中考作文寫作講解

中考作文寫作講解作文1.朋友情深，友誼無(wú)價(jià)。在與朋友交往的過(guò)程中，你認(rèn)為什么是最重要的？是以誠(chéng)相待、彼此信任，還是……？目前，你校校刊正在就此話題開展征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)効捶?。?nèi)容提示：（1）Whatisthemostimportantaboutfriendship?（2）Shareyourexperience.要求：（1）中心突出，語(yǔ)義連貫，層次清晰，書寫規(guī)范；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；（3）詞數(shù)80左右。2.假期中，我們有時(shí)間做與學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)生活不同的很多事情，如旅游、干家務(wù)、做義工、參加夏（冬）令營(yíng)……請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以往的假期生活經(jīng)歷，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，跟同學(xué)們分享你在假期做過(guò)的一件事情及體會(huì)。內(nèi)容提示：（1）講述你在假期里做過(guò)的一件事情；（2）談?wù)勀阕鲞@件事情的體會(huì)。

要求：（1）中心突出，語(yǔ)義連貫，層次清晰，書寫規(guī)范；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；

（3）詞數(shù)80詞左右。寫作思路與技巧：“三段四步法”（1）“三段”（三個(gè)段落）：針對(duì)的閱卷老師先看文章結(jié)構(gòu)和內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，讓閱卷老師不得不給你定位一類文。中考作文，無(wú)論是那種文體，都可以用三段法來(lái)表示。顧名思義，就是無(wú)論是記敘文、還是議論文、或者夾敘夾議文章，都可以通用。簡(jiǎn)單解釋如下：第一段：開篇背景介紹（時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件），發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)，提出要討論的問(wèn)題，現(xiàn)象等。第二段：故事發(fā)展論據(jù)、論點(diǎn)支撐第三段：結(jié)局總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)（如果題目要點(diǎn)就是三個(gè)內(nèi)容層次的話，可以按照題目要點(diǎn)的劃分寫成三段）（2）“四步”有了框架就相當(dāng)于有了骨骼，而真正的血肉要靠四個(gè)步驟來(lái)實(shí)現(xiàn)。步驟一：審題審題的訓(xùn)練對(duì)于每個(gè)學(xué)生都不陌生，審題一定要做到五個(gè)方面：一審主題（寫什么），二審體裁，三審時(shí)態(tài)，四審人稱，五審內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)步驟二：打草稿中考一定要打草稿，兩大優(yōu)勢(shì)=1\*GB3①中考不準(zhǔn)在試卷更改，而中考時(shí)落筆錯(cuò)誤是難免的，涂改就會(huì)后卷面分，打草稿就可以避免這個(gè)情況了。=2\*GB3②正式寫作是對(duì)草稿的在梳理，語(yǔ)言的再錘煉。（在時(shí)間允許的情況下打草稿）步驟三：正文寫作做到兩點(diǎn)，一要凝練，二要變化。文章80—100字為宜，注意使用過(guò)渡詞、從句、句型和詞組搭配。步驟四：檢查：很多學(xué)生考試都會(huì)檢查，但總是不能找到自己的錯(cuò)誤。原因很簡(jiǎn)單，方法不對(duì)：英語(yǔ)寫作檢查的原則：（1）內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：缺少一個(gè)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，文章直接降到第三檔（2）語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤：動(dòng)詞三單形式，時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，單復(fù)數(shù)，主謂一致，冠詞等（3）變換句式：過(guò)于簡(jiǎn)單的結(jié)構(gòu)要試著變化，從句，固定句型的正確使用。(4)拼寫：?jiǎn)卧~的拼寫、大小寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)，卷面的整潔。初中常用時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)：主+謂+表、賓語(yǔ)+其他一般過(guò)去時(shí)：主+謂（過(guò)去時(shí)）正在進(jìn)行時(shí)：be+Ving一般將來(lái)時(shí)：will+do(動(dòng)詞原型）過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)：was/were+Ving現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)：has/have+done(動(dòng)詞過(guò)去分詞）常用連詞。表示并列的連詞：and,besides,what’smore,both…and..neither…nor表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系：but,while,only,or,however,though表示因果關(guān)系：for,because,then,so表示觀點(diǎn)：think,inone’sopinion,列舉：forexample,suchas,like羅列層次：First,then,next,second,third…ontheotherhand(另一方面）注:在議論文的具體寫作中要注意下列幾點(diǎn)：（1）議題的提出要開門見(jiàn)山，不要拖泥帶水。（2）議論時(shí)可以采用不同的方法。如：可以擺出正反兩方面觀點(diǎn)，進(jìn)行對(duì)比；也可引經(jīng)據(jù)典論證作者自己觀點(diǎn)的正確性，從而使讀者接受自己的觀點(diǎn)；亦可提出一種錯(cuò)誤的觀點(diǎn)然后論證其錯(cuò)誤，最終提出正確的觀點(diǎn)。正文部分是寫作的重點(diǎn)，論證方法可用歸納法、推理法、比較法等。（3）在結(jié)論部分必須表明作者的觀點(diǎn)，對(duì)討論的問(wèn)題做出總結(jié)。（4）注意連接詞和過(guò)渡詞等詞語(yǔ)的使用，以增強(qiáng)文章的條理性和邏輯性。4、書面表達(dá)常用的過(guò)渡語(yǔ)，句型和結(jié)構(gòu)：常用過(guò)渡語(yǔ)1.表起始的過(guò)渡語(yǔ):firstofall,tobeginwith,inmyopinion,accordingto,sofar,asfaras2.表時(shí)間的過(guò)渡語(yǔ):first,atfirst,then,later,intheend,finally,afterthat,sincethen,forthefirsttime,atlast,assoonas,soon,finally3.表空間的過(guò)渡語(yǔ):ontheright/left,ononesideof…ontheothersideof…,atthefoot/top/endof,inthemiddle/centreof,nextto,farfrom,infrontof4.表因果的過(guò)渡語(yǔ):for,becauseof,onereasonisthat…anotherreasonisthat…,thus,so,asaresult(of)5.表轉(zhuǎn)折的過(guò)渡語(yǔ):but,yet,however,afterall,infact,while,insteadof,although,otherwise,afterall6.表列舉的過(guò)渡語(yǔ):forexample,suchas,thatis,like,asfollows,inotherwords,andsoon7.表推進(jìn)的過(guò)渡語(yǔ):what’smore,ononehand…ontheotherhand…,inotherwords,notonly…butalso…,besides8.表總結(jié)的過(guò)渡語(yǔ):inshort,inaword,ingeneral,inbrief,inall,onthewhole常用句型1.重點(diǎn)句型1).It’sadjforsbtodo做…對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)…2).…so…that…如此…以至于……too…todo太…而不能……such…that…如此…以至于…3).not…until…直到…才…例:Ididn’tgotobeduntilmymothercameback.4).Thereasonwhy+句子isthat+句子…的原因是…Thereasonwhyhegotangrywasthatshetoldhimalie.(他生氣的原因是她對(duì)他說(shuō)了謊。)5).Thatiswhy+句子

