讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)寫作講義-高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)寫作試題原題第二節(jié)（滿分25分）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Myfatherwasthekindofpersonwhocouldneverpassbysomeonewhoneededhelp.Hewasafirmbelieverinthemantra(箴言):Whatgoesaroundesaround.Hebelievedthatsomedayhemightneedhelp,andsomeonewouldreturnthefavor.ButIdidn'tquitebuyit.Oneweekend,myfatherandItookatriptoFlamingGorgeReservoir(水庫).WelovedtofishatFlamingGorge.Weownedacabinboatthatwasaboutfifteenfeetinlength.WeputourboatinatSheepCreekMarina(游艇停泊港).Ourgoalwastogoasfarnorthaspossible,spendtheweekendinourboat,andfishuntilwehadourlimit.HeadingtowardtheWyomingsideofthereservoir,wetraveledsomedistancebeforewebegantofish.Frankly,thefishingwasn'tverygood,butwelovedbeingoutontheboattogetherinsuchabeautifulplace.Suddenly,wesawamanonthefarshorewavingatus.Immediately,myfatherfiredupthemotorandwenttowardtheothersideofthereservoir,wherethemanwasstillwavingatus.Whenwearrived,Iwasamazedtoseeabeautifulbigyacht(游艇)pulledontotheshore.ThemanintroducedhimselfasMatandthenthankeduswarmlyforingtohisassistance.Hisbatterywasdead,andhewonderedifwecouldhelphim.Wedid,andsoonhisbigmotorroaredbacktolife.Matandhisfamilywereverygrateful.Welostanhouroffishing.Beinganimpatientteenager,Iwasabitannoyedattheonehourloss,butweweresoonbackingoutonthereservoir.Thenextdaythefishingdidn'timprove.Asamatteroffact,itwasterrible,sowedecidedtocallitquitsandgobacktothemarina.Wewereabouttwomilesfromthemarinawhenwefoundourselvesfightingastrongheadwindthatslowedourprogress.Thewaveswerekickingup,andsuddenlyourenginedecidedtoquit.注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Wetriedtogetitrunning,butitsimplywouldn’tstart.______________________________________________________________________________Onourwayhome,Isawanoldladywavingatourcarbytheroadside.________________________________________________________________________________________試題分析1.人物:①I:animpatientteenager,Iwasabitannoyedattheonehourloss②MyfatherwasthekindofpersonwhocouldneverpassbysomeonewhoneededhelpandfirmlybelievedWHATGOESAROUNDESAROUND.③Mat:hisbeautifulbigyachtwasoutofbatteryandneededourassistance.2.前文故事梗概:

我父親總是相信“善有善報”。某個周末，跟著父親去FlamingGorgeReservoir釣魚。釣魚是其次，其實(shí)我們就是喜歡在這樣美的地方轉(zhuǎn)轉(zhuǎn)。突然，我們看到遠(yuǎn)處水庫對岸有人在向我們揮手尋求幫助。得知他的游艇電池沒電，于是我們予以了及時的幫助。然而，我對此很是抱怨，好在一小時后我們就回去釣魚了。第二天，釣魚也沒啥收獲，我們決定放棄并駛回停泊港，在離停泊港海洋兩英里的時候，一股強(qiáng)風(fēng)迎面而來，波浪開始起來，糟糕的是發(fā)動機(jī)竟然出故障了！……3.續(xù)寫安排:第一段:Wetriedtogetitrunning,butitsimplywouldn’tstart.①（與前一句銜接）發(fā)動機(jī)出故障，該怎么辦呢②（過渡）幸好，Mat一家也在。Mat很熱情地予以我們幫助。③（承上啟下）這逐漸讓我對父親的箴言有所思考。第二段:Onourwayhome,Isawanoldladywavingatourcarbytheroadside.①（與前一句銜接）有了前面的經(jīng)歷，我主動提出幫助老太太②（過渡）老太太的反應(yīng)如何？我們予以怎樣的幫助？③（收尾）從此次經(jīng)歷中，進(jìn)一步深信父親的“善有善報”的箴言并踐行下水作文Wetriedtogetitrunning,butitsimplywouldn’tstart.Later,severalalloutattemptsonlysawourhelplessness,driftingonthereservoiraimlesslyalongwiththedeadengine.Wecoulddonothingbutwait.Therereallycamethegoodluck!Iheardsomeoneshoutingoverthedistance.ItwasnooneelsebutMat,whodrovehisbeautifulbigyachtovertouswithhisfamily.Sohelpfulwashethatitwastednotimeforhimtogettheenginestartedagain.Mat’skindofferbroughtmetobelostinmyfather’smantra.(85words)

Onourwayhome,Isawanoldladywavingatourcarbytheroadside.Ihadthoughtitwasjustawayofshowinghergreeting.Butwhenwepulledover,whatshockeduswasthatshewasbadlyinjuredinherankle,swollen.Withoutthinkingwhetherwewouldbeblackmailed,Iurgedmyfathertoofferourhelp,forIcouldn’tseeothers’pain.Afterathoroughexaminationandsimpletreatment,nothingwasworsewiththeoldlady.Seeinghergratefulsmiles,Ionceagainexperiencedthestrengthofhelpingothers.IpromisedtomyselfIwouldkeepmyfather’smantrainlife.(90words)原題Itwasthedayofthebigcrosscountryrun.

Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路線)throughthickevergreenforest.IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn’twiththeotherchildren.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschool’scoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened.“Iwasafraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,”heexplainedunfortably.“Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide.”Ibitbackmyfrustration(懊惱).Iknewthecoachmeantwell—hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecrosscountryteam.Itjusttookhimlonger—that’sall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,IwasfamiliarwiththechallengesDavidfacedandwasproudofhisstrongdetermination.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.

