簽證被拒簽后的申訴信

DearSir/Madam,GutenTag!Thankyouforreadingthismail.Ihadappliedforapersonaltourismvisa(applicationnumber******)

andhadaninterviewonNov22,2010.OnDec2,

Ifinallygotmypassportbackalong

witharefusalletterwiththefollowingreason:"2.DerZweckunddieBedingungendesbeabsichtigtenAufenthaltswurdennichtnachgewiesen.8.DievorgelegtenInformationenuberdenZweckunddieBedingungendesbeabsichtigtenAufenthaltswarennichtglaubhaft."Iamwritingthislettertoexpressthefeelingofbeinghurt,disappointedand,

franklyspeaking,

offended.Asawell-educatedChinesecitizenwhohasadecentjob,allthatIwishistospendmyholidayinDeutschland,thecountrythatIhavebeendreamingaboutsinceIwasateenager.Inthepastfewweeks,Ihavespentalmostallmysparetimeplanningforthistrip.Ifyoucouldsparesometimetotakealookattheattachment,youwillseethatnotonlyadetaileditinerary(hard-copyhavebeenprovidedintheinterview)withtransportationtimetablethatIsearchinwebsiteofDeutschBahnandMVVnetwork,Ialsobudgetedthespendingofthistrip,madealistofattractionsasbackup,incaseIcannotgotheplannedonesforsomeunexpectedreason,suchasbadweathercondition,Icouldstillhaveotherchoices.IhavebookedhotelsandprovidedbookingconfirmationlettersfromBookingasrequired.Ihaveevenpaidfortheround-tripair-tickettoDeutschlandthoughonlyreservationisrequired.PleasebelievethatIwantthistriptobeperfectmorethananyoneelse.IthinkyoumightunderstandhowIfeelwhenbeingchallengedas"notcredible"afteralltheseeffortsIhavemade.SomewhatIfeelthatIhavebeenaccusedasaliar,thoughIhavedonenothingwrong.Ijustfeelsadandconfused.Itotallyunderstandandbelievethatthereisnothingpersonal.However,IcanNEVERacceptbeingchallengedforsomethingthatIhaveNEVERdone.IdothinkIhaveprovidedeverythingthatIhavebeenrequiredtoprovemypurposeofthetraveltoDeutschland.IthinkIshouldbetoldifyouthinkanythingthatIprovidedisfakeorinvalid,oranysupplementalmaterialisneeded.Iffurtherinformationisneeded,pleasefeelfreetocontactmebeeitherreplyingthismail,orcallmycellphone+86-137-****-****.Toavoidmis-communicationormisunderstanding,IwillbemuchappreciatedifIwillbeofferedachanceofface-to-facecommunication.Thanksforyourpatienceofreadingthismail.Lookingforwardtoyoureply.Sincerely,Lissy尊敬的簽證官閣下：您好！感謝您于百忙之中閱讀我的來信。本人申請赴德個人旅游簽證〔檔案號******〕，并于2010年11月22日面簽，于12月2日收到德國駐北京大使館拒簽通知，理由如下：“2.未證明方案停留的目的和條件8.遞交的關(guān)于方案停留目的和條件的信息不可信〞