那是…的原因6).Thatisbecause+句子

那是因?yàn)椤?).Itissaidthat+句子

據(jù)說(shuō)…Itisreportedthat+句子

據(jù)報(bào)道…8).Thereisnodoubtthat+句子

毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)…9).Itgoeswithoutsayingthat+句子

不言而喻，毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)10).Thereisnoneedtodo沒(méi)必要做…11).Thereisnopointindoing做某事毫無(wú)意義2.提建議hadbetter(not)do最好(不)做howabout/whataboutdoing

…怎么樣?Ithinkyoushoulddo我認(rèn)為你應(yīng)該…Isuggestthatyoushoulddo

我建議你做…IfIwereyou,Iwoulddo…我要是你的話，我會(huì)做…It’sbesttodo

最好做…Whynotdo/whydon’tyoudo…?為什么不…3.表示喜歡和感興趣like/lovedoingenjoydoingbefondofdoing喜歡做…prefertodoAratherthandoB寧愿做A也不愿做Bbeinterestedindoing=show/takegreatinterestinn/doing

感興趣4.努力做…trytodo努力做…tryone’sbesttodo=doone’sbesttodo竭盡全力做…makeeffortstodo=makeeveryefforttodo盡力做…dowhat/everythingsb.cantodo盡某人全力做…5.打算做…/計(jì)劃做…intend/plantodo打算做…begoingtodo打算/計(jì)劃做…decidetodo決定做…determinetodo決定做…bedeterminedtodo決定做…makeupone’smindtodo下定決心做…6.表示想/希望wanttodo=wouldliketodo想做…h(huán)opetodo