請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答.Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme._________________IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.__________下水作文Wesatdownnexttoeachother,

butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.

Heloweredhishead,lostinthought.Strokinghisheadgently,Ipraisedhimforalwaysdoinghisuttermosttopractiseeverytimeandjoininginwhateverotherstudentsweredoing.Aboveall,Itoldhimallhispartnersadoredhisstrongdetermination,withwhichhecouldnotfailtodowhathewantedto.HeseemedtobetouchedbywhatIsaid.Strugglingtohisfeet,hetoldmedeterminedlythathewouldseizetheopportunitytoparticipateinthecrosscountryrace.84WIwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.

Themomentthesignal

wasgiven,alltheotherrunnersdashedout,leavingDavidbehind.Davidinchedforward,tryinghardtokeeppacewithhisteammates.Icheeredhimon!Thespectatorscheeredhimon!Thejudgescheeredhimon!Davidwasinhighspirits.Heswunghisfeetforwardfasterthanusual.Oncrossingthefinishline,hewasembracedbyhisteammates.Witnessingallthese,Iletoutasighofrelief.Itdidn’tmatterhegotthelastplace.WhatcountedmostwasthatDavidconqueredhimselfagain!91W試題呈現(xiàn)：

MydadandIhadbeenlookingforwardtotheStatecrosscountryraceofmysenioryearofhighschool,whichwouldbetheclimax(頂點(diǎn))ofmyexistence.Iwasthefastestrunneronmyteam,andIwassupposedtomakeitintothetopfifteen.Wehadbeenworkingtowardsthisraceforthreeyears.Itwaseverythingtome,anditwaseverythingtomydad.Hewasarunnerand

waswildwithjoy

bymysuccessinrunning.Hemadeittoeveryrace,evenflyinghomeearlyfrombusinesstripstoseemerun.Ialways

listenedfor

hisvoice,which

rangabovethecrowd

tellingmetorelaxmyarms,callingoutmytime.Hepushedme.Hecheeredforme.Hebelievedinme.WespentcountlesshoursonthesandycanalsofArizona.

Breathinginthedustofthedesert,theblossomsoftheorangetrees,andtheterriblesmellofthedairyfarm,wemadeourwayacrossthecity.Wepoundedmilesandmilesintoourrunningshoes,markingwitheverystepthepathto

greatness.Itwasajourneythatwasjustours.Adreampassedonfromonegenerationtothenext.Thenthebigdaycame.Itwashotterthannormaltoohot.

Mythroatfeltlikeafieldofcotton,crackedwiththe

summer

heat,asIwaitedfortheguntofire.Igazed

outatthecrowd;

dozensoffamiliarfacesfromchurchandschoolflickeredacrossmyview.Theyhadeforme.Theywerecountingonme.Isawmydadsethiswatch,worryandexcitementetchedacrosshisface.Withthesoundofagunshot,theracebegan.Forthefirsttwoandhalfmiles,Ifeltgreat.Ihadneverbeforebeensoreadyforsomething.Theweeksleadinguptotheracewerefilledwithhardpracticesandastrictdiet.Thescorchingsunbeatuponmyback,

blinding

mewithitsbrilliance.Nothingwasgoingtostopme,though.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。However,withoutwarning,mystrengthwasrunningout.Iwhispered,“I’msosorryIdisappointedyou,Dad.”下水作文：However,withoutwarning,mystrengthwasrunningout.

Ihadtoslowdownattimestocatchmybreath.Havingcoveredabouthalfthedistance,Icouldnolongerbearthescorchingsun,andIwasextremelythirstyforcolddrinks.Iwasabouttogiveuptheracewhensomeoneranupandhandedmeabottleofwater.Aftersayingthanksanddrinking,Irefreshedmyselfalittle.Nevertheless,moreandmorerunnersovertookme.ExhaustedasIwas,Iinchedforward,lettinggoofthegoaltomakeitintothetopfifteen.Afterwhatseemedcenturies,Ieventuallycrossedthefinishline,stumbledtoDad,andthrewmyselfintoFather’sarms,almostoutofconsciousness.

111WIwhispered,"I'msosorryIdisappointedyou,Dad."

Dadstrokedmegentlyandgavemylegsamassage,sayingwithafortingsmile,“Itdoesn’tmatterthatyou’vefailedtoreachthesetgoalthistime.Accidentsalwayshappen.Whatmattersmostisthatyouhave

doneyouruttermost

andthatyouhavelearnedtocopewithdifficulties.”WhenIheardallthese,myspiritsliftedimmediatelyandmymindbeganracing.Memoriesofourspendingtimetogethercamefloodingback.Rightthenandthere,IstronglydeterminedtorealizemydreamandliveuptoDad’sexpectationinthenextStatecrosscountryrace.

96W參考答案：

Howeverwithoutwarning,mystrengthwasrunningout.

Mylungs

foughttotakeinenoughair,andmyfeettransformedintocementbricks

(將

runningout

具體化描寫我的肺拼命吸入足夠的空氣，雙腳仿佛

變成了水泥磚。這里用比喻的手法，與原文協(xié)同，原文也多處用了比

喻手法，將雙腳比成水泥磚，意思就是跑不動路了

功能:

銜接段首向

)Neckandneckwithoneofmygreatestrivals.Icouldseethefinish

line.Ihadbegunthefinalsprintintoglorywhenmykneesbuckledand

mylegsgavewa