人教2013版九年級 Unit 7 寫作課課件

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？1.認真審題---確立時態(tài)人稱，題材格式。2.找全信息點---緊扣主題，突出重點。3.成文---表述正確，文字流暢。4.出彩---文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，重點句型出彩。5.檢查---信息點是否全面；時態(tài)人稱是否一致。

句子結(jié)構(gòu)是否清晰；短語單詞是否正確。Writingsteps:Rulesathome(task3)Writeadiaryentryexplainingwhichrule(s)youdonotagreewithathomeandhowyouthinktherule(s)shouldbechanged.Rulesathome

Whatinformationcanyougetfirst?............What?/Where?/Who?/Why?(task3--1)watchTVplaycomputergamesstayoutsidelateusemymobilephone…Can’tWhatcan’tyoudo?getupbefore6:00a.m.washhandsbeforemealscan’tgotobeduntil…finishhomeworkbefore24:00…HavetoWhatdoyouhavetodo?Writeadiaryentryexplainingwhichrule(s)youdonotagreewithathomeandhowyouthinktherule(s)shouldbechanged.3aIbelieveyoucan!Writeadiaryentryexplainingwhichrule(s)youdonotagreewithathomeandhowyouthinktherule(s)shouldbechanged.3a日記1.認真審題---確立時態(tài)人稱，題材格式。一般現(xiàn)在時第一人稱Thursday,November3rd_____________________________________________________________________________________________【日記格式】周，月日2.找全信息點---緊扣主題，突出重點。

Ruleagreeordisagreecan’tplaycomputergamesagree—Ithink…playingtoomanycomputergamesisn’tgoodforeyes(task3--2)3.成文---表述正確，文字流暢。can’twatchTV……Disagree-----I(don’t)think…alltheTVprogramsarebadforstudents;needtorelaxshouldspendallthetimestudying4.出彩---文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，重點句型出彩。常用連接詞；長短句結(jié)合使用；動名詞做主語；It's結(jié)構(gòu)要出現(xiàn)；盡量來句名言或俗語；。。?！緟⒖挤段摹?/p>

Thursday,November10thTherearemanyrulesinmyhouse.OneofthemisthatImustn’tmakemyowndecisions.Forexample,Ilikeplayingthepianoverymuch.ButmyparentsthinkIshouldn’tlikethat.Ishouldspendmoretimeonmyschoolwork.Idonotagreewithmyparents.IthinkIshouldbeallowedtohavemyownideasbecauseIhavegrownup.IwouldliketopracticeplayingthepianoasmuchasIwant.IfIwereallowedtodothat,Icouldachievemydream.

What’sworse,Ican’t…Ithink…Because…IYoucanyouup!5.檢查---信息點是否全面；

時態(tài)人稱是否一致；

句子結(jié)構(gòu)是否清晰；

短語單詞是否正確。(task3--3)

八、書面表達

評分標準一類（13-15分）語句流暢、格式正確、無或基本無單詞拼寫、標點、語法錯誤，字數(shù)達到要求；二類（10-12分）寫出大部分內(nèi)容，語句較流暢，基本無格式、語法錯誤，有個別拼寫、標點錯誤；三類（7-9分）

寫出部分要點，語句基本通順，有少量拼寫、標點、格式、語法錯誤，但不影響句意理解；四類（4-6分）寫出少量內(nèi)容要點，語句不夠通順，

語法、拼寫、標點錯誤較多；五類（1-3分）基本上沒有寫出內(nèi)容要點，語法、拼寫錯誤多?；旧蠜]有通順句子。Chinglish!!!Oftenchangethesentencepatte