希望做…expecttodo期待著做…wishtodo

希望做…considerdoing考慮做…7.只加doing作賓語(yǔ)的動(dòng)詞finish完成/practice練習(xí)/suggest建議/consider考慮/mind介意/enjoy喜歡doing8.固定搭配lookforwardtodoing盼望做…keepondoing堅(jiān)持做…dreamofdoing夢(mèng)想做…can’thelpdoing情不自禁地做…keep/stop/preventsb.fromdoing阻止某人做…bebusy(in)doing

bebusywith+名詞

忙于做…spendtime/money(in)doing

spendtime/moneyon+名詞

花費(fèi)時(shí)間做…h(huán)avefun/haveagoodtime/enjoyoneselfdoing玩得開心havetrouble/haveproblem/havedifficulty(in)doing

或with+名詞

做…有困難中考英語(yǔ)作文高分必備萬(wàn)能句1.不用說(shuō)……Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…=(Itis)needlesstosay(that)…活學(xué)活用：不用說(shuō)早睡對(duì)我們有好處。2.在各種……之中，……Amongvariouskindsof…，…=Ofallthe…，…活學(xué)活用：在各種運(yùn)動(dòng)中我尤其喜歡慢跑。3.就我的看法……;我認(rèn)為……Inmyopinion,…=Tomymind,…=AsfarasIamconcerned,…活學(xué)活用：就我的看法玩電腦游戲既花費(fèi)時(shí)間也有害健康。4.隨著人口的增加……Withtheincrease/growthofthepopulation,…隨著科技的進(jìn)步……Withtheadvanceofscienceandtechnology,…活學(xué)活用：隨著中國(guó)經(jīng)濟(jì)的快速發(fā)展許多社會(huì)問(wèn)題產(chǎn)生了。5.……是必要的Itisnecessary(forsb.)todo/that………是重要的Itisimportant/essential(forsb.)todo/that………是適當(dāng)?shù)腎tisproper(forsb.)todo/that………是緊急的Itisurgent(forsb.)todo/that…活學(xué)活用：我們應(yīng)當(dāng)保持公共場(chǎng)所清潔。6.花費(fèi)spend…onsth./doingsth.…活學(xué)活用：我們不應(yīng)該在我們不感興趣的事情上花太多的時(shí)間。7.how引導(dǎo)的感嘆句活學(xué)活用：那至少可以證明你很誠(chéng)實(shí)。8.狀語(yǔ)從句A)如果你不……，你就會(huì)……Ifyoudon't…，you'll…活學(xué)活用：如果你不堅(jiān)持努力工作，你就會(huì)失去這次機(jī)會(huì)。B)如此……，以至于……so…that…活學(xué)活用：當(dāng)時(shí)，我非常傷心，最后都想放棄了。9.賓語(yǔ)從句我認(rèn)為，……/我認(rèn)為……不Ithink/Idon'tthinkthat…我想知道是否……Iwonderwhether…活學(xué)活用：他認(rèn)為我不應(yīng)該阻止他參加這個(gè)俱樂(lè)部。答案：Hedoesn'tthinkIshouldstophimjoiningtheclub.10.Since+S+過(guò)去式，S+現(xiàn)在完成式?；顚W(xué)活用：自從他上高中，他就一直很用功常見(jiàn)題型結(jié)構(gòu)：1、對(duì)比觀點(diǎn)題型(1)要求論述兩個(gè)對(duì)立的觀點(diǎn)并給出自己的看法。1.有一些人認(rèn)為…2.另一些人認(rèn)為…3.我的看法…Thetopicof①__________(主題)isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsofit.SomepeoplesayAistheirfavorite.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof②_________(支持A的理由一)Whatismore,③_____________理由二).Moreover,④______________(理由三).WhileothersthinkthatBisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasons.Firstly,=5\*GB3⑤_________(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥________(理由二).Thirdly(finally),⑦_(dá)________(理由三).Frommypointofview,Ithink⑧__________(我的觀點(diǎn)).Thereasonisthat⑨__________(原因).Asamatteroffact,therearesomeotherreasonstoexplainmychoice.Forme,theformerissurelyawisechoice.