收到此函時，我感到沮喪不已，甚至，坦白說，覺得感情上受到了傷害。作為一個受過良好教育、有正當(dāng)職業(yè)的中國公民，我不過是希望能趁著假期一償心愿，到德國，這個我夢寐多年的國度游歷。在過去的幾周里，我?guī)缀鯇⑺锌沼鄷r間都用作為此次出游的方案作準(zhǔn)備。如果你能夠抽出些許珍貴的時間，查看一下附件中本人此次出游的方案，除了一份詳細(xì)的行程單〔包含從德國鐵路及MVV官網(wǎng)上查詢所得的詳細(xì)交通路線及時刻表〕，我還就旅途中的花銷作了初步的預(yù)算，我甚至還準(zhǔn)備了后備景點列表，以防因為某些不可預(yù)見的原因，例如天氣狀況惡劣，我將不得不選擇其他的景點。如簽證材料清單所要求，我已在Booking預(yù)訂酒店并提供酒店的預(yù)訂確認(rèn)函，并且往返德國的回程機票我已出票，雖然簽證只要求提供預(yù)訂單。我比任何人都更希望這次的旅游會是完美無缺的。讀到這里，相信您應(yīng)該能夠理解，在付出這么多的努力之后，卻為指為"不可信"，那是怎樣的一種心情。某程度上我覺得自己因為一些子虛烏有的原因被指控為一個說謊者，對此我感到悲哀和迷惘。我完全理解并相信這樣的決定并非針對個人。然而，我無法對那些并非事實的指控保持緘默。我認(rèn)為我已根據(jù)領(lǐng)事處所要求的材料清單提供相應(yīng)的證明文件，如果您認(rèn)為其中有任何虛假、疏漏，或需提供其他補充材料，我認(rèn)為我有權(quán)要求被告知。如需進一步信息，請通過郵件或致電+86-137-****-****與本人聯(lián)系。為防止溝通上存在誤會或偏差，如能獲得一次面談的時機，本人將不勝感謝。感謝您耐心閱讀完我的信件，期待您的回信。

