unit4-Wildlife protection (writing) 寫作-保護(hù)動(dòng)物

寫作專題突破【寫作要求】假如你是李華，上周日去動(dòng)物園，看到游客對(duì)動(dòng)物亂扔石子甚至往一頭熊的頭上潑水，對(duì)此你感到非常氣憤?，F(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)就此事給某報(bào)社編輯寫封信，并提出你的建議；請(qǐng)求該報(bào)幫著呼吁人們保護(hù)和愛(ài)護(hù)動(dòng)物。要求：詞數(shù)120左右。2021/5/91【審題謀篇】第一自然段為總寫：寫明寫信目的，你的感受(應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài))。第二段：反映你的所見(jiàn)所聞，應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。第三段：你的建議，應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)。最后一段：請(qǐng)求該報(bào)幫助。本文應(yīng)用第一人稱；可以用first，second，but，even等詞連接或過(guò)渡。2021/5/92【寫作要點(diǎn)】1.我寫信是要告訴你上星期天我在動(dòng)物園的經(jīng)歷。(1)____________________youaboutmyexperienceinthezoolastSunday.(2)HereIwritetotellyouabout________________inthezoolastSunday.答案：(1)I’mwritingtotell(2)whatIsaw2021/5/932．有很多動(dòng)物被養(yǎng)在動(dòng)物園內(nèi)，它們好像沒(méi)有得到很好的對(duì)待。(1)Thereweremanyanimals________________inthezooand________theywerenotbeingtreatedwell.(2)Manyanimals________________andthey________________treatedwell.(3)______________manyanimals______________werenotbeingtreatedwell.2021/5/94答案：(1)kept；itseemedthat(2)werekeptinthezoo；seemednottobe(3)Itseemedthat；keptinthezoo3．首先要教育人們：動(dòng)物是我們的朋友。動(dòng)物對(duì)人們生活的重要性。(1)Firstweshouldmakepeopleknowthat____________________and____________________.2021/5/95(2)__________，weshouldtellpeople_____________animalsandthattheyareourfriends.(3)_______________，weshouldmakepeopleknowanimalsareourfriendsandimportanttopeople’slife.答案：(1)animalsareourfriends；importanttopeople’slife(2)Firstly；theimportanceof(3)Firstofal2021/5/964．任何虐待動(dòng)物的人都要被罰款。(1)____________________badlyshouldbefined.(2)____________________badlyshouldbefined.(3)____________________badlyshouldbefined.答案：(1)Anyonewhotreatsanimals(2)Whoevertreatsanimals(3)Thosewhotreatanimals2021/5/975．我建議把動(dòng)物放回到自然界去。(1)Isuggestthat____________________innature.(2)________________isthattheseanimalsshouldbesetfreeinnature.(3)________________thattheseanimalsshouldbesetfreeinnature.答案：(1)thoseanimalsshouldbesetfree(2)Mysuggestion(3)Itismysuggestion2021/5/98【連句成篇】________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2021/5/99【佳作欣賞】DearEditor，HereIwritetotellyouaboutmyexperienceinthezoolastSunday.Ifeelterriblysorryandashamedofwhatpeopledidtotheanimals.Thereweremanyanimalskeptinthezooanditseemedthattheywerenotbeingtreatedwell.Isawmanyvisitorsthrowsomestonesatthemandsomevisitorsevenpouredwaterontoabigbear’shead.Somepeoplejustlookedandlaughed，butnoonethoughtthosewerewrong.2021/5/910Hereiswhatweshoulddo.Firstweshouldmakepeopleknowanimalsareourfriendsandimportanttous.Secondanyonewhotreatsanimalsbadlyshouldbefined.Last，ifpeoplecan’tstopdoingso，mysuggestionisthattheseanimalsbesetfreeinnature.Ihopeyoucanhelpeducatepeopletoloveandrespectanimals.Thankyou.Yourssincerely，LiHua2021/5/911【類文點(diǎn)津】寫一封反映問(wèn)題或提意見(jiàn)、征求意見(jiàn)的信1．一般書(shū)信體的組成：正式信件(多用于外交、商務(wù)、社交等場(chǎng)合)：開(kāi)頭(start)，一般用Dear或Dear＋姓/身份/職務(wù)等，如Deareditor，Dearmayor，orDearSmith.正文(body)：正式信件講話要含蓄一點(diǎn)，用詞要謹(jǐn)慎一些。結(jié)尾(ending)：Yourssincerely，Sincerely，Sincerelyyours，Yourstruly，Yoursfaithfully等較正式用語(yǔ)。2021/5/912非正式信件(多用于親友、同學(xué)、同事之間)開(kāi)頭：Hi，Mydear；Dearest等。正文：因彼此情誼篤厚，講話可以直率一點(diǎn)、開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山，意見(jiàn)要中肯。結(jié)束語(yǔ)：Love，Cheers，Regards，Bestwishes，Yours等相對(duì)隨便的詞語(yǔ)。2．常用表達(dá)：反映現(xiàn)象的常用開(kāi)頭句式：I’mwritingtotellyouthat...Recentlywehavemadeasurveythat...2021/5/913Manypeopleareworriedabout...Itworriesmoreandmorepeoplethat...提出措施的常用句式：Weintendto...tohelp/save/protect...Wearereadytocallonpeopleto...Wefeellikedoing...toteachtheillegalhuntersalesson...We’drathernot...butdo...We’dliketo...topunishthosewhodoharmtowildlife.2021/5/914征求對(duì)方支持的常用表達(dá)：Weneedyoursupporttomademoreandmorepeople...Wouldyoupleasehelpusto...by...?We’llappreciateitifyoucan...Inorderto...，weneed......sothat...IhopethatIcangethelpfrom...Iexpectthatyoucan...2021/5/915Asweknow，thenumberofsome①wildplantsandanimalshasalready②decreasedandsomeanimalshavealready③diedout.Soitishightimeforusto④paymuch⑤attentiontowildlifeprotection.Buthowcanwepreventendangeredanimalsfrombeing⑥indangerofdisappearing？Firstly，weshould⑦protectthem⑧frombeing⑨hunted.It’sof⑩importancetoeducatepeopletoregardanimalsasourfriends.Thosewho詞語(yǔ)串串練2021/5/916wanttogetlarge?incomefromhuntinganimalsfortheir?furshouldbepunished.Secondly，somenature?reservesand?zonesshouldbeset?sothatanimalscanlive?inpeace.Itisalsonecessaryto?employsomepeopletolookafterthem.Onlyinthiswaywillanimalsnotbe?harmedmoreoften.Thirdly，thehabitofeatingthemeatofsome?endangeredanimalsshouldbegotridof.?Accordingtosomereports，somerestaurantsarestillservingsuchdishesnow.Thegovernmentshould2021/5/9172021/5/918正如我們大家所知，野生動(dòng)植物的數(shù)目已經(jīng)減少，一些動(dòng)物也已經(jīng)滅絕了。所以是時(shí)候我們?cè)撁芮凶⒁獗Ｗo(hù)野生動(dòng)植物了。但是我們?cè)鯓幽軌蜃柚篂l臨滅絕的動(dòng)物面臨消失的危險(xiǎn)呢？首先，我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)它們免遭捕殺。教育人們把動(dòng)物看作是我們的朋友很重要。那些想通過(guò)獵殺動(dòng)物獲取它們的毛皮而獲得暴利(income收入)的人應(yīng)該受到懲罰。第二，應(yīng)該設(shè)立一些自然保護(hù)區(q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