(2)給出一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，要求考生反對(duì)這一觀點(diǎn)Somepeoplebelievethat①_________(觀點(diǎn)一).Forexample,theythink②_______(舉例說(shuō)明).Anditwillbringthem③________(為他們帶來(lái)的好處).Inmyopinion,Ineverthinkthisreasoncanbethepoint.Foronething,④_______(我不同意該看法的理由一).Foranotherthing,⑤________(反對(duì)的理由之二).FormallwhatIhavesaid,Iagreetothethoughtthat⑥__________(我對(duì)文章所討論主題的看法).2、問(wèn)題解決題型1.問(wèn)題現(xiàn)狀2.怎樣解決(解決方案的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn))Inrecentdays,wehavetofacetheproblem________（問(wèn)題A）,whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.First,________(說(shuō)明A的現(xiàn)狀).Second,________(舉例進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明現(xiàn)狀)ConfrontedwithA,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.Foronething,________(解決方法一).Foranother________(解決方法二).Finally,________(解決方法三).Personally,Ibelievethat________(我的解決方法).Consequently,I’mconfidentthatabrightfutureisawaitingusbecause________(帶來(lái)的好處).3、說(shuō)明利弊題型這種題型往往要求先說(shuō)明一下現(xiàn)狀，再對(duì)比事物本身的利弊，有時(shí)也會(huì)單從一個(gè)角度(利或弊)出發(fā)，最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度(或?qū)κ挛锴熬疤岢鲱A(yù)測(cè))1.說(shuō)明事物現(xiàn)狀2.事物本身的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)(或一方面)3.你對(duì)現(xiàn)狀(或前景)的看法Nowadaysmanypeopleprefer___A_____.Becauseithasasignificantroleinourdailylife.Generally,itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows.First________(A的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之一).Besides________(A的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之二).Buteverycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Oneoftheimportantdisadvantagesisthat________(A的第一個(gè)缺點(diǎn)).Tomakemattersworse,________(A的第二個(gè)缺點(diǎn)).Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsoverweighthenegativeones.Therefore,Iwouldliketo________(我的看法).FromthecomparisonbetweenthesepositiveandnegativeeffectsofA,weshouldtakeitreasonablyanddoitaccordingtothecircumstanceswearein.Onlybythisway,________(對(duì)前景的預(yù)測(cè))2.評(píng)分檔次和標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：?第一檔：13～15分。要求：內(nèi)容涵蓋所有的要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思連貫，符合邏輯，只有個(gè)別語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤?第二檔：10～12分。要求：內(nèi)容涵蓋所有的要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)清楚，意思連貫，符合邏輯，但有少數(shù)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。?第三檔：8～9分。要求：內(nèi)容涵蓋大部分要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)較為清楚、連貫，符合邏輯，但有一定語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。?第四檔：5～7分，要求：內(nèi)容涵蓋部分要點(diǎn)，能寫出少量正確句子，但整體表達(dá)不太連貫，且語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較多。?第五檔：0～4分。只能寫出一些單詞，不成句子，缺乏邏輯性，錯(cuò)誤很多。8個(gè)話題作文1.關(guān)于學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的話題:“HowtolearnEnglishwell?”2.衛(wèi)生健康飲食:3.