LissyDearVisaOfficer,Myvisaapplicationwasre]ectedtwicebyyouroffice(fileNo.123456789).Iunderstandthatitisyourdutytopreventpotentialimmigrants,orpeoplewithoutsufficientmoneyfromenteringCanada,inordertoprotectCanadianpublic'sinterests.However,Istronglybelievethatyourrejectiontomyapplicationisnotfairnorreason-ablebecauseofthefollowingreasons:l.MyhusbandandIdohavesufficienttiestoourhomecountrywhichwill"ensureourdeparturefromCanada"aftermvhusbandfinisheshisPh.D.programfromtheUni-versityofNovaScotia.Myhusband,I.iuAixue,nowaPh.D.candidateattheInstituteofSpaceandAtmosphericStudiesinNovaScotiaUniversity,isatalentedyoungspacephysicistwhohasachievedChinanationalprominenceinhisfield.HegraduatedfromTsinghuaUniversity,China'smostprestigiousuniversity,andalsohasaMasterrsdegreefromChinaAcademyofScience,thehighestresearchinstituteinChinaforscientificresearches.HehasbeendoingresearchworkintheSpaceResearchCenterofChinaAcademyofScienceforsixyears.In1994,hewasawardedthe"ABCPrize",thetopawardinspacephysicsinChina,forhisbrilliantscientificresearchwork.MyhusbandandIwillNOTviolatethestipulationsofourvisitor'svisainCanadabe-cause,withoutlegalstatus,itisimpossibleforhimtofindajobinCanadaduetothenatureofhisspacescienceresearch.Andbecauseofmyhusband'shighstatusandbrightprospectinthefieldofspace'research,itisunimaginableforhimtoabandonhisresearchinordertoremaininCanadaillegally.Doingspaceresearcbistheonlythingthatmyhusbandiscapableofdoing.HewouldHOttradehisbrilliantcareerforadishwasher'sjobinCanada,andworseyet,anillegaljob.TheUniversityofNovaScotiaisnotthetopuniversityinCanada,buttheprogrammyhusbandstudiesIS.Dr.AlanMeison,myhusband'sPh.D.supervisorattheU.ofN.S.,istheworldleaderinthisfieldandisoneofthetwelvedirectingeditorsatJ.A.T.P.ttheJournalofAerospaceTechnologyPhysics),theworld-leadingmagazineformyhusband'sscience.Dr.MeisonistheonlyCanadianrepresentativeinthisauthoritativemagazine.Dr.MeisonofferedmyhusbandaPh.D.scholarshipaftermyhusbandpublishedamajorthesisinJ.A.T.P,whichDr.Meisonedits.Myhusbandisscheduledtofinishhisprogramforaboutfouryears.TheseientificachievementandthegoodluckthatbroughtmyhusbandtoDr.AIMeisontheworldleaderinslxacephysicsshouldnotbetheveryreasonthatpunisheshisfamily.IwouldliketopresentonemorefactthatmayhelpyoutodeterminethatmyhusbandWILLleaveCanadaafterhisprogram:fromApril1993toOctober1993,mvhusbandvisitedanddidresearchatKGEInstituteFurAeronomie,Germany?sverynumberoneresearchcenterforspacephysics.MyhusbandreturnedfromGermanyasscheduledeventhoughhedidhaveopportunitiestostayforaPh.D.program.Wearelaw-abidingpeopleandwillalwaysdothesamenomatteritisGermanyorCanada."2.Withatakehomepayofmorethan$13,OOOCNDannually,ImyselfisalsoasuccessfulyoungprofessionalinChina.IhavebeenworkingforHitachiatitsBeijingHeadquartersforsixyearsandamthesupervisorofthePlanningGroupofHitachiChinanow.MysalaryisatthetoprangeamonganyfemaleemployeesinanyofJapanesecompaniesinBeijing.MycareeratHitachiisbuiltthroughmylanguageskillsinChinese,JapaneseandKorean.ItwilltakemeanotherfivetotenyearstostrugglewithEnglishjusttogetalowerincomejobinCanada.Attheageof30andatChina'seconomicboom,IamnotgningtoforcemyownlifefromprosperityinChinatopovertyinCanada.IwillbecrazytoabandonmygoodlifeandgoodcareerinChinatoworkasawaitress,orbestofall,asasecretaryinCanada.ThebrightfutureandgreatprospectthatsummonsmvhusbandbacktoChinawillalsocompelmetoreturn.Anetincomeof$13,000CNDperyearinChina,lamveryproudthatmycurrentsalaryisnolowerthanmanyfemaleworkersmakeinCanada.IhavesavedenoughmoneytosupportbothmyhusbandandmyselfandeventoraisemyhusbandlslivingstandardinCanada.SuspectingotherChineseapplicant'sfinancialabilitymaybeareasonablepractice,hnwever,refusingmyvisaonthegrountlofinsufficientfuntlsisjustnotrightbecauseofmylongtimegoodsalaryhistorywithHitachi.3.Apromisingyoungscientistmyhusband,andasuccessfulyoungprofessionalmyself,weareamongthebestpeoplethatdeserveavisitor'svisa.IdounderstandthatmanyChinesestudentsduringthepastdidnotreturntoChinaasstipulatedbytheirvisaterms,buttimehaschanged.Thecaseofmeandmyhusbandcharacterizesthenewlifepatternforthegenerationofyoungeducatedpeople.Wehavegoodlifehere,wehavegoodcareer,andwejustwantgetsomeWesternexperiencetomakeourfuturebetterinChina.4.Lastbutnottheleast,Iwanttotellyouaplanthatwekilledtwoyearsago.SomeCanadianimmigrationconsultantsandlawyersreferredbyourfriendsapproachedustoaskusapplyingforCanadianindependentimmigrationbecausetheysaythatmyhusbandhasastrongqualification(hespeaksfluentEnglish).ThousandsofChinesepeopledidsendintheirimmigrationapplicationstoyourEmbassy.Butweneverdideventhoughwecould.Hadweappliedtwoyearsago,wewouldhavehadourimmigration'visasinhandtodayanddonothavetostruggleforthevisitor'svisanow.Wedidnntapplyforimmigrationbeeausewearenotinterestedinimmigration,butIambeingpunishedfor"immigrationintention"becauseIdidnotsubmitmyimmigratinnapplieation.Basedontheabovestatement,Irespectfullyrequestthatyoure-evaluatemyapplicationforavisitor'svisatoseemyhusband.Yourfavorableconsiderationisgreatlyappreciated.Sincerely,范例4.3翻譯尊敬的簽證宮：我的簽證申請連續(x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