildren'sdevelopment.Insteadofdoingeverythingforthem,parentsshouldencouragetheirchildrentooveredifficultiesandinspirethemtodevelopbythemselves.Onlyinthiswaycantheygrowuptobeindependentandbeetrulysuccessful.【真題9】[2012·浙江卷]你校正在進(jìn)行“英語(yǔ)讀書(shū)周”活動(dòng)。該活動(dòng)要求學(xué)生摘錄名言佳句(quote)并相互交流。以下是某同學(xué)摘錄的句子：“Yourfuturedependsonmanythings,butmostlyonyou”。請(qǐng)按下列要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100－120個(gè)詞的短文：1.針對(duì)摘錄句中的觀點(diǎn)談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?.舉例說(shuō)明理由。注意：短文的開(kāi)頭已給出(不計(jì)詞數(shù))。In_the_English_Reading_Week,_one_of_my_classmates_remended_a_quote_to_us,_which_goes_like_this：“Your_future_depends_on_many_things,_but_mostly_on_you.”___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】In_the_English_Reading_Week,_one_of_my_classmates_remended_a_quote_to_us,_which_goes_like_this：“Your_future_depends_on_many_things,_but_mostly_on_you.”Ican'tagreemorewiththisview.It'struethatourfutureisdeterminedbymanythings,suchasopportunitiesandhelpfromothers,butourownattitude,determination,andhardworkplayamoreimportantrole.Inotherwords,wearethemasterofourownfuture.TakeAbrahamLincolnforexample.Hewasborninapoorfamily,andonlyreceivedalimitededucationinhischildhood.Yetthroughhispainstakingefforts,hechangednotonlyhisownfatebutalsothehistoryofAmerica.Eventothisday,Lincolnisregardedasoneofthemostinspiringfiguresintheworld.Therefore,Ifirmlybelievethatourfutureisinourownhands.【真題10】[2012·湖北卷]請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。Youcannotchoosewhatyouaregiven,butyoucanchoosehowyoumakeuseofit.注意：①無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)；②除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；③文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和名稱；④詞數(shù)為120左右。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】ThreeyearsagoIfailedanimportantexaminmylifeandbecameastudentinanordinaryschool.DisappointedasIfeltattheshabbycampusandthepoorly-equippedclassroom,Ifoundtheteacherspatientandconsiderate.Besides,Ienjoyedthefriendlyatmosphereinclass.Idecidedtomakethebestofit.Iworkedhardandgotalongwellwithmyteachersandclassmates.WheneverIhaddifficulties,theywerealwaysavailable.Soon,Ibecameoneofthetopstudentsinmyclass,whichgreatlyincreasedmyconfidenceandgotmemotivated.Myexperiencetellsmethatitisnotwhatyouaregivenbuthowyoumakeuseofitthatdetermineswhoyouare.【真題11】2021.3天津卷：假設(shè)你是晨光的李津。我市為外國(guó)友人提供生活信息的某英文網(wǎng)站新增了《最美中華》欄目，請(qǐng)你給該欄目投稿，介紹一個(gè)國(guó)內(nèi)你喜歡或去過(guò)的地方。內(nèi)容包括：（1）該地方的基本情況（如名稱、地理位置等）；（2）該地方的特色（如文化、景點(diǎn)等）；（3）你對(duì)該地方的印象和感受。注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；（2）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】ABeautifulPlaceinChinaMarch19,2021ByLiJinSichuanProvinceislocatedinsouthwesternpartofChina.Itenjoysmanyworld-famousplacesofinterest,suchasJiuzhaigouandDujiangyanlrrigationproject.JiuzhaigouNationalParkisanaturereserveinthenorthofSichuanProvince.Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.What'smore,walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalslikegiantpandas,goldenmonkeys.Therearealsomanyspeciesofrareplantsprotectedhere.AnotherfamousscenicspotisDujangyanlrrigationProject.Itdatesfromover2,000yearsago.However,itisstillplayinganimportantpartinirrigationtoday.I'msurethevisitorswillbeamazedbythebeautifulsceneryinJiazhaigouaswellastheconstructionDujiangyanlrigationProject.【真題12】2018全國(guó)3卷假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Peter來(lái)信詢問(wèn)你校學(xué)生體育運(yùn)動(dòng)情況。請(qǐng)給他回信內(nèi)容包括：1.的體育場(chǎng)館；2.主要的運(yùn)動(dòng)項(xiàng)目；3.你喜歡的項(xiàng)目。