“初三學(xué)生要不要參加體育鍛煉”。4.環(huán)境問(wèn)題5.關(guān)于“人口問(wèn)題POPULATION”6.關(guān)于中學(xué)生使用手機(jī)的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn),談?wù)勀愕目捶?.介紹自己的興趣業(yè)余愛(ài)好。8.春節(jié)習(xí)俗與計(jì)劃,如何過(guò)2009年的春節(jié)。一.

環(huán)保1.

It’s

our

duty

to

protect

our

environment。2.

It

is

very

important

to

take

care

of

our

environment3.

We

should

not

throw

litter

onto

the

ground4.

We

should

not

spit

in

a

public

place/

cut

down

the

trees5.

We

should

plant

more

flowers

and

trees。6.

We

must

pick

up

some

rubbish

and

throw

it

into

a

dustbin7.

If

everyone

makes

contributions

to

protecting

the

environment,

the

world

will

become

much

more

beautiful。二、

旅游1.

Last

Sunday(Saturday,…)

,it

was

sunny(rainy,

windy,

foggy,)2.

I

got

up

very

early

(late).

After

breakfast

I

went

to

…with

my

friends

by

bike,

bus，…3.

We

enjoyed

ourselves.4.

We

forgot

the

time.

We

didn’t

come

back

until

5

o’clock。5.

We

all

felt

very

tired,

but

we

were

happy.6.

I

thought

I

would

never

forget

this

trip.7.

Last

summer,

my

parents

and

I

went

to

Beijing

for

our

holidays。8.

We

visited

a

lot

of

places

of

interest.9.

We

had

a

good

time

there.10.

We

bought

a

lot

of

things.

The

clothes

here

are

good

and

cheap.三、

比賽1.

Last

Sunday,

Class

One

had

a

football

match

with

Class

Two.2.

All

of

us

went

to

watch

it.3.

The

match

was

very

exciting.4.

In

fact,

I

have

never

seen

such

an

exciting

match

before。5.

The

score

was

5-3.

Our

team

scored

three

goals

in

thelast

fifteen

minutes.6.

Class

One

won

this

match.

Class

Two

lost.7.

Class

One

played

well.

They

deserved

to

win。8.

Their

PE

teacher

was

very

pleased

with

their

performance.四、

健康1.

It

is

very

important

to

keep

healthy.2.

How

can

we

keep

healthy?3.

We

can’t

go

to

sleep

too

late.

We

can’t

get

up

too

late。4.

We

should

eat

the

food

healthily.5.

We

should

do

more

exercise.6.

Last

Tuesday

I

got

a

cold

and

had

a

pain

in

my

head。7.

I

didn’t

feel

like

eating

anything.8.

I

decided

to

see

the

doctor.9.

In

the

doctor’s

office,

the

doctor

looks

over

me

carefully.10.

He

said

:"Nothing

serious."

And

he

told

me

to

take

a

restand

drink

more

water.11.

A

nurse

gave

me

an

injection.

It

was

a

little

painful.12.

The

doctor

asked

me

to

take

the

medicine

three

times

a

day.13.

A

few

days

later,

I

felt

better.

From

then

on

I

believe

that

keeping

healthy

is

the

most

important

thing

in

the

world.五、

學(xué)科1.

My

favorite

subject

is

English。2.

More

than

three

quarters

of

the

information

on

the

Internet

is

in

English.3.

It

is

used

by

travelers

and

business

people

all

over

the

world.4.

China

has

joined

the

WTO

and

the

Olympic

Games

will

be

held

in

China.

English

becomes

more

and

more

useful.5.

So

English

is

very

important

and

I

like

English

very

much。6.

We

have

a

lot

of

fun

in

the

English

class.7.

Our

English

teacher

often

makes

us

happy

in

theEnglish

class.8.

I

hope

I

can

go

abroad

one

day,

and

then

I

can

speakto

foreigners

in

English。9.

I

like

English

and

try

my

best

to

learn

it.六、

節(jié)日1.

In

China

the

most

important

holiday

is

the

Spring

Festival.2.

It

comes

in

January

or

February.3.

On

the

Spring

Festival

Eve

people

have

a

big

dinner.

They

have

a

lot

of

nice

food

to

eat.4.

During

the

Spring

Festival

people

have

a

lot

of

interesting

things

to

do.5.

People

visit

their

relatives

and

friends.。6.

They

greet

each

other

with

a

hug

and

say,

"Happy

New

Year“.7.

As

China

is

a

big

country,

people

in

different

places

celebrate

this

holidayin

different

ways.七、

寫人1.

His

name

is

Jack.2.

He

was

born

in

London

in

1982.3.

He

is

1.68

meters

tall

and

weighs

52

kilos.4.

He

is

20

years

old.5.

He

comes

from

England.6.

He

is

a

good

ping-pong

player.7.

He

is

medium

build.8.

He

has

short

hair.9.

He

is

outgoing.

Every

one

likes

to

talk

with

him.

He

gets

onwell

with

us.10.

He

teaches

English

very

well.11.

He

works

very

hard.

He

works

in

No.5

Middle

School.12.

He

loves

watching

football

games

after

work.13.

He

often

helps

me

with

my

English.14.

