Unit+2+Integrated+Skills+建議信 高中英語牛津譯林版（2020）必修第一冊

英語應(yīng)用文寫作英語應(yīng)用文日記演講稿通知推薦信感謝信求職信慰問信求助信投訴信建議信道歉信邀請信謄寫查單詞拼寫、時態(tài)主謂一致等①用過渡詞(句)連接句子和段落②首尾段審體裁、人稱、時態(tài)抓住要點擴展要點應(yīng)用文寫作Aletterofadvice高考應(yīng)用文寫作之建議信

寫作步驟:1.審怎么審題？

建議信特點及寫作步驟題型特點：建議信是針對某事或某個問題向收信人提出建議和忠告的信件，建議信通常簡明扼要，目的明確，具有合理性和說服性。寫作思路與框架：“三段式”第一段：陳述事由+寫信目的第二段：提出具體建議及理由第三段：表達本人愿望【篇首句】①KnowingthatyouhavesometroubleinlearningEnglish,Iamwritingtogivesomeadvice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.②

YouaregoingtouniversityinBeijing,soI’d

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choosinguniversityandpreparationsforit.1.You’dbetterdo/Youaresupposedtodo/Youshoulddo…2.Youneedtodo…3.Youcando…4.It’sagoodwayto…【篇中句】【篇尾句】Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.①Thinking(審題）②Outlining（列提綱,寫要點）③Expanding（擴詞成句）④Linking（連句成篇）⑤Polishing（潤色定稿）HowtoWriteacomposition假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Simon寫信告訴你他沉迷于打籃球，每天花很多時間打球，結(jié)果家庭作業(yè)不能準時上交。父母和老師很不滿，要他放棄這個愛好，他很生氣。根據(jù)以下提示，請你就Simon的問題給他提一些有用的建議。1.認真計劃好自己的時間；2.不要放棄自己的愛好，也不要忘記學習；3.保持學習和愛好之間的平衡。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Thinking(審題）Step1Para.1開頭Para.2正文Para.3結(jié)尾Outlining（列出提綱，寫要點）Step2要點二要點一表示理解并給予安慰+寫信目的建議及原因表達愿望

正文：建議及原因Outlining（列出提綱，寫要點）Step22.Don’tgiveyourhobbies.Don’tforgettostudy;1.Planyourtimecarefully;

3.Keepabalancebetweenstudyandhobbies.

Thankyouforyourletter.Yousayyouspendtimeplayingbasketball,soyoudon’thaveenoughtimetodoyourhomework.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.=Thefollowingaremysuggestions.=Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Para1（Beginning）Expanding(擴詞成句）Step3You’dbetterdo/Youaresupposedtodo…,whichwillhelpyou…Itwouldbeagoodideatodo…,bydoingthisyouwillIhighlyrecommendthat…IfIwereyou,Iwoulddo…,Whynotdo…?Inthisway,youwillnotonly…butalso….1.Firstly,Ithinkyoushouldplanyourtimecarefully.Itwillbeagoodchoicetomakealistofallthehomeworkyouhavetodo.Thiswilltellyouhowmuchfreetimeyoucanhavetoplaybasketball.2.Secondly,don’tgiveupyourhobbiesanddonotforgetaboutyourstudy,either.3.Thirdly/Lastbutnotleast,youshouldkeepabalancebetweenyourstudyandhobbies.Para2：建議及原因Expanding(擴詞成句）Step3

Para.3（Ending）Expanding(擴詞成句）Step3Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardingtoyourreply.首先，……Tobeginwith,…Firstly…其次，……Secondly/ThirdlyWhat’smore,…Inaddition,…最后，……Finally/Lastbutnotleast,…Linking(連句成篇）Step4添加合適的過渡詞：DearSimon,Knowingthat

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.（建議1相關(guān)的做法及原因）Secondly,youshould

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.（建議2相關(guān)的做法及原因）Lastbutnottheleast,youneedto

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.（建議3相關(guān)的做法及原因）Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHuaDearSimon,

Firstly,Ithinkyoushouldplanyourtimecarefully.Itwillbeagoodchoicetomakealistofallthehomeworkyouhavetodo.Thiswilltellyouhowmuchfreetimeyoucanhavetoplaybasketball.Secondly,don’tgiveupyourhobbiesanddonotforgetaboutyourstudy,either.Thirdly/Lastbutnotleast,youshouldkeepabalancebetweenyourstudyandhobbies.Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHuaPolishing(潤色定稿）Step5表示理解，給予安慰建議及原因Thankyouforyourletter.Yousayyouspendmuchtimeplayingbasketball,soyoudon’thaveenoughtimetodoyourhomework.Iamwritingtogivesomeadvice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.寫信目的表達愿望假定你是李華，你的英國筆友Jack來信向你求助，說進入高中后因為考試壓力大。晚上常要難以入睡或半夜易醒，睡眠問題對健康和學習產(chǎn)生了不良影響。請你用英語給他寫一封回信，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示理解和安慰；2.提出至少2條建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearJack,Knowingthat

,I’m

writing

to

give

yousome

advice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,you’dbetter

（建議1）

.（建議1相關(guān)的做法及原因）Secondly,youshould

（建議2）

.（建議2相關(guān)的做法及原因）Lastbutnottheleast,youneedto

（建議3）

.（建議3相關(guān)的做法及原因）Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHuaDearJack,Knowingthatyouarehavingtroublegettingagoodnight’ssleepasaresultofstressfromexams,I’m

writing

to

give

yousome

advice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,you'dbetterhaveabalancedlifestylewiththerightattitude.Gotobedandwakearoundthesametimeeachdayandavoiddrinksthatmaykeepyoufromsleeping,suchascoffeeandtea.Secondly,clearyourheadofstressandworryfromy