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】DearPeter,Howareyoudoing?YouaskedmeabouthowourschoolperformsourPEclassesinyourlastletter,soI'mwritingtosharewithyousomedetails.Equippedwithtwoplaygroundsaswellasasplendidstadium,ourschooloffersusanopportunitytodoavarietyofsports.Notonlydowetakevolleyballandbasketballcourses,butourschoolalsoholdsallkindsofsportspetitions.Amongallsports,I'mcrazyaboutvolleyball.AsfarasI'mconcerned,thereisnothingbetterthanplayingvolleyball,whichcontributestouscooperatingwithothers.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyouagain!Yours,LiHua【真題13】2016年四川卷某生英文報(bào)正舉辦＂TheSeasonILikeBest＂的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)用英文寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括： 1.你最喜歡的季節(jié)； 2.你喜歡該季節(jié)的兩條理由(如：氣候、景色、活動(dòng)、感受……)。注意： 1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2.題目已為你寫(xiě)好； 3.行文連貫，語(yǔ)篇完整； 4.文中不得透露個(gè)人真實(shí)信息。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路點(diǎn)撥】以"我最喜歡的季節(jié)"為題寫(xiě)一篇文章，屬于提綱作文中的"介紹事物"類型。學(xué)生看似沒(méi)寫(xiě)過(guò)、練過(guò)，但實(shí)則又有話可說(shuō)。真正的難點(diǎn)在于對(duì)要點(diǎn)的分配和結(jié)構(gòu)的把握全文需要從陳述最喜歡的季節(jié)和給出理由兩大方面進(jìn)行構(gòu)建，同時(shí)還要求在文章開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。審題時(shí)考生需要注意三點(diǎn)：1.既然是為征文活動(dòng)寫(xiě)的短文，那么最好增加標(biāo)題(題干已給出)，注意和書(shū)信類的應(yīng)用文有所區(qū)別。2.如前所述，內(nèi)容主體雖然只涉及兩個(gè)大方面，但陳述兩條理由的時(shí)候需要有層次地展開(kāi)：既可以從客觀事實(shí)和主觀感受兩方面來(lái)寫(xiě)，也可以從季節(jié)本身的自然屬性和發(fā)生在季節(jié)中的人文活動(dòng)入手，這是該作文要求中比較靈活的部分。3.需要增加文章開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾部分，以保證語(yǔ)篇的完整性和邏輯的通暢性，這是該作文要求中比較開(kāi)放的部分。這三點(diǎn)，是難點(diǎn)，也是失分點(diǎn)。【參考范文】TheSeasonILikeBest Eachofusknowsthattherearefourseasonsayear.Differentpeoplelikedifferentseasons;myfavouriteseasonisspring.Ilovetosmellthefragranceofflowers,seethenewgreentreesandhearthesingingofsmallbirds.Therearemanybusybutterfliesandbeesovertheflowers.Sometimesitrains,butusuallyrainsquietly.Therainmoistensthetreesandtheflowers.AndIcanplayoutside,too!Whetherwelikeridingbikes,joggingorgoingonlongwalks,springallowsustoenjoyoutdooractivitiesthatwehadtoputonthebackburnerduringwinter.Ofcourse,therearemanyotherreasonstoexplainwhyI’msoexcitedaboutspring.Thankyou,spring!【技巧點(diǎn)撥】 事物介紹類書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于說(shuō)明文。說(shuō)明文是用簡(jiǎn)潔的文字介紹事物的特性、構(gòu)造、變化或結(jié)果的文章。高考中，說(shuō)明文常見(jiàn)的話題有：事物介紹、地點(diǎn)描述、方位描寫(xiě)、變化分析和購(gòu)物指南等。寫(xiě)這類文章需要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1.首先要審題，弄清需要介紹的內(nèi)容，把握信息要點(diǎn)。2.寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容要條理清楚，層次分明。說(shuō)明科技方面的內(nèi)容常用定義法、比較對(duì)比法、分類法和因果法等；明自然環(huán)境方面的內(nèi)容常用時(shí)空次序法與分類法等。3.時(shí)態(tài)常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，當(dāng)然若是介紹其歷史，要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)；語(yǔ)態(tài)可能會(huì)用到被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)；若是介紹地點(diǎn)、環(huán)境等，要善于運(yùn)用therebe結(jié)構(gòu)。4.人稱多以第三人稱為主?！菊骖}14】2020.7全國(guó)二卷上周末，你和同學(xué)參加了一次采摘活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你為班級(jí)英語(yǔ)角寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹這次活動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括：1.農(nóng)場(chǎng)情況；2.采摘過(guò)程；3.個(gè)人感受。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.題目已為你寫(xiě)好。題目：MyWeekend_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】MyWeekendLastweekend，wetookpartinapickingactivity.Wedrovefromtheschool,andthefarmwasabout2kilometersawayfromourschool.Whenwearrivedatthefarm,thereareallkindsofanimals,greenfreshvegetablesandfruittrees