At

the

age

of

six,

he

began

to

play

table

tennis.二、英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練2．手機(jī)在生活中扮演著越來(lái)越重要的角色，許多中學(xué)生沉迷于手機(jī)無(wú)法自拔，比如你的好友Miller.請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示點(diǎn)寫一篇短文：1.去年，Miller對(duì)手機(jī)游戲非常入迷，而且花大量時(shí)間用手機(jī)聊天看電影；2.Miller與家人和朋友交流甚少，離開手機(jī)會(huì)很焦慮；3.昨天還因?yàn)樽呗房词謾C(jī)被自行車撞了，膝蓋受傷；4.你的建議……參考詞匯：mobilegames手機(jī)游戲anxious焦慮becrazyabout對(duì)……入迷要求：1字?jǐn)?shù)80-100個(gè)2開頭已經(jīng)給出不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)3要點(diǎn)齊全，行為連貫，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮Todaymoreandmorepeopleareaddictedto(沉迷）playingthemobilephones.Lastyear,MyfriendMillerwas【答案】Todaymoreandmorepeopleareaddictedto(沉迷）playingthemobilephones.Lastyear，MyfriendMillerwascrazyaboutmobilegamesaswell.Hespenttoomuchtimeinchattingandwatchingfilmsonthephone.Millerhardlytalkedwithhisfamilyandfriends.Helivedinhisownworld.Hefeltveryanxiouswithoutmobilephones.Yesterdayhewashitbyabike,becausehewaswatchinghisphoneatthatmoment.Asaresult,hehurthiskneesbadly.Inmyopinion,Ithinkwecan’tusethemobilephonesforalongtime,Imean,nomorethanhalfanhouraday.Don’ttakemobilephonestoschool.Amobilephoneisjustakindoftool,notourwholelife.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；再緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí)，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤。3．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以“TheStoryofLingling”為題，為社區(qū)宣傳專欄寫一篇短文，介紹在玲玲身上發(fā)生的一件事。（1）上周晚飯后玲玲和媽媽一起出去散步，在社區(qū)的門口看見(jiàn)一個(gè)錢包；（2）玲玲把錢包撿起，發(fā)現(xiàn)錢包里有身份證和一些錢；（3）玲玲和媽媽把錢包交給保安，保安把這個(gè)消息發(fā)到小區(qū)的微信群中；（4）失主看到消息后，過(guò)來(lái)取回錢包并對(duì)玲玲和媽媽表示感謝；（5）你覺(jué)得……參考詞匯：社區(qū)community身份證IDcard保安guard微信群Wechatgroup失主owner要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。（2）短文的題目和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。TheStoryofLinglingLastweek_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】TheStoryofLinglingLastFriday,Linglingwentoutforawalkwithhermotheraftersupper.Shesawawalletatthedoorofthecommunity.LinglingpickedupherwalletandfoundthattherewereIDcardsandsomemoneyinit.Linglingandhermotherhandedthewallettothesecurityguard,whosentthenewstothemicrophonegroupinthecommunity.Whentheownersawthenews,hecametofetchherwalletandthankedLinglingandhermother..IthinkLiHuadidagooddeed.Weshouldlearnfromher.【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以“TheStoryofLingling”為題，為社區(qū)宣傳專欄寫一篇短文，介紹在玲玲身上發(fā)生的一件事。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱主要為第三人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，考生要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時(shí)，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點(diǎn)分明，中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無(wú)誤?！军c(diǎn)睛】點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過(guò)程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過(guò)渡，必要時(shí)可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過(guò)渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細(xì)檢查有無(wú)單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)誤用等，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。4．假設(shè)你是光明中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你正在參加“發(fā)現(xiàn)心靈最美的人，創(chuàng)建城市文明，爭(zhēng)做文明市民”活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下漢語(yǔ)提示寫一篇英文發(fā)言稿。1.上周三放學(xué)時(shí)，雨下得很大，于是在校門口打了一輛出租車；2.下車時(shí)由于匆忙把英語(yǔ)書落在車上；書上有你的姓名；3.到家發(fā)現(xiàn)書不見(jiàn)時(shí)，感到很焦急；4.幸運(yùn)的是第二天早上，司機(jī)把書送到學(xué)校；5.當(dāng)看到自己的書時(shí)，既開心又感動(dòng)；6.你應(yīng)該……你打算/將要.…參考詞匯：感動(dòng)bemoved幸運(yùn)的是fortunately要求：1.詞數(shù)：80-100；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Hello，everyone！IamLiHuafromGuangming,MiddleSchool.LastWednesday，whenIfinishedschool，itwas_______________________________________________【答案】Hello，everyone！IamLiHuafromGuangmingMiddleSchool.LastWednesday，whenIfinishedschool，itwasraininghard（1）.Thenltookataxiattheschoolgate（2）.ButIleftmyEnglishbookinthetaxi（3）becauselwasinahurrywhenLgotoutofit（4）.Therewasmynameinmybook（5）.Whenlgothomeandfoundmybookgone.Ifeltveryworriedandsad（6）Fotunately/Luckily，thenextmorning，thekind-hearteddriversentittomyschool（7）.Iwasveryhappyandmoved（8）whenIsawmybookcomeback.IthinkIshouldlearnfromthedriver（9）.AndIamgoingtosetupalostandfoundwebsitetohelpthepeoplewhoneedhelp（10）.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)提示中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下你所正在參加“發(fā)現(xiàn)心靈最美的人，創(chuàng)建城市文明，爭(zhēng)做文明市民”的這個(gè)活動(dòng)。