十句作文法模式

1基礎(chǔ)寫作短文的結(jié)構(gòu)：引言部分(introduction)

三個部分：正文部分(body)

總結(jié)部分(conclusion)段落結(jié)構(gòu)：主題句(topicsentence)

三個部分：擴(kuò)展句(developingsentences)

結(jié)束句conclusionsentences)2

準(zhǔn)備寫文章的步驟：動筆修改提綱的寫法：

Pollution1.Types&causesairpollutionwaterpollutionfactoriescarsfiressewageschemicalsoils32.Harmfulnessenvironmentpeople’shealthcancersotherdiseases3.Measuresmorelawseverybody’sefforts4十句作文法模式5Para.1S(1):GeneraltalkofthetopicS(2):Thesis:thewriter’sattitudetowardsitPara.2S(3):Thewriter’sreasontohavethisattitudeS(4):SupportIS(5):Detail1S(6):Detail2S(7):SupportIIS(8):Detail1S(9):Detail2Para.3S(10):Conclusion:restatethethesis6

第一段:

S(1)引出主題(Topic),也即引出本文要討論的問題，如：婦女問題、體育問題、大學(xué)生打工問題等。

S(2)確立論點(diǎn)（Thesis），也即表明作者對這個問題的基本看法，例如是贊成還是反對等。

第二段:

S(3)

承上啟下，重復(fù)上一句的論點(diǎn)，提綱挈領(lǐng)引出本段要討論的幾個論據(jù)。

S(4)第一論據(jù)：引出證明論點(diǎn)的第一個論據(jù)，或原因或理由或觀點(diǎn)等。

7S(5)

細(xì)節(jié)說明：運(yùn)用具體事例、事實(shí)說明第一個論據(jù)。

S(6)

細(xì)節(jié)說明：運(yùn)用具體事例、事實(shí)說明第一個論據(jù)。

S(7)第二論據(jù)：引出證明論點(diǎn)的第二個論據(jù)，或原因或理由或觀點(diǎn)等。

S(8)細(xì)節(jié)說明：運(yùn)用具體事例、事實(shí)說明第二個論據(jù)。

S(9)細(xì)節(jié)說明：運(yùn)用具體事例、事實(shí)說明第二個論據(jù)。第三段:

S(10)全文總結(jié)：重復(fù)或歸納全文論點(diǎn)。8范文：

ChangesinPeople’sDiet

(1)Accordingtoarecentsurvey,rice,thestaplefoodofmostChinese,isnowplayingalessimportantroleintheirdiet,whiletheconsumptionofhighqualityfoodsuchasmeat,milkandfruithasgreatlyincreased.(2)Amarkedchangehastakenplaceonthefamilydinningtableinlast10years.9

(3)Therearetwofactorsleadingtothechange.(4)Foronething,peoplenowenjoyahigherstandardofliving.(5)Intheolddaysfewfamiliescouldaffordmeatandmilkeveryday,whichoftenmeantabigchunkofthefamilyincome.(6)Butnowpeoplehaveenoughmoneytotastearichvarietyoffoods.(7)Foranother,peopleoftodaypaymoreattentiontonutrition.(8)Theyarenotmerely10contenttofillthestomach.(9)Theyareseekingthemostreasonabledietwhichwilldogoodtotheirhealth.

(10)Inshort,withpeople’sstandardsoflivinggettinghigherandhigher,changesintheirdietwillbemoreobviousandgreater.

11范文分析：第一句：用統(tǒng)計事實(shí)引出主題---人們飲食結(jié)構(gòu)的變化。第二句：表明作者對這一變化的看法，也即全文的論點(diǎn)。第三句：點(diǎn)出變化的兩個因素，為下面具體敘述作好準(zhǔn)備。第四句：是引出變化的第一個因素---生活水平的提高。第五、六句：具體說明生活水平的提高與飲食結(jié)構(gòu)變化的關(guān)系。第七句：是引出變化的第二個因素---人們注意營養(yǎng)。12第八、九句：具體闡述人們注意營養(yǎng)怎么會導(dǎo)致飲食結(jié)構(gòu)的變化。第十句：用預(yù)示的方法歸納總結(jié)全文的論點(diǎn)。13練習(xí)：

WhyCollegeStudentsTakeaPart-timeJob?1.最近幾年越來越多的大學(xué)生加入打工的隊伍。2.為什么大學(xué)生要打工？3.大學(xué)生打工的意義。14形象化描述用數(shù)據(jù)和事實(shí)引出將要討論的現(xiàn)象

WhyCollegeStudentsTakeaPart-timeJob?

(1)

Accordingtoarecentsurvey,about25percentofChinesecollegestudentsnowholdapart-timeortemporaryjob,comparedwithnearly10yearsago,andthisfigureincreasesto72percentduringsummervocation.(2)

Collegestudentsareworkingastutors,salespersons,engineersanddoingwhateverworktheycanfind.15原因1/短句變化承上啟下，引出解釋/同位語

(3)

Whydotheywantoddjobs---jobsusuallyrequiringlittleskillandknowledge?(4)Theprimaryreason,Ithink,ismoney.(5)Feelingthefinancialpressureasbooks,moviesandbusfareshaveallgoneupinprice,thereisscarcelyayoungboyorgirlwhodoesnotwanttoearnalittlemoneytohelpcovertheincreasinglyhighercollegecosts,andatbestsaveenoughtogotravelingorbuythingstheyhavelongdesired.16措詞變化原因2(6)Inthiswaytheyhopetobeeconomicallyindependent&avoidtheindignityofhavingtoaskformoneyagainandagain.(7)

Besidestheywanttogainsomeexperienceinthewayofsociety.(8)Studentsgrowingupfromnurseryschooltocollegeonlyknowaboutbooksandhavetroubledealingwithrealities.(9)

Workingonapart-timebasiscanprovidethemarareopportunitytoknowtheoutsideworldandpreparethemforafuturecareer.17總結(jié)全文，指明意義。

(10)Thesignificanceforcollegestudentsofdoingapart-timejobmeansmorethanmoneyandexperience:Itwillbroadentheiroutlookandexertaprofoundinfluenceontheirpersonalityandlife.TheEnd18SportsandHealth1.Theimportanceofhealth2.Sportsandhealth3.YourconclusionEconomicReforminChina1.Necessityofeconomicreform2.Thebenefitsbroughtaboutbyeconomicreform3.EconomicreformshouldcontinueExercisesinWriting:19PopulationProblem1.ContinuingIncreaseofpopulation2.TheProblemBroughtbyPopulation3.WeShouldControlPopulationWaterPollution1.Sourcesofwaterpollution2.Harmofwaterpollution3.Solutions20CountryLifeandCityLife1.Peoplelivinginthecountrymayenjo