所提供的信息中列舉了1.上周三放學(xué)時(shí)，雨下得很大，于是在校門口打了一輛出租車；2.下車時(shí)由于匆忙把英語(yǔ)書落在車上；書上有你的姓名；3.到家發(fā)現(xiàn)書不見(jiàn)時(shí)，感到很焦急；4.幸運(yùn)的是第二天早上，司機(jī)把書送到學(xué)校；5.當(dāng)看到自己的書時(shí)，既開心又感動(dòng)；6.你應(yīng)該……你打算/將要.…；主要從這六個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意發(fā)作文中必須包含提示上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縄leftmyEnglishbookinthetaxibecauseIwasinahurrywhenIgotoutofit.我把英語(yǔ)書忘在出租車上了，因?yàn)槲蚁萝嚂r(shí)很匆忙。句子IbecauseIwasinahurrywhenIgotoutofit.是由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句?！靖叻志湫投縄wasveryhappyandmovedwhenIsawmybookcomeback.當(dāng)我看到我的書回來(lái)時(shí)，我非常高興和感動(dòng)。句子whenIsawmybookcomeback.是由when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。5．隨著網(wǎng)絡(luò)的發(fā)展、人們消費(fèi)觀念的轉(zhuǎn)變，購(gòu)物方式也在悄然的發(fā)生變化。“網(wǎng)購(gòu)”已成為一種時(shí)尚，越來(lái)越多的學(xué)生也加入到網(wǎng)購(gòu)群體中。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下表格的提示，寫一篇網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物的文章。優(yōu)點(diǎn)(advantage)1.不需要出門；節(jié)約時(shí)間；避免擁擠、勞累2.價(jià)格通常比較便宜3.可供選擇的范圍廣，品種多缺點(diǎn)(disadvantage)1.只看到圖片，看不到商品本身2.容易購(gòu)買大量不太需要的東西，造成浪費(fèi)你的觀點(diǎn)……提示詞匯：網(wǎng)購(gòu)shoppingonline;商品goods;導(dǎo)致cause注意：1.所表述的內(nèi)容必須包含表格中的所有方面，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱；3.詞數(shù)：100詞左右，文章開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總數(shù)。WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,manypeopleareusedtoshoppingonline.【答案】WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,manypeopleareusedtoshoppingonline.Ithasbecomefashionable.Someofusstudentsalsojointhegroup.Shoppingonlinehasmanyadvantages.Justwiththeclickofamouse,youcanbuywhatyou’reinterestedinwithoutgoingoutdoors.Youcanavoidgettingtiredandbeingtrappedinthecrowdsandsavealotoftime.Whenshoppingonline,youcanchoosefrommorevarietiesofgoods,whosepricesaregenerallylower.Everycoinhastwosides.Itsdisadvantagesareobvious,too.Ononehand,it’sveryeasyforyoutobuygoodsthataren’tlikethepicturesyouseeontheInternet.Ontheotherhand,shoppingonlinemaycausepeopletobuygoodsthatarenotbadlyneeded.That’sawasteofmoney.Allinall,Iloveshoppingonline.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，主要講述網(wǎng)購(gòu)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容。【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如convenient，disadvantage，ingoodquality，figureout，havethechancetodo，beattackedby，ofcourse，takecareof等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。點(diǎn)睛：寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。6．假如你是李明，將參加今年暑期的澳大利亞悉尼新南威爾士語(yǔ)言學(xué)校的游學(xué)活動(dòng)（studytour）,該項(xiàng)目的負(fù)責(zé)人Mike給你發(fā)來(lái)了封電子郵件征詢你對(duì)此次游學(xué)活動(dòng)的想法和建議。請(qǐng)閱讀以下信息，并回復(fù)一封電子郵件。注意事項(xiàng)：1.文章所寫內(nèi)容必須包括郵件中的問(wèn)題所涉及的所有信息。2.文章要求語(yǔ)意通順，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范，不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名等信息。3.文章詞數(shù)在100詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearSir/Madam,I’mgladtoreceiveyouremailandIhavereaditcarefully.Ihavedecidedtolivein___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mreallylookingforwardtothisstudytour!Manythanks,LiMing【答案】例文：DearSir/Madam,I’mgladtoreceiveyouremailandIhavereaditcarefully.IhavedecidedtoliveintheGreenfamily.Theoldcouplehavenochildrenbuttwodogs,sotheywillhavemoretimetocommunicatewithmeinEnglishandIcanplaywiththeirpetsaswell.TheirflatisinthecentreofSydney,soit’seasyformetogoaround.IcanalsousetheWi-fitokeepintouchwithmyparents.Myfamilycanaffordthecostof350pounds.I’mluckytohaveabuddyduringmystayatyourschool.Iexpecthim/hertohelpmewithmyproblemsinmystudy.Icanchatwithhim/herinEnglishtoimprovemyspeakingskills.IlovehistorysoIwanttovisitsomeplacesofinterestattheweekend.I’malsocuriousaboutthelocalfoodandIwanttohaveataste.I’mreallylookingforwardtothisstudytour!Manythanks,LiMing【解析】【詳解】這是一篇應(yīng)用作文，郵件內(nèi)容要回答郵件中的三個(gè)問(wèn)題，可分為三個(gè)段落進(jìn)行回答。好單詞：afford負(fù)擔(dān)得起好短語(yǔ)：communicatewith和……交流aswell也keepintouchwith與……保持聯(lián)系expectsb.todosth.期望某人做某事helpsb.withsth.在某方面幫助某人chatwith和……聊天placeofinterest名勝古跡becuriousabout對(duì)……感到好奇haveataste嘗一嘗好句式：TheirflatisinthecentreofSydney,soit'seasyformetogoaround.他們的公寓在悉尼市中心，所以對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)，到處走走很容易。（Itisadj.forsb.todosth.對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)做某事是……，it是形式主語(yǔ)，不定式短語(yǔ)是真正的主語(yǔ)）7．馬上就要畢業(yè)了,

班里的同學(xué)都在討論應(yīng)該如何慶祝初中畢業(yè)。以下是你的三位朋友的想法和理由。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)要介紹他們的打算，并談?wù)勛约邯?dú)特的想法。為父母煮一餐飯;感謝他們的付出--Tom做義工;證明自己長(zhǎng)大了，有能力幫助他人---Cathy舉行聚會(huì);

放松心情、開心一下--Jane…….;……--You注意：1．詞數(shù)在80左右。（短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）2．短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。行文連貫，表達(dá)清楚，書寫規(guī)范。3．不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。提示詞：義工volunteer(n.)Thesedays,studentsinourclassarediscussinghowtocelebrateourgraduation.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thesedays,studentsinourclassarediscussinghowtocelebrateourgraduation.Herearesomeideasfrommyfriends.Janeplanstoholdabigpartywithherfriendstorelaxandhavefun.Tomwillcookabigmealforhisparents.Hewantstothankthemforwhattheyhavedoneforhim.Cathyisgoingtobeavolunteer.Shewantstoshowothersthatshehasgrownupandisabletohelpthoseinneed.Asforme,Iwillgotravelingaroundwithmyfriends.Travelingcannotonlyenrichmyknowledgebutalsoleavemeagoodmemorywithmyfriends.【解析】試題分析：這是一篇話題作文。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)。仔細(xì)審閱題意，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般將來(lái)時(shí)來(lái)寫。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系?！?/p>